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* AbusiveParents - Neither Gendo or Dr. Insana are ''hostile'' to their children, but it's hard to categorize their parenting to either as anything else.
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** Combines with {{Brainwashing}} [[spoiler:for loyalty and obedience training too]].
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** Combines with Plus {{Brainwashing}} [[spoiler:for loyalty loyalty, obedience, and obedience training too]].discomfort with old bodily functions]].
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* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way. Asuka also gets touched with this; see the BeehiveHairdo entry.
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* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way. Shinju. Asuka also gets touched with this; see the BeehiveHairdo entry.
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* ForScience - "Sciencier" Insana's motivation.
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* ForScience - "Sciencier" Insana's motivation. motivation / CatchPhrase.
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* LossOfIdentity - Shinju is unrecognizable as Shinji after a couple of chapters [[spoiler:and is picking up bits of Rei's.]] Odd, since Misako seems mostly herself.
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* LossOfIdentity - Shinju is unrecognizable as Shinji after a couple of chapters [[spoiler:and is picking up bits of Rei's.]] Odd, since Misako seems Rei.]]
** Misato is mostlyherself.herself, [[spoiler:but she does refer to "Katsuragi" as another person.]]
** [[spoiler:And poor [[strike:Asuka]] Kiko. Shinju even encourages her to give up on her old self.]]
** Misato is mostly
** [[spoiler:And poor [[strike:Asuka]] Kiko. Shinju even encourages her to give up on her old self.]]
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* MeamingfulName - Dr. Insana. Hoo boy.
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* BodyHorror - [[spoiler:Asuka basically gets partially liquified by Matarael's acid attack in ch. 7.]]
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* BodyHorror - [[spoiler:Asuka basically gets partially liquified by Matarael's acid attack in ch. 7.]]]] Practically {{Gorn}}.
** Combines with {{Brainwashing}} [[spoiler:for loyalty and obedience training too]].
* LossOfIdentity - Shinju is unrecognizable as Shinji after a couple of chapters [[spoiler:and is picking up bits of Rei's.]] Odd, since Misako seems mostly herself.
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* OCStandIn - Arguably what happens to Shinji.
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* OCStandIn - Arguably what happens to Shinji.Shinji and then to Asuka.
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* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment'', ''VentureBrothers''
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* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment'', ''VentureBrothers''''VentureBrothers,'' ''{{Portal}}''
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* WhiteVoidRoom - Where Mikki and the other Angels plot.
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* WhiteVoidRoom - Where Mikki [[spoiler:Mikki]] and the other Angels plot.
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* FlowerMotifs - Shinju is sent an unusual bouquet in ch. 6. As a GeniusBonus, [[spoiler:the flowers can all be negatively interpreted as Death, Revenge, Suspicion, and Loathing. This is a warning of Mikki's true intentions.]]
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** A couple chapters later the cycle restarts with Asuka [[BookEnds seeing Shinju]] in her first scene. Apparently ItRunsInTheFamily.
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** A couple chapters later the cycle restarts with Asuka [[BookEnds seeing Shinju]] in her first scene. scene and with Kaji seeing Misako. Apparently ItRunsInTheFamily.
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* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment''
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* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment''''TheSpoonyExperiment'', ''VentureBrothers''
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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get the public to accept the [[spoiler:HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]
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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get the public to accept the [[spoiler:HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf [[HalfHumanHybrid half Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]
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* PoweredByAForsakenChild - In chapter 5, Misako [[InvokedTrope uses this exact phrase]] when discussing [[spoiler:the dummy plugs]].
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* OxymoronicBeing - Kiko is a miniature giant robot. That is, she's [[HalfHumanHybrid half]] [[HumongousMecha Evangelion]] but [[RobotGirl human sized.]]
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* RobotGirl - Kiko, though more of an OrganicTechnology variant. Like the rest of the Eva "robots".
** Also like the other "robots" she looks far less organic than she really is.
** Also like the other "robots" she looks far less organic than she really is.
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It\'s like she was made for that trope... which given AuthorAppeal is likely.
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* BadassAdorable - [[{{Moe}} Shinju]], [[ElegantGothicLolita just]] [[BloodKnight Shinju]]
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* ShovelStrike - The Evangelions have Spetsnaz style prog-shovels.
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* ShovelStrike - The Evangelions have Spetsnaz style prog-shovels.Spetsnaz-style prog shovels.
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** [[LampshadeHanging "We know, Intro to Theater."]]
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* ShovelStrike - The Evangelions have Spetsnaz style prog-shovels.
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* TheyCalledMeMad - Ritsuko says this exact like in the first chapter.
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*ConditionedToAcceptHorror - Asuka is subjected to operand conditioning to keep her functional after [[spoiler: being burned by acid down to a "screaming potato" and then rebuilt as a cybernetic [[HalfHumanHybrid human-Evangelion hybrid]].]] She happily notes that she doesn't get nightmares about it, ever.
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* HalfHumanHybrid - The Ayanamis and Kiko.
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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get hte public to accept the [[spoiler: HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]
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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get hte the public to accept the [[spoiler: HollywoodCyborg, [[spoiler:HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]
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* ItsRainingMen - Nerv hard drops far more than often than canon. Such as the [[spoiler: Ramiel ]]battle. Unlike the canon this time the pilots regularly sing paratrooper songs. It's that kind [[RealRobot of fic.]]
