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* BadassPrincess: She's the princess of the Gravitus, yet is skilled enough to hold her own in battle.
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* PrettyPrincessPowerhouse: She's the princess of the Gravitus, yet is skilled enough to hold her own in battle.
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* {{Badass}}: Oh yeah. Stormer is capable of taking out the highly trained soldiers of GEIST with ease, and [[spoiler:even takes out a third of Dr. Thorne's robot army during Chiharu and his escape from The Gambit's Revenge after the doctor goes nuts.]]
** BadassLongcoat: Is usually found wearing a black longcoat like those of the Grammaton Clerics of {{Film/Equilibrium}}.
** BadassInANiceSuit: Stormer likes to dress sharp, even in the midst of battle.
** BadassLongcoat: Is usually found wearing a black longcoat like those of the Grammaton Clerics of {{Film/Equilibrium}}.
** BadassInANiceSuit: Stormer likes to dress sharp, even in the midst of battle.
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* {{Badass}}: Oh yeah. Stormer is capable of taking out the highly trained soldiers of GEIST with ease, and [[spoiler:even takes out a third of Dr. Thorne's robot army during Chiharu and his escape from The Gambit's Revenge after the doctor goes nuts.]]
**BadassLongcoat: Is usually found wearing a black longcoat like those of the Grammaton Clerics of {{Film/Equilibrium}}.
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* {{Badass}}: Almost nearly as much as Stormer.
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* TheMentor: Becomes a mentor to his son Lightning, teaching him his fighting style and the way of the samurai.
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* TheObiWan: Becomes a mentor to his son Lightning, teaching him his fighting style and the way of the samurai.
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** Raijin being a {{Mix And Match Weapon}} was directly inspired by {{WebVideo/RWBY}}.
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* StraightEdge: He firmly believes in this policy.
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* ShoutOut: Her attack drone has attacks based on the weapons from ''[[VideoGame/{{Xevious}} [=Xevious 3D/G=]]]'' and ''VideoGame/{{R-Type}}''.
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* ShoutOut: Her attack drone has attacks based on the weapons from ''[[VideoGame/{{Xevious}} [=Xevious 3D/G=]]]'' and ''VideoGame/{{R-Type}}''.''VideoGame/RType''.
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** Don't squish his cheeks either, he really doesn't like it.
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** Don't squish her cheeks either, she really doesn't like it.
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* ButNotTooForeign: He's a half-American, half-Japanese who grows up in Japan.
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* ButNotTooForeign: She's a half-American, half-Japanese who grows up in Japan.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother: Thanks to her lack of physical aging.
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* InvisibilityCloak: Her PoweredArmor has an invisibility mode. It's a MythologyGag towards [[Characters/WelcomeToBeaconNextTeamMISN her Beacon RP counterpart]], who has invisibility as a power.
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* InvisibilityCloak: Her PoweredArmor has an invisibility mode. It's a MythologyGag ShoutOut towards [[Characters/WelcomeToBeaconNextTeamMISN her Beacon RP counterpart]], who has invisibility as a power.
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* InvisibilityCloak: Her PoweredArmor has an invisibility mode. It's a MythologyGag towards [[Characters/WelcomeToBeaconNextTeamMISN her Beacon RP counterpart]], who has invisibility as a power.
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* MeaningfulName: She's named after Iris, the goddess of Rainbows. She grows up to be an artist who is skilled at painting with the colours of the rainbow. She's also named after a purple flower, and has natural purple hair.
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* MeaningfulName: She's named after Iris, the goddess of Rainbows. She grows up to be an artist who is skilled at painting with the colours of the rainbow. She's also named after a purple flower, and has natural purple hair. Finally, Iris can also refer to part of the eye, and she's very skilled at visual arts.
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* CombatAndSupport: Like her mother, he's the support to Lightning's combat.
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* CombatAndSupport: Like her mother, he's she's the support to Lightning's combat.
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* ColorCodedCharacters: Purple and lavender, just like her namesake flower.
