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This is the character sheet for ''TheDreamer'', in all its LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters glory. '''Warning!''' '''''Spoilers ahead!'''''
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This is the character sheet for ''TheDreamer'', ''The Dreamer'', in all its LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters glory. '''Warning!''' '''''Spoilers ahead!'''''
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* SpiritedYoungLady
* SpoiledSweet
* SpoiledSweet
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* RavenHairIvorySkin
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* ProperLady: Personality-wise she is reserved and patient.
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* ProperLady: Personality-wise she is reserved and patient.
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Liz Winters and Bea Whaley have been best friends since elementary school. But if they hadn’t bonded then, they might never have become friends at all! The two girls are polar opposites. Where Bea is an explosion of emotions, Liz is reserved and patient. Where Bea is reckless, Liz is cautious. Where Bea speaks her mind without thinking, Liz bites her tongue and keeps her foot out of her mouth. At the beginning of senior year, Bea’s cousin John asks Liz to be his date for the Halloween dance and Liz eagerly agrees, despite fearing Bea’s reaction. John shares some of Bea’s fiery Irish temperament which they get from their parents, and his ability to speak his mind and express himself are attractive to Liz. She wishes she could let loose more, but when she tries to share her opinions, it often blows up in her face.
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Liz Winters and Bea Whaley have been best friends since elementary school. But if If they hadn’t bonded then, they might never have become friends at all! The two girls are polar opposites. Where Bea is [[GenkiGirl an explosion of emotions, emotions]], Liz is [[ProperLady reserved and patient.patient]]. Where Bea is reckless, Liz is cautious. Where Bea speaks her mind without thinking, Liz bites her tongue and keeps her foot out of her mouth. At the beginning of senior year, Bea’s cousin John asks Liz to be his date for the Halloween dance and Liz eagerly agrees, despite fearing Bea’s reaction. John shares some of Bea’s fiery Irish temperament which they get from their parents, and his ability to speak his mind and express himself are attractive to Liz. She wishes she could let loose more, but when she tries to share her opinions, it often blows up in her face.
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* YamatoNadeshiko: personality - wise.
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* HairOfGold
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Being an attractive isn\'t the same of being a Mr. Fanservice.
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* MrFanservice
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* BeenThereShapedHistory
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* TheGump
* LauncherOfAThousandShips: ''Seriously''. She's officially with Alan & Ben, may have had [[NewOldFlame a past]] with Alexander Hamilton, vibes with Nathan Hale, could be with Freddy since they're more or less the same age, KissingCousins with her cousin John, etc.
* LauncherOfAThousandShips: ''Seriously''. She's officially with Alan & Ben, may have had [[NewOldFlame a past]] with Alexander Hamilton, vibes with Nathan Hale, could be with Freddy since they're more or less the same age, KissingCousins with her cousin John, etc.
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* MartyStu: Some fans argue that he's one of these.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: When he first arrived in the pages of the comic in issue #9, he immediately became a favorite.
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* EstrogenBrigade: Proud member.
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* EstrogenBrigade: Nathan has a very large fanbase concerning this trope.
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* MartyStu: Some fans argue that he's one of these, but [[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]].
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* MartyStu: Some fans argue that he's one of these, but [[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]].these.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Type B, with her tsun-tsun side usually triggered by Hamilton.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Type B, with her tsun-tsun side usually triggered by Hamilton. Hamilton.
* RavenHairIvorySkin
* RavenHairIvorySkin
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* PaleSkinnedBrunette
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* PaleSkinnedBrunetteEeriePaleSkinnedBrunette
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* [=~The President's Daughter~=]: More like a really wealthy and important Bostonian Loyalist's daughter.
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* [=~The President's Daughter~=]: ThePresidentsDaughter: More like a really wealthy and important Bostonian Loyalist's daughter.
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* [[spoiler:KilldOffForReal]]
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* [[spoiler:KilldOffForReal]][[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]
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* [[spoiler:KilldOffForReal]]
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* PluckyGirl
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* {{Tsundere}}: Type B, with her tsun-tsun side usually triggered by Hamilton.
