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* IShouldHaveBeenBetter: Was StarCrossedLovers with [[spoiler:none other than [[TheLostLenore the Eldar goddess Lileath]], with the two of them having been separated by Asuryan's decree and only able to meet between his reincarnation cycles]]. Carries an [[MyGreatestFailure enormous regret]] that, in being unable to stave off the decline of his race into debauchery and ultimately [[DefectorFromDecadence deciding to leave]], he doomed her to be devoured forever, regardless of whether trying to overthrow the pleasure cults by civil war was realistic or not.


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* CantTakeCriticism: Inverted, in a major contrast from his original timeline version. When Guilliman's letter arrives, it explicitly tells the Emperor that something went horribly wrong with the Primarchs of Roboute's time specifically in how they were raised and particularly in being left to their own traumatized devices. Emps takes this to heart, and not only leaves Terra immediately to find them (helped by the Thirteenth Son giving him exact coordinates), but displays infinitely more warmth and kindness for them and their adoptive families from the get-go than he ever did in the original timeline due to the letter genuinely chastising him to do better.

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* BloodKnight: Takes a great deal of joy in bombarding and generally killing the Beastmen en masse with his Knight.



* HiddenDepth: Displays tactical knowledge for a brute, pointing out to his BeleaguredAssistant Wealhteow that they would have a tactical advantage over Roboute if they hold a feast and have them come down instead of outright war against them. In addition, he is also fully aware of how people scorned him and decides to live up to the reputation.
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Takes a great deal of joy in bombarding and generally killing the Beastmen en masse with his Knight.

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* HiddenDepth: HiddenDepths: Displays tactical knowledge for a brute, pointing out to his BeleaguredAssistant BeleagueredAssistant Wealhteow that they would have a tactical advantage over Roboute if they hold a feast and have them come down instead of outright war against them. In addition, he is also fully aware of how people scorned him and decides to live up to the reputation.
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Takes a great deal of joy in bombarding and generally killing the Beastmen en masse with his Knight.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Serves as one to Roboute as he is someone who enjoys MurderPillageAndRape abhumans.

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* TokenEvilTeammate: Serves as one to Roboute as he is someone who enjoys MurderPillageAndRape RapePillageAndBurn abhumans.

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* BadassArmy: Serves as one to The Emperor of Mankind and Roboute Guilliman despite numbering in a measly 260 soldiers.
* FlawedPrototype: Similar to their original timeline counterpart, they were the first mass produced legion of superhuman army but due to the rushed work, they were falling apart but only through Roboute's intervention, they are cured of their problems.

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* BadassArmy: Serves as one to The Emperor of Mankind and Roboute Guilliman despite the last of them numbering in a measly 260 soldiers.
* FlawedPrototype: Similar to their original timeline counterpart, they were the first mass produced legion of superhuman army but due to the rushed work, work they were falling apart but only apart. In this timeline though, through Roboute's intervention, they are cured of their problems.problems.
* TheRemnant: The Thunder Warriors sent to Roboute are the last survivors of the final great battle on Terra that reunified it under the Emperor and the only ones who haven't yet succumbed to their deterioration. The Emperor fully intended it to be TheLastDance for them if it turned out Roboute was a liar that needed to be annihilated, and they welcomed the chance for a glorious death serving mankind rather than wasting away.

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*AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In the original timeline, the Thunder Warriors were exterminated as they were all breaking down on a genetic level. In here, they were healed by the Exodite Aeldari and given a new role to serve Roboute.
*BadassArmy: Serves as one to The Emperor of Mankind and Roboute Guilliman despite numbering in a measly 260 soldiers.



*FourStarBadass: Serves as one to the Thunder Warrior, not only is he their commander but he is also one of their top fighters.
*TragicKeepsake: Wore a broken power armor, a sword and carried a banner when meeting Roboute as it was the few things he had from the Reunification War.



* ParentsAsPeople: A very skewed and complicated nature as the creation of the Primarchs were inspired by The Emperor's personal virtues and traits he believed is the best. Hathor for example was designed to be an ideal leader who doesn't suffer the problem of being arrogant but this in turn gives her a massive inferiority-superiority complex. However, this in turn causes the Primarch to have certain flaws that are transparent to the original version of the Primarch.

