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* {{Necromancer}}: Self-taught necromancer at that!
* SkeletonsInTheCoatCloset: Her latest set of armor includes a corset designed to look like a rib cage. She rather likes the skeletal hands supporting her breasts.
* SkeletonsInTheCoatCloset: Her latest set of armor includes a corset designed to look like a rib cage. She rather likes the skeletal hands supporting her breasts.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Oh so very much.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Whenever he goes into what he'll have to do if Jessica dies, Louise finds herself wanting to run screaming from the room and lock herself in her room for several days.
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* DarknessVonGothickname: She changed her name to Lillysuffering Crim'somdoomblood.
* HarmlessVillain: Oh so very much.
* HarmlessVillain: Oh so very much.
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* MissingMom: Her mother raped her father then ran off with the source of his power.
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* CombatStilettos: Louise's armor has some but is also enchanted so she can actually run in them.
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* ToThePain: Louise's threats if her minions screw up tend to go this way, of course that's what makes them so effective.
** Of particular note is when she declared that anyone who interrupted her bath for anything less than an attack on the tower would be flogged half to death unless there was a method to revive them. Then they'd be flogged to death, revived, and flogged within an inch of their life.
** Of particular note is when she declared that anyone who interrupted her bath for anything less than an attack on the tower would be flogged half to death unless there was a method to revive them. Then they'd be flogged to death, revived, and flogged within an inch of their life.
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* SickAndWrong: Her reaction to a noblewoman who's [[ArentYouGoingToRavishMe disturbingly eager to be used to "slake her dark lusts"]].
* BlessedWithSuck: If she loses focus, she'll project incredible amounts of masculinity, causing others to see her as a man despite her voluptuous figure.
* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Do to above mentioned BlessedWithSuck, woman are highly attracted to her.
* EvilGenius: Shares this role with Gnarl. Her armorer and couture skills are top-notch, since Louise's first costume earned her a nomination for an abyssal award.
* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Do to above mentioned BlessedWithSuck, woman are highly attracted to her.
* EvilGenius: Shares this role with Gnarl. Her armorer and couture skills are top-notch, since Louise's first costume earned her a nomination for an abyssal award.
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* TheDreaded: Evil makes [[MemeticBadass Chuck Norris]] style stories about her such as having a bear rug that's still alive but too afraid to move and not having fingers under her armor, only more wands.
* TheDreaded: Evil makes [[MemeticBadass Chuck Norris]] style stories about her such as having a bear rug that's still alive but too afraid to move and not having fingers under her armor, only more wands.
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* GenreSavvy: He correctly deduces that Louise is the type to do evil in the name of good at first.
* PragmaticVillainy: Speaks against counterfeiting simply because it lowers the over all value of treasure they plunder.
* PragmaticVillainy: Speaks against counterfeiting simply because it lowers the over all value of treasure they plunder.
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* TinTyrant: What she's supposed to look like.
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* LesbianVampire: Strongly implied.
* CatchPhrase: "Objectively suboptimal."
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* SdrawkcabName: She reflexively signs a letter as Ayelttac.
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: After getting hit with cannon fire.
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* [[AnimalsHateHim Animals Hate Her]]: Well, ponies do.
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* {{Expy}}: Of Lord Flashheart from Series/{{Blackadder}}.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Scarron is definitely Evil, but he cares about his daughter deeply and sincerely.
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* HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday: In her own narration. [[spoiler:Louise is attracted to Henrietta, and completely in denial about it.]]
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!!Lilly
Head of the Dark Elves, which is actually a sort of a Greenpeace-esque organization.
* OverlyLongName: She greatly prefers the simple 'Lilly'.
* ShrinkingViolet: Despite the formidable organization name, she is actually quite shy.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: She is mortified to find that children in Tiffania's orphanage can suggest schemes more evil than what her subordinates can muster.
Head of the Dark Elves, which is actually a sort of a Greenpeace-esque organization.
* OverlyLongName: She greatly prefers the simple 'Lilly'.
* ShrinkingViolet: Despite the formidable organization name, she is actually quite shy.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: She is mortified to find that children in Tiffania's orphanage can suggest schemes more evil than what her subordinates can muster.