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* StepfordSmiler
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* StepfordSmilerStepfordSnarker
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* {{Blessed With Suck}}/ {{Cursed With Awesome}Awesome}}
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* RichBitch: Subverted with Bea. She's actually a very nice girl.
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Alexander Hamilton was born in Nevis in The British West Indies, and was born out of wedlock to his mother, Rachel Faucette Lavien, and Scottish nobleman James Hamilton. At the age of ten, Alex's father abandoned the family, and two years later his mother died, leaving he and his older brother James Jr. virtually orphaned. The only thing young Alex had were his mother's books, which he poured over ravenously. These books influenced him and his writing style, and soon he would be publishing poems and hymns in the local newspaper, while working as a store clerk for a local trade-and-charter company in St. Croix. His talents caught the eye of the established gentry of the island, and sent him off on a scholarship to King's College in New York. In New York, he published many political essays in the local newspaper, and lived with Hercules Mulligan, Beatrice Whaley's uncle, and soon got to know Beatrice. In 1775, Alex dropped out of college and volunteered in a New York militia company called the Hearts of Oak. Hamilton studied military history and tactics on his own and achieved the rank of lieutenant. Under fire from HMS Asia, he led a successful raid for British cannon in the Battery, the capture of which resulted in the Hearts of Oak becoming an artillery company thereafter. Through his connections with influential New York patriots like Alexander McDougall and John Jay, he raised the New York Provincial Company of Artillery of sixty men in 1776, and was elected captain.
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Alexander Hamilton was born in Nevis in The British West Indies, and was born out of wedlock to his mother, Rachel Faucette Lavien, and Scottish nobleman James Hamilton. At the age of ten, Alex's father abandoned the family, and two years later his mother died, leaving he and his older brother James Jr. virtually orphaned. The only thing young Alex had were his mother's books, which he poured over ravenously. These books influenced him and his writing style, and soon he would be publishing poems and hymns in the local newspaper, while working as a store clerk for a local trade-and-charter company in St. Croix. His talents caught the eye of the established gentry of the island, and sent him off on a scholarship to King's College in New York. In New York, he published many political essays in the local newspaper, and lived with Hercules Mulligan, Beatrice Whaley's uncle, and soon got to know Beatrice. In 1775, Alex dropped out of college and volunteered in a New York militia company called the Hearts of Oak. Hamilton studied military history and tactics on his own and achieved the rank of lieutenant. Under fire from HMS Asia, he led a successful raid for British cannon in the Battery, the capture of which resulted in the Hearts of Oak becoming an artillery company thereafter. Through his connections with influential New York patriots like Alexander McDougall [=McDougall=] and John Jay, he raised the New York Provincial Company of Artillery of sixty men in 1776, and was elected captain.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: However, he doesn't seem at all angsty, but instead some kind of [[ThePollyanna pollyanna]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: However, Let's break it down: When he doesn't seem at all angsty, but instead some kind was a teenager, in the space of [[ThePollyanna pollyanna]].a few years,
** his mother died,
** his father vanished,
** his aunt, uncle, and grandfather also died,
** his cousin committed suicide, and
** Alexander and his brother were disinherited and left penniless orphans.
** And lest us not forget that James Hamilton might not even have been his father in the first place (the honor might go to a gentleman by the name of Thomas Stevens).
** his mother died,
** his father vanished,
** his aunt, uncle, and grandfather also died,
** his cousin committed suicide, and
** Alexander and his brother were disinherited and left penniless orphans.
** And lest us not forget that James Hamilton might not even have been his father in the first place (the honor might go to a gentleman by the name of Thomas Stevens).
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* MeaningfulName: Ben's last name is also the name of a famous play, which was a favorite among many patriots.
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* MeaningfulName: Ben's last name is also the name of a famous play, which was a favorite among many patriots. He also shares the name with Jemmy Cato, the leader of the Stono Rebellion.
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* MeaningfulName: She shares the same last name with Gen William Howe.