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* {{Catchphrase}}: "May the Force serve you well."
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* {{Catchphrase}}: CharacterCatchphrase: "May the Force serve you well."
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Aliana isn’t evil, and the entry doesn’t point out anything evil about her anyways. Corrected Luke and Leia’s spelling
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* AffablyEvil: Aliana is polite, calm, displays a considerable amount of widsom and cares deeply for her newfound friends.
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* KarmaHoudini: Aliana manages to avoid the negative concequences of all of her actions. From threatening random people, to electrocuting Leia, and even publicly murdering multiple people with several witnessess around.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Aliana dislikes needless violence and bloodshed, but is okay with doing terrible things for a practical purpose.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Aliana dislikes needless violence and bloodshed, but is okay alright with doing terrible things for a practical purpose.
*ExtremeDoormat: Rey never argues against Aliana, and doesn't seem to have any goals or ambitions outside of "making Aliana happy". She's also completly absorbed all of Alianas philosophy and her general attitude in general, content to not forming her own outlook on life and to just follow Alianas lead.
* GoodIsNotNice: Rey starts off the story as a relatively happy person, but she slowly becomes this trope as she turns into a much more grumpy and bitter person towards everyone who isn't Aliana as the story progresses.
* GoodIsNotNice: Rey starts off the story as a relatively happy person, but she slowly becomes this trope as she turns into a much more grumpy and bitter person towards everyone who isn't Aliana as the story progresses.
* KarmaHoudini: Rey murders a city guard in public, and faces zero backlash for this.
* SatelliteLoveInterest: Rey doesn't have anything going on in her life story wise that doesn't revolve around Aliana and their romance.
* SatelliteCharacter: Finns existence revolves around Rey and Aliana.
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*SatelliteCharacter: Poes existence revolves around Rey and Aliana.
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*IrrationalHatred: Leia hates Aliana simply because of her sith heritage.
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*IrrationalHatred: Leia hates Aliana simply because of her sith heritage.
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* GrumpyOldMan: Luke is definitly this when Rey and Aliana meet up with him for the first time.
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The author deleted the quote I inserted, rendering it now meaningless. I have updated it to reflect a more accurate version of the text as it currently stands.
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* SympatheticSlaveOwner: To quote the work itself: [[spoiler: For the right price, Mayrik would run slaves and wipe out Niima’s competition,” Talon explained. “When Niima got into the scavenging business, Mayrik ran almost all his new slave labor out to the different planets because her ship was fast and could take out a Republic cruiser if it tried to intercept.]] Despite this, Mayrik is still treated as a good person by the cast.
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* SympatheticSlaveOwner: Technically a slave trader/transporter. Any blame that Mayrik would have received for participating in slavery gets firmly shoved on Rey's parents. This ensures that Mayrik gets away from the action relitevly unscathed while remaining sympathetic to the reader. To quote the work itself: text: [[spoiler: For the right price, Mayrik would run slaves and wipe out Niima’s competition,” Talon explained. “When Niima got wasn’t the one who sold her into the scavenging business, Mayrik ran almost all his new slave labor out to the different planets because her ship was fast and could take out a Republic cruiser if it tried to intercept.]] Despite this, Mayrik is still treated as a good person by the cast. slavery. Her parents did.]]
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*SympatheticSlaveOwner: To quote the work itself: [[spoiler: For the right price, Mayrik would run slaves and wipe out Niima’s competition,” Talon explained. “When Niima got into the scavenging business, Mayrik ran almost all his new slave labor out to the different planets because her ship was fast and could take out a Republic cruiser if it tried to intercept.]] Despite this, Mayrik is still treated as a good person by the cast.
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Kylo Ren's Jedi Master.
*BrokenPedestal: Luke being revealed to have [[spoiler: killed Aliana's mother]] destroys his image in Rey's eyes.
*RedemptionEqualsDeath: Luke redeems himself by [[spoiler:sacrificing himself to save Aliana.]]
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Kylo Ren's Jedi Master.
*BrokenPedestal: Luke being revealed to have [[spoiler: killed Aliana's mother]] destroys his image in Rey's eyes.
*RedemptionEqualsDeath: Luke redeems himself by [[spoiler:sacrificing himself to save Aliana.]]
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*ChildSoldier: Finn didn't have a choice in joining the first order.