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Originally a minor character from the series. Here, Jessica is the half-incubus daughter of Scarron and a skilled blacksmith. She acts as a sort of liaison between Louise and Scarron at first, but later goes to live in the tower as the resident blacksmith/seamstress/couturier.
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Originally a minor character from the series. Here, Jessica is the half-incubus daughter of Scarron Scarron, and a skilled blacksmith. She acts as a sort of liaison between Louise and Scarron at first, but later goes to live in the tower as the resident blacksmith/seamstress/couturier.
blacksmith/couturier.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Born from the union of Scarron and a heroic woman, making her a half-incubus.
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* DeusExMachina: The fight concluded with a timely cannon shot from minions manning the airship. Notable, since minions aren't really all that competent to begin with.
* HopelessBossFight: At that time, Louise has just mastered hellfire whereas Mott is a skilled water mage. Their duel goes about as well as it can be.
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* DeusExMachina: The fight concluded with a timely cannon shot from minions manning the airship.airship ripping him in half. Notable, since minions aren't really all that competent to begin with.
* HopelessBossFight: At that time, Louise has just mastered hellfire whereas Mott is a skilled water mage. Their duel goes about as well as it canbe.be expected.
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* WarmUpBoss: He is arguably the first antagonist who poses a legitimate threat to Louise.
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* WarmUpBoss: WakeUpCallBoss: He is arguably the first antagonist who poses a legitimate threat to Louise.
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* TheBrute: While not as mindless as some Brutes, she nevertheless constitutes the most of the physical brawn of Louise's party.
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* TheBrute: While not as mindless as some Brutes, she nevertheless constitutes the most of the physical brawn of in Louise's party.
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* WeaksauceWeakness: As with classical/Stokerian vampires, she has many mundane weakness. Later on she gets an armor that functionally negates her weakness to sunlight, courtesy of Jessica.
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* ChainmailBikini: Concedes that she needs at least this, after being ambushed within the tower.
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* ChainmailBikini: Concedes that she needs at least this, after nearly being ambushed killed in an ambush within the tower.
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* ImpossiblyLowNeckline: A test dress she wore when the ambush happened.
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* ImpossiblyLowNeckline: A test dress she wore when the ambush happened. It protects about as well as it can be expected to.
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* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Heard]], plus she is more skilled in oratory than Louise. In-costume, Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
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* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion mysterious image of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Heard]], Louise's Overlady persona, plus she is more skilled in public speaking and oratory than Louise. In-costume, Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
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** BigBad: Emerging as one, if nomination as the Best Newcomer is any indication.
* InformedAbility: His EyeBeams, which the reader only knew via Jessica's comparison to hers.
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* TheBlacksmith: She also does couture for our protagonists.
* TheBlacksmith: She also does couture for our protagonists.
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blacksmith/seamstress/couturier.
* TheBlacksmith: She also doescouture [[TheFashionista couture]] for our protagonists.
* TheBlacksmith: She also does
* TheNicknamer: "Lou" for Louise, and [[GenderBlenderName "Henri"]] for Henrietta so far.
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Originally a minor villain in the series. Here, Count Mott is one of The Council alongside Wardes and two other nobles. The Council have the power second to the queen of Tristain herself, and with the queen's mental instability they pretty much run the country nowadays.
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Louise's sister from the series, she was sickly since she was young.[[spoiler: The wasting disease was only a ruse for her vampirism. After the whole business with Louis is concluded, Cattleya and her personal maid moves to the tower with Louise.]]
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Louise's sister from the series, she was sickly since she was young.[[spoiler: The wasting disease was only a ruse for her vampirism. After the whole business with Louis is concluded, Cattleya and her personal maid moves to the tower with Louise. Over the course of the story, she recruited another maid.]]
* TheBrute: While not as mindless as some Brutes, she nevertheless constitutes the most of the physical brawn of Louise's party.
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* FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire: Tries hard to be this, but results are mixed.mixed due to native vampiric instincts.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifter: Can turn into a bat, [[SuperSmoke mist]], or a big wolf; possibly a shout-out to [[VideoGame/CastlevaniaSymphonyOfTheNight Alucard]].
