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* DontYouDarePityMe: They don’t tell anyone their full past without heavily editing it because they hate being pitied.
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* DontYouDarePityMe: They don’t tell anyone their full past without heavily editing it because they hate being pitied. When they reveal the truth to Liam, they expect him to pity (or hate) them because of past experiences.
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* GenkiGirl: Not a girl, but they share a lot of characteristics with one.
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* ShoutOut: Their first name is taken from Kokichi Ouma, the Danganronpa V3 character. Another shout out to Danganronpa occurs when they describe themself as good enough to be called the Ultimate Protector.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: Their general aesthetic — short dyed hair, hoodies, and bouncing around like they don’t know what standing still means is near identical to their writer, winter’s.
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* GriefSong: I Miss You by Blink 182 started out as a song Courtney and her liked to listen to together whenever they were apart from each other. It became this when Courtney was killed— with the song in the background. Given all that, it’s easy to see why it became her weakness.
* GriefSong: I Miss You by Blink 182 started out as a song Courtney and her liked to listen to together whenever they were apart from each other. It became this when Courtney was killed— with the song in the background. Given all that, it’s easy to see why it became her weakness.
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: She killed her husband.
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* BadassLongcoat: It’s red, to match her name, and most people identify her based off of it. She takes it off to fight, though.
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* BadassLongcoat: It’s red, to match her name, and most people identify her based off of it. She takes throws it off to fight, though.though.
* SiblingMurder: She murdered Dawn during her Rending.
* SiblingMurder: She murdered Dawn during her Rending.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: She killed her sister and parents during her reckoning.
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*SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome: Her jealousy over her sister’s perceived success spiraled into obsessive levels even before gaining Epic powers.
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*RedemptionDemotion: Justified, because using the same amount of power she did at the height of her corruption would bring the darkness crashing back. This also applies to her outfit— it’s hard to argue that jeans and converse are cooler than a prom dress with sparkles, like, all the time.
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* BerserkButton: Misgender them or threaten them. Just try it. You’ll get a truly horrifying NightmareFace
* BeingEvilSucks: It’s complicated. The more evil they act, the more they’re reminded of their past trauma.
* BeingEvilSucks: It’s complicated. The more evil they act, the more they’re reminded of their past trauma.
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* BishieSparkle: This happens to them near constantly whenever someone in their age range realizes they’re there.
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* BishieSparkle: This happens to them near constantly whenever someone in their age range realizes they’re thy’re there.
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* GenreSavvy: Largely compliant with the [[EvilOverlordList evil overlord list]], particularly when it comes to defying the [[SortingAlgorithmOfEvil sorting algorithm of evil]] and [[NoKillLikeOverkill throwing everything he has at a potential threat]].
* WrongGenreSavvy: However, this can seriously backfire in particularly odd situations, or just when [[RealityEnsues reality ensues]]. For example, he immediately assumes that Jacklyn must be a [[TrojanPrisoner trojan prisoner]] just because she is a person of interest that actually allowed herself to be arrested.
* WrongGenreSavvy: However, this can seriously backfire in particularly odd situations, or just when [[RealityEnsues reality ensues]]. For example, he immediately assumes that Jacklyn must be a [[TrojanPrisoner trojan prisoner]] just because she is a person of interest that actually allowed herself to be arrested.
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* TheGlomp: They preform this rather frequently.
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* TheGlomp: They preform this rather frequently. Lampshaded:
--> ''Anyway, they could see the faintest outline of his back, so they crouched down and jumped towards them, wrapping him with a glompy tackle hug.''
--> ''Anyway, they could see the faintest outline of his back, so they crouched down and jumped towards them, wrapping him with a glompy tackle hug.''
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: His backstory, in a nutshell.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: His backstory, in a nutshell.nutshell.
!!Blank:
* MasterOfIllusion: One of the two powerful illusionists in the city.
* MysteriousWatcher: Was one, but now is taking a more active role in things.
* NeutralNoLonger: Blank is starting to make their move...
* SorryToInterrupt: Blank when they [[spoiler: accidentally black out the city, including the fight scene]]
!!Blank:
* MasterOfIllusion: One of the two powerful illusionists in the city.
* MysteriousWatcher: Was one, but now is taking a more active role in things.
* NeutralNoLonger: Blank is starting to make their move...
* SorryToInterrupt: Blank when they [[spoiler: accidentally black out the city, including the fight scene]]
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: She can turn her eyes red by popping her [[Squick blood vessels in her eyes]], a skill that's taken lots of practice to control with ease, but looks very [[EyeScream creepy]].
