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* [[AbusiveParents Abusive Parents]]
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* [[AlcoholicDad Alcoholic dad]]- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
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* [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitch]]- Kristy Waters.
* [[AlwaysSomeoneBetter Always someone better]]- Nick to Alex.
* [[ArchEnemy Arch-enemy]] Kristy and Piper, with strong feelings from both sides.
* [[BadBoss Bad Boss]]- Chief Daniel Graves.
* [[BandOfBrothers Band of brothers]]
* [[BecomingTheMask Becoming the mask]]- Happens to Jay...partially.
* [[BelligerentSexualTension Belligerent Sexual Tension]]- Alex and Piper. Also, to a lesser extent, Jay and Katrina.
* [[BigBad Big bad]]- Chief Daniel Graves. [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation Unless...]]
* [[AlwaysSomeoneBetter Always someone better]]- Nick to Alex.
* [[ArchEnemy Arch-enemy]] Kristy and Piper, with strong feelings from both sides.
* [[BadBoss Bad Boss]]- Chief Daniel Graves.
* [[BandOfBrothers Band of brothers]]
* [[BecomingTheMask Becoming the mask]]- Happens to Jay...partially.
* [[BelligerentSexualTension Belligerent Sexual Tension]]- Alex and Piper. Also, to a lesser extent, Jay and Katrina.
* [[BigBad Big bad]]- Chief Daniel Graves. [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation Unless...]]
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* [[BigManOnCampus Big guy on Campus]]- Alex.
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* [[CallingTheOldManOut Calling the old man out]]- Jay to his father. Sarah also does this to her father as well.
* [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Conveniently an orphan]]
* [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Conveniently an orphan]]
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* [[CryingIntoChest Crying into chest]]
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* [[CryingIntoChest Crying into chest]]CryIntoChest
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* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice Queen]]- Happens to Piper throughout the story.
* [[DirtyCop Dirty Cop]] - Chief Daniel Graves. Though at least that's the way the students view him...
* [[DirtyCop Dirty Cop]] - Chief Daniel Graves. Though at least that's the way the students view him...
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* [[HighSchoolDance Highschool dance]]
* [[IdenticalTwins Identical twins]]- Sarah and Katrina.
* [[IdenticalTwins Identical twins]]- Sarah and Katrina.
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* [[SwitchingPOV Switching POV]]
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* [[TheMole The mole]]- Jay, and later Katrina.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[DeathByChildbirth death by childbirth]]- How Sarah and Katrina's mom died, and the reason their [[TheUnfavorite dad hates them so much.]]
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* [[CryingIntoChest Crying into chest]]
* [[DeathByChildbirthdeath Death by childbirth]]- How Sarah and Katrina's mom died, and the reason their [[TheUnfavorite dad hates them so much.]]
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.years.
* [[YouMustBeCold You must be cold]]- Jay giving Katrina his jacket. She rejects it at first, but later accepts it.
* [[YouMustBeCold You must be cold]]- Jay giving Katrina his jacket. She rejects it at first, but later accepts it.
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* [[EyeScream Eye scream]]- Katrina losing her left eye after a nasty beating from her father. Doesn't go into too much detail, though, as she is already half-unconscious when it happens and only knows that for the time being she couldn't see anything.
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* [[OnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou Only one allowed to defeat you]]- Kristy develops a bit of an obsession with besting Piper, where it eventually becomes a case of this.
* [[SlasherSmile Slasher Smile]]- When beating up Katrina, her father is described as having 'a crooked, cruel grin' and reminds her of a movie serial killer.
* [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou The only one allowed to defeat you]]- Kristy develops a bit of an obsession with besting Piper, where it eventually becomes a case of this.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[AccidentalMurder Accidental murder]]- Played straight when Alex, Sarah and Piper run over Mary Graves. Of course it's not the murder that makes Grave go after them, but the lies.
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* [[AccidentalMurder Accidental murder]]- Played straight when Alex, Sarah and Piper run over Mary Graves. Of course it's not the murder that makes Grave Graves go after them, but the lies.
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* [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer All of the other reindeer]]- Piper has been actively tormented by Kristy and her popular crowd for years, and was treated harshly by everyone else as they were afraid of Kristy's wrath. It does eventually get better but the bullying never stops until she finally decides to fight back.