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* VoluntaryShapeshifter: Can turn into a bat, flock of bats, [[SuperSmoke mist]], or a big wolf; possibly a shout-out to [[VideoGame/CastlevaniaSymphonyOfTheNight Alucard]].
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* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Seen]]. In-costume, Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
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* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Seen]].Heard]], plus she is more skilled in oratory than Louise. In-costume, Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
* TheDragon: Definitely Louise's second-in-command as well as the day-to-day administrator of life in the tower.
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* TheDandy: And not much else.
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* BastardBastard: He was the illegitimate son of a Tristainian king, who got a comparatively small dukedom instead of the throne. He's about as villainous as it can be.
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* FalseFlagOperation: Hinted at. He'd ride to exterminate undead outbreaks, but always after it has decimated his rivals.
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* DynamicEntry: A favorite of his, if self-defenestration are to be trusted.
* InTheBlood: Many of his children takes after him, and it extends to his illegitimate ones.
* KavorkaMan: Maxed out in Bluff and Seduction skills.
* InTheBlood: Many of his children takes after him, and it extends to his illegitimate ones.
* KavorkaMan: Maxed out in Bluff and Seduction skills.
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* VillainProtagonist: From the viewpoint of the Tristainian royalty, anyway.
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* VillainProtagonist: From the viewpoint of the Tristainian royalty, anyway.
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* HornyDevils: An Incubus.
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* EyeBeams: Notably weaker than his father's.
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* EyeBeams: Notably weaker than his her father's.
* HulkingOut: She can turn buff when angry or excited.
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* DemonicPossession: She is Louis' junior vampire, after all. Later turned the table on Louis and drained him, to Louise's horror.
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* DemonicPossession: She is Louis' junior vampire, sired by Louis, after all. Later turned the table on Louis and drained him, to Louise's horror.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: ''Despite being a vampire!'' She brought a loyal flock of wolves when she moved.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifter: Can turn into a bat, [[SuperSmoke mist]], or a big wolf; possibly a shout-out to [[VideoGame/CastlevaniaSymphonyOfTheNight Alucard]].
** ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: A problem later rectified by Jessica's armor. Still a problem on some non-enchanted clothes, though.
* WeaksauceWeakness: As with classical/Stokerian vampires, she has many mundane weakness. Later on she gets an armor that functionally negates her weakness to sunlight, courtesy of Jessica.
** ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: A problem later rectified by Jessica's armor. Still a problem on some non-enchanted clothes, though.
* WeaksauceWeakness: As with classical/Stokerian vampires, she has many mundane weakness. Later on she gets an armor that functionally negates her weakness to sunlight, courtesy of Jessica.
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* BadBoss: She treats the minions with disgust and contempt. Ironically, this is pretty much the only way they can function.
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* BadBoss: She treats the minions with disgust and contempt. Ironically, this is pretty much the only way they can function.function effectively.
* ChainmailBikini: The notion was pushed to Louise by Jessica at first, but Louise averted it in the end by having a full set of armor that only exposes a small area around her mouth. This turned out to be the better option for both the overlord and the blacksmith.
* ChainmailBikini: The notion was pushed to Louise by Jessica at first, but Louise averted it in the end by having a full set of armor that only exposes a small area around her mouth. This turned out to be the better option for both the overlord and the blacksmith.
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* TheDandyAgentPeacock: A dandy person, but not averse to combat in general.
* TheManBehindTheMan: The Council as a whole.
* DemonicPossession: She is Louis' junior vampire, after all. Later turned the table on Louis and drained him, to Louise's horror.
* ChainmailBikini: Concedes that she needs at least this, after being ambushed within the tower.
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* ImpossiblyLowNeckline
* LudicrousGibs: She turns an assassin into a pile of mush by turning the water in his body to mist.
* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Seen]]. In-costume, Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
* LudicrousGibs: She turns an assassin into a pile of mush by turning the water in his body to mist.
* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Seen]]. In-costume, Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
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* TheDandy: And not much else.
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* BastardBastard: He was the illegitimate son of a Tristainian king, who got a comparatively small dukedom instead of the throne.
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* OhMeAccentsSlipping: He spoke Romalian, rendered in-story as English with weird vocabulary.
