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* AbusiveParents - Neither Gendo or Dr. Insana are ''hostile'' to their children, but it's hard to categorize their parenting to either as anything else.



** Combines with {{Brainwashing}} [[spoiler:for loyalty and obedience training too]].

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** Combines with Plus {{Brainwashing}} [[spoiler:for loyalty loyalty, obedience, and obedience training too]].discomfort with old bodily functions]].



* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way. Asuka also gets touched with this; see the BeehiveHairdo entry.

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* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way. Shinju. Asuka also gets touched with this; see the BeehiveHairdo entry.



* ForScience - "Sciencier" Insana's motivation.

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* ForScience - "Sciencier" Insana's motivation. motivation / CatchPhrase.



* LossOfIdentity - Shinju is unrecognizable as Shinji after a couple of chapters [[spoiler:and is picking up bits of Rei's.]] Odd, since Misako seems mostly herself.

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* LossOfIdentity - Shinju is unrecognizable as Shinji after a couple of chapters [[spoiler:and is picking up bits of Rei's.]] Odd, since Misako seems Rei.]]
** Misato is
mostly herself.herself, [[spoiler:but she does refer to "Katsuragi" as another person.]]
** [[spoiler:And poor [[strike:Asuka]] Kiko. Shinju even encourages her to give up on her old self.]]


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* MeamingfulName - Dr. Insana. Hoo boy.

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* BodyHorror - [[spoiler:Asuka basically gets partially liquified by Matarael's acid attack in ch. 7.]]

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* BodyHorror - [[spoiler:Asuka basically gets partially liquified by Matarael's acid attack in ch. 7.]]]] Practically {{Gorn}}.



** Combines with {{Brainwashing}} [[spoiler:for loyalty and obedience training too]].



* LossOfIdentity - Shinju is unrecognizable as Shinji after a couple of chapters [[spoiler:and is picking up bits of Rei's.]] Odd, since Misako seems mostly herself.



* OCStandIn - Arguably what happens to Shinji.

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* OCStandIn - Arguably what happens to Shinji.Shinji and then to Asuka.



* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment'', ''VentureBrothers''

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* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment'', ''VentureBrothers''''VentureBrothers,'' ''{{Portal}}''



* WhiteVoidRoom - Where Mikki and the other Angels plot.

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* WhiteVoidRoom - Where Mikki [[spoiler:Mikki]] and the other Angels plot.
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* FlowerMotifs - Shinju is sent an unusual bouquet in ch. 6. As a GeniusBonus, [[spoiler:the flowers can all be negatively interpreted as Death, Revenge, Suspicion, and Loathing. This is a warning of Mikki's true intentions.]]
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** A couple chapters later the cycle restarts with Asuka [[BookEnds seeing Shinju]] in her first scene. Apparently ItRunsInTheFamily.

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** A couple chapters later the cycle restarts with Asuka [[BookEnds seeing Shinju]] in her first scene. scene and with Kaji seeing Misako. Apparently ItRunsInTheFamily.



* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment''

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* ShoutOut - ''TeamFortress2'', ''{{Firefly}}'', ''TheSpoonyExperiment''''TheSpoonyExperiment'', ''VentureBrothers''
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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get the public to accept the [[spoiler:HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]

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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get the public to accept the [[spoiler:HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf [[HalfHumanHybrid half Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]
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* PoweredByAForsakenChild - In chapter 5, Misako [[InvokedTrope uses this exact phrase]] when discussing [[spoiler:the dummy plugs]].
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* OxymoronicBeing - Kiko is a miniature giant robot. That is, she's [[HalfHumanHybrid half]] [[HumongousMecha Evangelion]] but [[RobotGirl human sized.]]


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* RobotGirl - Kiko, though more of an OrganicTechnology variant. Like the rest of the Eva "robots".
** Also like the other "robots" she looks far less organic than she really is.
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It\'s like she was made for that trope... which given AuthorAppeal is likely.

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* BadassAdorable - [[{{Moe}} Shinju]], [[ElegantGothicLolita just]] [[BloodKnight Shinju]]
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* ShovelStrike - The Evangelions have Spetsnaz style prog-shovels.

