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* InexplicablyAwesome: Ebony has no {{backstory}} - she might just as well have fallen out of the sky and landed on Hogwarts grounds just before the start of Chapter 1.

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* InexplicablyAwesome: Ebony has no {{backstory}} - she might just as well have fallen out of the sky and landed on Hogwarts grounds just before the start of Chapter 1. The only background Tara gives Enony is claiming she's a "poorblood" (presumably pureblood) in an author's note.

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* AccidentalMisnaming: Does this to her characters and to herself. [[Franchise/SilentHill Gillespie]], Gillesbie, etc.



%%* EmoTeen: ''Par excellence.''

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%%* * EmoTeen: ''Par excellence.''Constantly references various emo bands in her fanfic, and frequently talks about self-harm, depression, and suicide.



* SpellMyNameWithAnS: [[Franchise/SilentHill Gillespie]], Gillesbie, etc.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He's still the BigBad, but he's a HarmlessVillain and his racism towards Muggles is gone. Likewise, his younger self lacks any of his cruelty and sadism.

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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He's still the BigBad, but he's a HarmlessVillain and his [[FantasticRacism racism towards Muggles Muggles]] is gone. Likewise, his younger self lacks any of his cruelty and sadism.



* InformedAttribute: He is described as a prep, but it is never explained ''how'' he qualifies. He dresses all in black and wears high heels, but according to Ebony it's obvious that "he wasn't gothic"; he's apparently "scary" which appears to be a "goffik" trait ("'OMG you guys are like so scary!' said Britney"), cries tears of blood and has a tragic past in which his "hearth" was "borken" [sic], yet he's ''still'' a prep by Enoby's standards. It becomes a case of AcceptableBreaksFromReality - the reader can see that Voldemort is "dark", and therefore a good candidate for goth-hood, but the author/Enoby calls him a prep because he is the BigBad, and preps are the ultimate form of evil.

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* InformedAttribute: He is described as a prep, but it is never explained ''how'' he qualifies. He dresses all in black and wears high heels, but according to Ebony it's obvious that "he wasn't gothic"; he's apparently "scary" which appears to be a "goffik" trait ("'OMG you guys are like so scary!' said Britney"), cries tears {{tears of blood blood}} and has a tragic past in which his "hearth" was "borken" [sic], yet he's ''still'' a prep by Enoby's standards. It becomes a case of AcceptableBreaksFromReality - the reader can see that Voldemort is "dark", and therefore a good candidate for goth-hood, but the author/Enoby calls him a prep because he is the BigBad, and preps are the ultimate form of evil.
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** This could be explained by the fact that, in Chapter 14, Ebony says that all the girls at Hogwarts are ugly or plain except for herself and her friend B'loody Mary.
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The only goffik teacher in the school. Sinister a.k.a. Trevolry (she is inexplicably called both names interchangeably) is a half-Japanese half-Vampire and Ebony's favorite teacher. The subject she teaches is Deviation (which is probably meant to be Divination). She is the person who tells Ebony to go back in time to seduce Voldemort. Later on, Professor Trevolry gets addicted to "Volxemortserum" and asks Ebony to find a cure for her addiction. Sinister also gets sent to Azerbaijan by the Mystery of Magic for being too gothic but returns at Hogwarts without explanation. OOC and often OON (Out of Name). (The names derive from Professors Sybill Trelawney [Divination] and Aurora Sinistra [Astronomy].)

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The only goffik teacher in the school. Sinister a.k.a. Trevolry (she (who seems to be a combination of Professor Sinistra and Professor Trelawney, and is inexplicably called both names interchangeably) is a half-Japanese half-Vampire and Ebony's favorite teacher. The subject she teaches is Deviation (which is probably meant to be Divination).Divination: in the books, Trelawney teaches Divination and Sinistra teaches Astronomy). She is the person who tells Ebony to go back in time to seduce Voldemort. Later on, Professor Trevolry gets addicted to "Volxemortserum" "Voldemortserum" and asks Ebony to find a cure for her addiction. Professor Sinister also gets sent to Azerbaijan by the Mystery of Magic for being too gothic but returns at Hogwarts without explanation. OOC and often OON (Out of Name). (The names derive from Professors Sybill Trelawney [Divination] and Aurora Sinistra [Astronomy].)
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The only goffik teacher in the school. Sinister aka Trevolry (the two are inexplicably interchanged for the same character) is a half-Japanese half-Vampire and Ebony's favorite teacher. The subject she teaches is Deviation (which is probably meant to be Divination). She is the person who tells Ebony to go back in time to seduce Voldemort. Later on, Professor Sinister gets addicted to "Volxemortserum" and asks Ebony to find a cure for her addiction. Sinister also gets send to Azerbaijan by the Mystery of Magic for being too gothic but returns at Hogwarts without explanation. OOC and often OON (Out of Name). (The names derive from Professors Sybill Trelawney [Divination] and Aurora Sinistra [Astronomy].)

