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* AmbiguousDisorder: If we had to guess, this guy might be going senile, as he's really not all there.
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* KnifeNut: Always seems to be carrying a knife around in case something bad happens. It helps her dad taught her CQC at a young age.
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* KnifeNut: Knives--boxcutters-- are her preferred weapons
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* KnifeNut: Her first appearance has her wielding a meat cleaver.
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** However, when Satsuki [[spoiler:finally snapped out of her tyrant-like mental state, [[UpToEleven she turned it up to eleven]] by ripping off her military like suit during dinner in full view for everyone to see, with naught but a Nudist Beach uniform underneath.]]
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** However, when Satsuki [[spoiler:finally snapped out of her tyrant-like mental state, [[UpToEleven she turned it up to eleven]] eleven by ripping off her military like suit during dinner in full view for everyone to see, with naught but a Nudist Beach uniform underneath.]]
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* [[SirSwearsALot Lady Swears A Lot:]] True to canon for sure except unlike canon, Ryuko here [[UpToEleven turns it up to eleven.]]
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* SirSwearsALot: True to canon for sure except unlike canon, Ryuko here turns it up to eleven.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Still evil, but ultimately proves to be a better human being than her canon counterpart, showing some regret for her deeds.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: While she still can be evil, she's not even close to her canon counterpart's depravity.
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Her canon cheery, cutesy FauxAffablyEvil demeanor is replaced by a genuinely sweet personality.
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Her canon cheery, cutesy FauxAffablyEvil demeanor is replaced by a genuinely sweet personality.
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*MeaningfulName: "Batty" is another word for crazy or insane, which he definitely is.
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* GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, which probably came from what lead to him becoming the "Human Zombie
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* GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, he has one for some reason.
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--->'''To Evelyn about how he met Batty''': "Nah, madame. They just recommended Dr. Batty for me when I nearly beat the Jesus out of Mr. Sandbox when he accidentally pissed on my wife's favorite rug one lazy Saturday afternoon. As Unamerican as pissing on hospitality can be, killing an innocent house pet is even more Unamerican to the point that if I did, I would've called my favorite vice president of the past decade to come on over to my ranch and kick me in the nards four times to feel the pain Jesus felt when he got nailed to the cross, because Jesus dying for our sins is very, very American."
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* GroinAttack: He implies [[spoiler: he was on the receiving end of one in his past, as he has a steel pipe doubling as what would be his umnentionables]]unmentionables]]
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any or talk about them either, either.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any or talk about them either, them, either.
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* HookHand: He has hooks for both hands. The narration lampshades this by saying "picked up his phone through seemingly mysterious means"
KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Ryuko got rid of him by putting a foil-wrapped chicken in a microwave and turning it on]]
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* HookHand: He has hooks for both hands. The narration lampshades this by saying "picked up his phone through seemingly mysterious means"
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*KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Ryuko got rid of him by putting a foil-wrapped chicken in a microwave and turning it on]]
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*KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Ryuko got rid of him by putting a foil-wrapped chicken in a microwave and turning it on]]
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* SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
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* SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has (or had) a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer youany, any or talk about them either, either.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you
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* PurpleProse: While she doesn't use a lot of big words, she seems to have a "poetic" way of speaking.
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* LadyInRed: According to [=GA=]'s artwork of her, she wore a red jacket and matching lipstick
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* MakeupIsEvil: According to [=GA=]'s artwork of her, she wears a lot of makeup.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: His diatribes made Evelyn and Batty sick to their stomachs.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: He started off as a regular guy, until, [[spoiler: someone shot him the neck and dumped him in a lake, before he was found by some (as he put it) "lunatics" who did stuff to him that we won't mention here (but it involved a woman named "Betty"), and the rest that wasn't really said, besides that it involved mysterious circumstances an a GroinAttack]]
* GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, which probably came from what lead to him becoming the "Human Zombie
* GroinAttack: He implies [[spoiler he was on the receiving end of one in his past, as he has a steel pipe doubling as what would be his umnentionables]]
* FeelNoPain: His past robbed him to feel pain, so he doesn't notice how his cigarette would be burning him.