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: She can turn her eyes red by popping her [[Squick blood vessels in her eyes]], eyes, a skill that's taken lots of practice to control with ease, but looks very [[EyeScream creepy]].
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* AlphaBitch: Very much so. Her introduction has her scheming for power in a city she just arrived in, with her loyal friends/lackeys by her side.
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* FeistyRedhead: She’s got a temper, and she has red hair.
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* FeistyRedhead: FieryRedhead: She’s got a temper, and she has red hair.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: She can turn her eyes red by popping her [[Squick blood vessels in her eyes]], a skill that's taken lots of practice to control with ease, but looks very [[EyeScream creepy]].
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* FriendlessBackground: They probably had some before they were kidnapped, but they can’t remember any of them. After they became an Epic, Arabella was their only friend and became a mother figure, but she was killed. Once she died, Kokichi’s methods of making friends only got weirder and more eccentric, turning people away from them while most people seemingly willing to befriend Tehran only wanted their power. Liam is their first friend in a long time
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* FriendlessBackground: They probably had some before they were kidnapped, but they can’t remember any of them. After they became an Epic, Arabella was their only friend and became a mother figure, but she was killed. Once she died, Kokichi’s methods of making friends only got weirder and more eccentric, turning people away from them while most people seemingly willing to befriend Tehran them only wanted their power. Liam is their first friend in a long timetime.
* GenderBlenderName: Somewhat unusually, their original name, [[spoiler: Atsuki]], was one but the name they chose is actually masculine.
* GenderBlenderName: Somewhat unusually, their original name, [[spoiler: Atsuki]], was one but the name they chose is actually masculine.
* {{Transgender}}: They're nonbinary.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Her weakness is [[physical platonic affection]], so it stands to reason she'd prefer to avoid all versions of this.
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* [[Sadist]]: To the extreme.
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* [[Sadist]]: {{Sadist}}: To the extreme.
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* ''Cloudcuckoolander'': {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Their attention span is as short as they are, and they aren’t very tall.
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* Expy: She's one for [[Characters/Avatar the Last Airbender Ty Lee]].
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: She's one for [[Characters/Avatar the Last Airbender Ty Lee]].
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: She's one for Mai from Avatar the Last Airbender.
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* 'Cloudcuckoolander': ''Cloudcuckoolander'': Their attention span is as short as they are, and they aren’t very tall.
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* DepravedBisexual: Her tastes are limited by levels of evil, not gender.
* EvilIsSexy: In her opinion.
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* DepravedBisexual: Her tastes are limited by levels of evil, not gender.
gender. Her long list of exes includes several powerful Epics. Nighthound is one of these.
* EvilIsSexy:In !InUniverse, this is her opinion.opinion and one of her main motivations.
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* HeightAngst: PlayedForLaughs. They don't actually mind it that much, but over reacting to the relatively common comments about their heights can give them the ability to drop kick people into the sun. Or, as they like to say, 'yeet them into space.'
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* ConvientlyAnOrphan: Averted. Most of their family is alive, although they think they’re dead because [[spoiler: Agor]] said he killed them.
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* CuckoolandersMinder: CloudCuckoolandersMinder: To Kokichi.
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* KarmaHoudini: His death was supposed to be karmic punishment.
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* KarmaHoudini: His death was supposed to be karmic punishment.
punishment. That didn't exactly work out very well, given his return
* HopeCrusher:Lampshaded.Lampshaded in one of his introduction posts.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Although his return hasn’t actually occurred yet, his writer, Edgedancer, promised, somewhat ominously, to remind us all of why the entire world cheered at his death.
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: His [[spoiler: host was poisoned by another Epic]]. Without his powers, he’d have died again, although the “good” part of this trope is somewhat questionable. And by somewhat questionable, we mean [[CompleteMonster absolutely false]].
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: His [[spoiler: host was poisoned by another Epic]]. Without his powers, he’d have died again, although the “good” part of this trope is somewhat questionable. And by somewhat questionable, we mean [[CompleteMonster absolutely [[HateSink absolutely false]].
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* KarmaHoudini: His death was supposed to be karmic punishment. Now he’s back.punishment.
* HopeCrusher: Lampshaded.
--> ''He leaned back and watched the man´s fear rushing back to him. This time Nighthound's smile was genuine. I love it when their hopespot gets crushed.''
* HopeCrusher: Lampshaded.