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The only goffik teacher in the school. Sinister aka a.k.a. Trevolry (the two are (she is inexplicably interchanged for the same character) called both names interchangeably) is a half-Japanese half-Vampire and Ebony's favorite teacher. The subject she teaches is Deviation (which is probably meant to be Divination). She is the person who tells Ebony to go back in time to seduce Voldemort. Later on, Professor Sinister Trevolry gets addicted to "Volxemortserum" and asks Ebony to find a cure for her addiction. Sinister also gets send sent to Azerbaijan by the Mystery of Magic for being too gothic but returns at Hogwarts without explanation. OOC and often OON (Out of Name). (The names derive from Professors Sybill Trelawney [Divination] and Aurora Sinistra [Astronomy].)
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* RaceLift: Is stated to be half-Japanese, which neither of her components are known to be. Neither's race is specified in the books, but in the films, Trelawney is portrayed as white and Sinistra as black.
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** [[SlutShaming Calls the preps sluts]], yet cheats on Draco and [[MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces makes love in public places]].
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: He follows Ebony into Snape's classroom ''completely naked'' (This was after Ebony angrily storms off after having sex with him) while trying to explain his situation with Vampire to her.

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** She calls herself a sadist but feels bad for torturing Voldemort with the Crookshanks curse.

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** She calls herself a sadist {{sadist}}, but feels bad for torturing Voldemort with using the Crookshanks curse.curse on Voldemort, even though it was in self-defense.


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* {{Sadist}}: She ''claims'' to be a sadist in Chapter 9, but it's an InformedAttribute, as using the Crookshanks curse causes her to be overcome with guilt and she can't go through with it, even though her target was ''Voldemort'' and she was only using the spell to protect herself.


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* {{Telepathy}}: While he states that he "hath telekinesis", it's pretty obvious from the context that he means telepathy, as he says that after reading Ebony's mind and learning that she's in love with Draco.
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* RevengePornBlackmail: Snape takes a video of Ebony taking a bath (with Lupin accompanying him) and both threaten to show everyone at school the video if she doesn't kill Harry "Vampire" Potter.

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* BigNo: Does one (shouts "No!") upon being stabbed in the heart.

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* BigNo: Does one (shouts "No!") Screams "Nooooooooooooo!" (that's 13 O's) upon being stabbed in the heart.


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* TooDumbToLive: He tortures Draco, gets shot by Ebony and Vampire... then, despite the bullet wounds, tells Ebony he loves her and asks her to have sex with him. Even ''Ebony'' is flabbergasted at how stupid he is.
--> "Enoby I love you will you have sex with me?" asked Snaketail. I started laughing crudely. "What the fuck? You torture my bf and then you expect me to fuck you? God, you are so fucked up you fucking bastard." I said angrily. Then I stabbed him in the heart. Blood pored out of it like a fountain.
* TortureTechnician: Voldemort put him in charge of torturing Draco. The torture method isn't specified, though.
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* SoBeautifulItsACurse: "Why couldn't Satan have made me less beautiful?" It doesn't help that her actual physical description makes her sound rather ''un''attractive.

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* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Her immense beauty results in [[DudeMagnet most guys she encounters falling in love with her]], and leads to Snape and Lupin sexually harrassing her. At one point, she outright starts crying "Why couldn't Satan have made me less beautiful?" It doesn't help beautiful?", as she feels that all of this male attention is interfering with her actual physical description makes her sound rather ''un''attractive.relationship with Draco.
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* AnythingThatMoves: Though she's more of a slut towards guys. Her bisexuality is an [[InformedAbility Informed Trait]].



