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* AccidentalPervert: He walks in on Agnis when she is nude and playing with a salamander in the baths. He had known she was in there upon seeing her armor, but didn't realize she was nude under the armor.
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* ChildhoodFriends: With Mabel. Agnis used to visit the castle a lot when she was younger and Mabel already worked there as a maid at the time, so the two ended up becoming friends and often played together. While they grew apart after Agnis accidentally burned Mabel, the latter never really held it against her, and yeared for the two to become friends once more. Thor ends up granting that wish by helping Agnis control her power with the [Health Pendant].
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* ChildhoodFriends: With Mabel. Agnis used to visit the castle a lot when she was younger and Mabel already worked there as a maid at the time, so the two ended up becoming friends and often played together. While they grew apart after Agnis accidentally burned Mabel, the latter never really held it against her, and yeared yearned for the two to become friends once more. Thor ends up granting that wish by helping Agnis control her power with the [Health Pendant].
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* GoingCommando: Due to her powers, Agnis couldn't wear any clothing under her armor, which is part of the reason Thor walks in on her - he saw her armor lying around but not any clothing and assumed she was dressed. Later she has a more traditional example when she is in a maid outfit to test the amulet and gets embarrassed when she jumps too high.
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* GenreSavvy: After Thor's introduction, he brings up the possibility that Thor was sent because the empire did not realize his actual worth (completely true), but this is dismissed by the Demon King [[WhoWouldBeStupidEnough who can't fathom how anyone could overlook such talent]].
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* GenreSavvy: After Thor's introduction, he brings up the possibility that Thor was sent because the empire did not realize his actual worth (completely true), but this is initially dismissed by the Demon King [[WhoWouldBeStupidEnough who can't fathom how anyone could overlook such talent]].
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: He can not comprehend why Demon King Rukia and Princess Sophia would actually get along and become allies after fighting a new species of monster together, or why the princess would care about the lives of the demi-humans he planned to have imperial soldiers harass with military exercises to try and cow Demon King territory.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: EvilCannotComprehendGood:
** He can not comprehend why Demon King Rukia and Princess Sophia would actually get along and become allies after fighting a new species of monster together, or why the princess would care about the lives of the demi-humans he planned to have imperial soldiers harass with military exercises to try and cow Demon King territory.
** He can not comprehend why Demon King Rukia and Princess Sophia would actually get along and become allies after fighting a new species of monster together, or why the princess would care about the lives of the demi-humans he planned to have imperial soldiers harass with military exercises to try and cow Demon King territory.
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* PsychologicalProjection: Because he would point and laugh at the failure of others behind their backs, he presumes Demon King Rukia and her generals would do the same when his scheme to steal a march on the subjugation of the monster Gargarosa failed, and the Demon Lord's army had to bail the empire's army out of trouble.
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* PsychologicalProjection: PsychologicalProjection:
** Because he would point and laugh at the failure of others behind their backs, he presumes Demon King Rukia and her generals would do the same when his scheme to steal a march on the subjugation of the monster Gargarosa failed, and the Demon Lord's army had to bail the empire's army out of trouble.
** Because he would point and laugh at the failure of others behind their backs, he presumes Demon King Rukia and her generals would do the same when his scheme to steal a march on the subjugation of the monster Gargarosa failed, and the Demon Lord's army had to bail the empire's army out of trouble.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: By banishing Thor to the Demon King territory, he not only upgrades Thor's [Alchemy] to [Complete Alchemy], but puts the boy in contact with Demon Lord Rukia, who gives him a much, much more rewarding job as her top alchemist, and gets him his [Mail Order Catalog] that allows him to advance the local tech by decades ''on the conservative side.''
** And to kick the dog a bit more, he sends a letter to General Respalgia that Thor is a warrior, not an alchemist, so when General Respalgia brings his daughter to Thor, looking forward to having the two duel, the general is not rewarded with a fight that makes the poor girl accept her powers, but instead has Thor provide a real and permanent fix that allows her to move freely in society without being a danger to herself and others, giving Thor the very first of his fiances.
** And to kick the dog a bit more, he sends a letter to General Respalgia that Thor is a warrior, not an alchemist, so when General Respalgia brings his daughter to Thor, looking forward to having the two duel, the general is not rewarded with a fight that makes the poor girl accept her powers, but instead has Thor provide a real and permanent fix that allows her to move freely in society without being a danger to herself and others, giving Thor the very first of his fiances.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: By banishing Thor to the Demon King territory, he not only upgrades Thor's [Alchemy] to [Complete Alchemy], but puts the boy in contact with Demon Lord Rukia, who gives him a much, much more rewarding job as her top alchemist, and gets him his [Mail Order Catalog] that allows him to advance the local tech by decades ''on the conservative side.''
