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The sporty tomboy of the group,
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The sporty tomboy of the group,
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* ICouldaBeenAContender: In high school, she was the best swimmer on the team, on track to go to the Olympics if she'd wanted to. [[spoiler:She gave it up after the car accident, partly due to the trauma hurting her performance, and partly to help Takayaki cope with his PTSD. Even though she loves Takayaki, she never truly learns to cope with the loss.]]
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* ICouldaBeenAContender: In high school, she was the best swimmer on the team, on track to go to the Olympics if she'd wanted to. [[spoiler:She gave it up after the car accident, partly due to the trauma hurting her performance, and partly to help Takayaki Takayuki cope with his PTSD. Even though she loves Takayaki, Takayuki, she never truly learns to cope with the loss.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Holding up Takayaki so he could buy her a ring (when he was supposed to meet with Haruka for a date) left her saddled with a good deal of guilt after the accident.
* MatchmakerCrush: Initially set up Haruka with Takayaki, even though she had a crush on him for a long time.
* StepfordSmiler: After the accident. She tries desperately to present herself as aloof and put-together, and to pretend nothing is unusual about her relationship with Takayaki. [[spoiler:It's no surprise that when Haruka wakes up, she breaks under the pressure.]]
* MatchmakerCrush: Initially set up Haruka with Takayaki, even though she had a crush on him for a long time.
* StepfordSmiler: After the accident. She tries desperately to present herself as aloof and put-together, and to pretend nothing is unusual about her relationship with Takayaki. [[spoiler:It's no surprise that when Haruka wakes up, she breaks under the pressure.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Holding up Takayaki Takayuki so he could buy her a ring (when he was supposed to meet with Haruka for a date) left her saddled with a good deal of guilt after the accident.
* MatchmakerCrush: Initially set up Haruka withTakayaki, Takayuki, even though she had a crush on him for a long time.
* StepfordSmiler: After the accident. She tries desperately to present herself as aloof and put-together, and to pretend nothing is unusual about her relationship withTakayaki.Takayuki. [[spoiler:It's no surprise that when Haruka wakes up, she breaks under the pressure.]]
* MatchmakerCrush: Initially set up Haruka with
* StepfordSmiler: After the accident. She tries desperately to present herself as aloof and put-together, and to pretend nothing is unusual about her relationship with
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* BrokenPedestal: [[spoiler:Akane looked up to Mitsuki because Mitsuki was also a competitive swimmer, and she regularly called Takayaki "onii-chan". But after the accident, she walked in on Mitsuki naked in Takayaki's bed, and was infuriated with them for years.]]
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* BrokenPedestal: [[spoiler:Akane looked up to Mitsuki because Mitsuki was also a competitive swimmer, and she regularly called Takayaki Takayuki "onii-chan". But after the accident, she walked in on Mitsuki naked in Takayaki's Takayuki's bed, and was infuriated with them for years.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Do ''not'' mess with his friends. [[spoiler:He fought the man trying to take a drunken Mitsuki to a love hotel and punched Takayaki in the face for not noticing Mitsuki's pain.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Do ''not'' mess with his friends. [[spoiler:He fought the man trying to take a drunken Mitsuki to a love hotel and punched Takayaki Takayuki in the face for not noticing Mitsuki's pain.]]
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An abrasive, mouthy coworker at the restaurant Takayaki works at.
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An abrasive, mouthy coworker at the restaurant Takayaki Takayuki works at.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Most of the time. She's not above giving customers attitude and regularly insults Takayaki to his face.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Most of the time. She's not above giving customers attitude and regularly insults Takayaki Takayuki to his face.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety (the ''very'' character [[https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%84%E3%83%B3%E3%83%87%E3%83%AC for which the term "tsundere" was invented, in fact]]). She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety (the ''very'' character [[https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%84%E3%83%B3%E3%83%87%E3%83%AC for which the term "tsundere" was invented, in fact]]). She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki Takayuki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* IllGirl: After she wakes up from the coma. [[spoiler:She can't walk on her own, becomes feverish easily, and falls unconscious again after she discovers it's been three years since the accident.]]
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You Gotta Have Blue Hair is no longer a trope.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Her blue hair stands out in comparison to the rest of the cast.
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* GenkiGirl: Before the accident.