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* [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer All of the other reindeer]]- Piper has been actively tormented by Kristy and her popular crowd for years, and was treated harshly or ignored by everyone else as they were afraid of Kristy's wrath. It does eventually get better but the bullying never stops until she finally decides to fight back.
* [[ArchEnemy Arch-enemy]] Kristy and Piper, with strong feelings from both sides.
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* [[BelligerentSexualTension Belligerent Sexual Tension]]- Alex and Piper. Also, to a lesser extent, Jay and Katrina.
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* [[BelligerentSexualTension Belligerent Sexual Tension]]- Alex and Piper. Also, to a lesser extent, Jay and Katrina.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big brother instinct]]- Alex is very protective over his twelve year old sister, and consider's himself the one who needs to take care of her. He also has a bit of this for Sarah later on.
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big brother instinct]]- Alex is very protective over his twelve year old sister, and consider's himself the one who needs to take care of her. He also has a bit of this for Sarah later on.on, as well as Katrina.
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* [[CallingTheOldManOut Calling the old man out]]- Jay to his father.
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* [[CallingTheOldManOut Calling the old man out]]- Jay to his father. Sarah also does this to her father as well.
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* [[EatingLunchAlone Eating lunch alone]]- Piper eats lunch alone every day by choice, until Sarah and Katrina finally decide to join her.
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* [[EatingLunchAlone Eating lunch alone]]- Piper eats lunch alone every day by choice, until Sarah and Katrina finally decide to join her. Happens to Katrina at least once, as well.
* [[EvilCounterpart Evil counterpart]]- Kristy could be considered this of Piper. They aren't too much different, and Kristy even admits her obsession with taking down Piper is in part because she knows, if given the chance, Piper could be just as popular, if not more popular, than she is. Their parents are both somewhat neglectful, they both love music, they both love Alex...Kristy simply managed to be the one to turn into [[AlphaBitch the Alpha Bitch]], instead of Piper.
* [[HeelFaceRevolvingDoor Heel-face revolving door]]- Katrina just can't seem to pick a side...
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* [[LackOfEmpathy Lack of empathy]]- Though she doesn't lack it exactly, Piper struggles with empathy simply because she's been so used to being a loner that she doesn't know how to care about other people. Played straighter with Kristy and Graves.
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* [[LackOfEmpathy Lack of empathy]]- Though she doesn't lack it exactly, Piper struggles with empathy simply because she's been so used to being a loner that she doesn't know how to care about other people.people, but she gets better. Played straighter with Kristy and Graves.
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* [[LonersAreFreaks Loners are freaks]]- Piper, a loner, is basically considered a freak by much of the school. Kristy's influence doesn't help.
* [[LoveMakesYouEvil Love makes you evil]]- A variation where it's Grave's love and heartbreak over losing Mary that makes him go after the students so ruthlessly.
* [[LoveMakesYouEvil Love makes you evil]]- A variation where it's Grave's love and heartbreak over losing Mary that makes him go after the students so ruthlessly.
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* [[LonersAreFreaks Loners are freaks]]- Piper, a loner, is basically considered a freak by much of the school. Somewhat subverted, however, in that much of the school don't actually hate her, they are simply playing along with Kristy's influence doesn't help.
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* [[LoveMakesYouEvil Love makes you evil]]- A variation where it's Grave's love and heartbreak over losing Mary that makes him go after the students so ruthlessly. Katrina's love for Jay is also one reason she switches sides.
* [[LoveMakesYouEvil Love makes you evil]]- A variation where it's Grave's love and heartbreak over losing Mary that makes him go after the students so ruthlessly. Katrina's love for Jay is also one reason she switches sides.
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* [[ParentalNeglect Parental Neglect]]- Piper's parents are always fighting, so they rarely ever seem to care about her. They really do, though, and don't divorce for her sake.
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* [[OnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou Only one allowed to defeat you]]- Kristy develops a bit of an obsession with besting Piper, where it eventually becomes a case of this.
* [[ParentalNeglect Parental Neglect]]- Piper's parents are always fighting, so they rarely ever seem to care about her. They really do, though,and don't divorce for her sake. but are horrible at showing it. Kristy's parents are also somewhat neglectful.
* [[ParentalNeglect Parental Neglect]]- Piper's parents are always fighting, so they rarely ever seem to care about her. They really do, though,
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* [[SanitySlippage Sanity slippage]]- Happens to Graves, though he was never all that sane to begin with...
