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"A Match Made In Hell" is a KingdomHearts fanfiction written by {{Ri2}}, the individual responsible for ''LatiasJourney'' and ''{{Fanfic/Brave New World}}'', about the wacky hijinks during the marriage of [[CrackPairing Pete and Maleficent]]...
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"A Match Made In Hell" is a KingdomHearts fanfiction written by {{Ri2}}, the individual responsible for ''LatiasJourney'' ''Fanfic/LatiasJourney'' and ''{{Fanfic/Brave New World}}'', about the wacky hijinks during the marriage of [[CrackPairing Pete and Maleficent]]...
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* JiveTurkey: "Mastah S" lapses into this every so often.
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* {{Wangst}}: In-universe, Leon wallows in it, and frequently gets called out on it by everyone else.
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* MissedMomentOfAwesome: Jack Sparrow vs. Yuffie is set up as a ShoutOut to the ninjas vs. pirates meme, but we don't actually get to see the fight. Since the story is so huge, some details not relating to the main story feel as though they could form the basis of entire fanfics on their own, such as [[spoiler: the events that brought the {{Gargoyles}} and ToyStory characters to the wedding.]]
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Jack Sparrow vs. Yuffie is set up as a ShoutOut to the ninjas vs. pirates meme, but we don't actually get to see the fight. Since the story is so huge, some details not relating to the main story feel as though they could form the basis of entire fanfics on their own, such as [[spoiler: the events that brought the {{Gargoyles}} and ToyStory characters to the wedding.]]
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* CatFight: Maleficent and Peg have this at the Bachelorette Party.
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** And Maleficent, although in this fic she's also half demon.
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* PetTheDog: Maleficent toward Nosimono. She is not a happy camper when he is hurt [[spoiler:by Oberon ripping his arm off.]]
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: For Pete and Maleficent. Most notably when [[spoiler: it's revealed Maleficent used magic on the wedding ring she gave Pete to make it so he wouldn't be harmed by any spell meant to kill him. Even though she also put a spell on it that made it so if she died, he would die, Pete is immensely touched by this.]] There was also [[spoiler: when Maleficent's world was being rebuilt, Pete was able to guilt trip her into adding a memorial for all the good guys and bad guys that died when Oberon crashed the wedding.]]
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* IAmNotWeasel: Pete always has to correct everyone that [[CatsAreMean he is a cat.]] He also has to correct everyone that he is not overweight, [[IAmBigBoned he's just big-boned.]]
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* NobodyThinksItWillWork: Everyone thinks this about Pete and Maleficent [[spoiler:except Mastah S]], [[WhatsHeGotThatIAintGot whether it be Maleficent's villainous admirers]] or [[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim all the other characters who are just disturbed.]]
*OfficialCouple: Pete/Maleficent, [[spoiler: Shere Khan/Tifa, Vayne/Ashe, Montlbanc/Shara,]] as well as most of the standard Disney couples like Mickey/Minnie, Aladdin/Jasmine, etc.
*OfficialCouple: Pete/Maleficent, [[spoiler: Shere Khan/Tifa, Vayne/Ashe, Montlbanc/Shara,]] as well as most of the standard Disney couples like Mickey/Minnie, Aladdin/Jasmine, etc.
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* WeaknessTurnsHerOn: This is the reason Mastah S gives for Maleficent finding Pete a suitable husband.
--> "Now, my dawg Pete here, she likes him more than I think she's liked any man… BUT…he is kind of a wuss. Then again, she seems to like that in a man, for some reason. She likes feeling superior to 'em…and that's easier to do with a lackey than an equal."
--> "Now, my dawg Pete here, she likes him more than I think she's liked any man… BUT…he is kind of a wuss. Then again, she seems to like that in a man, for some reason. She likes feeling superior to 'em…and that's easier to do with a lackey than an equal."
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* WallOfText: If the story has one serious weakness, this is it.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Pete and Maleficent are the most obvious. Several others are mentioned. The most entertaining is [[spoiler: Tifa and the TailSpin version of Shere Khan]]. Really.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Pete and Maleficent are the most obvious. Several others are mentioned. The most entertaining is [[spoiler: Tifa and the TailSpin TaleSpin version of Shere Khan]]. Really.