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-->'''Voiced by:''' Kyoko Yoshida (Japanese), Creator/MonicaRial (English)
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-->'''Voiced by:''' Kyoko Yoshida Creator/KozueYoshizumi (Japanese), Creator/MonicaRial (English)
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety ([[https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%84%E3%83%B3%E3%83%87%E3%83%AC the ''very'' character for which the term "tsundere" was invented, in fact]]). She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety ([[https://ja.(the ''very'' character [[https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%84%E3%83%B3%E3%83%87%E3%83%AC the ''very'' character for which the term "tsundere" was invented, in fact]]). She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety ([[https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%84%E3%83%B3%E3%83%87%E3%83%AC the very character for which the term "tsundere" was invented, in fact]]). She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety ([[https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%84%E3%83%B3%E3%83%87%E3%83%AC the very ''very'' character for which the term "tsundere" was invented, in fact]]). She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety. She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety.variety ([[https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%84%E3%83%B3%E3%83%87%E3%83%AC the very character for which the term "tsundere" was invented, in fact]]). She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* ICouldaBeenaContender!: In high school, she was the best swimmer on the team, on track to go to the Olympics if she'd wanted to.[[spoiler:She gave it up after the car accident, partly due to the trauma hurting her performance, and partly to help Takayaki cope with his PTSD. Even though she loves Takayaki, she never truly learns to cope with the loss.]]
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* ICouldaBeenaContender!: ICouldaBeenAContender: In high school, she was the best swimmer on the team, on track to go to the Olympics if she'd wanted to.to. [[spoiler:She gave it up after the car accident, partly due to the trauma hurting her performance, and partly to help Takayaki cope with his PTSD. Even though she loves Takayaki, she never truly learns to cope with the loss.]]
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The protagonist of the series. He began dating Haruka in high school, but fell apart after the car accident. Three years later, he's in a relationship with Mitsuki when he gets a call that Haruka is awake.
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* MessOfWoe: After Haruka's accident, he develops PTSD, and he and his apartment are visibly in shambles. [[spoiler:Reoccurs to a lesser extent when Mitsuki stops coming over.]]
* TragicDropout: The accident took such a mental toll on him that he gave up on university entrance exams and dropped out of high school, taking a part-time job at a restaurant instead.
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A shy girl with a love for picture books, she ends up in a car accident in her senior year of high school and is left in a coma for three years.
* AngstComa: [[spoiler:She falls unconscious again once Akane tells her that it's been three years since the accident.]]
* AngstComa: [[spoiler:She falls unconscious again once Akane tells her that it's been three years since the accident.]]
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* IllGirl: After she wakes up from the coma. [[spoiler:She can't walk on her own, becomes feverish easily, and falls unconscious again after she discovers it's been three years since the accident.]]
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: She spent three years in a coma, and the doctor's advice was to pretend no time had passed at all. [[spoiler:It doesn't end well when she realizes the truth.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: As a high-schooler, she's extremely shy and can be a bit of a doormat. [[spoiler:She gets better after she wakes up, though she's never quite as outgoing as her sister.]]
* TimeSkip: In-universe for her. She wakes up from her coma after three years. Unfortunately, she doesn't realize any time has passed at all.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: She spent three years in a coma, and the doctor's advice was to pretend no time had passed at all. [[spoiler:It doesn't end well when she realizes the truth.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: As a high-schooler, she's extremely shy and can be a bit of a doormat. [[spoiler:She gets better after she wakes up, though she's never quite as outgoing as her sister.]]
* TimeSkip: In-universe for her. She wakes up from her coma after three years. Unfortunately, she doesn't realize any time has passed at all.
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* AnimeHair: DAMN, that is some crazy hair, Mitsuki.
** She cut it short later though.
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* AnimeHair:
* GenkiGirl: Before the accident, she's quite high-spirited and rowdy.
* ICouldaBeenaContender!: In high school, she was the best swimmer on the team, on track to go to the Olympics if she'd wanted to.[[spoiler:She gave it up after the car accident, partly due to the trauma hurting her performance, and partly to help Takayaki cope with his PTSD. Even though she loves Takayaki, she never truly learns to cope with the loss.]]
* ImportantHaircut: The ponytail is a relic of high school. By adulthood, she's cut her hair short.
* ItsAllMyFault: Holding up Takayaki so he could buy her a ring (when he was supposed to meet with Haruka for a date) left her saddled with a good deal of guilt after the accident.
* MatchmakerCrush: Initially set up Haruka with Takayaki, even though she had a crush on him for a long time.
* StepfordSmiler: After the accident. She tries desperately to present herself as aloof and put-together, and to pretend nothing is unusual about her relationship with Takayaki. [[spoiler:It's no surprise that
** She cut it short later though.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Her blue hair stands out in comparison to the rest of the cast.
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Haruka's younger sister, and an up-and-coming swimmer.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: As a middle-schooler, she's not particularly nice. She regularly tricks Haruka into watching horror movies with her and likes to bother whoever Haruka is with at a given moment.