* [[ShipperOnDeck Shipper on deck]]- Sarah for Piper and Katrina.
* [[ShutUpKiss Shut up kiss]]- Alex does this to Piper. Unlike usual, though, she punches him and runs away.
* [[ShipperOnDeck Shipper on deck]]- Sarah for Piper and Katrina.
* [[ShutUpKiss Shut up kiss]]- Alex does this to Piper. Unlike usual, though, she punches him and runs away.
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* [[SanitySlippage Sanity slippage]]- Happens to Graves, though he was never all that sane to begin with...
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* [[ShipperOnDeck Shipper on deck]]- Sarah for Piper andKatrina.
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* [[ShutUpKiss Shut up kiss]]- Alex does this to Piper. Unlike usual, though, she punches him and runs away. Played straighter when Katrina does it to Jay, though she pretends she only did it to protect Sarah.
* [[ShipperOnDeck Shipper on deck]]- Sarah for Piper and
* [[ShutUpKiss Shut up kiss]]- Alex does this to Piper. Unlike usual, though, she punches him and runs away. Played straighter when Katrina does it to Jay, though she pretends she only did it to protect Sarah.
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* [[StepfordSnarker Stepford Snarker]]- Piper.
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* [[StepfordSnarker Stepford Snarker]]- Piper.Piper, and Katrina to a lesser extent.
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* [[TomboyAndGirlyGirl Tomboy and Girly Girl]]- Piper(Tomboy) and Sarah (Girly Girl), as well as Katrina (Tomboy) and Sarah (Girly girl).
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* [[TomboyAndGirlyGirl Tomboy and Girly Girl]]- Piper(Tomboy) and Sarah (Girly Girl), as well as Katrina (Tomboy) and Sarah (Girly girl). Also, as they used to be friends, Piper (Tomboy) and Kristy (Girly Girl.)
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* [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre You are better than you think you are]]- Alex gives this type of speech to Piper after Kristy manages to break her.
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* [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer All of the other reindeer]]- Piper has been actively tormented by Kristy and her popular crowd for years, and was treated harshly by everyone else as they were afraid of Kristy's wrath. It does eventually get better but the bullying never stops until she finally decides to fight back.
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* [[BullyingADragon Bullying a dragon]]- Piper's treatment by the popular kids could be considered this as they know she is strong enough to hurt anyone. However, she keeps refusing to fight back, so it is somewhat justified, as after years of bullying, they most likely just assumed she wouldn't do anything.
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* [[DeathByChildbirth death by childbirth]]- How Sarah and Katrina's mom died, and the reason their [[Unfavorite dad hates them so much.]]
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* [[DeathByChildbirth death by childbirth]]- How Sarah and Katrina's mom died, and the reason their [[Unfavorite [[TheUnfavorite dad hates them so much.]]
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[[TheUnfavorite The Unfavorite]]- Sarah and Katrina are both this to their father, though Katrina is a bit more hated, and Alex to his Grandfather.
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* [[TheSnarkKnight The Snark Knight]]- Piper.
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* [[TheSnarkKnight The Snark Knight]]- Piper.Piper.
[[TheUnfavorite The Unfavorite]]- Sarah and Katrina are both this to their father, though Katrina is a bit more hated, and Alex to his Grandfather.
[[TheUnfavorite The Unfavorite]]- Sarah and Katrina are both this to their father, though Katrina is a bit more hated, and Alex to his Grandfather.
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* [[Unfavorite Unfavorite]]- Sarah and Katrina are both this to their father, though Katrina is a bit more hated, and Alex to his Grandfather.
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* [[AnyoneCanDie Anyone can die]]
* [[BandOfBrothers Band of brothers]]
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* [[BerserkButton Berserk button]]-
** Sarah- Don't hurt Katrina.
** Katrina- Don't hurt Sarah.
** Piper- Don't hurt any of her friends.
** Graves- Just criticize his parenting styles. I dare you.
** Sarah- Don't hurt Katrina.
** Katrina- Don't hurt Sarah.
** Piper- Don't hurt any of her friends.
** Graves- Just criticize his parenting styles. I dare you.
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* [[DeathByChildbirth death by childbirth]]- How Sarah and Katrina's mom died, and the reason their dad hates them so much.