* FunetikAksent: When we first meet him, he speaks to Batty over the phone using this trope
* GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, which probably came from what lead to him becoming the "Human Zombie
* GroinAttack: He implies [[spoiler he was on the receiving end of one in his past, as he has a steel pipe doubling as what would be his umnentionables]]
* FeelNoPain: His past robbed him to feel pain, so he doesn't notice how his cigarette would be burning him.
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* {{Hipster}}: He has some shades of this, with his interest in folk music, vinyl records, and his rather laidback but cultured approach to things.
* ShoutOut: His middle name "Frusciante" is a reference to the lead guitarist of Music/RedHotChiliPeppers
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* AmbiguousDisorder: If we had to guess, this guy might be going senile, as he's really not all there.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: If he's not senile, he's really, really strange, unnerving Dr. Batty even.
* HookHand: He has hooks for both hands. The narration lampshades this by saying "picked up his phone through seemingly mysterious means"
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: If he's not senile, he's really, really strange, unnerving Dr. Batty even.
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* NoodleIncident: What happened to this guy's hands?
* SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any, either.
* UnknownCharacter: Tying into MysteriousPast, we don't know much about this guy besides that he likes bagel bites and that he's killed two people (and a dog).
* SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any, either.
* UnknownCharacter: Tying into MysteriousPast, we don't know much about this guy besides that he likes bagel bites and that he's killed two people (and a dog).
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* NoodleIncident: He had some interaction with Ryuko that involved a conversation about how he (and a troupe of women) could take down Satsuki, participated in some scheme (with the student council) to fool everyone that marijuana was banned, and, somehow, got tossed in the jail by authorities (which may or may be related to the aforementioned). How any of that happened is a mystery.
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* PurpleProse: While she doesn't use a lot of big words, she seems to have a "poetic" way of speaking.
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* LadyInRed: According to [=GA=]'s artwork of her, she wore a red jacket and matching lipstick
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* MakeupIsEvil: According to [=GA=]'s artwork of her, she wears a lot of makeup.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: His diatribes made Evelyn and Batty sick to their stomachs.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: He started off as a regular guy, until, [[spoiler: someone shot him the neck and dumped him in a lake, before he was found by some (as he put it) "lunatics" who did stuff to him that we won't mention here (but it involved a woman named "Betty"), and the rest that wasn't really said, besides that it involved mysterious circumstances an a GroinAttack]]
* GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, which probably came from what lead to him becoming the "Human Zombie
* GroinAttack: He implies [[spoiler he was on the receiving end of one in his past, as he has a steel pipe doubling as what would be his umnentionables]]
* FeelNoPain: His past robbed him to feel pain, so he doesn't notice how his cigarette would be burning him.
* FunetikAcsent: When we first meet him, he speaks to Batty over the phone using this trope
* GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, which probably came from what lead to him becoming the "Human Zombie
* GroinAttack: He implies [[spoiler he was on the receiving end of one in his past, as he has a steel pipe doubling as what would be his umnentionables]]
* FeelNoPain: His past robbed him to feel pain, so he doesn't notice how his cigarette would be burning him.
* FunetikAcsent: When we first meet him, he speaks to Batty over the phone using this trope
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* {{Hipster}}: He has some shades of this, with his interest in folk music, vinyl records, and his rather laidback but cultured approach to things.
* ShoutOut: His middle name "Frusciante" is a reference to the lead guitarist of Music/RedHotChiliPeppers
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* AmbiguousDisorder: If we had to guess, this guy might be going senile, as he's really not all there.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: If he's not senile, he's really, really strange, unnerving Dr. Batty even.
* HookHand: He has hooks for both hands. The narration lampshades this by saying "picked up his phone through seemingly mysterious means"
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: If he's not senile, he's really, really strange, unnerving Dr. Batty even.
