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* NeverFoundTheBody: She went missing four years ago and was presumed dead by everyone except Blake, who believes she could still be alive.
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* RedHerring: Over the course of the investigation, the team keeps coming back to him, and they didn't immediately trust his alibi that he was in jail at the time of the murder. It is only in chapter 15 that the team realizes that the killer is actually [[spoiler:his sister April]].
* RedHerring: Over the course of the investigation, the team keeps coming back to him, and they didn't immediately trust his alibi that he was in jail at the time of the murder. It is only in chapter 15 that the team realizes that the killer is actually [[spoiler:his sister April]].
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* RevengeMyopia: [[spoiler:The reason she killed Gabbie was because the latter got Brett imprisoned ''for crimes he committed''.]]
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* RevengeMyopia: [[spoiler:The reason she killed Gabbie was because the latter got Brett imprisoned ''for crimes he committed''.]]
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:As the one who murdered Gabbie and instigates the final conflict during the night of Winter Formal, she is the main antagonist of this book.]]
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* HotTeacher: He's also seen as quite attractive by some of his students.
* NiceGuy: In general, but this is also proven quite strongly towards the end of the book when he [[spoiler:holds no animosity towards the main characters for nearly ruining his life by getting him arrested on a false accusation of sexual assault, and returns to teaching to Beachwood high in spite of the damage done to his name]].
* TeacherStudentRomance: [[spoiler:Evidence arises indicating that he was in a romantic relationship with Gabbie. Averted when the evidence turns out to all be a misunderstanding.]]
* HotTeacher: He's also seen as quite attractive by some of his students.
* NiceGuy: In general, but this is also proven quite strongly towards the end of the book when he [[spoiler:holds no animosity towards the main characters for nearly ruining his life by getting him arrested on a false accusation of sexual assault, and returns to teaching to Beachwood high in spite of the damage done to his name]].
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* LegallyDead: Despite the lack of a body, the Stone family eventually held a funeral for her and erected a gravestone dedicated to her.
* TownWithADarkSecret: She seemed to be investigating this before she disappeared.
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The father of Joanna Morgan.
* CureYourGays: What he sent Joanna to.
* HateSink
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The father of Joanna Morgan.
* CureYourGays: What he sent Joanna to.
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A team of students at Beachwood High.
!Blake (Main Character)
The playable character of this story, a private detective.
!Donovan Navarro
The twin brother of the murder victim of this case.
!Stevie Sun
An old friend of yours and Gabbie's who joins your group.
!Tyler Woods
Gabbie's boyfriend and track team star.
!Joanna Morgan
An old friend of Gabbie's.
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[[folder: Other Characters]]
!Gabbie Navarro
The victim of this story, the discovery of her drowned and drugged corpse during Homecoming kicks the events of this story into motion.
!Brett Morris
A troublemaker around school who has an old feud with Gabbie.
!April Morris
Brett's significantly better-adjusted younger sister.
!Joshua Lewis
The popular and beloved chemistry teacher.
!Jeremy Walters
A coach at Beechwood High and also a former girlfriend of Perdita, Blake's missing sister.
!Claudia Rhodes
Gabbie's best friend.
!Millie Pereira
The school mascot and an old friend of Blake.
!Toby Meyer
Head of the AV club and the subject of Millie's crush.
!Perdita Stone
The missing sister of the MC.
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[[folder: Main Cast (main character and love interests)]]
A team of students at Beachwood High.
!Blake (Main Character)
The playable character of this story, a private detective.
!Donovan Navarro
The twin brother of the murder victim of this case.
!Stevie Sun
An old friend of yours and Gabbie's who joins your group.
!Tyler Woods
Gabbie's boyfriend and track team star.
!Joanna Morgan
An old friend of Gabbie's.
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[[folder: Other Characters]]
!Gabbie Navarro
The victim of this story, the discovery of her drowned and drugged corpse during Homecoming kicks the events of this story into motion.
!Brett Morris
A troublemaker around school who has an old feud with Gabbie.
!April Morris
Brett's significantly better-adjusted younger sister.
!Joshua Lewis
The popular and beloved chemistry teacher.
!Jeremy Walters
A coach at Beechwood High and also a former girlfriend of Perdita, Blake's missing sister.
!Claudia Rhodes
Gabbie's best friend.
!Millie Pereira
The school mascot and an old friend of Blake.
!Toby Meyer
Head of the AV club and the subject of Millie's crush.
!Perdita Stone
The missing sister of the MC.
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