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* MeaningfulName: She's named after Iris, the goddess of Rainbows. She grows up to be an artist who is skilled at painting with the colours of the rainbow.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Her hair is partially lavender, resulting from the circumstances of her birth.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Purple Hair]]: Her hair is partially lavender, resulting from the circumstances of her birth.
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* PinkGirlBlueBoy: She has a purple stripe in his hair and she's the female twin.
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* PinkGirlBlueBoy: She has a purple stripe in his her hair and she's the female twin.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-jbeVVr4J5c Chemical Star]] by Cytus, shared with his sister.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-jbeVVr4J5c Chemical Star]] by Cytus, shared with herbrother.
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* FragileSpeedster: Is both fast and strong, but has downright horrible defense skills and endurance.
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* FragileSpeedster: Is both fast [[GlassCannon and strong, strong]], but has downright horrible defense skills and endurance.
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* WonderChild: Lightning and Iris are a downplayed Sci-fi version of this. Since Stormer and Chiharu were unable to have kids as Cyborgs, they opted for Chiharu to get an artificial womb to give birth, a risky process with a high chance of failure or defects. The process worked perfectly and the twin's birth was considered a miracle.
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* WonderChild: Lightning and Iris are a downplayed Sci-fi version of this. Since Stormer and Chiharu were unable to have kids as Cyborgs, cyborgs, they opted for Chiharu to get an artificial womb to give birth, a risky process with a high chance of failure or defects. The process worked perfectly and the twin's twins' birth was considered a miracle.
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* WonderChild: Lightning and Iris are a downplayed Sci-fi version of this. Since Stormer and Chiharu were unable to have kids as Cyborgs, they opted for Chiharu to get an artificial womb to give birth, a risky process with a high chance of failure. The process worked and the twin's birth was considered a miracle.
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* WonderChild: Lightning and Iris are a downplayed Sci-fi version of this. Since Stormer and Chiharu were unable to have kids as Cyborgs, they opted for Chiharu to get an artificial womb to give birth, a risky process with a high chance of failure. failure or defects. The process worked perfectly and the twin's birth was considered a miracle.
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* WonderChild: Lightning and Iris are a downplayed Sci-fi version of this. Since Stormer and Chiharu were unable to have kids as Cyborgs, they opted for Chiharu to get an artificial womb to give birth, a risky process with a high chance of failure. The process worked and the twin's birth was considered a miracle.
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* WonderChild: Lightning and Iris are a downplayed Sci-fi version of this. Since Stormer and Chiharu were unable to have kids as Cyborgs, they opted for Chiharu to get an artificial womb to give birth, a risky process with a high chance of failure. The process worked and the twin's birth was considered a miracle.
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* WonderChild: Lightning and Iris are a downplayed Sci-fi version of this. Since Stormer and Chiharu were unable to have kids as Cyborgs, they opted for Chiharu to get an artificial womb to give birth, a risky process with a high chance of failure. The process worked and the twin's birth was considered a miracle.
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* [[spoiler:FromNobodyToNightmare: He was once an ancient researcher who studied the power of the Eternal Flame. Then he got used it on himself to gain power.]]
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Originally a {{Darker And Edgier}} reboot of the {{Franchise/Sonic The Hedgehog}} series called Sonic Unchained, it was converted into an original series in December 2014 after one of the original creators behind the ideas for the project resigned. All chapters of this story will be posted on TheHailStormer's DeviantArt account once he makes them.
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Originally a {{Darker And Edgier}} reboot of the {{Franchise/Sonic The Hedgehog}} series called Sonic Unchained, it was converted into an original series in December 2014 after one of the original creators behind the ideas for the project resigned. All chapters of this story will be posted on TheHailStormer's DeviantArt Website/DeviantArt account once he makes them.
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* BerserkButton: Insulting her parents in front of her-they're her role models, and she won't like it when they're insulted. Calling her a doll due to her cute looks is also another one.
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* BerserkButton: Insulting her parents in front of her-they're her role models, and she won't like it when they're insulted.