* HookHand: He has hooks for both hands. The narration lampshades this by saying "picked up his phone through seemingly mysterious means"
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* NoodleIncident: What happened to this guy's hands?
* SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any, either.
* UnknownCharacter: Tying into MysteriousPast, we don't know much about this guy besides that he likes bagel bites and that he's killed two people (and a dog).
* SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any, either.
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* BreakTheCutie: She goes through a nasty one but she gets better
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* BreakTheCutie: She goes through a nasty one one, after [[spoiler: confronting Dr. Batty about killing her ex, Masanori, finding out that he brainwashed Izanami into thinking she killed Masanori, and then having to face either of those two]] but she gets better
*PurpleProse: While she doesn't use a lot of big words, she seems to have a "poetic" way of speaking.
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!!Associated Tropes
Satsuki's hacker friend
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*DisappearedDad: It's briefly mentioned is dad died before the fic started.
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-->"I don't know what is wrong with me. Part of me is feeling regret, sorrow and shame for the actions i've been inflicting upon others. However, I also feel a lot of pleasure and satisfaction towards said actions at the same time. Maybe...maybe what's happening to me is what happened to my father when he conducted the experiments that prematurely took his life from this world, which were the same experiments I tried all of my life to improve on. Maybe...maybe i'm ending up like my father, except I cannot bring myself to end my life like he did. Maybe...maybe that's why my mother stopped acting like a tulip in the meadows and started to act more like a soggy piece of seaweed that's been tainted by too much algae. Maybe...maybe I really am...a fucking bitch people in the paparazzi that raised an equally malicious fucking bitch that I called my daughter. Yet...I cannot help...cannot help but smile as I think of touching her...touching Satsuki...and touching Nui while reverted back to the woman Soichiro turned her into against my own benefit, which I managed to fix just by telling the pharmacy to stop giving her the meds that made her normal. Not for her own good...but for mine."
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The Tokyo Bay PD chief.
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A former employee turned soldier of Tabuchi
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* AbusiveParents: Unclear, although her son, Simon, did ask his aunt if she'll be a better mother to him.
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* AbusiveParents: Unclear, although her son, Simon, did ask his aunt aunt, Marilyn if she'll be a better mother to him.him, so that has to beg a few questions.
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*LadyInRed: According to [=GA=]'s artwork of her, she wore a red jacket and matching lipstick
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A war vetran
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mostly. He's patriotic to a really big degree and is in general good natured, however, he's also hotblooded and TriggerHappy, looking to snipe anyone in the name of "Mother America". This is best reflected in his way of speaking.
--->'''To Evelyn about how he met Batty''': "Nah, madame. They just recommended Dr. Batty for me when I nearly beat the Jesus out of Mr. Sandbox when he accidentally pissed on my wife's favorite rug one lazy Saturday afternoon. As Unamerican as pissing on hospitality can be, killing an innocent house pet is even more Unamerican to the point that if I did, I would've called my favorite vice president of the past decade to come on over to my ranch and kick me in the nards four times to feel the pain Jesus felt when he got nailed to the cross, because Jesus dying for our sins is very, very American."
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such and that was why he joined Dr. Batty's cause, as it meant "sniping people in the name of Mother America".
--->'''To Evelyn about how he met Batty''': "Nah, madame. They just recommended Dr. Batty for me when I nearly beat the Jesus out of Mr. Sandbox when he accidentally pissed on my wife's favorite rug one lazy Saturday afternoon. As Unamerican as pissing on hospitality can be, killing an innocent house pet is even more Unamerican to the point that if I did, I would've called my favorite vice president of the past decade to come on over to my ranch and kick me in the nards four times to feel the pain Jesus felt when he got nailed to the cross, because Jesus dying for our sins is very, very American."
