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* AudienceSurrogate: She introduces Dr. Strange's new academy to the audience.
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* AudienceSurrogate: She introduces Dr. Strange's new academy to the audience. We actually see why she receives an invitation to join and being magically escorted by an Academy staff member to the school in New Orleans.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently with the group and has an occasional line or two but little else. The current depth of his character is that he's a young giant, with blue skin, and white facial tattoos. Because of his giant size, he is usually shown looking in through a window because he's too big for the classroom.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was has very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently with the group and has an occasional line or two but little else. The current depth of his character is that he's a young giant, with blue skin, and white facial tattoos. Because of his giant size, he is usually shown looking in through a window because he's too big for the classroom.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently with the group and has some dialog. The current depth of his character is that he's a foster child moved from one home to another, has a good appetite, and an enchanted jacket that seems to be bonded with him but we have no idea of its capabilities. He figures his stint in the Strange Academy will be yet another short-lived foster experience so he's determined to enjoy it while it lasts.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was has very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently shown with the group and has some dialog. The current depth of his character is that he's a foster child moved from one home to another, has a good appetite, and an enchanted jacket that seems to be bonded with him but we have no idea of its capabilities. He figures his stint in the Strange Academy will be yet another short-lived foster experience so he's determined to enjoy it while it lasts.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently with the group and has an occasional line or two but little else. The current depth of his character is that he has a father and mother, comes from Guanajuato Mexico, identifies himself as a Nahual, and can project magical energy constructs of various animals. Little more than this is known and even this information wasn't introduced until Issue#5
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was has very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently shown with the group and has an occasional line or two but little else. The current depth of his character is that he has a father and mother, comes from Guanajuato Mexico, identifies himself as a Nahual, and can project magical energy constructs of various animals. Little more than this is known and even this information wasn't introduced until Issue#5
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently with the group but never speaks. The current depth of his character is that he comes from swamplands of Weird World, is a Crystal Warrior / Man-Thing hybrid and likes swimming.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was has very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently shown with the group but never speaks. The current depth of his character is that he comes from the swamplands of Weird World, is a Crystal Warrior / Man-Thing hybrid and likes swimming.
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[[folder: German Aguilar]]
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[[folder: German Germán Aguilar]]
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* TheVoiceless: We have yet to see him actually talk in the comics, but his roommate, Germán, once indicated that Toth wanted to see the different animal spirits he could project implying that he has some means of communicating.
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While he does have a Man-Thing-ish face, he is not hideous and his body is appropriately formed.
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* BodyHorror: As per the norm for someone from Man-Thing’s realm.
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Is a Nahual which in Mesoamerican mythology is any person with the power to transform him or herself into an animal. In German's case, he expresses more of a magical energy construct of the animal rather than a physical version.
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Is a Nahual which in Mesoamerican mythology is any person with the power to transform him or herself into an animal. In German's case, he expresses more of a magical energy construct of the animal rather than a physical version. It is unknown whether he can form any animal or whether it is limited to the animals associated with his culture.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently with the group and has an occasional line or two but little else. The current depth of his character is that he has a father and mother, comes from Guanajuato Mexico, identifies himself as a Nahual, and can project magical energy constructs of various animals. Little more than this is known and even this information wasn't introduced until Issue#5
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* OnlyOneName: His last name hasn't been revealed yet.
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* FlatCharacter: While he is one of the core eleven students he was very little characterization or backstory. He is frequently with the group and has an occasional line or two but little else. The current depth of his character is that he's a young giant, with blue skin, and white facial tattoos. Because of his giant size, he is usually shown looking in through a window because he's too big for the classroom.
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* TheQuietOne: Really doesn't say much.
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* TheQuietOne: Really doesn't say much.much but is quite polite when he does talk.
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* ButtMonkey: Iric. If there is an irritable teacher to banish you to some hell dimension, or a strange beast to eat you and then vomit you up, he's the person that will happen to. Given he's a smug asshole people aren't that likely to sympathise with him either.
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* ButtMonkey: Iric. If there is an irritable teacher to banish you to some hell dimension, or a strange beast to [[GettingEatenIsHarmless eat you and then vomit you up, up]], he's the person that will happen to. Given he's a smug asshole people aren't that likely to sympathise with him either.
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I thought I would put these events in chronological order.
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* ButtMonkey: Iric. If there is a strange beast to eat you and then vomit you up, or an irritable teacher to banish you to some hell dimension, he's the person that will happen to. Given he's a smug asshole people aren't that likely to sympathise with him either.
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* ButtMonkey: Iric. If there is a strange beast to eat you and then vomit you up, or an irritable teacher to banish you to some hell dimension, or a strange beast to eat you and then vomit you up, he's the person that will happen to. Given he's a smug asshole people aren't that likely to sympathise with him either.
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* PolarOppositeTwins: Although identical twins, Alvi is a ({{Nerd}}) and Iric is a (JerkJock).
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* PolarOppositeTwins: Although identical twins, Alvi is a ({{Nerd}}) {{Nerd}} and Iric is a (JerkJock). JerkJock.