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* ParentsAsPeople: A very skewed and complicated nature as the creation of the Primarchs were was inspired by The Emperor's personal virtues and traits he believed is were the best. Hathor for example was designed to be an ideal leader who doesn't suffer the problem of being arrogant but this in turn gives her a massive inferiority-superiority complex. However, this in turn causes the Primarch to have certain flaws that are transparent to the original version of the Primarch.

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* BestialityIsDepraved: Dislikes the goat women he actively butchers unlike a majority of the knight-lords of his home planet. This doesn't deter him from having his way with a descendant of one with strong human lineage.
* BlessedWithSuck: Was born as a Pariah, making him immune to any psychic attacks or the influence of the Warp. This in turn makes him universally hated by everyone on Raisa to the point of no woman was willing to marry him.

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* BestialityIsDepraved: Dislikes the goat women he actively butchers butchers, unlike a majority of the knight-lords of his home planet. This doesn't deter him from having his way with a descendant of one with a strong human lineage.
*BlackKnight: Abram is renowned amongst his people and subject as the slaughter king and have an all-black mech that he uses to slaughter beastmen.
* BlessedWithSuck: Was born as a Pariah, Blank, making him immune to any psychic attacks or the influence of the Warp. This in turn makes him universally hated by everyone on Raisa to the point of no woman was willing to marry him.



* HasAType: Inverted, as he does not like fullanimal-headed beastwomen, but would say yes to the descendant of one with human lineage.

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*FreudianExcuse: Hated and scorned by almost everyone on his planet, Abram decides to embrace the reputation and perception others have towards him.
* HasAType: Inverted, as he does not like fullanimal-headed full animal-headed beastwomen, but would say yes to the descendant of one with human lineage.lineage.
*HiddenDepth: Displays tactical knowledge for a brute, pointing out to his BeleaguredAssistant Wealhteow that they would have a tactical advantage over Roboute if they hold a feast and have them come down instead of outright war against them. In addition, he is also fully aware of how people scorned him and decides to live up to the reputation.


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*TheStoic: Tries to be one as he knows killers like him does not talk, they only murder.


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*GoodIsNotDumb: Knowing there is a risk of Roboute Guilliman of being a fraud, he sent the Thunder Warriors in hopes of they could end him. He was also banking on them being properly healed and used by Roboute if he was true.
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* AntiMagic: Abram is a Blank, so he's immune to all psychic power, and presence will suppress psychic abilities around them. His nul-aura of just about above average in terms of strength, but has a notably large range, having a radius of about, hundred meters of him, which combined with his Knight battlesuit, makes him extremely devastating to anything that uses warp-sorcery.

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* AntiMagic: Abram is a Blank, so he's immune to all psychic power, and presence will suppress psychic abilities around them. His nul-aura of just about above average in terms of strength, but has a notably large range, having a radius of about, hundred meters of him, which combined with his Knight battlesuit, makes him extremely devastating to anything that uses warp-sorcery.



* HasAType: Does not like beastwomen but would say yes to the descendant of one with human lineage.

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* HasAType: Does Inverted, as he does not like beastwomen fullanimal-headed beastwomen, but would say yes to the descendant of one with human lineage.



* LargeAndInCharge: Unlike a majority of his fellow Kinght-Barons of Raisa, he is incredibly strong and powerful, standing at 7 feet tall for a human.

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* LargeAndInCharge: Unlike a majority of his fellow Kinght-Barons of Raisa, he is incredibly strong and powerful, powerful outside his [[{{Mecha}} Knight suit]], standing at 7 feet tall for a human. human.
* {{Mecha}}: He pilots a Knight battlesuit outfited with very powerfull weapons, and might be the single most deadly Knight pilot that his planet has ever produced.



* GoodIsNotDumb: Naturally, Athena chose not to trust an absolute stranger who claims to be her father and does not bring him to oe of her many hideouts out of fear of the stranger. She even stated whatever he said could have been well-crafted lies.

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* GoodIsNotDumb: Naturally, Athena chose not to trust an absolute stranger who claims to be her father and does not bring him to oe one of her many hideouts out of fear of the stranger. She even stated whatever he said could have been well-crafted lies.
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* AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Remain as the Knight-Lord of Raisa for eight consecutive years through the participation of yearly culling of abhumans.
* BestialityIsDepraved: Dislike the goat women he actively butchers unlike a majority of the knight-lords of his home planet. This doesn't deter him from having his way with a descendant of one with strong human lineage.

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* AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Remain Remains as the Knight-Lord of Raisa for eight consecutive years through the participation of yearly culling of abhumans.
* BestialityIsDepraved: Dislike Dislikes the goat women he actively butchers unlike a majority of the knight-lords of his home planet. This doesn't deter him from having his way with a descendant of one with strong human lineage.



* HuntersOfMonster: Not to the same extent as her canon counterpart but Athena showcased her strength and cunning when facing one of the mechanical beast of Medusa.
* MeaningfulNames; Named after the greek goddess of wisdom, craftmanship and warfare to reflect her purpose; constantly working on the simple and mundane activities that will drive lesser man bored.

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* HuntersOfMonster: HunterOfMonsters: Not to the same extent as her canon counterpart but Athena showcased her strength and cunning when facing one of the mechanical beast of Medusa.
* MeaningfulNames; MeaningfulName; Named after the greek goddess of wisdom, craftmanship and warfare to reflect her purpose; constantly working on the simple and mundane activities that will drive lesser man bored.

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* AsskickingLeadstoLeadership: Remain as the Knight-Lord of Raisa for eight consecutive years through participation of yearly culling of abhumans.

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* AsskickingLeadstoLeadership: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Remain as the Knight-Lord of Raisa for eight consecutive years through the participation of yearly culling of abhumans.



** Expy: Bore a strong resemblance to Adam Smasher in terms of mentality and personality.

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** Expy: *BlessedWithSuck: Was born as a Pariah, making him immune to any psychic attacks or the influence of the Warp. This in turn makes him universally hated by everyone on Raisa to the point of no woman was willing to marry him.
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Bore a strong resemblance to Adam Smasher in terms of mentality and personality.personality. Per WordOfGod, Abram is made using characters like Adam Smasher, Robert Baratheon and Beowulf as basis.


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*InLoveWithYourCarnage: Takes a great deal of joy in bombarding and generally killing the Beastmen en masse with his Knight.

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* TokenEvlTeammate: Serves as one to Roboute as he is someone who enjoys MurderPillageAndRape abhumans.

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Primarch of the Tenth Legionas Astartes and alternate universe of Ferrus Manus
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*ActionGirl: Spent a good chunk of her life surviving and scrounging off the planet by her lonesome. Not to mention fighting against the various mechanical beast that roamed the land.
*CrazyPrepared: Athena set up multiple outpost, each one having a different purpose.
*GeniusBruiser: Athena is just as smart as she is strong, capable of setting up various outputs, cook food, and create weapons on her own by constant tinkering and experimentation.
*GoodIsNotDumb: Naturally, Athena chose not to trust an absolute stranger who claims to be her father and does not bring him to oe of her many hideouts out of fear of the stranger. She even stated whatever he said could have been well-crafted lies.
*HuntersOfMonster: Not to the same extent as her canon counterpart but Athena showcased her strength and cunning when facing one of the mechanical beast of Medusa.
*MeaningfulNames; Named after the greek goddess of wisdom, craftmanship and warfare to reflect her purpose; constantly working on the simple and mundane activities that will drive lesser man bored.

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A high-ranking member of the Adeptus Mechanicus of Gryphonne IV and the tech-priest assigned to Roboute Guilliman's fleet.