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A "human zombie" of from Germany
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*DarkAndTroubledPast: He started off as a regular guy, until, [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
someone shot him the neck and dumped him in a lake, before he was found by some (as he put it) "lunatics" who did stuff to him that we won't mention here (but it involved a woman named "Betty"), and the rest that wasn't really said, besides that it involved mysterious circumstances an a GroinAttack]]
*GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, which probably came from what lead to him becoming the "Human Zombie
*GroinAttack: He implies [[spoiler he was on the receiving end of one in his past, as he has a steel pipe doubling as what would be his umnentionables]]
*FeelNoPain: His past robbed him to feel pain, so he doesn't notice how his cigarette would be burning him.
*FunetikAcsent: When we first meet him, he speaks to Batty over the phone using this trope
--->"Oh yez, Mr. Batty. It iz veddy gut to speak to you again. What are you up to at zist time of za day?"
KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: In a YourHeadASplode way Ch. 23]]
*NoOneShouldSurviveThat: How he became the "Human Zombie" is bit of MindScrew in terms of how he even remembered, much less survived any of that.
*GlasgowSmile: According to [=GA=]'s official artwork of him, which probably came from what lead to him becoming the "Human Zombie
*GroinAttack: He implies [[spoiler he was on the receiving end of one in his past, as he has a steel pipe doubling as what would be his umnentionables]]
*FeelNoPain: His past robbed him to feel pain, so he doesn't notice how his cigarette would be burning him.
*FunetikAcsent: When we first meet him, he speaks to Batty over the phone using this trope
--->"Oh yez, Mr. Batty. It iz veddy gut to speak to you again. What are you up to at zist time of za day?"
KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: In a YourHeadASplode way Ch. 23]]
*NoOneShouldSurviveThat: How he became the "Human Zombie" is bit of MindScrew in terms of how he even remembered, much less survived any of that.
A brunette guitar player who led a band called "Neutral Chili Tree"
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*{{Hipster}}: He has some shades of this, with his interest in folk music, vinyl records, and his rather laidback but cultured approach to things.
*ShoutOut: His middle name "Frusciante" is a reference to the lead guitarist of Music/RedHotChiliPeppers
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A wheelchairbound geriatric, who's morbidly obese
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*AmbiguousDisorder: If we had to guess, this guy might be going senile, as he's really not all there.
*{{Cloudcuckoolander}}: If he's not senile, he's really, really strange, unnerving Dr. Batty even.
*HookHand: He has hooks for both hands. The narration lampshades this by saying "picked up his phone through seemingly mysterious means"
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Ryuko got rid of him by putting a foil-wrapped chicken in a microwave and turning it on]]
*NoodleIncident: What happened to this guy's hands?
*SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
*TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any, either.
*UnknownCharacter: Tying into MysteriousPast, we don't know much about this guy besides that he likes bagel bites and that he's killed two people (and a dog).
*{{Cloudcuckoolander}}: If he's not senile, he's really, really strange, unnerving Dr. Batty even.
*HookHand: He has hooks for both hands. The narration lampshades this by saying "picked up his phone through seemingly mysterious means"
KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:
*NoodleIncident: What happened to this guy's hands?
*SuperWheelchair: According to Ch. 22, he has a high tech wheelchair of some kind with mounted weapons and software
*TrademarkFavoriteFood: Bagel bites. He won't stop to offer you any, either.
*UnknownCharacter: Tying into MysteriousPast, we don't know much about this guy besides that he likes bagel bites and that he's killed two people (and a dog).
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*NoodleIncident: He had some interaction with Ryuko that involved a conversation about how he (and a troupe of women) could take down Satsuki, participated in some scheme (with the student council) to fool everyone that marijuana was banned, and, somehow, got tossed in the jail by authorities (which may or may be related to the aforementioned). How any of that happened is a mystery.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: She's a cannibal and doesn't see herself as evil but she eats some of [[spoiler: Laporte's corpse]], stating he deserved to die, despite killing and eating other people prior for whatever reason. She also doesn't get how being cannibal makes her dangerous.
