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Born out of the post-Collapse Revivalist Movement, the Chicago-led Commonwealth of Free Cities is newest American successor state, committed to the ideals of liberal democracy with the intent of to restoring the old United States.
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Born out of the post-Collapse Revivalist Movement, the Chicago-led Commonwealth of Free Cities is the newest American successor state, committed to the ideals of liberal democracy with the intent of to restoring the old United States.
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* TheStrategist: Downplayed. During the Detroit Campaign, he achieved victory over the doctrinally-incompetent and technologically-inept Victorian Army using legitimate military strategy and tactics, a functioning logistics train, and a handful of priceless pre-Collapse military vehicles.
* WhatTheHellHero: After the Battle of Detroit, Burns sends out a coded radio message to other military remnants in hiding and receives a response from a former Air Force officer that had F-22s. President Johnson is understandably pissed that he was sitting on these resources without telling anyone.
* WhatTheHellHero: After the Battle of Detroit, Burns sends out a coded radio message to other military remnants in hiding and receives a response from a former Air Force officer that had F-22s. President Johnson is understandably pissed that he was sitting on these resources without telling anyone.
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* TheStrategist: Downplayed. During the Detroit Campaign, he achieved victory over the doctrinally-incompetent doctrinally incompetent and technologically-inept technologically inept Victorian Army using legitimate military strategy and tactics, a functioning logistics train, and a handful of priceless pre-Collapse military vehicles.
* WhatTheHellHero: After the Battle of Detroit, Burns sends out a coded radio message to other military remnants in hiding and receives a response from a former Air Force officerthat who had F-22s. President Johnson is understandably pissed that he was sitting on these resources without telling anyone.
* WhatTheHellHero: After the Battle of Detroit, Burns sends out a coded radio message to other military remnants in hiding and receives a response from a former Air Force officer
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: To UsefulNotes/NorthKorea - both are culturally and technologically backwards polities that [[MilesGloriosus boast of having capabilities to project force far beyond their actual skill level]]. Both also use intense amounts of slave labor and make claims of self sufficiency they cannot back, aided by extremely pervasive propaganda and StateSec. And just like North Korea and China, Victoria only survives because it is backed by Russia as a way to secure its boarder.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: To UsefulNotes/NorthKorea - both are culturally and technologically backwards polities that [[MilesGloriosus boast of having capabilities to project force far beyond their actual skill level]]. Both also use intense amounts of slave labor and make claims of self sufficiency self-sufficiency they cannot back, aided by extremely pervasive propaganda and StateSec. And just like North Korea and China, Victoria only survives because it is backed by Russia as a way to secure its boarder.borders.
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** Rather humorously, their explanation for the construction of most of the western railroads in the United States (which were made using significant amounts of labor from Asian immigrants) is that they were the result of a ''failed Chinese invasion''.
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** Rather humorously, their explanation for the construction of most of the western railroads in the United States (which were made using significant amounts of labor from Asian immigrants) is that they were the result of a ''failed Chinese invasion''.invasion.''
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* OlderIsBetter: Retroculture is this in a nutshell, which is why Victoria uses technology and tactics long after they've become outdated elsewhere. [[SubvertedTrope This is repeatedly shown to be a stupid idea and results in them suffering extreme losses when fighting their someone who has better technology than them]].