* AnythingThatMoves: And, in Loopin's case, [[ILoveTheDead some things that don't]]. They're both very sexual.
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* HasAType: She seems to like guys that (in her opinion) resemble Gerard Way. Or any of the musicians she's a fan of. Paying attention to her descriptions of others also shows that she has a thing for goth girls with [[ImpossibleHourglassFigure big boobs and thin waists.]]

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* HasAType: She seems to like guys "sensitive bi guys" that (in her opinion) resemble Gerard Way. Or any of the musicians she's a fan of. Paying attention to her descriptions of others also shows that she has a thing for goth girls with [[ImpossibleHourglassFigure big boobs and thin waists.]]
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* HasAType: She seems to like guys that (in her opinion) resemble Gerard Way. Or any of the musicians she's a fan of.

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* HasAType: She seems to like guys that (in her opinion) resemble Gerard Way. Or any of the musicians she's a fan of. Paying attention to her descriptions of others also shows that she has a thing for goth girls with [[ImpossibleHourglassFigure big boobs and thin waists.]]
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** Ebony is a vampire, but the most vampire-like thing she does is drink blood... from conveniently existing food, or from her self-inflicted wounds. She eventually sucks all of a prep's blood when she goes back in time, but besides this she never sucks anyone's blood or actually needs to.

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** Ebony is a vampire, but the most vampire-like vampiric thing she does is drink blood... from conveniently existing food, or from her self-inflicted wounds. She eventually sucks all of a prep's blood when she goes back in time, but besides this she never sucks anyone's blood or actually needs to.



* PsychicPowers: Has rather useless visions and can send "telepathetic massages" using her vampire powers.

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* PsychicPowers: Has rather useless visions and can send "telepathetic massages" using her vampire vampiric powers.
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* VampireVannabe: He's not ''really'' a vampire; he just likes the taste of blood. In fact, he seems quite disturbed when Ebony reveals herself to be a real vampire (though his reaction could have been to how aggressively she's described as saying it.)
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* {{Chuunibyou}}: Subcultural type. A middle schooler who tries to be goth/emo and just ends up looking extremely ridiculous.
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* OhMyGods: Frequently says "Oh my Satan!" Which can get confusing when an ''actual'' character called Satan (teen!Tom Riddle) turns up. And occasionally, in later chapters, she substitutes the word "cross" for "pentagram" (because she’s a Satanist, [[SarcasmMode get it?]]). This results in sentences like "He looked like a pentagram of Gerard Way and Marilyn Manson" and so forth.

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* OhMyGods: Frequently says "Oh my Satan!" Which can get confusing when an ''actual'' character called Satan (teen!Tom Riddle) turns up. And occasionally, in later chapters, she substitutes replaces the word "cross" for with "pentagram" (because she’s a Satanist, [[SarcasmMode get it?]]). This results in sentences like "He looked like a pentagram of Gerard Way and Marilyn Manson" and so forth.
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* InformedFlaw: According to the author's notes, Ebony isn't perfect because she's a Satanist. Given that the narrative treats Satanism as "goffic" and therefore good...
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: With her totally disjointed sense of narrative, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin frequent misspellings]], [[TheMalaproper utterly bizarre malapropisms]], insertion of personal commentary in the middle of the story, and a seeming total lack of self-awareness, Tara is a world-class example.

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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: With her totally disjointed sense of narrative, writing style, truly bizarre characterizations and plotting, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin frequent misspellings]], [[TheMalaproper utterly bizarre eccentric malapropisms]], insertion of personal commentary in the middle of the story, and a seeming total lack of self-awareness, Tara is a world-class example.
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* CantTakeCriticism: Her author's notes are more or less temper tantrums thrown at reviewers as she seems to be convinced that she is the next great gothic writer. Then again, she was likely a pre-teen so...

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* CantTakeCriticism: Her author's notes are more or less temper tantrums thrown at reviewers as she seems to be convinced that she is the next great gothic writer. Then again, she was likely Understandable when you consider that she's supposedly a pre-teen so...young adolescent or maybe even a pre-teen.

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