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** PrisonDimension: The Dark Area is also technically this, but in reality it is a place where the data of deleted Digimon goes. The lower, more secure levels of the Dark Area were repurposed into a prison.
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* PrisonDimension: The Dark Area is a place where the data of deleted Digimon goes. The lower, more secure levels of the Dark Area were repurposed into a prison.
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-->'''Omegamon''' (About Gankoomon): "You know how stubborn he can be. Then again, he does have a point. You can't really see him attending one of these elegant, grandiose parties, can you?"
-->'''Alphamon''': "Maybe not, but this sort of thing comes with being a Royal Knight. He's going to have to get used to it. Dynasmon was the same way a long time ago, but he doesn't complain about it anymore."
-->'''Alphamon''': "Maybe not, but this sort of thing comes with being a Royal Knight. He's going to have to get used to it. Dynasmon was the same way a long time ago, but he doesn't complain about it anymore."
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-->'''Omegamon''' (About Gankoomon): "You You know how stubborn he can be. Then again, he does have a point. You can't really see him attending one of these elegant, grandiose parties, can you?"
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-->'''Alphamon''':"Maybe Maybe not, but this sort of thing comes with being a Royal Knight. He's going to have to get used to it. Dynasmon was the same way a long time ago, but he doesn't complain about it anymore."
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-->'''Dynasmon''': "Man, I hate coming to these things…"
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-->'''Dynasmon''': "Man, Man, I hate coming to these things…"things...
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* BackToBackBadasses: This happens when the team that was sent to rescue [=OuRyuumon=] gets surrounded.
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* BackToBackBadasses: This happens when the team that was sent to rescue [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon gets surrounded.
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** BadassArmy: [=OuRyuumon=] commands the Strike Forces, which serve under the Royal Knights to protect the Free Area.
* BattleCouple: Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=].
* BetterAsFriends: Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] decide to keep things platonic after the latter's rescue.
* BattleCouple: Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=].
* BetterAsFriends: Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] decide to keep things platonic after the latter's rescue.
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** BadassArmy: [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon commands the Strike Forces, which serve under the Royal Knights to protect the Free Area.
* BattleCouple: Alphamon and[=OuRyuumon=].
Ouryumon.
* BetterAsFriends: Alphamon and[=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon decide to keep things platonic after the latter's rescue.
* BattleCouple: Alphamon and
* BetterAsFriends: Alphamon and
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* BloodKnight: [=OuRyuumon=], [=BlackMetalGarurumon=], Dorbickmon, and Sistermon Noir all really enjoy fighting. [=OuRyuumon=] gets called out on it by Examon.
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* BloodKnight: [=OuRyuumon=], Ouryumon, [=BlackMetalGarurumon=], Dorbickmon, and Sistermon Noir all really enjoy fighting. [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon gets called out on it by Examon.
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* TheCassandra: Baronmon was one of these about [[spoiler: the return of [=DarkKnightmon=]]], but [=OuRyuumon=] and Omegamon didn't believe him. Alphamon had a feeling that Baronmon was telling the truth, but Baronmon himself admitted that he doubted the viability of his vision.
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* TheCassandra: Baronmon was one of these about [[spoiler: the return of [=DarkKnightmon=]]], but [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon and Omegamon didn't believe him. Alphamon had a feeling that Baronmon was telling the truth, but Baronmon himself admitted that he doubted the viability of his vision.
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* EmergencyTransformation: [[spoiler: [=OuRyuumon=] is mortally wounded in the Battle of the World Tree, so Alphamon jogresses with him into Alphamon: Ouryuken in order to save him. Downplayed in that the transformation isn't permanent.]]
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* EmergencyTransformation: [[spoiler: [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon is mortally wounded in the Battle of the World Tree, so Alphamon jogresses with him into Alphamon: Ouryuken in order to save him. Downplayed in that the transformation isn't permanent.]]
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* EverybodyIsSingle: With Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] being the exception. Somewhat justified in that being a Royal Knight is a very demanding and dangerous job.
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* EverybodyIsSingle: With Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon being the exception. Somewhat justified in that being a Royal Knight is a very demanding and dangerous job.
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* ForgotToGagHim: When [=OuRyuumon=] is captured, he manages to convince the mayor who was being extorted by Dorbickmon to send for the Royal Knights, which ultimately leads to his rescue.
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* ForgotToGagHim: When [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon is captured, he manages to convince the mayor who was being extorted by Dorbickmon to send for the Royal Knights, which ultimately leads to his rescue.
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* InternalReveal: That Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] are in a relationship.
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* InternalReveal: That Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon are in a relationship.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Duftmon and [=OuRyuumon=], despite being opposite extremes in terms of personality. [=AncientGarurumon=] is basically Duftmon's counterpart in the Warrior Ten and Dorbickmon is the jerk of [=DarkKnightmon=]'s group, though he's more tactful than any of the other three.
** Gankoomon is a lot like [=OuRyuumon=] in that he's hotheaded, impulsive and rude, but is more professional.
* KissDiss: Alphamon goes in to kiss [[spoiler: Omegamon]] after [[spoiler:he finds out that [=OuRyuumon=] tried to kill [=DarkKnightmon=]. When Omegamon realizes what Alphamon's really doing, he pushes him away, knowing that Alphamon's emotions are all over the place and that Alphamon didn't really mean it. Things get worse for them from there.]]