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* [[MarriedToTheJob Married To The Quest]]: In this fic, [[FinalFantasy7 Cloud]] is hopelessly isolated from his friends thanks to his obsession with hunting down Sephiroth. ItGetsWorse for him in his epilogue [[spoiler: because Tifa acquires a new boyfriend (the TailSpin version of Shere Khan) who is not only just as good as Cloud at organising the team at Radiant Garden to defend their world, but is actually there when he's needed]].
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* [[MarriedToTheJob Married To The Quest]]: In this fic, [[FinalFantasy7 Cloud]] is hopelessly isolated from his friends thanks to his obsession with hunting down Sephiroth. ItGetsWorse for him in his epilogue [[spoiler: because Tifa acquires a new boyfriend (the TailSpin TaleSpin version of Shere Khan) who is not only just as good as Cloud at organising the team at Radiant Garden to defend their world, but is actually there when he's needed]].
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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Zurg's Hornet robots only have three sentences in their vocabulary, but Zurg seems to understand them.
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: Everything that happens in the story is seemingly planned by Satan.]] Xanatos himself is mentioned but he doesn't actually appear.
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: Everything Satan allows Oberon to banish him and his demons to avoid his attack that happens in incapacitates most of the story is seemingly planned by Satan.]] magic-powered wedding guests and to trick Oberon into thinking he's not a threat, so he can send his minions to Avalon and cart all of Oberon's children off to Hell]]. Xanatos himself is mentioned but he doesn't actually appear.
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* CharacterDerailment: [[spoiler: Oberon]], though the author later apologizes for it, and gives it a HandWave.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: In the final epilogue Satan reveals that the events of the story were part of a massive, long-term XanatosGambit designed to create an army of Keyblade masters that he can control.]]
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: In the final epilogue Satan reveals that the events of the story were part of a massive, long-term XanatosGambit plan designed to create an army of Keyblade masters that he can control.]]
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--> "Heh, I like that. The return of Roxas, last of the dread Organization XIII! Er, next to Zexion, that is. May the universe tremble before me as I shatter worlds and take all the hot babes and guys to my bed! Bwahahahahaha! *pause* What? I was joking! Sorta."
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--> "Heh, I like that. The return of Roxas, last of the dread Organization XIII! Er, next to Zexion, that is. May the universe tremble before me as I shatter worlds and take all the hot babes and guys to my bed! Bwahahahahaha! *pause* Bwahahahahaha!... What? I was joking! Sorta."
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--> "Heh, I like that. The return of Roxas, last of the dread Organization XIII! Er, next to Zexion, that is. May the universe tremble before me as I shatter worlds and take all the hot babes and guys to my bed! Bwahahahahaha! *pause* What? I was joking! Sorta."
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* KneelBeforeZod: [[spoiler: Oberon]] demanded King Authur to kneel before him, or he'd [[spoiler:kill everyone]]. All it did was make Authur even more awesome.
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* PlotlineDeath: Zig-Zagged, [[spoiler:When Aerith dies, they state that they can't revive her because Sephiroth killed her with the Maramusa. Satan revives her anyway, though.]]
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* PlotlineDeath: Zig-Zagged, [[spoiler:When Aerith dies, they state that they can't revive her because Sephiroth killed her with the Maramusa.Masamune. Satan revives her anyway, though.]]
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* HolyHandGrenade: [[spoiler: Oberon]] uses one to banish Satan and his minions from the scene of the wedding. [[spoiler: It doesn't last.]]
* InterspeciesRomance: Pete and Maleficent are the most obvious. Several others are mentioned. The most entertaining is [[spoiler: Tifa and the TailSpin version of Shere Khan]]. Really.
* [[MarriedToTheJob Married To The Quest]]: In this fic, [[FinalFantasy7 Cloud]] is hopelessly isolated from his friends thanks to his obsession with hunting down Sephiroth. ItGetsWorse for him in his epilogue [[spoiler: because Tifa acquires a new boyfriend (the TailSpin version of Shere Khan) who is not only just as good as Cloud at organising the team at Radiant Garden to defend their world, but is actually there when he's needed]].
* TokenEvilTeammate: None other than {{Satan}} himself.
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* WorthyOpponent: [[FinalFantasy Gilgamesh]] wants to fight Sora to claim his keyblade (he already has several keyblades, but he wants the original one for his collection).
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* WorthyOpponent: [[FinalFantasy Gilgamesh]] wants to fight Sora to claim his keyblade (he already has several keyblades, but he wants the original one for his collection).