* ButtMonkey: Iric. If there is a strange beast to eat you and then vomit you up, or an irritable teacher to banish you to some hell dimension, he's the person that will happen to. Given he's a smug asshole people aren't that likely to sympathise with him either.
* ButtMonkey: Iric. If there is a strange beast to eat you and then vomit you up, or an irritable teacher to banish you to some hell dimension, he's the person that will happen to. Given he's a smug asshole people aren't that likely to sympathise with him either.
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* BackFromTheDead: He is killed by a group of magical tree people known as "The Hollow" in issue #6 but Emily unintentionally brings him back to life with a kiss in the following issue.
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* BackFromTheDead: He is killed by a group of magical tree people known as "The Hollow" in issue #6 but Emily unintentionally brings him he is brought back to life with a kiss in the following issue.
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We don't know enough about how/why Doyle came back to life yet. Need to hold off pronouncing Emily an active agent in the resurrection until more info is revealed.
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* HealingHands: She is apparently good at healing, to the point where she is able to unintentionally bring Doyle back to life with a kiss. In effect she pulled off ''a resurrection '''by accident!'''''
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* HealingHands: She is apparently good at healing, to the point where has some ability with healing. When her dog, Emma, is hit by a car she is able to unintentionally bring Doyle back to life with a kiss. In effect push death away and heal Emma. However, the experience left her hurting deep inside more than she pulled off ''a resurrection '''by accident!'''''ever felt so it's not yet clear that she knows what she's doing.
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* HealingHands: She is apparently good at healing, to the point where she is able to unintentionally bring Doyle back to life with a kiss. In effect she pulled off ''a resurrection '''by accident!'''''
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* BackFromTheDead: He is killed by a group of magical tree people known as "The Hollow" in issue #6 but Emily unintentionally brings him back to life with a kiss in the following issue.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: She's got pink skin.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: She's got pink skin. With hair and features that imply that her dad was probably black.
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* MalignedMixedMarriage: Fairies aren't supposed to fall in love and have children with humans. So Shaylee's mom was forced by the council to break up with her dad and he obeyed the ruling to give their daughter the best life he could.
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revised description and it's not a longcoat it's more a baseball / pilot jacket and actually looks a little goofy on Calvin right now since it's so much bigger than his young physique.
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A runaway kid gifted with magical power.
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* BadassLongcoat: His enchanted leather jacket.
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She's talented but also shown struggling with some of her studies. With only 7 issues, She's not yet established herself as an Ace.
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* MeaningfulName: Her last name is Bright and she's considered TheAce when it comes to magical prowess.
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* MeaningfulName: Her last name is Bright and she's considered TheAce when it comes to generally does well in her magical prowess.studies.
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Emily is talented but she's just commended on her creativity in solving a particular problem and evaluated as an overall ace.
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* TheAce: Is commended by Wanda Maximoff on her ability.
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* TheQuietOne: Really doesn't say much.
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* JerkJock: They are arrogant and imperious.
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* JerkJock: They are arrogant PolarOppositeTwins: Although identical twins, Alvi is a ({{Nerd}}) and imperious.Iric is a (JerkJock).
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[[folder: Guslaug]]
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[[folder: Guslaug]]Guslaug aka "Gus"]]
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* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Is this for Zoe, keeping her undead nature secret from the other students.]]
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* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Is this for Zoe, keeping her undead nature secret DarkSecret from the other students.]]students.
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A Nahual.
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:She's actually undead, using a necklace to appear normal.]]
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:She's DarkSecret: While personal mystery abounds among the students of the academy, Zoe's goes pretty deep in that [[spoiler:she's actually undead, using a an enchanted necklace to appear normal.]]as a normal, living girl.]] Ironically, it doesn't remain a secret very long as it is revealed to reader and then the rest of her classmates within the first few issues.
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* CuteGiant: Unlike the brutish-looking adult giants, Gus looks friendly and pleasant.
* GentleGiant: He's the biggest of the students but a pretty nice guy.
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* CuteGiant: Unlike the brutish-looking adult giants, Gus looks has a friendly and pleasant.
pleasant face and is almost always smiling.
* GentleGiant: He'sthe biggest of the students a literal Giant but a pretty nice nice, even-tempered guy.
* GentleGiant: He's
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I started reading the comic because I liked Gus. But so far he has received very little character development so this trope really isn't in play yet.
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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Frost Giants are usually brutish and antagonistic, but he's a pretty friendly guy.
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[[folder: Alvi and Iric]]
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[[folder: Alvi and Iric]]Iric Brorson]]
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[[folder: German]]
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[[folder: German]]German Aguilar]]
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* CutGiant: Unlike the brutish-looking adult giants, Gus looks friendly and pleasant.
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* CutGiant: CuteGiant: Unlike the brutish-looking adult giants, Gus looks friendly and pleasant.
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Dormammu's son, come to train at the Academy.
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Dormammu's son, come who comes to train at the Academy.
* BadassLongcoat: His enchanted leather jacket.
* InTheHood: Wears a hoodie underneath his magical jacket.
* InTheHood: Wears a hoodie underneath his magical jacket.
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* AstralProjection: As a Nahual, Germán is able to enter the animage state, in which he can create animal projections.