*DemotedToExtra: Despite being showcased so prominently early on, Finn's appearances become more and more spotty as the story continues.
*MadeASlave: Implied. Finn notes that Aliana: [[spoiler: looked like a Stormtrooper. Or rather, every Stormtrooper he’d ever seen with their helmet off, minus the mandatory buzz-cut. As Aliana and Finn are both Black, this carries some heavy connotations.]]
*DemotedToExtra: Despite being showcased so prominently early on, Finn's appearances become more and more spotty as the story continues.
*MadeASlave: Implied. Finn notes that Aliana: [[spoiler: looked like a Stormtrooper. Or rather, every Stormtrooper he’d ever seen with their helmet off, minus the mandatory buzz-cut. As Aliana and Finn are both Black, this carries some heavy connotations.]]
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A brash resitance pilot who is saved from the ships wreckage by Aliana.
*AcePilot: Poe continues to be the best pilot in the resitance.
*ConvenientComa: Poe conveniently misses the millennial falcon flight scene because he was still in a coma at the time.
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A brash resitance pilot who is saved from the ships wreckage by Aliana.
*AcePilot: Poe continues to be the best pilot in the resitance.
*ConvenientComa: Poe conveniently misses the millennial falcon flight scene because he was still in a coma at the time.
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* MissingMom: Aliana's mother is [[spoiler:dead]] at the start of the story.
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* WartsAndAll: Despite Mayrik's dark past, Aliana and Rey love her unconditionally.
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Asskicking Leads To Leadership is the new name of the trope.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Aliana is actually highly respected by First Order Stormtroopers after humiliating Kylo Ren. They've nicknamed her "Amorosa from Human Resources" despite her not actually being a member of the First Order in any capacity. The Resistance (sans some of the Admirals) also respects her a great deal for being able to pull off clutch saves and prevent catastrophic mission failures.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Aliana is actually highly respected by First Order Stormtroopers after humiliating Kylo Ren. They've nicknamed her "Amorosa from Human Resources" despite her not actually being a member of the First Order in any capacity. The Resistance (sans some of the Admirals) also respects her a great deal for being able to pull off clutch saves and prevent catastrophic mission failures.
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Some rando keeps giving Aliana annoying nicknames.
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* AccidentalPun: "Once you start down the dark path, forever will it dominate your destiny."
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Sith title of Aliana was misspelled.
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* AntiHero: Of the "Freedom Before Goodness" variety, in Aliana's case. Being a Sith Lord means she lacks many of the principles and restraint that the Jedi have, and she makes the promise to Kylo Ren that she ''will'' kill him. Never once does the thought of redemption cross her mind, and her ultimatums to the few who do ultimately decide to defect from the First Order tend to be "side with me or die." She is also not much for appeasing politicians or factions leaders, which makes her a contentious figure in the Republic's Senate.
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* TheUnfettered: Of the "Prioritizes ruthlessly" variety, in Aliana's case. Being a Sith , she is very often cut-throat and direct in her approach and doesn't hesitate to kill antagonists, as well as people who purposely make the galaxy miserable for their own gain like the war profiteers on Canto Bite. She is also not much for appeasing politicians or faction leaders, which makes her a contentious figure in the Republic's Senate and she will gladly use threats if it'll get the ball rolling and the politicians off their asses.
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* AntiHero: Of the "Freedom Before Goodness" variety, in Aliana's case. Being a Sith Lord means she lacks many of the principles and restraint that the Jedi have, and she makes the promise to Kylo Ren that she ''will'' kill him. Never once does the thought of redemption cross her mind, and her ultimatums to the few who do ultimately decide to defect from the First Order tend to be "side with me or die." She is also not much for appeasing politicians or factions leaders, which makes her a contentious figure in the Republic's Senate.
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* ChaoticGood: Of the "Freedom Before Goodness" variety, in Aliana's case. Being a Sith Lord means she lacks many of the principles and restraint that the Jedi have, and she makes the promise to Kylo Ren that she ''will'' kill him. Never once does the thought of redemption cross her mind, and her ultimatums to the few who do ultimately decide to defect from the First Order tend to be "side with me or die." She is also not much for appeasing politicians or factions leaders, which makes her a contentious figure in the Republic's Senate.