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** Not to mention an offhand remark about {{Disgaea a demon named Etna and her exploding penguin brigade}}.
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** Not to mention an offhand remark about {{Disgaea [[{{Disgaea}} a demon named Etna and her exploding penguin brigade}}.brigade]].
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: In this case it's gigantic [[HarmlessVillain harmless bad guys]], gigantic animal sidekicks and a gigantic [[spoiler: DarkwingDuck]].
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* BreakTheHaughty: Uncle Scrooge does it to Flintheart Glomgold.
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* DirtyOldMan: Flintheart Glomgold and Zeus (technically).
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* EnemyMine: The second half of the story is a huge battle against the minions of [[spoiler: Oberon]] which forces heroes and villains to team up.
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* AnythingThatMoves: Zeus. He's trying to outdo Satan.
* TheFairFolk: Oberon.
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: Oberon is cast into the darkness to be tormented by his insane mother Queen Mab shortly after learning that Avalon was razed and his children either killed or kidnapped by demons from hell.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: Oberon is cast into the darkness to be tormented by his insane mother Queen Mab shortly after learning that Avalon was razed and his children either killed or kidnapped by demons from hell.]]
* IGotBetter: [[spoiler: Pete, Roxas.]]
* RefugeInAudacity
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* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: Judge Doom reveals [[spoiler: that he never actually graduated from law school.]]
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* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: Judge Doom reveals [[spoiler: that he never actually graduated from law school.]] [[SarcasmMode What a shocker.]]
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* TheAlliance: King Mickey's plan is to gather together some of the guests at the wedding to organise a coalition of heroes to oppose Maleficent. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, it falls apart because Simba is too suspicious of humans to participate, Leon is in the middle of a HeroicBSOD over his inability to defend his world, Zeus is more interested in having sex with AnythingThatMoves and Oberon refuses to join unless Mickey hands over every fairy in the universe to him.]]
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** [[ToyStory Andy.]] ANDY. Damn it, Ri2, that's ''my'' childhood you're screwing with!
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*CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Sora, Roxas, Goofy and [[spoiler: Pete]] are in [[spoiler: Oberon's body, trying to free everyone. Oberon is in there, fighting him while Sora summons all of his available summons (sans Genie, Mushu, and Peter Pan). Sora and his group are insanely outmatched, with Oberon summoning monsters from every possibly Fandom, from FinalFantasy to YuGiOh. They're all screwed, but guess who saves the day? ChickenLittle. CHICKEN FRIGGING LITTLE.]]
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*CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Sora, Roxas, Goofy and [[spoiler: Pete]] are in [[spoiler: Oberon's body, trying to free everyone. Oberon is in there, fighting him while Sora summons all of his available summons (sans Genie, Mushu, and Peter Pan). Sora and his group are insanely outmatched, with Oberon summoning monsters from every possibly Fandom, from FinalFantasy ''FinalFantasy'' to YuGiOh.''{{Yu-Gi-Oh}}''. They're all screwed, but guess who saves the day? ChickenLittle. CHICKEN FRIGGING LITTLE.]]
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*WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome?: Again, FFVII characters dressed as ''PowerRangers'', fighting [[spoiler: a giant, rediculously overpowered version of Prince John. Yes, ''[[RobinHood THAT]]'' prince John.]]
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*WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome?: Again, FFVII characters dressed as ''PowerRangers'', fighting [[spoiler: a giant, rediculously overpowered version of Prince John. Yes, ''[[RobinHood ''[[Disney/RobinHood THAT]]'' prince John.]]
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*WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome?: Again, FFVII characters dressed as ''PowerRangers'', fighting [[spoiler: a giant, rediculously overpowered version of Prince John. Yes, ''THAT'' prince John.]]
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*WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome?: Again, FFVII characters dressed as ''PowerRangers'', fighting [[spoiler: a giant, rediculously overpowered version of Prince John. Yes, ''THAT'' ''[[RobinHood THAT]]'' prince John.]]
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*PlotlineDeath: Zig-Zagged, [[spoiler:When Aerith dies, they state that they can't revive her because Sephiroth killed her with the Maramusa. Satan revives anyway, though.]]
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*PlotlineDeath: Zig-Zagged, [[spoiler:When Aerith dies, they state that they can't revive her because Sephiroth killed her with the Maramusa. Satan revives her anyway, though.]]