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* LuxuryPrisonSuite: How he sees Honnouji Jail and he insists that is. Sure, the jail isn't a [[HellholePrison hellhole]] and is a little permissive (with the wardens being so nice) but it's not as luxurious as he thinks it is.
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* TheDreaded: Whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much harsher in hindsight). It's particularly telling if she warns Dr. Batty to steer clear of her.
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* TheDreaded: Whoever (or whatever) she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much harsher in hindsight). It's particularly telling if she warns Dr. Batty to steer clear of her.
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A French inmate of Honnouji Jail. In chapter 27 and 28, we [[spoiler: find out his real name is Hue Huey Trimple and that he's not French, actually, he's an American child predator]].
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*JerkassRealization: As per chapter 22:
--> "Everything that i've learned about lately has made me think of all the shit I've pulled on everyone and it makes me feel like a fucking monster. A fucking monster no better than the mother that created a chemically unbalanced older sister that had managed to reform, only to go crazy again when my mother...me and Satsuki's mother...decided that she wanted an extra helping hand and pulled strings to fuck Nui Harime over for her own selfish desires. The same mother that fucked with your head and made you a frothing lunatic that in turn, made me a sex crazed maniac that killed several people to satisfy whatever sick desires my mother implanted into you. The same fucking mother that killed one of my sister's father, who she already had ruined his reputation as a great man many years early. My mother...is the kind of monster I almost allowed myself to become...and I must find a way to atone for all the bullshit I made everyone else put up with from here on out. No more Ryuko Kiryuin, Tokyo's Number One Rich Bitch. That shit is old, old history as far as i'm concerned."
--> "Everything that i've learned about lately has made me think of all the shit I've pulled on everyone and it makes me feel like a fucking monster. A fucking monster no better than the mother that created a chemically unbalanced older sister that had managed to reform, only to go crazy again when my mother...me and Satsuki's mother...decided that she wanted an extra helping hand and pulled strings to fuck Nui Harime over for her own selfish desires. The same mother that fucked with your head and made you a frothing lunatic that in turn, made me a sex crazed maniac that killed several people to satisfy whatever sick desires my mother implanted into you. The same fucking mother that killed one of my sister's father, who she already had ruined his reputation as a great man many years early. My mother...is the kind of monster I almost allowed myself to become...and I must find a way to atone for all the bullshit I made everyone else put up with from here on out. No more Ryuko Kiryuin, Tokyo's Number One Rich Bitch. That shit is old, old history as far as i'm concerned."
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: You can't say Satsuki was the nicest person in canon, nor could you say she was most lighthearted, however, she most certainly is one of the nicest people her, here, along with being the one the more lighthearted. Likewise, she wasn't a stoner, either.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After learning that was his own psychiatrist that killed Satsuki's ex-boyfriend, ex-boyfriend]], he begins to question the very value of the mission he joined in on.]]
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*NewTransferStudent: He started off as this
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* TheDreaded: Whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight harsher in hindsight]]). It's particularly telling if she warns Dr. Batty to steer clear of her.
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* TheDreaded: Whoever she is. From we get in chapter 22, Ragyou seems to not like interacting with her too much (which retroactively makes Ragyou's phone conversation with her ten chapters earlier look much [[HarsherInHindsight much harsher in hindsight]]).hindsight). It's particularly telling if she warns Dr. Batty to steer clear of her.
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*SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the original, she kills herself, while, here, she surrenders and, willingly, goes to prison]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: Following what Steven Magnum told him after he was willingly spared the same fate of a good portion of is cohorts.
* LastStand: He even called his family to leave a final message saying that he loved the hell out of them; [[spoiler:and he knew that he wouldn't last against the very person who made him into such a nutbar.]]
* LastStand: He even called his family to leave a final message saying that he loved the hell out of them; [[spoiler:and he knew that he wouldn't last against the very person who made him into such a nutbar.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After learning that was his own psychiatrist that killed Satsuki's ex-boyfriend, he begins to question the very value of the mission he joined in on.]]