**'' And to kick the dog a bit more, he sends a letter to General Respalgia that Thor is a warrior, not an alchemist, so when General Respalgia brings his daughter to Thor, looking forward to having the two duel, the general is not rewarded with a fight that makes the poor girl accept her powers, but instead has Thor provide a real and permanent fix that allows her to move freely in society without being a danger to herself and others, giving Thor the very first of his fiances.
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Noble Demon isn’t literal. It’s about villainous characters with noble characteristics, not literal demons with noble characteristics
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* NobleDemon: She's a member of the "demon" race and is a very virtuous ruler.
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* NobleDemon: He may be of the "demon" Ifrit race, but he's benevolent, diligent, honest, and honorable.
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* TheScapegoat: Subverted. At Bargus' direction, Garoa attempts to set up Thor as the scapegoat for the embezzlement scheme when it is inevitably discovered, but Respalgia is so furious at not just the embezzlement attempt itself but also screwing over someone he is grateful to that the plan falls apart.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Her grandmother was a human.
* UnevenHybrid: Mabel has a human grandmother and is herself quarter human and three-quarters elf.
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* BenevolentBoss: She welcomes all input from her palace servants, treats Thor well, and gives him the resources he needs to achieve his feats.
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* BenevolentBoss: She welcomes all input from her palace servants, even the ones she disagrees with, treats Thor well, and gives him the resources he needs to achieve his feats.
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* ShowerOfAwkward: The first time he tries to take a bath in Demon King territory, he goes to the assigned bath, sees that it's been roped off and clearly labeled for his exclusive use, but when he walks in, finds a very, very naked Agnis playing with the water-heating salamander. Being a gentleman, he turns and bolts, but not before providing her with a [Ultra Simple Warehouse] to store her flames before she burns the whole castle down by accident in her flustered state.
** In the manga, he asks her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn so something doesn't happen if someone else walks in by mistake, but the rest still applies.
** In the manga, he asks her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn so something doesn't happen if someone else walks in by mistake, but the rest still applies.
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* ShowerOfAwkward: The first time he tries to take a bath in Demon King territory, he goes to the assigned bath, sees that it's been roped off and clearly labeled for his exclusive use, but when he walks in, finds a very, very naked Agnis playing with the water-heating salamander. Being a gentleman, he turns and bolts, but not before providing her with a [Ultra Simple Warehouse] to store her flames before she burns the whole castle down by accident in her flustered state.
**state. In the manga, he asks her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn so something doesn't happen if someone else walks in by mistake, but the rest still applies.
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: Because he's unaware that the advertising he's reading in his [Mail Order Catalog] is hyperbole, he thinks he's making an "inferior" version, when in fact, the stuff he creates work far, far better than the original could ever be expected to.
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength:
** Because he's unaware that the advertising he's reading in his [Mail Order Catalog] is hyperbole, he thinks he's making an "inferior" version, when in fact, the stuff he creates work far, far better than the original could ever be expected to.
** Because he's unaware that the advertising he's reading in his [Mail Order Catalog] is hyperbole, he thinks he's making an "inferior" version, when in fact, the stuff he creates work far, far better than the original could ever be expected to.
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: There is one person who he will never, ever forgive or tolerate, and that's his AbusiveDad, Bragas Regus.
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: There For all of Thor's kindness, there is one person who he will never, ever forgive or tolerate, and that's his AbusiveDad, Bragas Regus.
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* PowerOfTrust: Kelve remarks to Rukia that Respalgia [[SeriousBusiness swore in the name of Ifrit]] because of Thor's influence, which allowed Kelve to immediately believe Respalgia when he [[EveryoneHasStandards came clean regarding Duke Regus and his attempt to rope him into his embezzlement scheme]]. In other words, if it weren't for Thor, the trust between Respalgia, Rukia and Kelve could've been irreparably eroded. Kelve then declares that he owes Thor a debt of gratitude, and that if there is anything he desires, he will do what he can to grant it.
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* SeriousBusiness: Swearing oaths in the name of Ifrit is a vow that can not be broken, upon pain of death.
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* SeriousBusiness: Swearing oaths in the name of Ifrit is a vow that can not be broken, upon pain of death. Kelve is aware of this, and immediately realizes that Respalgia making the oath means he's ''dead'' serious.
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* GoodCannotComprehendEvil: Cannot conceive that [[IHaveNoSon Thor's father sees his own son as disposable trash]], and breaks down in tears while trying to tell Thor that [[TheScapegoat Duke Regus ordered that he be used as a scapegoat]] should his embezzlement scheme come to light.
