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* TooProudForLowlyWork: In ''Winds of Change'', Mudclaw - who would have been Clan leader by that point if not for a last-minute demotion - is particularly irritated about having to help build dens, grumbling about it being "glorified apprentice work."
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Does this after his tunneling group nearly gets caught in a flood and his father still expects him to become a tunneler.
-->'''Sangorse''': But you saw how it was! Didn't you feel it? The excitement! The danger! You can't want to go back to running through heather after that.
-->'''Tallpaw''': Yes! Why don't you get it? Just because you love tunneling doesn't mean I do! I'm not you! I thought we were all going to ''die'' down there. I'm a moor runner, not a tunneler!
-->'''Sangorse''': But you saw how it was! Didn't you feel it? The excitement! The danger! You can't want to go back to running through heather after that.
-->'''Tallpaw''': Yes! Why don't you get it? Just because you love tunneling doesn't mean I do! I'm not you! I thought we were all going to ''die'' down there. I'm a moor runner, not a tunneler!
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-->'''Tallpaw''': Do you want me to tell Heatherstar I'd rather be a tunneler.
-->'''Sandgorse''': Is that what you want? Is it?
-->'''Tallpaw''': No.
-->'''Sandgorse''': Is that what you want? Is it?
-->'''Tallpaw''': No.
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* BreakTheCutie: When he was a kit, he was torn between pleasing his father by being a tunneler or doing what he wanted to do, becoming a moor runner. When Heatherstar chose for him to train as a moor runner, he was constantly bullied by Shrewclaw for not being where he belonged, and it caused tension between him and his father. Soon, some visitors come to [=WindClan=], and lead to the events that cause [[spoiler:his father's death.]] He becomes bitter, and this causes cats to shy away from him. When he decides that he wants to follow in his father's footsteps and become a tunneler, Heatherstar closes the tunnels. He leaves [=WindClan=] to seek his revenge, but finds a friend, and it takes saving the life of the cat he had wanted to kill to make him realize that revenge wasn't worth it.
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* BreakTheCutie: When he was a kit, he was torn between pleasing his father by being a tunneler or doing what he wanted to do, becoming a moor runner. When Heatherstar chose for him to train as a moor runner, he was constantly bullied by Shrewclaw for not being where he belonged, following expectations, and it caused tension between him and his father. Soon, some visitors come to [=WindClan=], and lead to the events that cause [[spoiler:his father's death.]] He becomes bitter, and this causes cats to shy away from him. When he decides that he wants to follow in his father's footsteps and become a tunneler, Heatherstar closes the tunnels. He leaves [=WindClan=] to seek his revenge, but finds a friend, and it takes saving the life of the cat he had wanted to kill to make him realize that revenge wasn't worth it.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: His decision to make [[spoiler:Onewhisker the [=WindClan=] deputy on his deathbed, while very well-intentioned, definitely wasn't one of his wisest decisions as subsequent stories would show. Instead of bringing the two Clans together in friendship like he hoped, Onestar wound up constantly giving [=ThunderClan=] and Firestar the cold shoulder due [[TheChainsOfCommanding the post of leader prioritizing looking after Windclan itself rather than fostering external relations]]. This effectively drove the former best friends apart, making things ''worse'' between the two Clans instead. At least if Mudclaw was made leader, Onewhisker and Firestar would've remained friends.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: His decision to make [[spoiler:Onewhisker the [=WindClan=] deputy on his deathbed, while very well-intentioned, definitely wasn't one of his wisest decisions as subsequent stories would show. Instead of bringing the two Clans together in friendship like he hoped, Onestar wound up constantly giving [=ThunderClan=] and Firestar the cold shoulder due [[TheChainsOfCommanding the post of leader prioritizing looking after Windclan [=WindClan=] itself rather than fostering external relations]]. This effectively drove the former best friends apart, making things ''worse'' between the two Clans instead. At least if Mudclaw was made leader, Onewhisker and Firestar would've remained friends.]]