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* OhMeAccentsSlipping: EvilChancellor: His exploits as this and eventual ascent to the Cathayan throne earns him an award.
* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: A minor case. He spoke passable Romalian, and his quirks in that is rendered in-story as English with weird vocabulary.
* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: A minor case. He spoke passable Romalian, and his quirks in that is rendered in-story as English with weird vocabulary.
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* [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Seen]]: A side-effect of Louise's public appearances in her suit of armor at first, but Jessica then works to push this as her image.
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Originally a minor character from the series. Here, Scarron is an incubus prince of The Abyss, but he has been locked in the surface world due to the actions of Jessica's mother.
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mother. He operates the inn/bar in Bruxelles, a hotbed of adventuring activity.
* KnowledgeBroker: His main occupation, although he deals in rare physical stuff too.
* KnowledgeBroker: His main occupation, although he deals in rare physical stuff too.
* EyeBeams: Notably weaker than his father's.
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* TheDandy
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* HopelessBossFight: At that time, Louise hasthe
just mastered hellfire whereas Mott is a skilled water mage. Their duel goes about as well as it can be.
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* DeusExMachina: The fight concluded with a timely cannon shot from minions manning the airship. Notable, since minions aren't really all that competent to begin with.
* HopelessBossFight: At that time, Louise has
* {{BFS}}: Gets one when Louise and her prepares to storm Louis' lair.
* FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire: Tries hard to be this, but results are mixed.
* UnskilledButStrong: How she manages with the greatsword.
* FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire: Tries hard to be this, but results are mixed.
* UnskilledButStrong: How she manages with the greatsword.
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Tristain's crown princess and Louise's childhood friend. She was held captive for pledging herself to Wales Tudor, thus getting Tristain into a political tangle because she was publicly pledged to a prince of Germanian origin.
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Tristain's crown princess and Louise's childhood friend. She was held captive for pledging herself to Wales Tudor, thus getting Tristain into a political tangle because she was publicly pledged to a prince of Germanian origin.
origin; The Tudors were later usurped from Albion's throne, further complicating matters.
* DamselInDistress: The planning of her eventual rescue was a major part of the storyline.
* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Seen]]. Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
* DamselInDistress: The planning of her eventual rescue was a major part of the storyline.
* [[MouthOfSauron Voice of The Overlady]]: Takes up this role to further the notion of Louise as [[HeWhoMustNotBeSeen She Who Must Not Be Seen]]. Jessica nicknamed her Voxi.
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* FantasticRacism: Faces this amongst her peers in The Abyss.Abyss due to the blood of her Hero mother.
* IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Turns girls on whenever she's excited or incensed.
* IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Turns girls on whenever she's excited or incensed.
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* NonActionGuy: Despite having considerable might, she prefers to stay in the tower and ensuring the quality of Louise's armor and fashion.
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* NonActionGuy: Despite having considerable might, she prefers to stay in the tower and ensuring ensure the quality of Louise's armor and fashion.
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villain in the series. Here, Count Mott is one of The Council, who has the
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* WarmUpBoss: He is arguably the first antagonist who poses a legitimate threat to Louise.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Though in this case, the ''standards'' apparently consist of not selling all your evil artifacts simply to have the funds to to buy expensive clothes.
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* BastardBastard: He was the illegitimate son of a Tristainian king, who got a comparatively small dukedom instead of the throne.
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* BastardBastard: He was the illegitimate son of a Tristainian king, who got a comparatively small dukedom instead of the throne.
!!Emperor Lee
The current ruler of Cathay and possibly the most powerful man in all Halkeginia.
* OhMeAccentsSlipping: He spoke Romalian, rendered in-story as English with weird vocabulary.
The current ruler of Cathay and possibly the most powerful man in all Halkeginia.
* OhMeAccentsSlipping: He spoke Romalian, rendered in-story as English with weird vocabulary.
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Partriarch of the Zerbst family and Kirche's father.
* VerbalTic: ''Rrrrraaawr!''
* VerbalTic: ''Rrrrraaawr!''
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!!Jessica
Originally a minor character from the series.