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* ItsRainingMen - Nerv hard drops far more than often than canon. Such as the [[spoiler: Ramiel ]]battle.[[spoiler:Ramiel ]] battle. Unlike the canon this time the pilots regularly sing paratrooper songs. It's that kind [[RealRobot of fic.]]
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* ItsRainingMen - Nerv hard drops far more than often than canon. Such as the [[spoiler: Ramiel ]]battle. Unlike the canon this time the pilots regularly sing paratrooper songs. It's that kind [[RealRobot of fic.]]
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel - [[spoiler:The result of Matarael attacking Asuka with ACID in chapter 7.]]
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes - Ch. 5 has a scene from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror perverted Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.
** Includes heavy tones of HumansAreCthulhu in parts.
** Includes heavy tones of HumansAreCthulhu in parts.
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* HumansAreCthulhu - Another part of the Angels' views on humans.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes -Ch. From ch. 5 has a scene on, the fic is starting to feature scenes from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as Angels' perspective. For them, humans are {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror perverted Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.
** Includes heavy tones of HumansAreCthulhu in parts.souls.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes -
** Includes heavy tones of HumansAreCthulhu in parts.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster,]] and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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Currently ''And If That Don't Work?'' clocks in at nearly two hundred thousand words over a mere 8 chapters; it was started in 2008 and is still going.
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Currently ''And If That Don't Work?'' clocks in at nearly two hundred thousand words over a mere 8 9 chapters; it was started in 2008 and is still going.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, CompleteMonster,]] and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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* GatlingGood - The YA11 Dreadhog has a nuclear powered one of these.
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* GatlingGood - The YA11 [=YA11=] Dreadhog has a nuclear powered one of these.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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Everything else about ch7 is under spoiler tags
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel - [[spoiler:The result of Matarael attacking Asuka with ACID in chapter 7.]]
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel NightmareFuelUnleaded - [[spoiler:The result of Matarael attacking Asuka with ACID in chapter 7.]]
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Currently ''And If That Don't Work?'' clocks in at a hair over a hundred and fifty thousand words over a mere 7 chapters; it was started in 2008 and is still going.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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Shinji rapidly becomes either [[OCStandIn unrecognizable]] or [[YourMileageMayVary more]] [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation "natural"]]. A bit of a FanFicChopSuey with the [[AuthorAppeal militarization of NERV]] and the way [[FetishFuel a certain character dresses]]. The [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] are a lot of fun. By the same author is Fanfic/TheReturn, a Ranma/Sailor Moon cross which does much the same thing with those franchises.
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Shinji rapidly becomes either [[OCStandIn unrecognizable]] or [[YourMileageMayVary more]] [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation "natural"]]. A bit of a FanFicChopSuey with the [[AuthorAppeal militarization of NERV]] and the way [[FetishFuel a certain character dresses]]. The [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] are a lot of fun. By the same author is Fanfic/TheReturn, ''Fanfic/TheReturn'', a Ranma/Sailor Moon {{Ranma}}/SailorMoon cross which does much the same thing with those franchises.
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!!Contains Examples Of:
* AsteroidsMonster - Israfel keeps splitting and doesn't stop until it numbers in the hundreds. Then they start using tactics, proving that, yes, the Angels are getting smarter.
** [[spoiler:Matarael uses a very similar tactic in its attack.]]
* AsteroidsMonster - Israfel keeps splitting and doesn't stop until it numbers in the hundreds. Then they start using tactics, proving that, yes, the Angels are getting smarter.
** [[spoiler:Matarael uses a very similar tactic in its attack.]]
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* AsteroidsMonster - Israfel keeps splitting and doesn't stop until it numbers in the hundreds. Then they start using tactics, proving that, yes, the Angels are getting
** [[spoiler:Matarael
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* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way.
** Asuka too? Just look at the BeehiveHairdo entry.
** Asuka too? Just look at the BeehiveHairdo entry.
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* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way.
**way. Asuka too? Just look at also gets touched with this; see the BeehiveHairdo entry.
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* FourIsDeath - This time Shinju is the Fourth Child.
** And to ram the point home after her fifth kill she's gains the nickname: [[IncrediblyLamePun "Ace of Spades."]]
** And to ram the point home after her fifth kill she's gains the nickname: [[IncrediblyLamePun "Ace of Spades."]]
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* FourIsDeath - This time Shinju is the Fourth Child.
** And toChild. To ram the point home home: after her fifth kill she's she gains the nickname: nickname [[IncrediblyLamePun "Ace of Spades."]]
** And to
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes - Ch. 5 has a scene from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror pervert Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes - Ch. 5 has a scene from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror pervert perverted Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.
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** Insana is after ch. 7 the undisputable king of this trope amongst the characters of this story.
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* MildlyMilitary - NERV is seen as this by JSSDF and Azazel.
** More of less the whole point of this fic is NERV losing it's lack of transparency, forcing them to not be like this.
** More of less the whole point of this fic is NERV losing it's lack of transparency, forcing them to not be like this.
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* MildlyMilitary - NERV is seen as this by JSSDF and Azazel.
** MoreAzazel. One of less the whole point key themes of this the fic is NERV losing it's lack of transparency, forcing them being forced to not be like this.become more transparent.
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* TokenHuman: [[spoiler: Toji is currently the only pilot who is not partly Angel/Evangelion]].
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* TokenHuman: [[spoiler: Toji [[spoiler:Toji is currently the only pilot who is not partly Angel/Evangelion]].
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* GatlingGood - The YA11 Dreadhog has a nuclear powered one of these.
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* WhiteVoidRoom - Where Mikki and the other Angels plot.