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* AstralProjection: As a Nahual, Germán is able to enter the animage state, in which he can create animal projections.projections.
* OnlyOneName: His last name hasn't been revealed yet.
* OnlyOneName: His last name hasn't been revealed yet.
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A hybrid creature from Weirdworld. He was one of the first students of Strange Academy and he had Germán as his roommate.
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A hybrid creature from Weirdworld. He was one of the first students of Strange Academy and he had Germán as his roommate.
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* AudienceSurrogate: She introduces Dr. Strange's new academy to the audience.
* MeaningfulName: Her last name is Bright and she's considered TheAce when it comes to magical prowess.
* MeaningfulName: Her last name is Bright and she's considered TheAce when it comes to magical prowess.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: She's got pink skin.
* HalfHumanHybrid: She's half-fairy.
* HumanMomNonHumanDad: Inverted, her mother is a fairy while her father was a man from Brooklyn.
* WingedHumanoid: As expected from a fairy, she has wings that allow her to fly.
* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: She's got pink skin.
* HalfHumanHybrid: She's half-fairy.
* HumanMomNonHumanDad: Inverted, her mother is a fairy while her father was a man from Brooklyn.
* WingedHumanoid: As expected from a fairy, she has wings that allow her to fly.
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Two Asgardians come to train at the Academy.
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Two Asgardians who come to train at the Academy.
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* CutGiant: Unlike the brutish-looking adult giants, Gus looks friendly and pleasant.
* GentleGiant: He's the biggest of the students but a pretty nice guy.
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Frost Giants are usually brutish and antagonistic, but he's a pretty friendly guy.
* CutGiant: Unlike the brutish-looking adult giants, Gus looks friendly and pleasant.
* GentleGiant: He's the biggest of the students but a pretty nice guy.
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Frost Giants are usually brutish and antagonistic, but he's a pretty friendly guy.
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Dormammu’s son, come to train at the Academy.
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* IAmNotMyFather: He greatly fears turning out just like his father.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: He's Dormammu's son, who's Dr. Strange's archenemy and who was married to his cousin Clea.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: He's Dormammu's son, who's Dr. Strange's archenemy and who was married to his cousin Clea.
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:]][[spoiler:She's actually undead, using a necklace to appear normal.]]
* DreadlockRasta: Her hair is full of dreadlocks.
* DreadlockRasta: Her hair is full of dreadlocks.
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[[folder: Dessy]]Despair "Dessy"]]
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* AstralProjection: As a Nahual, Germán is able to enter the animage state, in which he can create animal projections.
* PowerTattoo: His body is covered in markings that signify his Nahual powers.
* AstralProjection: As a Nahual, Germán is able to enter the animage state, in which he can create animal projections.
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A hybrid creature from Weirdworld.
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A hybrid creature from Weirdworld.
Weirdworld. He was one of the first students of Strange Academy and he had Germán as his roommate.
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* GemstoneAssault: Toth has the natural ability to generate, shape and manipulate crystals
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* GemstoneAssault: Toth has the natural ability to generate, shape and manipulate crystals
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This is a list of the students at Strange Academy.
[[folder: Emily Bright]]
TheAce: Is commended by Wanda Maximoff on her ability.
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[[folder: Shaylee Moonpeddle]]
A fairy-human hybrid who becomes Emily’s roommate.
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[[folder: Alvi and Iric]]
Two Asgardians come to train at the Academy.
* JerkJock: They are arrogant and imperious.
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[[folder: Guslaug]]
A Frost Giant sent to train at the Academy on Loki’s recommendation.
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[[folder: Doyle Dormammu]]
Dormammu’s son, come to train at the Academy.
* FlamingHair: Inherits his father’s fiery facial features.
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[[folder: Zoe Laveau]]
* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:]]
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[[folder: Calvin Morse]]
A runaway kid gifted with magical power.
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[[folder: Dessy]]
A young demoness.
* HornedHumanoid
* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Is this for Zoe.]]
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[[folder: German]]
A Nahual.
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[[folder: Toth]]
A hybrid creature from Weirdworld.
* BodyHorror: As per the norm for someone from Man-Thing’s realm.
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[[folder: Emily Bright]]
TheAce: Is commended by Wanda Maximoff on her ability.
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[[folder: Shaylee Moonpeddle]]
A fairy-human hybrid who becomes Emily’s roommate.
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[[folder: Alvi and Iric]]
Two Asgardians come to train at the Academy.
* JerkJock: They are arrogant and imperious.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Guslaug]]
A Frost Giant sent to train at the Academy on Loki’s recommendation.
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[[folder: Doyle Dormammu]]
Dormammu’s son, come to train at the Academy.
* FlamingHair: Inherits his father’s fiery facial features.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Zoe Laveau]]
* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Calvin Morse]]
A runaway kid gifted with magical power.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Dessy]]
A young demoness.
* HornedHumanoid
* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Is this for Zoe.]]
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[[folder: German]]
A Nahual.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Toth]]
A hybrid creature from Weirdworld.
* BodyHorror: As per the norm for someone from Man-Thing’s realm.
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