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-->"While violence is a beautiful thing, it is best not to get lost in it. One must take time to enjoy the finer things in life. Good food, music, the likes."
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* FateWorseThanDeath: He punishes [[FantasticRacism Quirk supremacists]] by dismembering their bodyparts that control their Quirk.
--> "If a quirkist had wings, I'd cut them off. If they could shoot spikes from their arms, I'd cut them off. I'd never kill them, because I wanted them to live without their precious powers, regretting their choices until the end of their days, until the end of their pathetic lives."
--> "If a quirkist had wings, I'd cut them off. If they could shoot spikes from their arms, I'd cut them off. I'd never kill them, because I wanted them to live without their precious powers, regretting their choices until the end of their days, until the end of their pathetic lives."
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: He punishes [[FantasticRacism Quirk supremacists]] by dismembering their bodyparts that control their Quirk.
--> "If a quirkist had wings, I'd cut them off. If they could shoot spikes from their arms, I'd cut them off. I'd never kill them, because I wanted them to live without their precious powers, regretting their choices until the end of their days, until the end of their pathetic lives.
--> "If a quirkist had wings, I'd cut them off. If they could shoot spikes from their arms, I'd cut them off. I'd never kill them, because I wanted them to live without their precious powers, regretting their choices until the end of their days, until the end of their pathetic lives.
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: His previous weapon of choice as a vigilante. He switched to SinisterScimitar after joining The Sky Pirates to fit the theme.
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: His previous weapon of choice as a vigilante. He switched to SinisterScimitar [[SinisterScimitar a cutlass]] after joining The Sky Pirates to fit the theme.
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* SwordAndGun: After joining The Sky Pirates, he carries two handguns alongside his Scimitar.
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* SwordAndGun: After joining The Sky Pirates, he carries two handguns alongside his Scimitar.cutlass.
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* OrganicTechnology: While most parts of The Cloud Splitter's parts are normal if high-tech, its engine, which stores various [[GreenRocks Fractals]] and a Psuedo-Chaos Emerald, visually described as "a giant flesh egg", and so complex, it baffles [[TheEngineer Rorou]].
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* OrganicTechnology: While most parts of The Cloud Splitter's parts are normal if high-tech, its engine, engine is made of Chaos Engine, which stores various [[GreenRocks Fractals]] looks like it's made of flesh, and a Psuedo-Chaos Emerald, visually described as "a giant flesh egg", and is so complex, it baffles [[TheEngineer Rorou]].
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** Her sister is implied to experience the same thing since it is implied that she has a mutated Quirk and that Nezu has transferred her away from where she lives.
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** Her sister is implied to experience the same thing since it is implied that she has a mutated mutation Quirk and that Nezu has transferred her away from where she lives.
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* ArtInitiatesLife: Her Quirk turns her fingertips into a paintbrush, and she can make the drawings she makes come to life for an hour.
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* ArtInitiatesLife: Her Quirk turns her fingertips into a paintbrush, and she can make the drawings she makes creates come to life for an hour.
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Rorou is a genius in engineering who has declined many jobs offers due to finding them dull. He is enticed by Giza about a more exciting job opportunity if he joins The Sky Pirates.
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The helmsman of The Sky Pirate. Rorou is a genius in engineering who has declined many jobs offers due to finding them dull. He is enticed by Giza about a more exciting job opportunity if he joins The Sky Pirates.
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* TheEngineer: His main role in the Pirates' crew.
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* TheEngineer: His main role in the Pirates' crew.crew besides the helmsman.
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* OrganicTechnology: While most parts of The Cloud Splitter's parts are normal if high-tech, its engine, which stores various [[GreenRocks Fractals]] and a Psuedo-Chaos Emerald, visually described as "a giant flesh egg", and so complex, it baffles [[TheEngineer Rorou]].
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* FriendlySniper: She's the sharpshooter of the crew, using a sniper rifle created with her Quirk.
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* FriendlySniper: She's the sharpshooter of the crew, Pirates, using a sniper rifle created with her Quirk.
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* ResignedToTheCall: She's the only one who is more reluctant to accept Izuku and Nezu's job offer, but she knows that it's the only way to directly oppose MLA without risking her sister.
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* ResignedToTheCall: She's the only one who is more reluctant to accept Izuku and Nezu's job offer, but she knows that it's the only way to directly oppose MLA quirkist people without risking putting her sister.sister in anger.
