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Per TRS. Bishonen is a Definition-Only fan-speak term used only for Japanese/East-Asian media. Examples or audience reactions are not allowed. Moving In Universe acknowledgements/relevance to Pretty Boy. Removing any ZCE or misuse.
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* {{Bishonen}}: The protagonist is very cute looking, with feminine eyelashes and a hairstyle that wouldn't look out of place in a Creator/MasamiKurumada work. The author is known for her yaoi works, meaning this would be AuthorAppeal too.
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* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research, or why they even decided to give a body to an entity they fear.
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* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research, or why they even decided to give a body to an entity they fear.
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* NamesTheSame: What little we know of the entity the scientists feared, it's called "the darkness" or "the dark" by them. That's the same name for ''ComicBook/TheDarkness'', an antihero with ancient demonic powers.
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* NamesTheSame: ShoutOut: What little we know of the entity the scientists feared, it's called "the darkness" or "the dark" by them. That's the same name for ''ComicBook/TheDarkness'', an antihero with ancient demonic powers.
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* DeathOfPersonality: The ending is vague, with 73 saying the darkness consumed everything incluiding himself. It is implied 73 lost his personality, becoming the darkness; an animalistic monster.
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* DeathOfPersonality: The ending is vague, with 73 saying the darkness consumed everything incluiding including himself. It is implied 73 lost his personality, becoming the darkness; darkness-- an animalistic monster.
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The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for its experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers that they captured more children to turn them all into what the scientists feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out their reason for turning them into monsters, decides to kill them all, [[DeathOfPersonality and falling to the darkness]].
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The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for its experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers that they captured more children to turn them all into what the scientists feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out their reason for turning them into monsters, decides to kill them all, [[DeathOfPersonality and falling falls to the darkness]].
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* BodyHorror: N°73 and many other youngsters were kidnapped and experimented upon to become chimera-like creatures based on the darkness the scientists were afraid of the most. 73 have crab-like legs for hands, and a bat-like wing skeleton coming out of his back, and his entire body is surrounded by eyes. 73 remarks he can't even feel his heart.
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* BodyHorror: N°73 and many other youngsters were kidnapped and experimented upon to become chimera-like creatures based on the darkness the scientists were afraid of the most. 73 have has crab-like legs for hands, and a bat-like wing skeleton coming out of his back, and his entire body is surrounded by eyes. 73 remarks he can't even feel his heart.heart anymore.
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* DeathOfPersonality: The ending is vague, with 73 saying the darkness consumed everything incluiding himself. It is implied 73 lost his personality, becoming the darkness; an animalistic monster.
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The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for its experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers that they captured more children to turn them all into what the scientists feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out their reason for turning them into monsters, decides to kill them all, [[LostOfPersonality and falling to the darkness]].
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The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for its experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers that they captured more children to turn them all into what the scientists feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out their reason for turning them into monsters, decides to kill them all, [[LostOfPersonality [[DeathOfPersonality and falling to the darkness]].
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* BodyHorror: N°73 and many other youngsters were kidnapped and experimented upon to become chimera-like creatures based on the darkness the scientists were afraid of the most. 73 have crab-like legs for hands, and an bat-like wing skeleton coming out of his back, and his entire body is surrounded by eyes. 73 remarks he can't even feel his heart.
* BookEnds: The story starts and ends with the same words, "I curse the day I choose to get out of home".
* BookEnds: The story starts and ends with the same words, "I curse the day I choose to get out of home".
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* BodyHorror: N°73 and many other youngsters were kidnapped and experimented upon to become chimera-like creatures based on the darkness the scientists were afraid of the most. 73 have crab-like legs for hands, and an a bat-like wing skeleton coming out of his back, and his entire body is surrounded by eyes. 73 remarks he can't even feel his heart.
* BookEnds: The story starts and ends with the same words, "I curse the day I choose toget out of leave my home".
* BookEnds: The story starts and ends with the same words, "I curse the day I choose to
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-> ''A long time has happened ever since they kidnapped me. I curse the day I choose to get out of home. Truly, that day changed my life forever. I have thought like many, what comes after death? I think I know the answer.''
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-> ''A long time has happened passed ever since they kidnapped me. I curse the day I choose to get out of leave my home. Truly, that day changed my life forever. Like many, I have thought like many, wondered: what comes after death? I think I know the answer.''
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''Black Tears'' is an 8 pages one-shot published by Mexican author Blackened Krono. It was sent to a oneshot contest hosted by Anime-reviews magazine Conexión Manga, chosen as the winner for issue 258 in September 2012.
The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for their experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers they captured more children to turn them all into what they feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out about their reason, decides to kill them all, and falling to the darkness.
The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for their experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers they captured more children to turn them all into what they feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out about their reason, decides to kill them all, and falling to the darkness.
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''Black Tears'' is an 8 pages page one-shot published by Mexican author Blackened Krono. It was sent to a oneshot one-shot contest hosted by Anime-reviews anime review magazine Conexión Manga, ''Conexión Manga'' and chosen as the winner for issue 258 in September 2012.