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*AsskickingLeadstoLeadership: Remain as the Knight-Lord of Raisa for eight consecutive years through participation of yearly culling of abhumans.
*BestialityIsDepraved: Dislike the goat women he actively butchers unlike a majority of the knight-lords of his home planet. This doesn't deter him from having his way with a descendant of one with strong human lineage.
**Expy: Bore a strong resemblance to Adam Smasher in terms of mentality and personality.
*HasAType: Does not like beastwomen but would say yes to the descendant of one with human lineage.
*LargeAndInCharge: Unlike a majority of his fellow Kinght-Barons of Raisa, he is incredibly strong and powerful, standing at 7 feet tall for a human.
*RedBaron: Known as the Baron of Golem Keep and is well-known for being good at killing people.
*TokenEvlTeammate: Serves as one to Roboute as he is someone who enjoys MurderPillageAndRape abhumans.
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!Adeptus Mechanicus
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A high-ranking member of the Adeptus Mechanicus of Gryphonne IV and the tech-priest assigned to Roboute Guilliman's fleet.
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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, was called St. George and knew an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him, or he knew them.

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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, was called St. George and George, knew an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir.Gungnir, and once served a king who had a fine-looking sword and whose kingdom fell to the bastard spawn of two sorceresses. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him, or he knew them.
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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, was called St. George and knew an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him, or knew them.

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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, was called St. George and knew an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him, or he knew them.
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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, was called St. George and knew an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him.

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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, was called St. George and knew an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him.him, or knew them.
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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was Conan the Barbarian. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, rests in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, not to mention being called St. George and having known an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir. Pick a notable charcter in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him.

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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was Conan [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian.Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, rests revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago, not to mention being was called St. George and having known knew an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir. Pick a notable charcter character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was him.
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* MeaningfulNames: Madonna is a word that describes a woman worthy of admiration, fitting as she is a young child who mastered all fields of education of Prospero and the way she acts as well.

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* BiggerIsBetter: Have this thought in line, having modified his height up to a freaking four meter tall and considered increasing the size of his armor to accomodate new upgrades and devices at his daughter's suggestion.
* BeenThereShapedHistory: He was Alexander the Great and possibly many other historical figures.

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* BiggerIsBetter: Have He has this thought in line, having modified his height up to a freaking four meter meters tall and considered increasing the size of his armor to accomodate accommodate new upgrades and devices at his daughter's suggestion.
* BeenThereShapedHistory: He was Alexander the Great Great, Heracles, and possibly many other historical figures.



* TheFogOfAges: A lot of his memory of tens of thousands of years of life has become a bit blurry. His conquests as Alexander, for instance, he can only remember in broad strokes.

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* TheFogOfAges: A lot of his memory of tens of thousands of years of life has become a bit blurry. His conquests as Alexander, for instance, he can only remember in broad strokes.strokes, and he can only vaguely recall the details of his Labors as Heracles, such as while he remembers the broad strokes of slaying the Nemean Lion and a desire to atone for some mistake, he can't remember exactly ''why'' he was doing it or even who exactly was giving him the tasks.

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* BigLittleBrother: Atalanta was the first successful creation of the twenty Primarchs, but due to them all being scattered to the Warp and arriving on various planets at different times, Atalanta was plucked from her pod by her father as an infant when no less than ''ten'' of her younger sisters have already been found with many already fully-grown adults in body.


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* LittleBigSister: Atalanta was the first successful creation of the twenty Primarchs, but due to them all being scattered to the Warp and arriving on various planets at different times, Atalanta was plucked from her pod by her father as an infant when no less than ''ten'' of her younger sisters have already been found with many already fully-grown adults in body.

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The prototype basis for the Primarch and one of the Imperiums' greatest killing machine

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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In the original timeline, The Angel never bonded nor even met any of the Primarchs. In this, he is considered their older brother and gets to know several to the Primarchs.
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In the canon series, The Angel's personality can be summed up with 'Kill Chaos'. This one can actually learn and how to be civilized.
* CripplingOverspecialization: Was built with the singular purpose of killing evil-doers and worshippers of Chaos, causing it to be often placed in sleep and doesn't do much else besides that.
* TheStoic: Unlike the Primarchs, The Angel is incredibly stoic to the point of being near emotionless. Justified considering he was only built to kill evil-doers in general.