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* ShovelStrike - The Evangelions have Spetsnaz style prog-shovels.Spetsnaz-style prog shovels.
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** [[LampshadeHanging "We know, Intro to Theater."]]
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* ShovelStrike - The Evangelions have Spetsnaz style prog-shovels.
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* TheyCalledMeMad - Ritsuko says this exact like in the first chapter.
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*ConditionedToAcceptHorror - Asuka is subjected to operand conditioning to keep her functional after [[spoiler: being burned by acid down to a "screaming potato" and then rebuilt as a cybernetic [[HalfHumanHybrid human-Evangelion hybrid]].]] She happily notes that she doesn't get nightmares about it, ever.


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* HalfHumanHybrid - The Ayanamis and Kiko.
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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get hte public to accept the [[spoiler: HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]

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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get hte the public to accept the [[spoiler: HollywoodCyborg, [[spoiler:HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]



* ItsRainingMen - Nerv hard drops far more than often than canon. Such as the [[spoiler: Ramiel ]]battle. Unlike the canon this time the pilots regularly sing paratrooper songs. It's that kind [[RealRobot of fic.]]

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* ItsRainingMen - Nerv hard drops far more than often than canon. Such as the [[spoiler: Ramiel ]]battle.[[spoiler:Ramiel ]] battle. Unlike the canon this time the pilots regularly sing paratrooper songs. It's that kind [[RealRobot of fic.]]
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* Main/BandOfBrothers - Used and Deconstructed. In ch 9, Shinju gives the Saint Crispin's Day speech from Henry V to invoke this trope as part of a plan to get hte public to accept the [[spoiler: HollywoodCyborg, [[HalfHumanHybridhalf Evangelion]] Asuka/Kiko.]]
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* ItsRainingMen - Nerv hard drops far more than often than canon. Such as the [[spoiler: Ramiel ]]battle. Unlike the canon this time the pilots regularly sing paratrooper songs. It's that kind [[RealRobot of fic.]]
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel - [[spoiler:The result of Matarael attacking Asuka with ACID in chapter 7.]]



* NightmareFuelUnleaded - [[spoiler:The result of Matarael attacking Asuka with ACID in chapter 7.]]
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes - Ch. 5 has a scene from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror perverted Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.
** Includes heavy tones of HumansAreCthulhu in parts.

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* HumansAreCthulhu - Another part of the Angels' views on humans.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes - Ch. From ch. 5 has a scene on, the fic is starting to feature scenes from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as Angels' perspective. For them, humans are {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror perverted Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.
** Includes heavy tones of HumansAreCthulhu in parts.
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culling this per the new stance on fan-speak terms vs. actual tropes


* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster,]] and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.

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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster,]] and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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Currently ''And If That Don't Work?'' clocks in at nearly two hundred thousand words over a mere 8 chapters; it was started in 2008 and is still going.

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Currently ''And If That Don't Work?'' clocks in at nearly two hundred thousand words over a mere 8 9 chapters; it was started in 2008 and is still going.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]

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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, CompleteMonster,]] and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]
series.
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]

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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.]]
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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.

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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
series.]]
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* GatlingGood - The YA11 Dreadhog has a nuclear powered one of these.

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* GatlingGood - The YA11 [=YA11=] Dreadhog has a nuclear powered one of these.



* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.

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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist Mad Scientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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Everything else about ch7 is under spoiler tags


* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.

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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of [[spoiler: CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to to]] Asuka by an [[spoiler: [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) else)]] completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel - [[spoiler:The result of Matarael attacking Asuka with ACID in chapter 7.]]

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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel NightmareFuelUnleaded - [[spoiler:The result of Matarael attacking Asuka with ACID in chapter 7.]]
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Currently ''And If That Don't Work?'' clocks in at a hair over a hundred and fifty thousand words over a mere 7 chapters; it was started in 2008 and is still going.

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Currently ''And If That Don't Work?'' clocks in at a hair over a nearly two hundred and fifty thousand words over a mere 7 8 chapters; it was started in 2008 and is still going.