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* [[DeathByChildbirth death by childbirth]]- How Sarah and Katrina's mom died, and the reason their [[Unfavorite dad hates them so much.]]
* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice Queen]]- Happens to Piper throughout the story.
* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice Queen]]- Happens to Piper throughout the story.
* [[FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling Foolish Sibling, Responsible Sibling]]- With Sarah and Katrina, Sarah is the fool and Katrina is the responsible one. There is also a variation with Nick (responsible) and Alex (foolish) though they are cousins, not siblings.
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* [[InformedLoner Informed Loner]] - Piper.
* [[ParentalNeglect Parental Neglect]]- Piper's parents are always fighting, so they rarely ever seem to care about her. They really do, though, and don't divorce for her sake.
* [[TheRival The rival]]- Kristy to Piper, Nick to Alex.
* [[TheSnarkKnight The Snark Knight]]- Piper.
* [[TheSnarkKnight The Snark Knight]]- Piper.
* [[TomboyAndGirlyGirl Tomboy and Girly Girl]]- Piper(Tomboy) and Sarah (Girly Girl), as well as Katrina (Tomboy) and Sarah (Girly girl).
* [[Unfavorite Unfavorite]]- Sarah and Katrina are both this to their father, though Katrina is a bit more hated, and Alex to his Grandfather.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.years.
* [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre You are better than you think you are]]- Alex gives this type of speech to Piper after Kristy manages to break her.
* [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre You are better than you think you are]]- Alex gives this type of speech to Piper after Kristy manages to break her.
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* [[CurbstompBattle Curbstomp battle]]- Piper punching out Kristy.
* [[TalkToTheFist Talk to the fist]]- Piper punching out Kristy.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[PersonnaNonGrata Personna Non Grata]]- "And the two of them were never aloud in that restaurant again." Doubles as a [[NoodleIncident noodle incident]].
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* [[PersonnaNonGrata [[PersonaNonGrata Personna Non Grata]]- "And the two of them were never aloud in that restaurant again." Doubles as a [[NoodleIncident noodle incident]].
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* [[WhatTheHellDad What the hell dad]]- Graves makes Jay, his eighteen year old son, live out in the streets for up to weeks at a time to trick and spy on the criminals they are after. He's been doing it for three years.
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* [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal Mistreatment induced betrayal]]- Katrina does the FaceHeel version, betraying her friends to help Jay and Chief Graves put them in jail. Later she and Jay both make the HeelFace version.
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* [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal Mistreatment induced betrayal]]- Katrina does the FaceHeel FaceHeelTurn version, betraying her friends to help Jay and Chief Graves put them in jail. Later she and Jay both make the HeelFace HeelFaceTurn version.
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* [[PersonnaNoGrata Personna No Grata]]- "And the two of them were never aloud in that restaurant again." Doubles as a [[NoodleIncident noodle incident]].
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* [[PersonnaNoGrata [[PersonnaNonGrata Personna No Non Grata]]- "And the two of them were never aloud in that restaurant again." Doubles as a [[NoodleIncident noodle incident]].
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* [[JerkassWoobie Jerkass woobie]]- Katrina eventually becomes one of these.
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* [[LawfulEvil Lawful evil]]- Chief Graves, considering he is, well...a cop.
* [[LoveMakesYouEvil Love makes you evil]]- A variation where it's Grave's love and heartbreak over losing Mary that makes him go after the students so ruthlessly.
* [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal Mistreatment induced betrayal]]- Katrina does the FaceHeel version, betraying her friends to help Jay and Chief Graves put them in jail. Later she and Jay both make the HeelFace version.
* [[ObfuscatingStupidity Obfuscating Stupidity]] - Alex is actually brilliant, but pretends to be much dumber than he is to remain popular. [[PopularIsDumb After all...]]
* [[PersonnaNoGrata Personna No Grata]]- "And the two of them were never aloud in that restaurant again." Doubles as a [[NoodleIncident noodle incident]].
* [[SanitySlippage Sanity slippage]]- Happens to Graves, though he was never all that sane to begin with...
* [[ShipperOnDeck Shipper on deck]]- Sarah for Piper and Katrina.
* [[ShutUpKiss Shut up kiss]]- Alex does this to Piper. Unlike usual, though, she punches him and runs away.