The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization fortheir its experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers that they captured more children to turn them all into what they the scientists feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out about their reason, reason for turning them into monsters, decides to kill them all, [[LostOfPersonality and falling to the darkness.
darkness]].
The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with 73 killing his kidnappers, but in the process the darkness covered everything in a matter of minutes, ending his existence too.
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research.
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with 73 killing his kidnappers, but in the process process, the darkness covered everything in a matter of minutes, [[DeathOfPersonality ending his existence too.
too]].
* EldritchAbomination: The demonic presence the scientists called "the darkness", a being they all feared.
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for theirresearch.research, or why they even decided to give a body to an entity they fear.
* EldritchAbomination: The demonic presence the scientists called "the darkness", a being they all feared.
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their
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* NamesTheSame: What little we know of the entity the scientists feared, it's called "the darkness" or "the dark" by them. That's the same name for ''ComicBook/TheDarkness'', an antihero with ancient demonic powers.
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* BodyHorror: N°73 and many other youngsters were kidnapped and experimented upon to become chimera-like creatures based on the darkness the scientists were afraid of the most. 73 have crab-like legs for hands, and an bat-like wing skeleton coming out of his back, and his entire body is surrounded by eyes. 73 remarks he can't even feel his heart.
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* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, then almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with 73 killing his kidnappers, but in the process the darkness covered everything in a matter of minutes, ending his existence too.
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything,then almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research.research.
* NamelessNarrative: No character is named in the story. Our nameless protagonist is named N°73 by one of the scientists.
* WasOnceAMan: All the kidnapped children and 73 used to be human. Not anymore, with them becoming creatures of the night.
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything,
* NamelessNarrative: No character is named in the story. Our nameless protagonist is named N°73 by one of the scientists.
* WasOnceAMan: All the kidnapped children and 73 used to be human. Not anymore, with them becoming creatures of the night.
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The work hasn't been rereleased nor ever trasnalted to English.
!! Tropes present in this short story:
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The work hasn't been rereleased nor ever trasnalted translated to English.
English. You can find the author [[https://twitter.com/BlackenedKrono here]].
!! Tropes present in this shortstory:story:
* {{Bishonen}}: The protagonist is very cute looking, with feminine eyelashes and a hairstyle that wouldn't look out of place in a Creator/MasamiKurumada work. The author is known for her yaoi works, meaning this would be AuthorAppeal too.
* BookEnds: The story starts and ends with the same words, "I curse the day I choose to get out of home".
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, then almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research.
!! Tropes present in this short
* {{Bishonen}}: The protagonist is very cute looking, with feminine eyelashes and a hairstyle that wouldn't look out of place in a Creator/MasamiKurumada work. The author is known for her yaoi works, meaning this would be AuthorAppeal too.
* BookEnds: The story starts and ends with the same words, "I curse the day I choose to get out of home".
* MadScientist: The scientists that captured N°73 have kidnapped countless children (if our protagonist number means anything, then almost a hundred) and turned them all into monsters, all with the purpose of creating what they fear more: [[EldritchAbomination the darkness]]. They are stereotypical one-note madmen, with them having spiral glasses, not different from [[WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment Dr.Insano]], and we don't know how or why they got funded for their research.
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''Black Tears'' is an 8 pages one-shot published by Mexican author Blackened Krono on 2012. It was sent to a oneshot contest hosted by Anime-reviews magazine Conexión Manga, chosen as the winner for issue 258 in September 2012.
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''Black Tears'' is an 8 pages one-shot published by Mexican author Blackened Krono on 2012.Krono. It was sent to a oneshot contest hosted by Anime-reviews magazine Conexión Manga, chosen as the winner for issue 258 in September 2012.
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-> ''A long time has happened ever since they kidnapped me. I curse the day I choose to get out of home. Truly, that day changed my life forever. I have thought like many, what comes after death? I think I know the answer.''
-->-- '''N°73'''
''Black Tears'' is an 8 pages one-shot published by Mexican author Blackened Krono on 2012. It was sent to a oneshot contest hosted by Anime-reviews magazine Conexión Manga, chosen as the winner for issue 258 in September 2012.
The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for their experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers they captured more children to turn them all into what they feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out about their reason, decides to kill them all, and falling to the darkness.
The work hasn't been rereleased nor ever trasnalted to English.
!! Tropes present in this short story:
-->-- '''N°73'''
''Black Tears'' is an 8 pages one-shot published by Mexican author Blackened Krono on 2012. It was sent to a oneshot contest hosted by Anime-reviews magazine Conexión Manga, chosen as the winner for issue 258 in September 2012.
The short story is about a nameless protagonist, kidnapped by a mysterious organization for their experiments. Our character, named N°73 by one of the doctors, soon discovers they captured more children to turn them all into what they feared the most: the darkness. N°73, finding out about their reason, decides to kill them all, and falling to the darkness.
The work hasn't been rereleased nor ever trasnalted to English.
!! Tropes present in this short story: