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* {{Tsundere}}: Non-romantically. When the resettled Barbarus Lord approaches her to let her know she is being immortalized in their memories as their savior and liberator, she first reacts with disconcertment, as she does not believe she achieved anything compared to Roboute. When the Lord clarifies that they are thankful to him as well, but they have not forgotten how she was the first one to revolt against Necare and they want to honor that resolve, she pulls up her scarf, tells the Lord to do whatever they want, and beats feet.
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* {{Protectorate}}: When introduced to Atalanta, the Angel starts cuddling to her protectively. They are later seen napping together.

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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: As the Dragonlord of Charnac, not only he is the leader but also one of the strongest fighters it has.


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* RankScalesWithAsskicking: As the Dragonlord of Charnac, not only he is the leader but also one of the strongest fighters it has.

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** Kassandra has powerful precognitive abilities in both the long and short terms (such as being able to tell how someone will likely die after seeing their face), with the latter manifesting in her being able to predict the actions of her opponents in combat and counter-act them before they even come to pass. She also possesses superhuman skill in terms of stealth, often being described as skulking around with the skill of a cat [[StealthyColossus despite being a huge Primarch]].

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** Kassandra has powerful precognitive abilities in both the long and short terms (such as being able to tell how someone will likely die after seeing their face), with the latter manifesting in her being able to predict the actions of her opponents in combat and counter-act them before they even come to pass. She also possesses superhuman skill in terms of stealth, often being described as skulking around with the skill of a cat [[StealthyColossus despite being a huge Primarch]]. And while it has yet to appear in the story proper, Kassandra can also emit a "psychic [=EMP=]" that dowses lights and shuts down electronics around her.



* FantasticRacism: He hates mutants with a passion, especially Navigators, whom he's planning to exterminate once he no longer needs them. Thought he admits internally that this wouldn't stop him from having sex with one. He also has mixed feelings in regards to Guilliman allying with the Eldar since he's most familiar with the ones responsible for birthing Slaanesh.
* TheFogOfAges: A lot of his memory of tens of thousands of years of life has become a bit blurry. His conquests as Alexander, for instance, he can only remember in broad strokes, and he can only vaguely recall the details of his Labors as Heracles, such as while he remembers the broad strokes of slaying the Nemean Lion and a desire to atone for some mistake, he can't remember exactly ''why'' he was doing it or even who exactly was giving him the tasks.
* GoodIsNotNice: Had considered the idea of ending the entire Navigators clans because they are inbred, incestuous jerks who will do anything to ensure they stay in power. Not to mention what he had planned for the Thunder Warriors though given their dying status it was understandable.

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* FantasticRacism: He hates mutants with a passion, especially Navigators, whom he's planning to exterminate once he no longer needs them.them... Thought he admits internally that this wouldn't stop him from having sex with one. He also has mixed feelings in regards to Guilliman allying with the Eldar since he's most familiar with the ones responsible for birthing Slaanesh.
* TheFogOfAges: A lot of his memory of tens of thousands of years of life has become a bit blurry. His conquests as Alexander, for For instance, he can only remember his conquests as Alexander in broad strokes, and he can only vaguely recall the details of his Labors as Heracles, such as while he remembers the broad strokes of slaying the Nemean Lion and a desire to atone for some mistake, he can't remember exactly ''why'' he was doing it or even who exactly was giving him the tasks.
* GoodIsNotNice: Had considered the idea of ending the entire Navigators Navigator clans because they are inbred, incestuous jerks who will do anything to ensure they stay in power. Not to mention what he had planned for the Thunder Warriors Warriors, though given their dying status it was understandable.



* PapaWolf: While he is more than willing to let them take care of themselves, hurting his daughters and sons is a good way to end up being wiped from existence. As an example, after learning of Aurelia's RapeByBackstory, he's visibly furious and even laments how he wishes he could've been to Colchis sooner to not only save Aurelia from such a nightmare, but to make sure her captors suffered horrifically prior to him incinerating their entire planet.

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* PapaWolf: While he is more than willing to let them take care of themselves, hurting his daughters and sons is a good way to end up being wiped from existence. As an example, after learning of Aurelia's RapeByBackstory, RapeAsBackstory, he's visibly furious and even laments how he wishes he could've been to Colchis sooner to not only save Aurelia from such a nightmare, but to make sure her captors suffered horrifically prior to him incinerating their entire planet.



* PlayingWithFire: Able to emit intense psychic flames from his body to destroy the enemy.

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* PlayingWithFire: Able to emit intense psychic flames from his body to destroy the enemy.his surrounding enemies.



** The Hydra is a StealthExpert par excellence, being able to shift and hide her appearance akin to the Emperor himself.
** Hathor's abilities is more or less limited to "just" possessing incredible charisma and an instinctual knowledge & skill in tactics greater than virtually any of her other sisters.
** Danu Dorn is an incredible genius in terms of crafting and augmenting devices & fortifications.

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** The Hydra is a StealthExpert par excellence, being able to shift and hide her appearance in a manner akin to the Emperor himself.
** Hathor's abilities is are more or less limited to "just" possessing incredible charisma and an instinctual knowledge & skill in tactics greater than virtually any of her other sisters.
** Danu Dorn is an incredible genius in terms of crafting and augmenting devices & fortifications. And while it hasn't come up in the story proper, she also possesses an [[AntiMagic anti-Warp]] field akin to a Pariah/Blank, being able to shut down Warp incursions by her mere presence.



* AMotherToHerMen: The Emperor explicitly notes the aspect of himself within Hathor represents his ability to lead others and inspire them to a cause. By the time he finds her, she is not only a high-ranking member of a large gang, she has earned their loyalty despite the obvious cutthroat nature of their life and she is reluctant to part from them, only doing so once the Emperor affirms they would be compensated and taking a moment to affirm herself that he will keep his word.

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* AMotherToHerMen: The Emperor explicitly notes the aspect of himself within Hathor represents his ability to lead others and inspire them to a cause. By the time he finds her, she is not only a high-ranking member of a large gang, she has earned their loyalty despite the obvious cutthroat nature of their life and she is reluctant to part from them, only doing so once the Emperor affirms they would be compensated and taking a moment to affirm herself that he will keep his word. This trait has continued on into her leading the Luna Wolves, with her taking it the worst out of her sisters in regards to the hideous losses they take in the Scouring Barbarus.



* ImpressivePyrotechnics: Was able to pull off one of her own as a way to intimidate intruders.



* MeaningfulName: "Madonna" is a Italian word that describes a woman worthy of admiration, which is quite fitting as she is a young child who quickly mastered all fields of education on Prospero and is also a brilliant prodigy in the ways of war & sorcery.

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* MeaningfulName: "Madonna" is a an Italian word word/name that describes a woman worthy of admiration, which is quite fitting as she is a young child who quickly mastered all fields of education on Prospero and is also a brilliant prodigy in the ways of war & sorcery.



* ImpressivePyrotechnics: Was able to pull off one of her own as a way to intimidate intruders.

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** Morrigan is excellent in stealth (though not on the same level as Kassandra), but most notably is completely unmatched among the Primarchs in terms of physical resistance and durability, typically defeating her foes by invoking VictoryThroughEndurance.

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** Morrigan is excellent in stealth (though not on the same level as Kassandra), but most notably is completely unmatched among the Primarchs in terms of physical resistance and durability, typically defeating her foes by invoking VictoryThroughEndurance.VictoryByEndurance.



* HalfHumanHybrid: Lucem, unlike his siblings, was forged using the technology of the C'tan along with the Emperor's knowledge and essence.



* FlawedPrototype: Lucem was the first attempt by the Emperor to see if it was even possible to create a being close to his level to aid in his mission to destroy humanity's enemies. While a success, the Emperor notes that the initial process was flawed and limited, creating not a son or even a warrior, but a [[CripplingOverspecialization weapon]]. Even so, Lucem's creation taught the Emperor much about the process that would further be refined with the production of geneseed before creating the Primarchs.
* PlayingWithFire: Able to expunge intense psychic flames to destroy the enemy.

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* FlawedPrototype: Lucem was the first attempt by the Emperor to see if it was even possible to create a being close to his level to aid in his mission to destroy humanity's enemies. While a success, the Emperor notes that the initial process was flawed and limited, creating not a son or even a warrior, but a [[CripplingOverspecialization weapon]]. Even so, Lucem's creation taught the Emperor much about the process that would be further be refined with the production of geneseed before creating the Primarchs.
* PlayingWithFire: Able HalfHumanHybrid: Lucem, unlike his siblings, was forged using the technology of the C'tan along with the Emperor's knowledge and essence.
* MeaningfulName: His name is descended from "lux," the Latin word for "light." The Angel emits almost blinding white light during battle that erases Chaos corruption thanks
to expunge intense him containing part of the Emperor's psychic flames to destroy the enemy.essence.



* PlayingWithFire: Able to emit intense psychic flames from his body to destroy the enemy.



* SuperpowerLottery: Each of the Primarchs possess unique abilities that set them apart among their siblings.
** The Hydra is a StealthExpert par excellence, being able to shift and hide her appearance akin to the Emperor himself.
** Hathor's abilities is more or less limited to "just" possessing incredible charisma and an instinctual knowledge & skill in tactics greater than virtually any of her other sisters.
** Danu Dorn is an incredible genius in terms of crafting and augmenting devices & fortifications.
** Fulgrim possesses both a potent HealingFactor (even when compared to her other sisters) and is nigh-universally recognized as the WorldsMostBeautifulWoman due to having supernaturally enchanted good looks. Her time on Chemos has also made her a genius in terms of machinery and mechanics.
** Madonna is an incredibly powerful psyker, with only the Emperor and Malcador likely being stronger than her. She is also skilled in biomancy, being able to change her appearance however she likes (such as her increasing her breast size out of feeling envious regarding her better endowed sisters). Additionally, she can see into both the past and future with incredible skill and accuracy.
** Lofn is instinctively an excellent huntress and warrior, and also naturally possesses the [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent Wulfen gene]].
** Athena is inherently a genius technician and inventor, easily able to craft incredible tools and weapons with whatever she has on hand.
** Vesta is the UltimateBlacksmith bar none, being able to create devices that seem like magic even under the eyes of her more technologically-oriented sisters. Additionally, she also has both an incredibly powerful HealingFactor and InnateNightVision.



* TheDeterminator: The Emperor of Mankind had Danu's core personality to be that of a worker who will face any problems head-on, working tirelessly to plan and adapt to any problems and work to solve them.
* MeaningfulName: Danu translates to "swift-flowing" or refers to the Earth-mother goddess in Celtic mythology. Given that her soul is that of a large, immobile bulwark of frost and her intended purpose, it is a fitting name. Not to mention her name of "Danu Dorn" roughly translates to "river fortress" in Celtic, and fortresses found on rivers were often described as ideal places for fortifications in classical warfare.

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* TheDeterminator: {{Determinator}}: The Emperor of Mankind had Danu's core personality to be that of a worker who will face any problems head-on, working tirelessly to plan and adapt to any problems and work to solve them.
* MeaningfulName: Danu translates to "swift-flowing" or in Celtic, and refers to the Earth-mother goddess in Celtic mythology. Given that her soul is that of a large, immobile bulwark of frost and her intended purpose, it is a fitting name. Not to mention her name of "Danu Dorn" roughly translates to "river fortress" in Celtic, and fortresses found on rivers were often described as ideal places for fortifications in classical warfare.



* RedOniBlueOni: A small case as while Danu is quiet and of few words, she tends to be the red oni as she forges ahead without caring what others think.

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* RedOniBlueOni: A small case with Fulgrim, as while Danu is quiet and of few words, she tends to be the red oni as she forges ahead without caring what others think.


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* AdaptationalWimp: Heavily downplayed, but thanks to the Emperor taking her off of Medusa far earlier than in canon, she never suffers the accident that granted her canonical counterpart with a set of formidable, Necrodermis-coated arms that he could turn molten hot whenever he wished.


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* AdaptationalWimp: Heavily downplayed, but the author has noted that Vesta is not a [[CompleteImmortality Perpetual]] in this story, instead "merely" possessing a ridiculously powerful HealingFactor.


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* InnateNightVision: She possesses a set of volcanic-red eyes that let her see in the dark far better than any of her siblings.

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* IdenticalStranger: Explicitly noted; Amadeus DuCaine, Legion master of the Stormwalkers noticed that Roboute looks almost identical to the Unspeakable King who he killed fifty years before. Both Roboute and the Unspeakable King rule over a land called Albion/Albyon, ruled from a mountain top keep and had red right hands.
* ImmuneToFate: One of the many effects of being transported shortly after dying into the past, per the Word of God [[spoiler: Roboute is now hidden from the sights of those who have prophetic gifts related to Tzeentch, the Chaos god of fate, and even Tzeentch himself can't detect him. This is because [[TricksterGod Cegorach]] is specifically screwing with Tzeentch, and only Tzeentch, so Kassandra can still see him in her visions.]]

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* IdenticalStranger: Explicitly noted; Amadeus DuCaine, [=DuCaine=], Legion master Master of the Stormwalkers Storm Walkers noticed that Roboute looks almost identical to the Unspeakable King who he killed fifty years before. Both Roboute and the Unspeakable King rule over a land called Albion/Albyon, ruled from a mountain top keep and had red right hands.
* ImmuneToFate: One of the many effects of being transported shortly after dying into the past, per the Word of God [[spoiler: Roboute [[spoiler:Roboute is now hidden from the sights of those who have prophetic gifts related to Tzeentch, the Chaos god of fate, and even Tzeentch himself can't detect him. This is because [[TricksterGod Cegorach]] is specifically screwing with Tzeentch, and only Tzeentch, so Kassandra can still see him in her visions.]]



* OneManArmy: Thanks to him starting out with the Exodite Eldar, his associated forces initially lack any true form of infantry. This is made up for by Roboute simply soloing entire armies by himself, as best shown by him beating Asarnil's best Stormlords in melee combat when he is being tested by the Exodite WarriorPrince.



* DecompositeCharacter: An interesting InUniverse case, with the Emperor having designed each of them to embody and take inspiration from specific periods in his own life.



* SuperpowerLottery: Each of the Primarchs possess unique abilities that set them apart among their siblings.
** Petra can instantly spot & recognize the weaknesses of whatever she lays her eyes upon. She also possesses an innate knowledge regarding how different devices function, can instinctively create great technological & architectural marvels that seem impossible to virtually anyone else, and can always see & sense the Eye of Terror.
** Kassandra has powerful precognitive abilities in both the long and short terms (such as being able to tell how someone will likely die after seeing their face), with the latter manifesting in her being able to predict the actions of her opponents in combat and counter-act them before they even come to pass. She also possesses superhuman skill in terms of stealth, often being described as skulking around with the skill of a cat [[StealthyColossus despite being a huge Primarch]].
** Aurelia's abilities mostly manifests in terms of her possessing both incredible charisma and an aura of radiance about her, but she also has a far more limited (in comparison to Kassandra) ability to see the future, with her being able to keep her sanity intact during her abuse at the hands of Kor Phaeron thanks to having psychic dreams telling her that Roboute was coming to rescue her.
** Morrigan is excellent in stealth (though not on the same level as Kassandra), but most notably is completely unmatched among the Primarchs in terms of physical resistance and durability, typically defeating her foes by invoking VictoryThroughEndurance.



* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Petra can see structural weak points with a glance, however, it also makes them feel observed constantly by the Eye of Terror, and as Guilliman notes how [[BlessedWithSuck seeing weaknesses everywhere he looks was likely a major reason as to why Perturabo was so miserable]].

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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Even with the slightest glance Petra can tell where the weakest part of a structure, took or even person can be found, making any of her attacks/fixings all the more devastating/effective.
* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Petra can see structural weak points with a glance, glance; however, it also makes them feel observed constantly by the Eye of Terror, and as Guilliman notes how [[BlessedWithSuck seeing weaknesses everywhere he looks was likely a major reason as to why Perturabo was so miserable]].



* BlessedWithSuck: As noted above, her abilities make her a technical prodigy, but also make her deeply cynical since she is basically cursed with always instinctively seeing the worst in anything she lays her eyes upon. Additionally, she can always sense being observed by the Eye of Terror.



* SurveillanceDrone: Has one in the form of a servo-skull she build herself, and even named it "Ena".
* TerseTalker: Much like her canonical counterpart of Peturabo, Petra talks with as few words as possible. During her first meeting with Roboute, he took note of the fact that the first two sentences she ever spoke to him were single words. The third was a diss at the "the prophet" (actually himself unknown to her) who thought she would be a boy.

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* SurveillanceDrone: Has one in the form of a servo-skull she build herself, and even named naming it "Ena".
* TerseTalker: Much like her canonical counterpart of Peturabo, Petra talks with as few words as possible. During her first meeting with Roboute, he took note of the fact that the first two sentences she ever spoke to him were single words. The third was a diss at the "the prophet" (actually himself unknown to her) who thought she would be a boy.



* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to the training, aid and (most importantly) love & support of her sisters and Roboute, she goes from a scared & near-helpless little girl to a formidable and dangerous warrior.

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* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to the training, aid and (most importantly) love & support of her sisters and Roboute, she goes from a scared & near-helpless little girl to a formidable and dangerous warrior.warrior, with her fellow sisters rescued by Roboute openly regarding her as the most dangerous in direct combat among them.



* ActionGirl: While all of the Primarches will be this in time, Morrigan was the first sister Roboute encountered who had already been tested on the field of battle against the rotting zombie hordes of Barbarus' overlords.
* TheAtoner: She first fought for Barbarus against the hordes of her evil sorcerous adoptive father since she wanted to atone for indirectly helping in the subjugation of their people by acting as one of his agents. Furthermore, she's made it a major goal of her to forever make up for [[spoiler:nearly getting both herself and Roboute killed when she tried to kill the last Chaos sorcerer on Barbarus alone even when it was clear the planet was about to turn into a Daemon World]].

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* ActionGirl: While all of the Primarches Primarchs will be this in time, Morrigan was the first sister Roboute encountered who had already been tested on the field of battle against the rotting zombie hordes of Barbarus' overlords.
* TheAtoner: She first fought for Barbarus against the hordes of her evil sorcerous adoptive father Necare since she wanted to atone for indirectly helping in the subjugation of their people by acting as one of his agents. Furthermore, she's made it a major goal of her to forever make up for [[spoiler:nearly getting both herself and Roboute killed when she tried to kill the last Chaos sorcerer on Barbarus alone even when it was clear the planet was about to turn into a Daemon World]].



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Him being exposed to the Sword of the God-Emperor (as in, the version of the Emperor from [=M42=] in the prime timeline) physically takes him aback.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Him being exposed to the Sword of the God-Emperor (as in, the version of the Emperor from [=M42=] in the prime timeline) physically takes him aback.aback and visibly disturbs him.
* PapaWolf: While he is more than willing to let them take care of themselves, hurting his daughters and sons is a good way to end up being wiped from existence. As an example, after learning of Aurelia's RapeByBackstory, he's visibly furious and even laments how he wishes he could've been to Colchis sooner to not only save Aurelia from such a nightmare, but to make sure her captors suffered horrifically prior to him incinerating their entire planet.



* ThePhoenix: Not a literal case, obviously, but Asarnil and the Everqueen both compare him to the angelic "fire-birds" of Asuryan, the former head god of the Aeldari pantheon and whose phoenixes were capable of burning through the influence of entire Warp storms... something the Emperor himself does when he leads his fleet to make contact with the Kingdom of Albion on Bastonne.



** Roboute notes to his curious sisters that the Emperor seems to be blissfully unaware when trying to explain concepts that others don't have the same knowledge base or perception.

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** And in general, Roboute notes to his curious sisters that the Emperor seems to be blissfully unaware when trying to explain concepts that others don't have the same knowledge base or perception.



* TheEngineer: The well-documented and researched manual describing the maintenance and operation of Knights and Titans he sent to Roboute? He didn't just pull it out of thin air or ask it to be compiled from a bunch of tech-priests -- ''he wrote it himself based on only his own knowledge.''

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* TheEngineer: The well-documented and researched manual describing the maintenance and operation of Knights and Titans he sent to Roboute? He didn't just pull it out of thin air or ask it to be compiled from a bunch of tech-priests -- ''he he wrote it himself ''himself'' based on only his own knowledge.''



* PetTheDog: Malcador for all his jerkass attitude, gifted the Twentieth Primarch a prosthetic eye to replace her old eye because it was her birthday.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Share this status with the Emperor of Mankind, with him probably being the only person in the galaxy who can regularly snark at him without getting potentially incinerated.

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* PetTheDog: Malcador for For all of his jerkass attitude, gifted {{Jerkass}}ery, he gifts the Twentieth Primarch with a prosthetic eye to (to replace her old eye previously ruined left eye) because it was her birthday.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Share this status with the Emperor of Mankind, with him being probably being the only person in the galaxy who can regularly snark at him without getting potentially incinerated.



* DecompositeCharacter: An interesting InUniverse case, with the Emperor having designed each of them to embody and take inspiration from specific periods in his own life.



* HandicappedBadass: [[EyeScream Lost an eye]] during the invasion of a Daemon on the gene-cult Luna and had been working without an eye for several years. She eventually gets a [[ElectronicEyes Bionic Eye]] due to Malcador.

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* HandicappedBadass: [[EyeScream Lost an eye]] during the invasion of a Daemon on the gene-cult Luna and had been working without an eye for several years. She eventually gets a replacement [[ElectronicEyes Bionic Eye]] due thanks to Malcador.



* SpitTake: Hathor has one when learning from Lofn that Madonna uses biomancy to increase her breast size out of BreastEnvy.

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* SpitTake: Hathor has one when learning from Lofn that Madonna uses biomancy to increase her breast chest size out of BreastEnvy.



* SentimentalHomemadeToy: A variant of one as hers isn't a toy but the fur cloak of her adoptive grandfather.

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* SentimentalHomemadeToy: A variant of one one, as hers isn't a toy but the fur cloak of her adoptive grandfather.



* BreastEnvy: Had one and decides to compensate it by subtly using her psychic powers to increase her breast size.

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* BreastEnvy: Had one and decides She decided to compensate it for her ACupAngst by subtly using her psychic powers to increase her breast size.



* MeaningfulName: Madonna is a word that describes a woman worthy of admiration, fitting as she is a young child who mastered all fields of education of Prospero and the way she acts as well.

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* MeaningfulName: Madonna "Madonna" is a Italian word that describes a woman worthy of admiration, which is quite fitting as she is a young child who quickly mastered all fields of education of on Prospero and is also a brilliant prodigy in the way she acts as well.ways of war & sorcery.



* AMotherToHerMen: Has shades of this, what with her boasting of her Legion's accomplishments during the Scouring of Barbarus being basically presented as being akin to a proud mother boasting about her children passing a difficult test at school. Below is how she describes her thoughts to Athena and Hathor when she's sharing her home-brewed Mjod.

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* AMotherToHerMen: Has shades of this, what with her boasting of her Legion's accomplishments during the Scouring of Barbarus being basically presented as being akin to a proud mother boasting about her children passing a difficult test at school. Below is how she describes her thoughts to Athena and Hathor when she's sharing her home-brewed Mjod.Mjod with them:



* MeaningfulName: Lofn is the name of a Norse deity associated with comfort and nurture, something that the Sixth Legionas Astartes Primarch was built as she was meant to be the one that excels in forging friendship with warriors and the like.

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* MeaningfulName: Lofn is the name of a Norse deity associated with comfort and nurture, something that the Sixth Legionas Astartes Primarch was built for as she was is meant to be the one that excels in forging friendship with warriors and nurturing the like.friendships made among fellow warriors.



* MeaningfulName: The First was named after a famous heroine and huntswoman from Greek mythology, and the young Primarch was created as the ideal warrior through The Emperor's memories of his life as a hunter of beasts.

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* MeaningfulName: The First was named after a famous heroine and huntswoman from Greek mythology, and the young Primarch was created as the ideal warrior through The the Emperor's memories of his life as a hunter of beasts.beasts in his distant past.



* HunterOfMonsters: Not to the same extent as her canon counterpart, but Athena has showcased her strength and cunning when facing the mechanical beasts of Medusa. Her introductory chapter even features her killing a huge mechanical scorpion just so she can get some higher quality metal for crafting a new sword.

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* HunterOfMonsters: Not to the same extent as her canon counterpart, canonical counterpart thanks to being rescued by the Emperor much earlier in time, but Athena has showcased her strength and cunning when facing the mechanical beasts of Medusa. Her introductory chapter even features her killing a huge mechanical scorpion just so she can get some higher quality metal for crafting a new sword.



* MiseryBuildsCharacter: A more positive case mixed with TaughtByExperience; when she's trying to comfort Hathor following the Scouring of Barbarus and her "older sister" is grieving over the loss of many of her soldiers, Athena simply muses aloud that while her own forces took hideous losses, that's to be expected when fighting a new foe for the first time in a war and next time they fight a force similar to the Nurglite daemons, her soldiers will know how to properly fight against such a force and will triumph and emerge even stronger than before.

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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: A more positive case mixed with TaughtByExperience; when she's trying to comfort Hathor following the Scouring of Barbarus and her "older sister" is grieving over the loss of many of her soldiers, Astartes, Athena simply muses aloud that while her own forces also took hideous losses, that's to be expected when fighting a new foe for the first time in a war and the next time they fight a force similar to the Nurglite daemons, her soldiers will know how to properly fight against such a force and will triumph and emerge even stronger than before.



The {{Greater Scope Villain}}s to the setting of ''Warhammer [=40K=]''. The Chaos Gods are four terrifyingly powerful and malicious Warp entities created and empowered by the emotions of sapient life, and wish to ravage the universe for the rest of time in service to their own power. They consist of Khorne (the god of war, rage and hatred), Tzeentch (the god of knowledge, deceit, fate and magic), Nurgle (the god of plagues and decay) and Slaanesh (the "youngest" of the Ruinous Powers created by the Fall of the Eldar, and which is the god of excess and depravity).

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The {{Greater Scope Villain}}s to the setting of ''Warhammer [=40K=]''. The Chaos Gods are four terrifyingly powerful and malicious Warp entities created and empowered by the emotions of sapient life, and wish to ravage the universe for the rest of time in service to their own power. They consist of Khorne (the god of war, rage and hatred), Tzeentch (the god of knowledge, deceit, fate and magic), sorcery), Nurgle (the god of plagues plagues, decay and decay) the endless cycle of life & death) and Slaanesh (the "youngest" goddess of the Ruinous Powers excess and depravity created by the Fall of the Eldar, and which who is the god "youngest" of excess and depravity).the Ruinous Powers).



* AdaptationalExpansion: A case done by the author, as he has stated that he desires to add more variety to the daemons affiliated with the Chaos Gods

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* AdaptationalExpansion: A case done by the author, as he has stated that he desires to add more variety to the daemons affiliated with the Chaos GodsGods.
* AlmightyIdiot: According to the author, prior to the creation of Slaneesh, the Chaos Gods were still dangerous but fairly mindless, being unable to properly direct their power and were capable of being handled relatively easily by other Warp entities such as the Aeldari pantheon thanks to them being created slowly over time by rough amalgamations of different sins and acts of cruelty within the Warp (akin to glaciers being formed by sufficient snowfall under freezing temperatures over long periods of time). However, when the Aeldari Dominion intentionally engaged in "god-forging" when crafting Slannesh so as to make her into a goddess of pleasure to grant them an earthly paradise of revolting decadence, this resulted in Slannesh becoming truly self-aware and [[ItCanThink indirectly raising the other Chaos Gods into levels of real sentience & sapience]], making them exponentially more dangerous and formidable than they were before.
* AnimalMotifs: Each of the Chaos Gods and their daemons are generally associated with specific animals - Khorne with hounds, Nurgle with toads, Tzeentch with birds and Slaanesh with [[SnakesAreSexy serpents]].



*** Additionally, thanks to her having devoured their pantheon and now holding ownership over their afterlife, the Aeldari all hold a special level of hatred for Slaanesh.

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*** Additionally, thanks to her having devoured most of their pantheon and now holding ownership over their afterlife, the Aeldari all hold a special level of hatred for Slaanesh.


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* EldritchAbomination: The Chaos Gods are all each corrupted blends of assorted emotions empowered by conscious thought and feeling, and simply trying to either examine or discern their inner workings runs the risk of going mad.


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* TheHeartless: Each of the Chaos Gods and their assorted daemons are essentially semi-physical and self-aware amalgamations of the various vices and sins of mortals.
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* Bishonen: Asarnil is an incredibly handsome man. Brosef drawing is proof enough and looked like an elven version of Conan the Barbarian.
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* IOweYouMyLife: Is deeply irritated that Roboute still views himself as indebted to the Eldar when he is the main reason the Exodites have coalesced into a viable faction and has effectively prevented their decay into the Drukhari or the Craftworld Eldar by rescuing the Everqueen.
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* AbsoluteXenophobe: Much like his close friend and leader, he detests alien species. The latest target for his ire is the crazy metal xeno sorcerer that infiltrated Terra and stole a shipment of geneseed from the III Legion.

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* AbsoluteXenophobe: Much like his close friend and leader, he detests alien species. The latest target for his ire is the crazy metal xeno sorcerer that infiltrated Terra and stole a shipment of geneseed from the III Legion.geneseed.
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* AbsoluteXenophobe: Much like his close friend and leader, he detests alien species.

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* AbsoluteXenophobe: Much like his close friend and leader, he detests alien species. The latest target for his ire is the crazy metal xeno sorcerer that infiltrated Terra and stole a shipment of geneseed from the III Legion.



* MindOverMatter: Possesses telekinetic powers as he is a psyker, using it to levitate a half-defunct anti-grav carrier and had intimidated The Hydra into backing down when she protest too much.

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* MindOverMatter: Possesses telekinetic powers as he is a psyker, using it to levitate a half-defunct anti-grav carrier and had intimidated The Hydra into backing down when she protest protested too much.

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[[folder: Carl Calculutus]]
A high-ranking member of the Adeptus Mechanicus Forge-Empire of Gryphonne IV and the main tech-priest assigned to Roboute Guilliman's fleet.

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[[folder: Carl Calculutus]]
[[folder:Karl Calculatus]]
A high-ranking Magos (high-ranking member of the Adeptus Mechanicus [[MachineWorship Mechanicum]]) of the Forge-Empire of Gryphonne IV (a powerful and ''de facto'' independent empire of the Mechanicus located in the southern reaches of the galaxy), and the main tech-priest assigned to Roboute Guilliman's fleet.



* TheComicallySerious: Serves as one. When Asarnil jokingly stated Roboute have interest in female tech-priest, Carl was more willing to let Roboute take several as his mistress if it could place the Gryphonne IV in good favour of the Primarchs' book.
* CommonalityConnection: Finds one in Asarnil when they discuss the language unique to their own faction.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Doesn't particularly like the fact that Roboute has interest in xeno women and even female tech priest but will let him take several if he likes them.
* {{Expy}}: Of Karl Franz from Warhammer Fantasy, to the point where they even have the same first names.

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* TheComicallySerious: Serves as one. When Asarnil jokingly stated Roboute have interest in female tech-priest, Carl tech-priests, Karl was more willing to let Roboute take several as his mistress mistresses if it could place the Gryphonne IV in the Primarch's good favour of the Primarchs' book.
favor.
* CommonalityConnection: Finds one in Asarnil when they discuss the language languages unique to their own faction.
factions.
* CreativeSterility: Discussed and surprisingly downplayed; as he explains to Petra, the reason why the Mechanicum shuns novel research and focuses instead on following clear, set parameters created by their ancestors is because the galaxy they live in is such a hellish CrapsackWorld and they don't have the resources yet to ''both'' conduct potentially dangerous research and keep their technological relics running. Karl does muse, though, that he hopes in the future when the galaxy has finally been "civilized," actual research can actually be performed once again. He also tells Petra that he and the other tech-priests of Gryphonne IV don't ''always'' follow the scriptures regarding no research to the letter, as evidenced by him showing her how to construct a servo-skull and being excited when she notes she's already coming up with methods that will greatly streamline their creation process without any loss in function.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Doesn't PlayedForLaughs; He doesn't particularly like the fact that Roboute supposedly has interest in xeno women and even female tech priest tech-priests, but will let him take several if he likes them.
* {{Expy}}: Of Karl Franz from Warhammer Fantasy, ''Warhammer Fantasy'', to the point where they even have the same first names.name.



[[folder: The Emperor of Mankind/[[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]] ]]

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[[folder: The Emperor of Mankind/[[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]] of Cimmeria]] ]]
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* BadBoss: Invoked by him in regards to the Twentieth Primarch; he treats her with condescension and casual indifference to help prevent her from gaining an emotional attachment to him and others so they in case they ever turn against the Imperium, she can properly form stratagems to take them down without any hesitation.
* BadassTeacher: Serves as one to The Hydra and wanted her to act as a safeguard should he become a threat to the Imperium.
* BeleagueredAssistant: Crossed with HypercompetentSidekick, as he does find certain actions of The Emperor of Mankind frustrating. Especially with his friends' constant tinkering with biomancy.
* BoomerangBigot: Lampshaded in the series as Malcador notes the irony was not lost on him as he despises sorcerers despite being one and arguably the second best in all of the Imperium.

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* BadBoss: Invoked by him in regards to the Twentieth Primarch; he treats her with condescension and casual indifference to help prevent her from gaining an emotional attachment to him and others so they that in case they ever turn against the Imperium, she can properly form stratagems to take them down without any hesitation.
* BadassTeacher: Serves as one to The Hydra and wanted even wants her to act as a safeguard should he become a threat to the Imperium.
* BeleagueredAssistant: Crossed with HypercompetentSidekick, as he does find finds certain actions of The Emperor of Mankind frustrating. Especially with childishly frustrating, particularly his friends' constant tinkering with biomancy.
* BoomerangBigot: Lampshaded in the series as at one point when Malcador drily notes that the irony was is not lost on him as when he rants about how much he despises sorcerers despite technically being one and even being arguably the second best psyker in all of the Imperium.



* TheEngineer: Was a Titan and Knight expert if a book he sent to Roboute is anything to go by, not to mention how it was written by him of all people.
* EvilOldFolks: The Emperor at one point (without explicitly going into it) notes that Malcador has done far more heinous deeds than he has.

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* TheEngineer: Was a Titan The well-documented and Knight expert if a book researched manual describing the maintenance and operation of Knights and Titans he sent to Roboute is anything Roboute? He didn't just pull it out of thin air or ask it to go by, not to mention how be compiled from a bunch of tech-priests -- ''he wrote it was written by him of all people.
himself based on only his own knowledge.''
* EvilOldFolks: The Emperor at one point (without explicitly going into it) notes that Malcador has done far more heinous deeds things than he has.



* HypercompetentSidekick: Sports a variant of this to some degree as he is the one who handles the writing and recording of documents and aiding The Emperor in a wide variety of tasks, one in particular being the supervision of the Astronomicon's construction.
* KnightInSourArmor: In spite of being incredibly old ( not as old as Conan) and have a dour disposition, Malcador cares for humanity and seeks to ensure the survival of the race. In addition, he tutored the Twentieth Primarch to the best of his ability.
* MadeOfIron: Was able to walk away in a single piece from ''getting punted through a literal spaceship'' (though he did grouse about getting some chest pains as a result).
* MindOverMatter: Posses telekinetic powers as he is a psyker, using it to levitate a half-defunct anti-grav carrier and had intimidated The Hydra into backing down when she protest too much.

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* HypercompetentSidekick: Sports a variant of this to some degree Downplayed, as while the Emperor himself is in many way the only reason why his Imperium could be formed in the first place, Malcador's administrative skills are invaluable as he is the one who handles the writing and recording of documents and along with aiding The the Emperor in a wide variety of tasks, one in particular being the supervision of such as supervising the Astronomicon's construction.
* KnightInSourArmor: In spite of being incredibly old ( (though not as old as Conan) the Emperor) and have a dour disposition, Malcador cares for humanity and seeks to ensure the survival of the his race. In addition, he tutored the Twentieth Primarch to the best of his ability.
* MadeOfIron: Was able to walk away in a single piece from after ''getting punted through a literal spaceship'' (though he did grouse about getting some chest pains as a result).
pains).
* MindOverMatter: Posses Possesses telekinetic powers as he is a psyker, using it to levitate a half-defunct anti-grav carrier and had intimidated The Hydra into backing down when she protest too much.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: An InUniverse case; the Eighth Legion of Space Marines is almost entirely made up of [[RecruitingTheCriminal the formerly-imprisoned children of criminals and other prisoners]], and generally have an internal culture evocative of prisoners (i.e., they all seem to enjoy smoking, playing cards and drinking cheap beer while presenting themselves as hardened toughs). As such, Kassandra immediately gets off on the right foot with them by approaching them with ''lots'' of bottles of Exodite Ambrosia instead of ordering them around like a slavedriver and viewing them as equals.

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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: An InUniverse case; the Eighth Legion of Space Marines is almost entirely made up of [[RecruitingTheCriminal the formerly-imprisoned children of criminals and other prisoners]], and generally have an internal culture evocative of prisoners (i.e., they all seem to enjoy smoking, playing cards and drinking cheap beer while presenting themselves as hardened toughs). As such, Kassandra immediately gets off on the right foot with them by showing that she views them all as equals via approaching them with ''lots'' of bottles of Exodite Ambrosia instead of ordering them around like a slavedriver and viewing them as equals.slavedriver.
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* HiddenDepths: She is far more perceptive than she looks (with it being strongly implied that she uses ObfuscatingStupudity to get people to underestimate her so she can manipulate them), such as her noticing Madonna subtly using biomancy to increase her breast size. More seriously, she also seems to be the fastest of the Primarchs in terms of them all acclimating to their future purpose as generals, as seen in her [[BrutalHonesty pointing out to Athena & Hathor that death is a natural part of a soldier's life]] and how that means that she is able to shrug off the deaths of her Astartes soldiers as that is just part of the norm in war (so long as they die nobly and for a good cause, of course).

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* HiddenDepths: She is far more perceptive than she looks (with it being strongly implied that she uses ObfuscatingStupudity ObfuscatingStupidity to get people to underestimate her so she can manipulate them), such as her noticing Madonna subtly using biomancy to increase her breast size. More seriously, she also seems to be the fastest of the Primarchs in terms of them all acclimating to their future purpose as generals, as seen in her [[BrutalHonesty pointing out to Athena & Hathor that death is a natural part of a soldier's life]] and how that means that she is able to shrug off the deaths of her Astartes soldiers as that is just part of the norm in war (so long as they die nobly and for a good cause, of course).

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The alternate universe counterpart of Perturabo.

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The Primarch of the Fourth Legionas Astartes, and the alternate universe counterpart of Perturabo.



* CoolBigSis: Attempts to become one to the others as she goes and helps Kassandra get some feathers from raptors and even gives Kassandra her name.

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* CoolBigSis: Attempts to become one to the others others, as she goes and helps Kassandra get some feathers from raptors and even gives Kassandra her name.



* MachineWorship: Played with. Petra recited the litanties of the Mechanicus as a habit despite undemanding their nor really needed. On the Mechanicus side a sect has started to form around her as they have proclaimed her Blessed-By-Deus-Mechanicus

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* MachineWorship: Played with. Petra recited recites the litanties litanies of the Mechanicus as a habit despite undemanding their nor many of them are not really needed. needed, and doesn't actually worship the Omnissiah while still being fascinated by the practices and technology of the Mechanicus. On the Mechanicus side a sect has started to form around her as they have proclaimed her Blessed-By-Deus-Mechanicus"Blessed-By-Deus-Mechanicus" thanks to her being a technical prodigy.



* SurveillanceDrone: Has one in the form of a servo-skull she build herself, and she even named it.
* TerseTalker: Much like her counterpart Peturabo, Petra talks with as few words as possible. During her first meeting with Roboute, he took note of the fact that the first two sentences she ever spoke to him were single words. The third was a diss at the "the prophet" (actually himself unknown to her) who thought she would be a boy.

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* RobotBuddy: She has ''three'' different servo-skulls she programmed herself (originally donated by Karl Calculatus) that she likes to use in her everyday life.
* SurveillanceDrone: Has one in the form of a servo-skull she build herself, and she even named it.
it "Ena".
* TerseTalker: Much like her canonical counterpart of Peturabo, Petra talks with as few words as possible. During her first meeting with Roboute, he took note of the fact that the first two sentences she ever spoke to him were single words. The third was a diss at the "the prophet" (actually himself unknown to her) who thought she would be a boy.



[[folder:Kassandra Curze]]
The alternate universe counterpart of Konrad Curze.

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[[folder:Kassandra Curze]]
The
[[folder:Kassandra]]
Primarch of the Eighth Legionas Astartes, and the
alternate universe counterpart of Konrad Curze.



* AnimalMotif: Lampshaded in one chapter where she was described as a cat in power armor. Considering she likes to snuggle up to her older brother a lot and is quite good at being stealthy this holds.
* CombatPragmatist: Had to be one during her time at Nostramo, an example was when she had to leave a woman to get raped as she was too hungry and weak to help the poor woman.
* CryIntoChest: Had one when receiving kindness from Roboute. Possibly even the first time in her life.

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* AnimalMotif: AnimalMotifs: Lampshaded in one chapter canonical omake where she was is described as a cat in power armor. Considering she likes to snuggle up to her older brother a lot and is quite good at being stealthy this holds.
* CombatPragmatist: Had to be one during her time at Nostramo, an on Nostramo; a specific example was when she had to leave a woman to get raped as she was too hungry and weak to help the poor woman.
* CryIntoChest: Had one when receiving kindness from Roboute. Possibly even Roboute what was quite possibly the first time act of kindness given to her in her life.entire life.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: An InUniverse case; the Eighth Legion of Space Marines is almost entirely made up of [[RecruitingTheCriminal the formerly-imprisoned children of criminals and other prisoners]], and generally have an internal culture evocative of prisoners (i.e., they all seem to enjoy smoking, playing cards and drinking cheap beer while presenting themselves as hardened toughs). As such, Kassandra immediately gets off on the right foot with them by approaching them with ''lots'' of bottles of Exodite Ambrosia instead of ordering them around like a slavedriver and viewing them as equals.



* MagicKnight: One of her greatest advantages in battle - and one of the primary reasons for why she becomes regarded as the best duelist among her fellow sisters rescued by Roboute - is that she uses her ability to see into the future to predict her enemies' motions before they happen, making it near-impossible for properly counter her.



* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to the training, aid and (most importantly) love & support of her sisters and Roboute, she goes from a scared & near-helpless little girl to a formidable and dangerous warrior.



The alternate universe counterpart of Lorgar Aurelian.

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The Primarch of the Seventeenth Legionas Astartes, and the alternate universe counterpart of Lorgar Aurelian.



* AbusiveDad: Had the misfortune of being raised by Kor Phaeron, who abused her into growing up into an adult in seven months!

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* AbusiveDad: AbusiveParents: Had the misfortune of being raised by the Chaos-aligned religious fanatic Kor Phaeron, who abused her into growing up into an adult in seven months! within ''seven months''.



* RapeAsBackstory: One of the punishments she often received would be sexual assault. Aurelia's words indicate it was only because she knew through dreams that Roboute would come to rescue her that she didn't break.
* StepfordSmiler: Become one overtime, whenever she speaks to people who are her brother's potential enemies or not his allies and even to Morrigan because while she may have forgiven her misdeeds, she will never forget it.

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* RapeAsBackstory: One While it's thankfully only alluded to in broad strokes, one of the punishments she often received would be sexual assault. Aurelia's words indicate it was only because she knew through dreams that Roboute would come to rescue her that she didn't break.
* StepfordSmiler: Become Became one overtime, and is noted to still have the general air of "half-broken glass" whenever she speaks to people who are her brother's potential enemies or not his allies and even to Morrigan Morrigan. This is because while she may have forgiven her misdeeds, "misdeeds," she will never forget it.



The alternate universe counterpart of Mortarion.

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The Primarch of the Fourteenth Legionas Astartes, and the alternate universe counterpart of Mortarion.



* AbusiveDad: Not as bad as Kor Phaeron but her father was a Chaos-worshipping alien sorcerer who used to subject her to his experimentation.

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* AbusiveDad: AbusiveParents: Not as bad as Kor Phaeron Phaeron, but her adoptive father was still a Chaos-worshipping alien sorcerer who used to subject her to his experimentation.



* TheAtoner: She first fought for Barbarus against the hordes of her evil sorcerous adoptive father since she wanted to atone for indirectly helping in the subjugation of their people by acting as one of his agents. Furthermore, she's made it a major goal of her to forever make up for [[spoiler:nearly getting both herself and Roboute killed when she tried to kill the last Chaos sorcerer on Barbarus alone even when it was clear the planet was about to turn into a Daemon World]].



* OddFriendship: She forms an odd camaraderie with Fulgrim when they meet on Bastonne and attend a Harlequin theater production together.



* SinisterScythe: Her primary weapon when she started out helping the people of Barbarus was a beaten-up old farming scythe. She later gets a far better war-scythe made of wraithbone courtesy of the Exodites.



* VictoryByEndurance: Lofn observes during a duel that Morrigan relies on the Primarchs' inherent MadeOfIron nature more so than their fellow sisters, often tanking direct attacks and defeating her foes through wearing them down to the point of exhaustion.



The alternate universe counterpart of Angron.

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The Primarch of the Twelfth Legionas Astartes, and the alternate universe counterpart of Angron.



* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago when he was UsefulNotes/AlexanderTheGreat and [[Myth/KingArthur Sir Gawain]], was called St. George, once knew [[Myth/NorseMythology an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir]], and once [[Myth/KingArthur served a king who had a fine-looking sword and whose kingdom fell to the bastard spawn of two sorceresses]]. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was either him or he at least knew them personally.

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* JuliusBeethovenDaVinci: He was [[spoiler:Conan the Barbarian]]. He destroyed Atlantis. He fondly remembers a lover from when he was a pharaoh, revels in memories of slaying the Nemean Lion, and smiles about that trick with an enchanted sword in stone. He named his spaceship Bucephalus and jetbike Gringolet after his horses from long ago when he was UsefulNotes/AlexanderTheGreat and [[Myth/KingArthur [[Literature/SirGawainAndTheGreenKnight Sir Gawain]], was called St. George, once knew [[Myth/NorseMythology an old one-eyed man who named his spear Gungnir]], and once [[Myth/KingArthur served a king who had a fine-looking sword and whose kingdom fell to the bastard spawn of two sorceresses]]. Pick a notable character in human history or myths, and you have a good chance that it was either him or he at least knew them personally.



The prototype basis for the Primarchs and one of the Imperiums' greatest killing machines.

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The prototype basis for the Primarchs and one of the Imperiums' Imperium's greatest killing machines.



* ActionGirl: By the time she was discovered she was already pushing three meters tall and had a muscled build to match, and unlike Aurelia (who's growth was forced by her horrific conditions), she had plenty of fighting experience as a gang member to back it up. She spends much of her time training after being discovered.
* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: As a member of a violent gang, Hathor is rather crass and her choice of weapons reflect in this, choosing to use a mace as her weapon of choice.
* CommonalityConnection: Like her canon self, Hathor bonds over Lofn, the Sixth Primarch and even connected with the Tenth Primarch, Athena through sparring matches as they are all warriors at heart.

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* ActionGirl: By the time she was discovered she was already pushing three meters tall and had a muscled build to match, and unlike Aurelia (who's (whose growth was forced by her horrific conditions), she had plenty of fighting experience as a gang member to back it up. She spends much of her time training after being discovered.
* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: As a (former) member of a violent gang, Hathor is starts out rather crass and her choice choices of weapons reflect in this, choosing to use a mace as seen in her primary weapon of choice.
being a mace.
* CommonalityConnection: Like her canon self, Hathor bonds over with Lofn, the Sixth Primarch Primarch, and even connected connects with the Tenth Primarch, Athena Athena, through sparring matches as they are all warriors at heart.



* HasAType: Implied. Hathor prefers cute-looking boys.

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* HasAType: Implied. Hathor Implied in how, much like Lofn, she apparently prefers "[[PrettyBoy cute-looking boys.boys]]".



* SpitTake: Hathor had one when learning Madonna uses biomancy to increase her breast size out of BreastEnvy.

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* PoirotSpeak: It's subtle and primarily restricted to her internal monologues, but whenever she gets frustrated her speech transitions back to her native accent as a "ganger" on Cthonia and her dialogue becomes peppered in FutureSlang.
-->'''Hathor's Narration:''' ''(on her Space Marine Legion)'' Luna Wolves, apparently they got the name from some people they killed back on Terra's moon, Luna. It was a pretty preem name, she liked it.
* SpitTake: Hathor had has one when learning from Lofn that Madonna uses biomancy to increase her breast size out of BreastEnvy.



* BigBrotherInstinct: In her case, Big sister instinct as Fulgrim had tasked herself to watch over Madonna and Danu as the two are the younger than most of their sister with the exception of Atalanta who is still a baby.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: In Or at least in her case, Big sister instinct ''Sister'' Instinct as Fulgrim had has tasked herself to watch over Madonna and Danu as the two are the younger than most of their sister with sisters (with the exception of Atalanta Atalanta, who is still a baby.baby).



* GirlyGirlwithaTomboystreak: Plays up her femininity and wearing Terran fashions, but still is interested in mechanics.

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* GirlyGirlwithaTomboystreak: GirlyGirlWithATomboyStreak: Plays up her femininity and wearing Terran fashions, but still is interested in mechanics.



* RedOniBlueOni: Is the Blue Oni to her sister, Danu's red as she is more shy than Danu.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: As a result of the harsh environment of Chemos, Fulgrim's figure is close to that of a full grown adult woman despite being four years old.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Is the Blue Oni to her sister, Danu's red as she is red, being far more shy than Danu.
her.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: As a result of the harsh environment of Chemos, Fulgrim's figure is close to that of a full grown adult woman despite being chronologically four years old.



[[folder: Madonna the Magnificent]]
Primarch of the Fifteen Legiones Astartes, and the alternate universe counterpart of Magnus the Red.

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[[folder: Madonna [[folder:Madonna the Magnificent]]
Primarch of the Fifteen Fifteenth Legiones Astartes, and the alternate universe counterpart of Magnus the Red.



* {{Chuunibyou}}:She introduces herself as ''"She who has mastered all [Prospero] had to teach in a single year! Greatest prodigy and sorcerer of Prospero! She who will one day master all psychic arts!"'' while hyping up her tutors in the same way, and wearing a blindfold that only covers one eye.

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* {{Chuunibyou}}:She {{Chuunibyou}}: She introduces herself as ''"She who has mastered all [Prospero] had to teach in a single year! Greatest prodigy and sorcerer of Prospero! She who will one day master all psychic arts!"'' while hyping up her tutors in the same way, and wearing a blindfold that only covers one eye.



[[folder: Lofn Russ]]

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[[folder: Lofn Russ]]Lofn]]



* BrutalHonesty: A downplayed case as Lofn, after much spending time with the Clan of Russ, has come to the conclusion of seeing things and call them for what they are instead of just listening to the words of others.

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* BrutalHonesty: A downplayed case as Lofn, after much spending much time with the Clan of Russ, has come to the conclusion of seeing things and call them for what they are instead of just listening to the words of others.



* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Upon learning she had been using plant life known for its' poison that could kill a man, she decides to add more to spice up the drink.

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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Upon learning she had been using plant life known for its' its poison that could kill a man, man as an ingredient in her moonshine, she decides to add more ''more'' to spice up the drink.drink.
* GargleBlaster: "Mjod", the version of Fenrisan ale she shares with her sisters and genesons. Since she couldn't find all of the exact ingredients aboard the ''Bucephalus'', she incorporated a type of pink flower she discovered... which, unbeknownst to her, are used to create highly lethal contact-poison, Apparently, Mjod so potent that it was able to knock several ''Space Wolf Marines'' unconscious and Hathor describes it as the first drink she's ever had that actually burned her throat.



* HiddenDepths: She is far more perceptive than she looks (with it being strongly implied that she uses ObfuscatingStupudity to get people to underestimate her so she can manipulate them), such as her noticing Madonna subtly using biomancy to increase her breast size. More seriously, she also seems to be the fastest of the Primarchs in terms of them all acclimating to their future purpose as generals, as seen in her [[BrutalHonesty pointing out to Danu & Hathor that death is a natural part of a soldier's life]] and how that means that she is able to shrug off the deaths of her Astartes soldiers as that is just part of the norm in war (so long as they die nobly and for a good cause, of course).

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* HiddenDepths: She is far more perceptive than she looks (with it being strongly implied that she uses ObfuscatingStupudity to get people to underestimate her so she can manipulate them), such as her noticing Madonna subtly using biomancy to increase her breast size. More seriously, she also seems to be the fastest of the Primarchs in terms of them all acclimating to their future purpose as generals, as seen in her [[BrutalHonesty pointing out to Danu Athena & Hathor that death is a natural part of a soldier's life]] and how that means that she is able to shrug off the deaths of her Astartes soldiers as that is just part of the norm in war (so long as they die nobly and for a good cause, of course).course).
* AMotherToHerMen: Has shades of this, what with her boasting of her Legion's accomplishments during the Scouring of Barbarus being basically presented as being akin to a proud mother boasting about her children passing a difficult test at school. Below is how she describes her thoughts to Athena and Hathor when she's sharing her home-brewed Mjod.
-->'''Lofn:''' My boys went down [to Barbarus] and fought bravely, and the ones that died went down with weapons in hand and honor intact. That's all I could reasonably ask them to do. ''[grins boisterously at Hathor]'' So if you feel like feeling bad over them, do me a favor and drink up instead so we can get to the part where I boast on their behalf for a few hours.



* RefugeInAudacity: Her first reaction to seeing her The Emperor was to comment that he's "a great big fucker".
* TellMeHowYouFight: Can analyze a opponent based on their fighting style. As an example, she could tell from only two sparring sessions that Morrigan is used to pain and prefers VictorybyEndurance, while Kassandra spends a lot of time in ambient danger.

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* RefugeInAudacity: Her first reaction to seeing her The Emperor was to comment that he's "a great big fucker".
fucker". Thankfully, instead of infuriating him, this made him [[ActuallyPrettyFunny burst into laughter]].
* TellMeHowYouFight: Can quickly analyze a opponent based on their fighting style. As an example, she could tell from only two sparring sessions that Morrigan is used to pain and prefers VictorybyEndurance, while Kassandra spends a lot of time in ambient danger.



* MeaningfulName: The First was named after a famous ancient Terran huntress and the young Primarch was created as the ideal warrior, using The Emperor's memories of his life as a hunter of beast.

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* MeaningfulName: The First was named after a famous ancient Terran huntress heroine and huntswoman from Greek mythology, and the young Primarch was created as the ideal warrior, using warrior through The Emperor's memories of his life as a hunter of beast.beasts.



* CrazyPrepared: Athena set up multiple outposts, each one having a different purpose.
* CommonalityConnection: Finds one in Hathor and Lofn as the three enjoys sparring with one another.

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* AgonyOfTheFeet: As she heads back to one of her hideouts following her hunt of a scorpion metalbeast, she's briefly forced to run over molten lava... while wearing heavy iron boots. Thankfully, she's able to survive, but the sheer pain she experiences as she loses almost all of the first two layers of skin on her feet is enough to make even a Primarch like her grit her teeth and almost scream.
* CrazyPrepared: Athena set up multiple outposts, outposts all over Medusa, each one having a different purpose.
purpose to help her survive on the planet.
* CommonalityConnection: Finds one in Hathor and Lofn as the three enjoys enjoy sparring with one another.



* HunterOfMonsters: Not to the same extent as her canon counterpart but Athena showcased her strength and cunning when facing one of the mechanical beast of Medusa.

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* HunterOfMonsters: Not to the same extent as her canon counterpart counterpart, but Athena has showcased her strength and cunning when facing one of the mechanical beast beasts of Medusa.Medusa. Her introductory chapter even features her killing a huge mechanical scorpion just so she can get some higher quality metal for crafting a new sword.


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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: A more positive case mixed with TaughtByExperience; when she's trying to comfort Hathor following the Scouring of Barbarus and her "older sister" is grieving over the loss of many of her soldiers, Athena simply muses aloud that while her own forces took hideous losses, that's to be expected when fighting a new foe for the first time in a war and next time they fight a force similar to the Nurglite daemons, her soldiers will know how to properly fight against such a force and will triumph and emerge even stronger than before.
* NotSoAboveItAll: While she spends most of her time as TheStoic, she cracks a smile when Lofn's reaction to learning that the [[GargleBlaster Mjod]] she'd brewed contains highly lethal poison is [[ViolationOfCommonSense to decide]] it needs ''more'' poison to "[[ComicallyMissingThePoint give it more of a kick]]".
* TheStoic: Much like Danu Dorn, Athena is a quiet sort (though less laconic) and more often than not doesn't show any emotion.

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