* [[StreetUrchin Street Urchin]]- Jay, though he's only doing it as part of the missions his dad sends him on.
* [[StepfordSmiler Stepford Smiler]]- Sarah and Katrina.
* [[StepfordSnarker Stepford Snarker]]- Piper.
* [[SwitchingPOV Switching POV]]
* [[TheMole The mole]]- Jay, and later Katrina.
* [[ThreePlusTwo ThreePlusTwo]] - Alex, Piper and Sarah, plus Jay and Katrina.
* [[TwoGirlsAndAGuy Two Girls and a guy]]- Piper and Sarah, plus Alex.
* [[PersonnaNoGrata Personna No Grata]]- "And the two of them were never aloud in that restaurant again." Doubles as a [[NoodleIncident noodle incident]].
* [[SanitySlippage Sanity slippage]]- Happens to Graves, though he was never all that sane to begin with...
* [[ShipperOnDeck Shipper on deck]]- Sarah for Piper and Katrina.
* [[ShutUpKiss Shut up kiss]]- Alex does this to Piper. Unlike usual, though, she punches him and runs away.
* [[StreetUrchin Street Urchin]]- Jay, though he's only doing it as part of the missions his dad sends him on.
* [[StepfordSmiler Stepford Smiler]]- Sarah and Katrina.
* [[StepfordSnarker Stepford Snarker]]- Piper.
* [[SwitchingPOV Switching POV]]
* [[TheMole The mole]]- Jay, and later Katrina.
* [[ThreePlusTwo ThreePlusTwo]] - Alex, Piper and Sarah, plus Jay and Katrina.
* [[TwoGirlsAndAGuy Two Girls and a guy]]- Piper and Sarah, plus Alex.
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* [[AccidentalMurder Accidental murder]]- Played straight when Alex, Sarah and Piper run over Mary Graves. Of course it's not the murder that makes Grave go after them, but the lies.
* [[DeathByChildbirth death by childbirth]]- How Sarah and Katrina's mom died, and the reason their dad hates them so much.
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* [[]]- Piper hates being helped and pitied by others, because she just isn't used to having friends and is fiercely independent.
* [[MeaningfulEcho Meaningful Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
* [[MeaningfulEcho Meaningful Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
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* [[]]- Piper hates being helped and pitied by others, because she just isn't used to having friends and [[DisappearedDad Disappeared dad]]- Alex's dad (and mom) is fiercely independent.
* [[MeaningfulEcho Meaningful Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]gone.
* [[MeaningfulEcho Meaningful Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
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* [[HighSchoolDance Highschool dance]]
* [[IdenticalTwins Identical twins]]- Sarah and Katrina.
* [[InformedLoner Informed Loner]] - Piper.
* [[JerkassWoobie Jerkass woobie]]- Katrina eventually becomes one of these.
* [[LackOfEmpathy Lack of empathy]]- Though she doesn't lack it exactly, Piper struggles with empathy simply because she's been so used to being a loner that she doesn't know how to care about other people. Played straighter with Kristy and Graves.
* [[LastNameBasis Last name basis]]- Alex always calling Piper 'Kent', her last name. Everyone else uses her first name, though.
* [[LawfulEvil Lawful evil]]- Chief Graves, considering he is, well...a cop.
* [[LonersAreFreaks Loners are freaks]]- Piper, a loner, is basically considered a freak by much of the school. Kristy's influence doesn't help.
* [[ManipulativeBitch Manipulative bitch]]- Kristy.
* [[MeaningfulEcho Meaningful Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
* [[MissingMom missing mom]] Alex's mom (and dad), Sarah and Katrina's mother. Also Jay's mother, but...
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My god, what have I done?]]- Happens many times. Piper, when she accidentally punches Sarah, Graves when he almost hurts Jay, etc.
* [[IdenticalTwins Identical twins]]- Sarah and Katrina.
* [[InformedLoner Informed Loner]] - Piper.
* [[JerkassWoobie Jerkass woobie]]- Katrina eventually becomes one of these.
* [[LackOfEmpathy Lack of empathy]]- Though she doesn't lack it exactly, Piper struggles with empathy simply because she's been so used to being a loner that she doesn't know how to care about other people. Played straighter with Kristy and Graves.
* [[LastNameBasis Last name basis]]- Alex always calling Piper 'Kent', her last name. Everyone else uses her first name, though.
* [[LawfulEvil Lawful evil]]- Chief Graves, considering he is, well...a cop.
* [[LonersAreFreaks Loners are freaks]]- Piper, a loner, is basically considered a freak by much of the school. Kristy's influence doesn't help.
* [[ManipulativeBitch Manipulative bitch]]- Kristy.
* [[MeaningfulEcho Meaningful Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
* [[MissingMom missing mom]] Alex's mom (and dad), Sarah and Katrina's mother. Also Jay's mother, but...
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My god, what have I done?]]- Happens many times. Piper, when she accidentally punches Sarah, Graves when he almost hurts Jay, etc.
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* [[EvenVillainsHaveLovedOnes Even Villains have loved ones]]- Graves loved his wife Mary, so much that her death is what is driving him throughout the book. He also cares about his son Jay, only...he's not a very good father.
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* [[EvenVillainsHaveLovedOnes [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes Even Villains have Evil has loved ones]]- Graves loved his wife Mary, so much that her death is what is driving him throughout the book. He also cares about his son Jay, only...he's not a very good father.
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* [[AwwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther Aww, look, they really do love each other]]- Happens a lot, especially with Alex and Piper.
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* [[EtTuBrute? Et tu, Brute?]]- Jay and Katrina both betray the others by working for Graves.
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* [[EtTuBrute? [[EtTuBrute Et tu, Brute?]]- Jay and Katrina both betray the others by working for Graves.
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* [[EvilNeverLies Evil never lies]]- Everything Kristy tells Piper to [[BreakThemByTalking break her down]] is technically true, as far as Piper and Kristy can both tell.
* [[ExpendableWomen Expendable women]]- Mary Graves.
* [[ExpendableWomen Expendable women]]- Mary Graves.
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* [[VillainsNeverLie Villains never lie]]- Everything Kristy tells Piper to [[BreakThemByTalking break her down]] is technically true, as far as Piper and Kristy can both tell.
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Piper Kent, Alex White and Sarah Fisher were all normal students, until that accident. Now, they are hiding from the police, lying and pretending and hiding their guilt. But it's not as easy as they had thought, and soon, their lives will change forever.
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Piper Kent, Alex White and Sarah Fisher were all normal students, until that accident.That accident that killed Mary Graves, wife of the police chief. Now, they are hiding from the police, lying and pretending and hiding their guilt. But it's not as easy as they had thought, and soon, their lives will change forever.
* [[AwwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther Aww, look, they really do love each other]]- Happens a lot, especially with Alex and Piper.
* [[ConflictingLoyalty Conflicting Loyalty]]- Happens with both Jay and Katrina, who are both torn between their friends and doing what they both know is right.
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* [[Determinator Determinator]]- Katrina, Graves and Kristy.
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* [[Don'tYouDarePityMe! Don't you dare pity me!]]- Piper hates being helped and pitied by others, because she just isn't used to having friends and is fiercely independent.
* [[DramaticEcho Dramatic Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
* [[DrivenByRevenge Driven By Revenge]]- Graves, oh so much. [[Spoiler:And later Katrina.]]
* [[DramaticEcho Dramatic Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
* [[DrivenByRevenge Driven By Revenge]]- Graves, oh so much. [[Spoiler:And later Katrina.]]
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* [[Don'tYouDarePityMe! Don't you dare pity me!]]- [[]]- Piper hates being helped and pitied by others, because she just isn't used to having friends and is fiercely independent.
*[[DramaticEcho Dramatic [[MeaningfulEcho Meaningful Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
*[[DrivenByRevenge Driven By Revenge]]- Graves, [[EatingLunchAlone Eating lunch alone]]- Piper eats lunch alone every day by choice, until Sarah and Katrina finally decide to join her.
* [[EtTuBrute? Et tu, Brute?]]- Jay and Katrina both betray the others by working for Graves.
* [[EvenVillainsHaveLovedOnes Even Villains have loved ones]]- Graves loved his wife Mary, so much that her death is what is driving him throughout the book. He also cares about his son Jay, only...he's not a very good father.
* [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Everyone can see it]]- Alex and Piper's relationship, oh somuch. [[Spoiler:And later Katrina.]]
much.