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: He has black fur like his [[RetCon daughter Nightcloud and grandson Breezepelt]].
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: He has black fur like his [[RetCon supposed daughter Nightcloud and grandson Breezepelt]].
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* MayDecemberRomance: They the two don't become an official couple, Feathertail was a warrior and Crowpaw was an apprentice when they began to become infatuated with each other.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Black and white, like his mother Palebird.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: With his daughter, Finchkit. They are both ginger.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: She's black and white, like her son Tallstar.
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* AllThereInTheManual: According to supplementary materials, his mate is Larksplash and their kits are Webfoot, Whitetail, Gorsetail, and Nightcloud.
* CareerEndingInjury: He broke his ribs during a fight and retired to the elder's den early.
* CareerEndingInjury: He broke his ribs during a fight and retired to the elder's den early.
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* AllThereInTheManual: According to supplementary materials, WordOfGod, his mate is Larksplash and their kits are Webfoot, Whitetail, Gorsetail, and Nightcloud.
Nightcloud. This may have been retconned, though, since ''Onestar's Confession'' reveals Whitetail's mother to be Sorrelshine.
* CareerEndingInjury: He broke his ribs during a fight and retired to the elder's den early. This, too, may have been retconned.
* CareerEndingInjury: He broke his ribs during a fight and retired to the elder's den early. This, too, may have been retconned.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: He has black fur like his [[RetCon daughter Nightcloud and grandson Breezepelt.Breezepelt]].
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Downplayed, but he's the one who mentions the flooded gorge tunnel to Dawnstripe, leading to it being shut down and Sandgorse blaming Tallpaw and disowning him, which he didn't mean to happen.
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* PrecociousCrush: He was head over heels infatuated with Feathertail during ''The New Prophecy'' arc. He takes her death the hardest and mourns her even years later.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. There is a male [=WindClan=] cat named Gorsetail who appears in ''Dawn'' [[ChuckCunninghamSyndrome and is never seen again]].
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'''Medicine Cat:''' Kestrelflight\\Kestrelflight and Whistlepaw\\
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An ancient cat who would have grown up to become leader of [=WindClan=], but drowned as a kit. The deaths of him and his siblings led to the addition of the law that no warrior could refuse to help a kit in pain or danger, regardless of what Clan they were from.
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An ancient cat who would have grown up to become leader of [=WindClan=], but drowned as a kit. The kit, along with his siblings. Their deaths of him and his siblings led to the addition of the a law that no warrior could refuse to help a kit in pain or danger, regardless of what Clan they were from.
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* DeathbedPromotion: He was Smallkit at the time of his death, but when he goes to [=StarClan=], he becomes an adult cat and is renamed Smallstar in recognition of what he would have achieved if he had lived.
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* DeathbedPromotion: He was Smallkit at the time of his death, but when he goes to [=StarClan=], he becomes became an adult cat and is was renamed Smallstar in recognition of what he would have achieved if he had lived.
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* DueToTheDead: After Graywing realizes that not trying to save him was wrong, she finds his and his siblings' bodies washed up on the bank the next day and brings them to their home so they can be properly mourned and buried by their Clanmates.
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* DueToTheDead: After Graywing realizes realized that not trying to save him was wrong, she finds found his and his siblings' bodies washed up on the bank the next day and brings brought them to their home so they can could be properly mourned and buried by their Clanmates.
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* DueToTheDead: After Graywing realizes that not trying to save him was wrong, she finds his and his siblings' bodies in the river the next day and brings them to [=WindClan=].
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* DueToTheDead: After Graywing realizes that not trying to save him was wrong, she finds his and his siblings' bodies in washed up on the river bank the next day and brings them to [=WindClan=].their home so they can be properly mourned and buried by their Clanmates.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: When he visited Graywing in her dreams, she was afraid that he had come to harm [=RiverClan's=] kits in retribution for her not saving him. He assured her he would do no such thing.