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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In the original timeline, The Angel never bonded with nor even met any of the Primarchs. In this, he is considered their older brother and gets to know several to of the Primarchs.
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In the canon series, The Angel's personality can be summed up with 'Kill Chaos'. This one can actually learn and how has some capacity to be civilized.
civilized, even if he considered it a low priority to the 'Kill Chaos' mission.
* CripplingOverspecialization: Was built with the singular purpose of killing evil-doers and worshippers of Chaos, causing it him to be often placed in sleep and he doesn't do much else besides that.
that. As the Emperor notes when considering why he went forth with the Primarchs' creation despite The Angel's existence, he needed not a powerful weapon, but a powerful ''ally''.
* FlawedPrototype: Lucem was the first attempt by the Emperor to see if it was even possible to create a being close to his level to aid in his mission to destroy humanity's enemies. While a success, the Emperor notes that the initial process was flawed and limited, creating not a son or even a warrior, but a [[CripplingOverspecialization weapon]]. Even so, Lucem's creation taught the Emperor much about the process that would further be refined with the production of geneseed before creating the Primarchs.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: In canon, The Angel never had a proper name (or if he does, it has never been revealed). Here, The Emperor reveals his name is "Lucem".
* TheStoic: Unlike the Primarchs, The Angel is incredibly stoic to the point of being near emotionless. Justified considering he was his flawed creation process left him with really only built the interest to kill evil-doers in general.



* AccidentalMurder: She didn't even committed it nor had any control over whatsoever as her pod had just so happened to crash right into a big Caliban Lion.
* BabyOfTheBunch: Comes with the territory of getting recently picked up by her biological creator, fresh out of the landing pod.

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* AccidentalMurder: She didn't even committed it mean to nor had any control over whatsoever as her pod had just so happened to crash right into a big Caliban Lion.
Lion's head and crush its skull.
* BabyOfTheBunch: Comes with the territory of getting recently picked up by her biological creator, fresh out of the landing pod.pod, though ironically she was the ''first'' proper and successful Primarch created.
* BigLittleBrother: Atalanta was the first successful creation of the twenty Primarchs, but due to them all being scattered to the Warp and arriving on various planets at different times, Atalanta was plucked from her pod by her father as an infant when no less than ''ten'' of her younger sisters have already been found with many already fully-grown adults in body.
* HunterOfMonsters: The aspect of The Emperor she represents was drawn from his memories of fighting and slaying various terrible beasts.
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*Bishonen: Asarnil is an incredibly handsome man. Brosef drawing is proof enough and looked like an elven version of Conan the Barbarian.



* TheStoic: Unlike the Primarchs, The Angel is incredibly stoic to the point of near emotionless. Justified considering he was only built to kill evil-doers in general.

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[[spoiler: Primarch of the 20th Legionas Astartes and the alternate universe version of Alpharius]]
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*BeleagueredAssistant: Alpharius dislike having to handle the paperwork and bureaucratic work that comes as TheSpymaster for the Imperium. Justified as she is only seven years old at the time.
*TheSpymaster: Much like her canon counterpart, Alpharius excels in subterfuge, espionage and creating a spy network to keep an eye out on potential enemies.
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*MeaningfulNames: Madonna is a word that describes a woman worthy of admiration, fitting as she is a young child who mastered all fields of education of Prospero and the way she acts as well.



* FreeSpiritedGirl: The Emperor instills in her his desire to be free, to forge strong bonds with fellow warriors and fight foul forces of evil, and the desire to explore the new world for the sake of exploration.


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*MeaningfulName: Lofn is the name of a deity associated with comfort and nurture, something that the Sixth Legionas Astartes Primarch was built as she was meant to be the one that excels in forging friendship with warriors and the likes.


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Primarch of the First Legionas Astartes and alternate universe counterpart of Lion El'Jonson
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*AccidentalMurder: She didn't even committed it nor had any control over whatsoever as her pod had just so happened to crash right into a big Caliban Lion.
*BabyOfTheBunch: Comes with the territory of getting recently picked up by her biological creator, fresh out of the landing pod.
*MeaningfulName: The First was named after a famous ancient Terran huntress and the young Primarch was created as the ideal warrior, using The Emperor's memories of his life as a warrior.
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* TheFlawedPrototype: Similar to their original timeline counterpart, they were the first mass produced legion of superhuman army but due to the rushed work, they were falling apart but only through Roboute's intervention, they are cured of their problems.

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!Others that are part of Roboute Guilliman's group



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* HiddenDepths: Crossed with ObfuscatingStupidity and HopeBringer to a certain degree as she puts up a big act to prevent the people of Prospero from worrying about the spiritual parasites that hunts the psykers of her planets because she belives her arrival was meant to herald a turning point for the people of Prospero.

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* HiddenDepths: Crossed with ObfuscatingStupidity and HopeBringer to a certain degree as she puts up a big act to prevent the people of Prospero from worrying about the spiritual parasites that hunts the psykers of her planets because she belives believes her arrival was meant to herald a turning point for the people of Prospero.
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* CripplingSpecialization: Was built with the singular purpose of killing evil-doers and worshippers of Chaos, causing it to be often placed in sleep and doesn't do much else besides that.

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* CripplingSpecialization: CripplingOverspecialization: Was built with the singular purpose of killing evil-doers and worshippers of Chaos, causing it to be often placed in sleep and doesn't do much else besides that.
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*BrutalHonesty: A downplayed case as Lofn, after much spending time with the Clan of Russ, has come to the conclusion of seeing things and call them for what they are instead of just listening to the words of others.


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*FreeSpiritedGirl: The Emperor instills in her his desire to be free, to forge strong bonds with fellow warriors and fight foul forces of evil, and the desire to explore the new world for the sake of exploration.
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TheThe Thunder Warriors is an ancient Terran-born legion of superhuman army. Dying from their rushed genetic alterations, they are taken in and cured by the Exodite Aeldari to serve the Imperium.
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*TheFlawedPrototype: Similar to their original timeline counterpart, they were the first mass produced legion of superhuman army but due to the rushed work, they were falling apart but only through Roboute's intervention, they are cured of their problems.
*SuperPrototype: Serves as one for the Space Marine as while the Space Marine have a wide variety of organs that allows them to survive in harsh conditions and adapt, the Thunder Warriors are simply incredibly strong and resilient.



*ActuallyPrettyFunny: Made a statement about The Emperor's of mankind's sexual preference and chuckled along with the fellow Thunder Warrior.



* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In the canon series, The ANgel's personality can be summed up with 'Kill Chaos'. This one can actually learn and how to be civilized.

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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In the canon series, The ANgel's Angel's personality can be summed up with 'Kill Chaos'. This one can actually learn and how to be civilized.



* GenderFlip: They are alternate universe female versions of the Primarchs.

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* GenderFlip: They are the alternate universe female versions of the Primarchs.



*HasAType: Implied. Hathor prefers cute-looking boys.



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Malekith Mallorn is the leader of the Exodite faction of the Aeldari race.
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*BodyguardingABadass: As he is one of the many who are tasked with protection of Roboute Guilliman, he is one given Roboute is a transhuman genetically designed to be a leader and capable warrior.
*EstablishingCharacterMoment; Upon meeting Roboute, he stated that the Emperor of Mankind have a love for 'blonde-haired and cream-skinned woman' and even expressed the desire to maul Roboute if he lied about his nature.
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*AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In the canon series, The ANgel's personality can be summed up with 'Kill Chaos'. This one can actually learn and how to be civilized.
*CripplingSpecialization: Was built with the singular purpose of killing evil-doers and worshippers of Chaos, causing it to be often placed in sleep and doesn't do much else besides that.
*TheStoic: Unlike the Primarchs, The Angel is incredibly stoic to the point of near emotionless. Justified considering he was only built to kill evil-doers in general.
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*HiddenDepths: Crossed with ObfuscatingStupidity as she puts up a big act to prevent the people of Prospero from worrying about the spiritual parasites that hunts the psykers of her planets.


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*BoisterousBruiser: Has this in shades as Lofn enjoyed flaunting her strength, showcasing her superior physical prowess to members of the Russ Clan and to the knights of Caliban while hunting the great beast of the very same planet.

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