* TheBlacksmith: She also does couture for our protagonists.
* FantasticRacism: Faces this amongst her peers in The Abyss.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Born from the union of Scarron and a heroic woman, making her a half-incubus.
* NonActionGuy: Despite having considerable might, she prefers to stay in the tower and ensuring the quality of Louise's armor and fashion.
!!Count Mott
Originally a rather minor villain, C
!!Cattleya de la Valliere
Louise's sister from the series, she was sickly since she was young.[spoiler: The wasting disease was only just a ruse for her vampirism.]
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Tristain's crown princess and Louise's childhood friend. She was held captive for pledging herself to Wales Tudor, thus
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equivalents. Characters sorted roughly by order of appearance.
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!!Unnamed Vampire
The vampire in the ruined tower and the previous Overlord before Louise put an end to his reign.
* BadBoss: To an even greater extent compared to Louise. The tower fell into disrepair on his reign, due to parts of the tower pawned off to fuel his vanity.
!!Louis de la Valliere
Louise's ancestor and quite possibly the progenitor of the Valliere line.
* BastardBastard: He was the illegitimate son of a Tristainian king, who got a comparatively small dukedom instead of the throne.
* TheChessmaster: To a frightening degree.
* SealedEvilInACan: Semi-sealed, since apparently it doesn't stop him from amassing a lesser vampire army.
* FalseFlagOperation: Hinted at. He'd ride to exterminate undead outbreaks, but always after it has decimated his rivals.
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!!Unnamed Vampire
The vampire in the ruined tower and the previous Overlord before Louise put an end to his reign.
* BadBoss: To an even greater extent compared to Louise. The tower fell into disrepair on his reign, due to parts of the tower pawned off to fuel his vanity.
!!Louis de la Valliere
Louise's ancestor and quite possibly the progenitor of the Valliere line.
* BastardBastard: He was the illegitimate son of a Tristainian king, who got a comparatively small dukedom instead of the throne.
* TheChessmaster: To a frightening degree.
* SealedEvilInACan: Semi-sealed, since apparently it doesn't stop him from amassing a lesser vampire army.
* FalseFlagOperation: Hinted at. He'd ride to exterminate undead outbreaks, but always after it has decimated his rivals.
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!! Louise de la Valliere
The daughter of two Heroes, Louise has a quite unexpected natural talent at Evil. Perhaps that's because of the way that every single relative on her father's side, apart from her father, is a depraved villain - and often very successful ones at that. Certainly her blood has passed down a natural preference for staying inside her body which most of the other villains in the world seem to lack.
Currently trying to crush the Regency Council of Tristain beneath her steel boot, as part of a secretly not-evil plan.
*EvilOverlord: Perhaps the cutest, shortest one currently extant in Halkeginia. Also quite naturally skilled at it.
!!Gnarl
Nasty, sinister, conspiratorial and willing to act without telling Louise, Gnarl is nonetheless vital to Louise's schemes and operations. He plays basically the same role for her as he does for the canon Overlords.
*AffablyEvil: And unusually verbose in his affability for a minion. Louise suspects he has stolen all of his race's natural intelligence.
*EvilVizier: He is Louise's chief advisor, and seems quite determined that he keeps that role.
!! Louise de la Valliere
The daughter of two Heroes, Louise has a quite unexpected natural talent at Evil. Perhaps that's because of the way that every single relative on her father's side, apart from her father, is a depraved villain - and often very successful ones at that. Certainly her blood has passed down a natural preference for staying inside her body which most of the other villains in the world seem to lack.
Currently trying to crush the Regency Council of Tristain beneath her steel boot, as part of a secretly not-evil plan.
*EvilOverlord: Perhaps the cutest, shortest one currently extant in Halkeginia. Also quite naturally skilled at it.
!!Gnarl
Nasty, sinister, conspiratorial and willing to act without telling Louise, Gnarl is nonetheless vital to Louise's schemes and operations. He plays basically the same role for her as he does for the canon Overlords.
*AffablyEvil: And unusually verbose in his affability for a minion. Louise suspects he has stolen all of his race's natural intelligence.
*EvilVizier: He is Louise's chief advisor, and seems quite determined that he keeps that role.