** Gankoomon is a lot like [=OuRyuumon=] in that he's hotheaded, impulsive and rude, but is more professional.
* KissDiss: Alphamon goes in to kiss [[spoiler: Omegamon]] after [[spoiler:he finds out that [=OuRyuumon=] tried to kill [=DarkKnightmon=]. When Omegamon realizes what Alphamon's really doing, he pushes him away, knowing that Alphamon's emotions are all over the place and that Alphamon didn't really mean it. Things get worse for them from there.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Duftmon and [=OuRyuumon=], Ouryumon, despite being opposite extremes in terms of personality. [=AncientGarurumon=] is basically Duftmon's counterpart in the Warrior Ten and Dorbickmon is the jerk of [=DarkKnightmon=]'s group, though he's more tactful than any of the other three.
** Gankoomon is a lot like[=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon in that he's hotheaded, impulsive and rude, but is more professional.
* KissDiss: Alphamon goes in to kiss [[spoiler: Omegamon]] after [[spoiler:he finds out that[=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon tried to kill [=DarkKnightmon=]. When Omegamon realizes what Alphamon's really doing, he pushes him away, knowing that Alphamon's emotions are all over the place and that Alphamon didn't really mean it. Things get worse for them from there.]]
** Gankoomon is a lot like
* KissDiss: Alphamon goes in to kiss [[spoiler: Omegamon]] after [[spoiler:he finds out that
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: [[spoiler:[=OuRyuumon=] does this when he pushes [=DarkKnightmon=], who was conspiring to take over the Order, off of one of the towers, trying to make it look like it was a loose stone. The trouble is, [=DarkKnightmon=] survived.]]
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: [[spoiler:[=OuRyuumon=] [[spoiler:Ouryumon does this when he pushes [=DarkKnightmon=], who was conspiring to take over the Order, off of one of the towers, trying to make it look like it was a loose stone. The trouble is, [=DarkKnightmon=] survived.]]
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* NobleMaleRoguishMale: Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] have this dynamic in their relationship.
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* NobleMaleRoguishMale: Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon have this dynamic in their relationship.
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* TheOrder: The Order of the Royal Knights, which includes the Royal Knights themselves, [[BadassArmy the Strike Forces]] led by [=OuRyuumon=], the Defense Forces lead by Knightmon, the Stealth Forces led by Karatenmon and a group of scouts led by Grani.
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* TheOrder: The Order of the Royal Knights, which includes the Royal Knights themselves, [[BadassArmy the Strike Forces]] led by [=OuRyuumon=], Ouryumon, the Defense Forces lead by Knightmon, the Stealth Forces led by Karatenmon and a group of scouts led by Grani.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: One of the biggest sources of conflict in the story is the poor communication between Alphamon, Omegamon, and [=OuRyuumon=]. This causes much of the problems in the second half of the story.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: One of the biggest sources of conflict in the story is the poor communication between Alphamon, Omegamon, and [=OuRyuumon=].Ouryumon. This causes much of the problems in the second half of the story.
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* StraightGay: Alphamon is in a relationship with [=OuRyuumon=] and nobody else knows about it.
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* StraightGay: Alphamon is in a relationship with [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon and nobody else knows about it.
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* WakingUpElsewhere: Happens to both Omegamon and [=OuRyuumon=] courtesy of [=DarkKnightmon=], who kidnapped Omegamon in order to use TheCorruption on him and [=OuRyuumon=] in simple revenge.
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* WakingUpElsewhere: Happens to both Omegamon and [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon courtesy of [=DarkKnightmon=], who kidnapped Omegamon in order to use TheCorruption on him and [=OuRyuumon=] Ouryumon in simple revenge.
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* AnchoredShip: Since the events of A Dragon in Shining Armour, Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon's=] relationship has been on hiatus, mostly due to the events of the plot making Alphamon unwilling to focus on his personal life for the time being.
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* AnchoredShip: Since the events of A Dragon in Shining Armour, Alphamon and [=OuRyuumon's=] [=Ouryumon's=] relationship has been on hiatus, mostly due to the events of the plot making Alphamon unwilling to focus on his personal life for the time being.
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* DeconstructionFic: While not it's main purpose, the fic deconstructs many elements of Digimon and goes into depth about how they would affect every day life in the Digital World.
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* DeconstructionFic: While not it's main purpose, the DeconReconSwitch: The fic deconstructs many elements of Digimon and goes into depth about how they would affect every day life in the Digital World.World, but it also rebuilds these elements into a more familiar and hopeful type of Digimon story.
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* BreakingOutTheBoss: While not exactly his boss, [[spoiler: Bagramon]] breaks [[spoiler: the Seven Great Demon Lords]] out of the Dark Area to utilize them in his plans.
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: Early on in the story, Alphamon punches Examon for disobeying orders, which seems out of character for the diplomatic and even-handed character of Alphamon that we know now.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: Early on in the story, Alphamon punches Examon for disobeying orders, which seems out of character for the diplomatic and even-handed character of Alphamon that we know now.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: Early on in the story, Alphamon punches Examon for disobeying orders, which seems out of character for the diplomatic and even-handed character of Alphamon that we know now.