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* VillainProtagonist: [[ZigzaggedTrope Zigzagged]] all the time; on the one hand, she tries to secretly not be evil and fight corruption, but on the other hand she uses evil, and adorably ''pink'', hellfire, dresses as a TinTyrant, and has commited arson and murder to further her goals, yet is in denial about it and tries to justify it as her actions ultimately serving good.
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* VillainProtagonist: [[ZigzaggedTrope Zigzagged]] all the time; on the one hand, she tries to secretly not be evil and fight corruption, but on the other hand she uses evil, and adorably ''pink'', hellfire, dresses as a TinTyrant, and has commited arson committed arson, grand larceny and murder to further her goals, yet is in denial about it and tries to justify it as her actions ultimately serving good.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Though in this case, the ''standards'' apparently consist of not selling all your evil artifacts simply to have the funds to to buy expensive clothes.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Though in this case, the ''standards'' apparently consist of not selling all your evil artifacts simply to have the funds to to buy expensive clothes.clothes, or manufacturing counterfeit currency to the point of destroying the economy of the lands an overlord would conquer via inflation.
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* HornyDevils: An Incubus.
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* SuccubiAndIncubi: An Incubus.
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Dewicking
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* BiTheWay: Though very much in denial of it, Louise is clearly attracted to both genders. Or at least men and [[IfItsYouItsOkay Henrietta]].
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* KilledMidSentence
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* KilledMidSentenceKilledMidSentence: Sliced in half by a chain-shot cannonball as he was announcing his retreat and subsequent revenge to Louise.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Semi-sealed, since apparently it doesn't stop him from amassing a lesser vampire army.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Semi-sealed, since apparently it doesn't stop him from amassing a lesser vampire army. Basicly he rests immobile in his coffin inside his tomb, but can use magic to grow spider legs and move a little, yet ultimately cannot leave the tomb's island due to all the flowing water around it.
* AnimeHair: Dark and very spiky.
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* KavorkaMan: Maxed out in Bluff and Seduction skills.
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* KavorkaMan: Maxed out in Bluff and Seduction skills.skills, while his exploits are apparently interesting enough that even Tabitha takes notice and asks him for a few tips.
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* DarknessVonGothickname: She changed her name to Lillysuffering Crim'somdoomblood.
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* DarknessVonGothickname: She changed her name to Lillysuffering Crim'somdoomblood.Crim'somdoomblood, but regrets it.
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* VillainProtagonist
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* VillainProtagonist
VillainProtagonist: [[ZigzaggedTrope Zigzagged]] all the time; on the one hand, she tries to secretly not be evil and fight corruption, but on the other hand she uses evil, and adorably ''pink'', hellfire, dresses as a TinTyrant, and has commited arson and murder to further her goals, yet is in denial about it and tries to justify it as her actions ultimately serving good.
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* EvilChancellor: He is Louise's chief advisor, and seems quite determined that he keeps that role.
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* EvilChancellor: He is Louise's chief advisor, and seems quite determined that he keeps that role. In fact, he calls himself her "Vizier", just to drive the point home.
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Has nothing to do with familiarity with in-universe fiction.
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* GenreSavvy: He correctly deduces that Louise is the type to do evil in the name of good at first.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Subverted. Lilly was not exactly sure what would happen when she convinced Tiffania to take the mantle of the Shadow Queen of the Dark Elves but wide scale atrocity and slaughter through the Albionese countryside was not it. It gets to the point where Lilly is a non-functional alcoholic.
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* BiTheWay: Though very much in denial of it, Louise is clearly attracted to both genders. Or at least men and [[ItsOkayIfItsYou Henrietta]].
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* BiTheWay: Though very much in denial of it, Louise is clearly attracted to both genders. Or at least men and [[ItsOkayIfItsYou [[IfItsYouItsOkay Henrietta]].
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* BiTheWay: Though very much in denial of it, Louise is clearly attracted to both genders. Or at least men and [[ItsOkayIfItsYou Henrietta]].