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* YourMileageMayVary - The entire premise itself for some. Others think Chapter 7 [[RuinedFOREVER ruined the story forever]] with an overabundance of CharacterDerailment / MindRape / UnwillingRoboticisation / Fetish Fuel done to Asuka by an [[OriginalCharacter OC]] MadScientist very close to being a CompleteMonster, and (in combination with everything else) completely reduced the story to be InNameOnly to the parent series.
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Shinji rapidly becomes either [[OCStandIn unrecognizable]] or [[YourMileageMayVary more]] [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation "natural"]]. A bit of a FanFicChopSuey with the [[AuthorAppeal militarization of NERV]] and the way [[FetishFuel a certain character dresses]]. The [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] are a lot of fun. By the same author is Fanfic/TheReturn, a Ranma/Sailor Moon cross which does much the same thing with those franchises.

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Shinji rapidly becomes either [[OCStandIn unrecognizable]] or [[YourMileageMayVary more]] [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation "natural"]]. A bit of a FanFicChopSuey with the [[AuthorAppeal militarization of NERV]] and the way [[FetishFuel a certain character dresses]]. The [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] are a lot of fun. By the same author is Fanfic/TheReturn, ''Fanfic/TheReturn'', a Ranma/Sailor Moon {{Ranma}}/SailorMoon cross which does much the same thing with those franchises.



!!Contains Examples Of:

* AsteroidsMonster - Israfel keeps splitting and doesn't stop until it numbers in the hundreds. Then they start using tactics, proving that, yes, the Angels are getting smarter.
** [[spoiler:Matarael uses a very similar tactic in its attack.]]

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!!This fic contains examples of:

* AsteroidsMonster - Israfel keeps splitting and doesn't stop until it numbers in the hundreds. Then they start using tactics, proving that, yes, the Angels are getting smarter.
** [[spoiler:Matarael
smarter. [[spoiler:Matarael]] uses a very similar tactic in its attack.]]



* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way.
** Asuka too? Just look at the BeehiveHairdo entry.

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* ElegantGothicLolita - Shinju is trending this way.
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way. Asuka too? Just look at also gets touched with this; see the BeehiveHairdo entry.



* FourIsDeath - This time Shinju is the Fourth Child.
** And to ram the point home after her fifth kill she's gains the nickname: [[IncrediblyLamePun "Ace of Spades."]]

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* FourIsDeath - This time Shinju is the Fourth Child.
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Child. To ram the point home home: after her fifth kill she's she gains the nickname: nickname [[IncrediblyLamePun "Ace of Spades."]]



* HumansThroughAlienEyes - Ch. 5 has a scene from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror pervert Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.

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* HumansThroughAlienEyes - Ch. 5 has a scene from the Angel's perspective. Humanity is shown as {{Complete Monster}}s that consort with {{Eldritch Abomination}}s and [[BodyHorror pervert perverted Angelic flesh]] to make war machines. Nuclear weapons are particular NightmareFuel to them, being machines capable of destroying souls.



** Insana is after ch. 7 the undisputable king of this trope amongst the characters of this story.

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** Insana is after ch. 7 the undisputable undisputed king of this trope amongst the characters of this story.



* MildlyMilitary - NERV is seen as this by JSSDF and Azazel.
** More of less the whole point of this fic is NERV losing it's lack of transparency, forcing them to not be like this.

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* MildlyMilitary - NERV is seen as this by JSSDF and Azazel.
** More
Azazel. One of less the whole point key themes of this the fic is NERV losing it's lack of transparency, forcing them being forced to not be like this.become more transparent.



* TokenHuman: [[spoiler: Toji is currently the only pilot who is not partly Angel/Evangelion]].

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* TokenHuman: [[spoiler: Toji [[spoiler:Toji is currently the only pilot who is not partly Angel/Evangelion]].

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* GatlingGood - The YA11 Dreadhog has a nuclear powered one of these.




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* WhiteVoidRoom - Where Mikki and the other Angels plot.

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