** Calling her a doll due to her cute looksis also another one.and coloured hair.
** Touching her stuffed rabbit doll without her permission.
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One of the two main heroes, a 23-year old cyborg samurai who works for Dr. Asmodeus Thorne against the evil armies of GEIST (Global Enforcement Infantry Strike Troopers). He's got a strong sense of honor and justice, and will not harm any children or innocents under any circumstance. Driven to avenge his fallen militia group and his home city of New Orleans, he and his girlfriend Chiharu will not stop until the dictatorship of Nicolas Fidel is no more. More information about him can be found [[http://thehailstormer.deviantart.com/art/Stormer-Aurion-s-Profile-480677293 here]], and a visual reference for him can be found [[https://www.dropbox.com/s/dh12lr1ktk7l9np/Photo%20Nov%2002%2C%209%2013%2031%20PM.png?dl=0 here]].
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One of the two main heroes, a 23-year old cyborg samurai who works for Dr. Asmodeus Thorne against the evil armies of GEIST (Global Enforcement Infantry Strike Troopers). He's got a strong sense of honor and justice, and will not harm any children or innocents under any circumstance. Driven to avenge his fallen militia group and his home city of New Orleans, he and his girlfriend Chiharu will not stop until the dictatorship of Nicolas Fidel is no more. More information about him can be found [[http://thehailstormer.deviantart.com/art/Stormer-Aurion-s-Profile-480677293 here]], and a visual reference for him can be found [[https://www.dropbox.com/s/dh12lr1ktk7l9np/Photo%20Nov%2002%2C%209%2013%2031%20PM.com/s/zgv4bx77qwqf5gt/Photo%20Jan%2029%2C%208%2021%2025%20AM.png?dl=0 here]].
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!!Additional Tropes Pertaining to Stormer from Season 2-Onward:
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* RetiredBadass: He retired from active combat duty at the end of Season 3.
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* RetiredBadass: He retired from active combat duty at the end of Season Arc 3.
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Stormer's 22-year old girlfriend who hails from Tokyo, Japan. She's a expert at programming and engineering, just under Dr. Asmodeus Thorne in terms of sheer technical skill. She's a bit shy and introverted due to losing her parents at a young age, though, but loves Stormer as much as he loves her. Like him, she was also forced to become a cyborg since she and Stormer were the only survivors of the attack on New Orleans. More info on her can be found [[http://thehailstormer.deviantart.com/art/Chiharu-Yamamoto-s-Profile-480682215 here]], and a visual reference for her can be found [[https://www.dropbox.com/s/moykcjhrbnklyxs/Photo%20Nov%2002%2C%209%2013%2039%20PM.png?dl=0 here]].
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Stormer's 22-year old girlfriend who hails from Tokyo, Japan. She's a expert at programming and engineering, just under Dr. Asmodeus Thorne in terms of sheer technical skill. She's a bit shy and introverted due to losing her parents at a young age, though, but loves Stormer as much as he loves her. Like him, she was also forced to become a cyborg since she and Stormer were the only survivors of the attack on New Orleans. More info on her can be found [[http://thehailstormer.deviantart.com/art/Chiharu-Yamamoto-s-Profile-480682215 here]], and a visual reference for her can be found [[https://www.dropbox.com/s/moykcjhrbnklyxs/Photo%20Nov%2002%2C%209%2013%2039%20PM.com/s/vg5ywmcnjfq0wmi/Photo%20Jan%2029%2C%208%2038%2051%20AM.png?dl=0 here]].
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* OlderAndWiser: After Season 3, due to all her combat experience.
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* OlderAndWiser: After Season Arc 3, due to all her combat experience.
* RetiredBadass: Retired from active combat duty at the end ofSeason Arc 3.
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* AdultFear: When [[spoiler:Lightning and Iris are kidnapped by Jack and Lizzie]] to lure Stormer and Chiharu out.
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* DefectorFromDecadance: Was once a GEIST member.
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* DefectorFromDecadance: DefectorFromDecadence: Was once a GEIST member.