* [[EvilNeverLies Evil never lies]]- Everything Kristy tells Piper to [[BreakThemByTalking break her down]] is technically true, as far as Piper and Kristy can both tell.
* [[ExpendableWomen Expendable women]]- Mary Graves.
* [[FireForgedFriends Fire forged Friends]]
* [[FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch Former friend of Alpha bitch]]- Piper and Kristy used to be best friends, until problems with the band erupted and Piper was kicked out. Then the battle of the bands came and their rivalry started for real, as Piper had won but Kristy framed her for cheating. (Not to mention that Kristy is the reason Piper's parents started fighting...}Now they are bitter rivals, and Piper is Kristy's favorite target.
* [[GrayAndGrayMorality Gray and Gray morality]]- On one hand you have the students, who killed someone by accident and are lying to the cops, and eventually do even worse things to keep the secret. On the other hand you have the police chief, who lost his wife and is desperate to solve the case and set things right...who is also a rather neglectful father and a little insane and ruthless.
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* [[EtTuBrute? Et tu, Brute?]]- Jay and Katrina both betray the others by working for Graves.
* [[EvenVillainsHaveLovedOnes Even Villains have loved ones]]- Graves loved his wife Mary, so much that her death is what is driving him throughout the book. He also cares about his son Jay, only...he's not a very good father.
* [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Everyone can see it]]- Alex and Piper's relationship, oh so
* [[EvilNeverLies Evil never lies]]- Everything Kristy tells Piper to [[BreakThemByTalking break her down]] is technically true, as far as Piper and Kristy can both tell.
* [[ExpendableWomen Expendable women]]- Mary Graves.
* [[FireForgedFriends Fire forged Friends]]
* [[FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch Former friend of Alpha bitch]]- Piper and Kristy used to be best friends, until problems with the band erupted and Piper was kicked out. Then the battle of the bands came and their rivalry started for real, as Piper had won but Kristy framed her for cheating. (Not to mention that Kristy is the reason Piper's parents started fighting...}Now they are bitter rivals, and Piper is Kristy's favorite target.
* [[GrayAndGrayMorality Gray and Gray morality]]- On one hand you have the students, who killed someone by accident and are lying to the cops, and eventually do even worse things to keep the secret. On the other hand you have the police chief, who lost his wife and is desperate to solve the case and set things right...who is also a rather neglectful father and a little insane and ruthless.
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* [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Conveniently an orphan]]
* [[CurbstompBattle Curbstomp battle]]- Piper punching out Kristy.
* [[Determinator Determinator]]- Katrina, Graves and Kristy.
* [[DirtyCop Dirty Cop]] - Chief Daniel Graves. Though at least that's the way the students view him...
* [[Don'tYouDarePityMe! Don't you dare pity me!]]- Piper hates being helped and pitied by others, because she just isn't used to having friends and is fiercely independent.
* [[DramaticEcho Dramatic Echo]]- This quote- "Run away, change our names, flee the country." "Be serious." "I am." First it's used while the students are trying to figure out what to do, almost jokingly. Second time it's more serious, but still taken as a joke. The third time is [[spoiler:when the three students and Jay are on the train fleeing the city and they ask what to do next.]]
* [[DrivenByRevenge Driven By Revenge]]- Graves, oh so much. [[Spoiler:And later Katrina.]]
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* [[BigGuyOnCampus Big guy on Campus]]- Alex.
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* [[BigGuyOnCampus [[BigManOnCampus Big guy on Campus]]- Alex.
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* [[BadBoss Bad Boss]]- Chief Daniel Graves.
* [[BecomingTheMask Becoming the mask]]- Happens to Jay...partially.
* [[BelligerentSexualTension Belligerent Sexual Tension]]- Alex and Piper. Also, to a lesser extent, Jay and Katrina.
* [[BeserkButton Beserk button]]-
** Sarah- Don't hurt Katrina.
** Katrina- Don't hurt Sarah.
** Piper- Don't hurt any of her friends.
** Graves- Just criticize his parenting styles. I dare you.
* [[BigBad Big bad]]- Chief Daniel Graves. [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation Unless...]]
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big brother instinct]]- Alex is very protective over his twelve year old sister, and consider's himself the one who needs to take care of her. He also has a bit of this for Sarah later on.
* [[BigGuyOnCampus Big guy on Campus]]- Alex.