* BrokenPedestal: [[spoiler:Akane looked up to Mitsuki because Mitsuki was also a competitive swimmer, and she regularly called Takayaki "onii-chan". But after the accident, she walked in on Mitsuki naked in Takayaki's bed, and was infuriated with them for years.]]
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: As a middle-schooler, she's not particularly nice. She regularly tricks Haruka into watching horror movies with her and likes to bother whoever Haruka is with at a given moment.
* BrokenPedestal: [[spoiler:Akane looked up to Mitsuki because Mitsuki was also a competitive swimmer, and she regularly called Takayaki "onii-chan". But after the accident, she walked in on Mitsuki naked in Takayaki's bed, and was infuriated with them for years.]]
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* NamesTheSame: Oh, sorry. Were you looking [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion for]] [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight these]] [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Shinjis?]]
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* NamesTheSame: Oh, sorry. Were you looking [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion for]] [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight these]] [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Shinjis?]]
BewareTheNiceOnes: Do ''not'' mess with his friends. [[spoiler:He fought the man trying to take a drunken Mitsuki to a love hotel and punched Takayaki in the face for not noticing Mitsuki's pain.]]
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* {{Catchphrase}}: "You can go step in cat crap!"
* {{Jerkass}}: Most of the time. She's not above giving customers attitude and regularly insults Takayaki to his face.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Of the Type A variety. She's quite abrasive to everyone, including customers. [[spoiler:But it's thanks to her that Takayaki can get a new copy of Mayaru's Gift.]]
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* TomboyishPonytail: [[TomboyAndGirlyGirl Mitsuki is a sporty, more tomboyish girl compared to Haruka]], so she gets the ponytail. She cuts it in the end though.
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* TomboyishPonytail: [[TomboyAndGirlyGirl Mitsuki is a sporty, more tomboyish girl compared to Haruka]], so she gets the ponytail. She cuts it in the end, though.
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** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Every so once in a while
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* TheKlutz: She even has band-aids all over her face. Which makes it a little weird that it took her quite some time get fine one when Takayuki cut his finger in the anime.
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* TheKlutz: She even has band-aids all over her face. Which makes it a little weird that it took her quite some time get fine to find one when Takayuki cut his finger in the anime.
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-->'''Voiced by:''' Tomomi Uehara (Japanese), Creator/LeahClark (English)
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-->'''Voiced by:''' [[Creator/KaoriMizuhashi Tomomi Uehara Uehara]] (Japanese), Creator/LeahClark (English)
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-->'''Voiced by:''' Creator/KisshoTaniyama (Japanese), Kevin M. Connolly (English)
-->'''Voiced by:''' Creator/MinamiKuribayashi (Japanese), Creator/CarrieSavage (English)
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-->'''Voiced by:''' Creator/ChiakiTakahashi (Japanese), Creator/ColleenClinkenbeard (English)
* AnimeHair:DAMN DAMN, that is some crazy hair, Mitsuki.
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* {{Jerkass}} - Most of the time.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold Every so once in a while
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* {{Jerkass}} - {{Jerkass}}: Most of the time.
**JerkWithAHeartOfGold JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Every so once in a while
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* NamesTheSame: Oh, sorry. Were you looking [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion for]] [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight these]] [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Shinjis?]]
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** {{JerkWithAHeartOfGold]] JerkWithAHeartOfGold Every so once in a while
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* DudeShesLikeInAComa: Takayuki to Haruka, only instead of kissing, he tries to take her on a date. While she's still comatose.
* FauxYay: Takayuki on Shinji in episode 1. Shinji is less than amused.
* TomboyishPonytail: [[TomboyAndGirlyGirl Mitsuki is a sporty, more tomboyish girl compared to Haruka]], so she gets the ponytail. She cuts it in the end though.
* FauxYay: Takayuki on Shinji in episode 1. Shinji is less than amused.
* TomboyishPonytail: [[TomboyAndGirlyGirl Mitsuki is a sporty, more tomboyish girl compared to Haruka]], so she gets the ponytail. She cuts it in the end though.
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* CantCatchUp: Haruka lost three years of her life, staying the same as her friends grew up.
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* AnimeHair: DAMN that is some crazy hair, Mitsuki.
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* GenkiGirl: Before the accident.
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!Mayu Tamano
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** {{JerkWithAHeartOfGold]] Every so once in a while
!Mayu
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!Mitsuki Hayase
!Akane Suzumiya
!Shinji Taira
!Ayu Daikuuji
!Mayu Tamano