--> ''He leaned back and watched the man´s fear rushing back to him. This time Nighthound's smile was genuine. I love it when their hopespot gets crushed.''
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* SerialRapist: Never actually shown, but very heavily implied if not outright confirmed.
* TheSadist: In a big way.
* TheSadist: In a big way.
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: His [[spoiler: host was poisoned by another Epic]]. Without his powers, he’d have died again, although the “good” part of this trope is somewhat questionable. And by somewhat questionable, we mean [[''Main/CompleteMonster''absolutely [[CompleteMonster absolutely false]].
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: His [[spoiler: host was poisoned by another Epic]]. Without his powers, he’d have died again, although the “good” part of this trope is somewhat questionable. And by somewhat questionable, we mean [[''Main/CompleteMonster''absolutely false]].
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*Expy: She's one for [[Characers/Avatar the Last Airbender Ty Lee]].
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*Expy: She's one for Mai from Avatar the Last Airbender.
*Expy: She's one for Azula from Avatar the Last Airbender.
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*Expy: She's one for [[Characers/Avatar the Last Airbender Ty Lee]].
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*Expy: She's one for Mai from Avatar the Last Airbender.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Epics age slowly, and they already act childish. Taken to the extreme during moments of BSOD.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Epics age slowly, and they already act childish. Taken to the extreme during moments of BSOD. They also think they’re younger than they are due to being kidnapped when they were young.
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* ShoutOut: Their first name is taken from Kokichi Ouma, the Danganronpa V3 character. Another shout out to Danganronpa occurs when they describe themself as good enough to be called the Ultimate Protector.
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* ShedTheFamilyName: They’ll be taken by surprise if called [[spoiler: Atsuki]] but not violently. The only reason they got rid of their first name as well was because people might connect the dots with their last one, which they hate because [[spoiler: Chiyou]] means [[spoiler: butterfly]] in Japanese.
* ShoutOut: Their first name is taken from Kokichi Ouma, the Danganronpa V3 character. Another shout out to Danganronpa occurs when they describe themself as good enough to be called the Ultimate Protector.
* ShoutOut: Their first name is taken from Kokichi Ouma, the Danganronpa V3 character. Another shout out to Danganronpa occurs when they describe themself as good enough to be called the Ultimate Protector.
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* LeeroyJenkins: Their typical approach to combat situations.
* UpToEleven: EVERYTHING. THEY. DO.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: Their general aesthetic — short dyed hair, hoodies, and bouncing around like they don’t know what standing still means is near identical to their writer, winter’s.
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* CuckoolandersMinder: To Kokichi.
* DeathByOriginStory: She’s only present in flashbacks.
* MoralityChain: To Kokichi.
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Well, Kokichi saw her as perfect.
* CuckoolandersMinder: To Kokichi.
* DeathByOriginStory: She’s only present in flashbacks.
* MoralityChain: To Kokichi.
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* AmbiguousGender: They’re nonbinary. Unrelated to their trauma, but they’re more likely to lose it when misgendered as female than as male. They were already dressing androgynously in first grade and Agor mistakenly perceived them as female. He only found out they were assigned male at birth after he’d kidnapped them.]]
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* BigEater: Played for laughs at first, but it’s slowly revealed their eating habits are [[spoiler:the result of an eating disorder.]]
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* CompleteMonster: The origin of the “And Then They Died” meme for a reason.
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* FriendlessBackground: They probably had some before they were kidnapped, but they can’t remember any of them. After they became an Epic, Arabella was their only friend and became a mother figure, but she was killed. Once she died, Kokichi’s methods of making friends only got weirder and more eccentric, turning people away from them while most people seemingly willing to befriend Tehran only wanted their power. Liam is their first friend in a long time
* PleaseDontLeaveMe: Their lack of respect for personal space starts out played for laughs, but as Kokichi opens up to Liam, they start to beg him not to leave them.
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* Troll: They introduce themself to Liam by [[spoiler: jumping onto their moving van, unlocking the the door by slamming through the glass window to reach the handle, and swinging in through the open door]] in order to mess with him. Their first words are, “I call shotgun! And I have a shotgun.” Which they do.
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* GenkiGirl: Not a girl, but they share a lot of characteristics with one.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Not a girl, but they are prone to bouncing around and often needs Liam to calm them down.
* TheGlomp: They preform this rather frequently.
* ToonPhysics: Their powers cause this around them.
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*SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Kokichi isn’t a girl, but he’s the guy to their energetic enby.