* [[BecomingTheMask Becoming the mask]]- Happens to Jay...partially.
* [[BelligerentSexualTension Belligerent Sexual Tension]]- Alex and Piper. Also, to a lesser extent, Jay and Katrina.
* [[BeserkButton Beserk button]]-
** Sarah- Don't hurt Katrina.
** Katrina- Don't hurt Sarah.
** Piper- Don't hurt any of her friends.
** Graves- Just criticize his parenting styles. I dare you.
* [[BigBad Big bad]]- Chief Daniel Graves. [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation Unless...]]
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big brother instinct]]- Alex is very protective over his twelve year old sister, and consider's himself the one who needs to take care of her. He also has a bit of this for Sarah later on.
* [[BigGuyOnCampus Big guy on Campus]]- Alex.
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* [[AlchoholicDad Alchoholic dad]]- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* [[All guys want Amazons AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...
* [[All guys want Amazons AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...
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* [[AlchoholicDad Alchoholic [[AlcoholicDad Alcoholic dad]]- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* [[All guys want Amazons AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...part.
* [[All guys want Amazons AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...
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* [[AdultsAreUseless]]- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
* [[AlchoholicDad]]- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* [[AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...
* [[AlphaBitch]]- Kristy Waters.
* [[AlwaysSomeoneBetter]]- Nick to Alex.
* [[AnyoneCanDie]]
* [[AdultsAreUseless]]- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
* [[AlchoholicDad]]- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* [[AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...
* [[AlphaBitch]]- Kristy Waters.
* [[AlwaysSomeoneBetter]]- Nick to Alex.
* [[AnyoneCanDie]]
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* [[AbusiveParents]]
[[AbusiveParents Abusive Parents]]
*[[AdultsAreUseless]]- [[AdultsAreUseless Adults are useless]]- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
* [[AlchoholicDad]]- *[[AlchoholicDad Alchoholic dad]]- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* [[AllGuysWantAmazons]]- *[[All guys want Amazons AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...
* [[AlphaBitch]]- *[[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitch]]- Kristy Waters.
* [[AlwaysSomeoneBetter]]- *[[AlwaysSomeoneBetter Always someone better]]- Nick to Alex.
* [[AnyoneCanDie]]
*[[AnyoneCanDie Anyone can die]]
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* Adults are usless- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
* Alchoholic father- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* All guys want Amazons- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.
* Alpha Bitch- Kristy Waters.
* Always someone better- Nick to Alex.
* Anyone can die
* Adults are usless- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
* Alchoholic father- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* All guys want Amazons- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.
* Alpha Bitch- Kristy Waters.
* Always someone better- Nick to Alex.
* Anyone can die
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* Abusive Parents
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*Adults are usless- [[AdultsAreUseless]]- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
* Alchoholic father- *[[AlchoholicDad]]- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
* All guys want Amazons- *[[AllGuysWantAmazons]]- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.
* Alpha Bitch-this.He certainly get's more attracted when she beats up Jay...
*[[AlphaBitch]]- Kristy Waters.
* Always someone better- *[[AlwaysSomeoneBetter]]- Nick to Alex.
* Anyone can die
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*[[AlphaBitch]]- Kristy Waters.
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*Abusive Parents
*Adults are usless- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
*Alchoholic father- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
*All guys want Amazons- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.
*Alpha Bitch- Kristy Waters.
*Always someone better- Nick to Alex.
*Anyone can die
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*Abusive Parents
*Adults are usless- Subverted with many of the adults in the story as most of them really are competent. Some of them, however...
*Alchoholic father- Played straight with Mr.Fisher. Especially with the abusive part.
*All guys want Amazons- Alex's attraction to Piper could fall under this.
*Alpha Bitch- Kristy Waters.
*Always someone better- Nick to Alex.
*Anyone can die
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Three high school students. One fatal accident.
Nothing will ever be the same...
Piper Kent, Alex White and Sarah Fisher were all normal students, until that accident. Now, they are hiding from the police, lying and pretending and hiding their guilt. But it's not as easy as they had thought, and soon, their lives will change forever.
Nothing will ever be the same...
Piper Kent, Alex White and Sarah Fisher were all normal students, until that accident. Now, they are hiding from the police, lying and pretending and hiding their guilt. But it's not as easy as they had thought, and soon, their lives will change forever.
