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* CringeComedy: Much of the comedy relies on characters either making fools out of themselves, being completely humiliated either by accident or on purpose, or making some kind of reference to sex, slurs, bodily excretions, or just a combination of the three.
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* CringeComedy: Much of the comedy relies on characters either making fools out of themselves, being completely humiliated either by accident or on purpose, or making some kind of reference to sex, slurs, bodily excretions, or just a some combination of the three.
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: a cruel, egotistical rich kid with a bad case of halitosis. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for our heroes, he's certainly [[PrivilegedRival no slouch in battle, which Stone and Fifi learn the hard way in Chapter 2.]]]]
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: a cruel, egotistical rich kid with a bad case of halitosis. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for our heroes, he's certainly 100% [[PrivilegedRival no slouch in battle, battle,]] which Stone and Fifi learn the hard way in Chapter 2.]]]]]]
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: a cruel, egotistical rich kid with a bad case of halitosis. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for our heroes, he's certainly[[PrivilegedRival no slouch in battle, which Stone and Fifi learn the hard way in Chapter 2.]]]]
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: a cruel, egotistical rich kid with a bad case of halitosis. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for our heroes, he's certainly[[PrivilegedRival certainly [[PrivilegedRival no slouch in battle, which Stone and Fifi learn the hard way in Chapter 2.]]]]
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: a cruel, egotistical rich kid with a bad case of halitosis [[spoiler: Unfortunately for our heroes, he's certainly[[PrivilegedRival no slouch in battle, which Stone and Fifi learn the hard way in Chapter 2.]]]]
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: a cruel, egotistical rich kid with a bad case of halitosis halitosis. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for our heroes, he's certainly[[PrivilegedRival no slouch in battle, which Stone and Fifi learn the hard way in Chapter 2.]]]]
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* DeadFic: Averted. Chapter 13 was the last chapter for a very long time, being released in November 2018. In his author notes, Choice Brogan told readers to consider Chapter 13 the finale if he never came back, and he had gone radio silent since May 2020, seemingly confirming that this was the end. However, in January 2023 Brogan made an unexpected return along with the release of Chapter 14, though with a reminder that updates would remain sparse.
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* DeadFic: Averted. Chapter 13 was the last chapter for a very long time, being released in November 2018. In his author notes, Choice Brogan told readers to consider Chapter 13 the finale if he never came back, and he had gone radio silent since May 2020, seemingly confirming that this was the end. However, in January 2023 Brogan made an unexpected return along with the release of Chapter 14, though with a reminder that updates would remain slow and sparse.
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: cruel, abusive, and rude. [[spoiler:He's [[PrivilegedRival no pushover in battle either.]]]]
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* JerkAss: Assy, as Stone has affectionately called him, is your standard antagonistic rival: a cruel, abusive, egotistical rich kid with a bad case of halitosis [[spoiler: Unfortunately for our heroes, he's certainly[[PrivilegedRival no slouch in battle, which Stone and rude. [[spoiler:He's [[PrivilegedRival no pushover Fifi learn the hard way in battle either.Chapter 2.]]]]
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* DeadFic: The last chapter of the story was released in November 2018. In his author notes, Choice Brogan told readers to consider Chapter 13 the finale if he never came back; he has subsequently gone radio silent since May 2020. Needless to say, it is unlikely this story will ever make a return.
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* DeadFic: The Averted. Chapter 13 was the last chapter of the story was for a very long time, being released in November 2018. In his author notes, Choice Brogan told readers to consider Chapter 13 the finale if he never came back; back, and he has subsequently had gone radio silent since May 2020. Needless to say, it is unlikely 2020, seemingly confirming that this story will ever make was the end. However, in January 2023 Brogan made an unexpected return along with the release of Chapter 14, though with a return. reminder that updates would remain sparse.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12089476/1/Boundaries The story can be found here.]] The author also has an Archive of Our Own version of the story, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13373124 which can be found here.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12089476/1/Boundaries The story can be found read here.]] The author also has an Archive of Our Own version of the story, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13373124 which can be found here.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12089476/1/Boundaries The fic can be read here.]] The author also has an Archive of Our Own version of the story, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13373124 which can be found here.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12089476/1/Boundaries The fic story can be read found here.]] The author also has an Archive of Our Own version of the story, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13373124 which can be found here.]]