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* ''Later, while Kaza is sleeping on the couch''*\\
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** Her sister is implied to experience the same thing
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** Her sister is implied to experience the same thingthing since it is implied that she has a mutated Quirk and that Nezu has transferred her away from where she lives.
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* HitboxDissonance: His Quirk allows him to swap real-life-equivalent of Hitboxes of two objects. He first demonstrates this by beheading The Hound from far away by using his Quirk to relocate The Hound's hitbox next to him
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* HitboxDissonance: His Quirk allows him to swap real-life-equivalent of Hitboxes of two objects. He first demonstrates this by beheading The Hound from far away by using his Quirk to relocate The Hound's hitbox next to himhim.
* IWasYoungAndNeededTheMoney: His excuse to how he knows about Villain Trade and why he uses their service.
--> *''Ashamed''* "I needed to eat."
* KatanasAreJustBetter: His previous weapon of choice as a vigilante. He switched to SinisterScimitar after joining The Sky Pirates to fit the theme.
* IWasYoungAndNeededTheMoney: His excuse to how he knows about Villain Trade and why he uses their service.
--> *''Ashamed''* "I needed to eat."
* KatanasAreJustBetter: His previous weapon of choice as a vigilante. He switched to SinisterScimitar after joining The Sky Pirates to fit the theme.
* SwordAndGun: After joining The Sky Pirates, he carries two handguns alongside his Scimitar.
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* MasterForger: She can forge and copy things with her Quirk, with the smell of paint being its only tell.
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* MasterForger: She can forge and copy things with her Quirk, with the smell of its tell being that it smells like paint being its only tell.and feels like touching an artwork.
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* TomboyishBaseballCap: She wears one backward.
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* TomboyishBaseballCap: She wears one backward. She replaces it with [[BadassesWearBandanas red bandana]] after joining the Pirates.
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* BadassesWearBandanas: Wears one as part of his pirate ensemble.
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''Later, while Kaza is sleeping on the couch''*\\
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* CrazyPrepared: She has prepared a very thorough cover story and plans for Tsubu and Karaki's father and daughter's disguise.
--> '''Kaza:''' Alright listen up, here is what you two are going to do. You are a father and daughter. If anyone asks, she's ten, The mother is working overseas, you live uptown, and your names are Machi and Gai respectively. You're going to go to several stores, not just one, buying all that at once would be suspicious. Got it?\\
'''Tsubu:''' Man you really thought this out huh?
--> '''Kaza:''' Alright listen up, here is what you two are going to do. You are a father and daughter. If anyone asks, she's ten, The mother is working overseas, you live uptown, and your names are Machi and Gai respectively. You're going to go to several stores, not just one, buying all that at once would be suspicious. Got it?\\
'''Tsubu:''' Man you really thought this out huh?
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Downplayed. While she did not ask Shift to stop being a vigilante, she advised him to lighten up and be more optimistic since, from what he said, Shift's parents must be some good people, and they might want their son to enjoy life.
* KillerYoyo: Due to her short size makes her inadequate for close combat, she uses yoyos as her weapon. Later, Giza gives her one made of metal that can crack a concrete wall.
* KillerYoyo: Due to her short size makes her inadequate for close combat, she uses yoyos as her weapon. Later, Giza gives her one made of metal that can crack a concrete wall.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Downplayed. While she did not ask Shift Suru to stop being a vigilante, she advised him to lighten up and be more optimistic since, from what he said, Shift's his parents must be some good people, and they might want their son to enjoy life.
* KillerYoyo: Due to her short size makes her inadequate for close combat, she uses yoyos as her weapon.Later, Giza gives her one made of metal that can crack a concrete wall.wall as an offer to come with him.
* KillerYoyo: Due to her short size makes her inadequate for close combat, she uses yoyos as her weapon.
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** Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest disguised as a young girl]] so she and Tsubu can go buy groceries under the guise of a father and his daughter.
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** Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest [[AdultsDressedAsChildren disguised as a young girl]] so she and Tsubu can go buy groceries under the guise of a father and his daughter.
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[[folder: Karaki Aesu -- Yo - Yo]]
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[[folder: Karaki Aesu -- Yo - Yo]]Yo-Yo]]
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[[folder: Karaki Aesu -- Yo-Yo]]
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[[folder: Karaki Aesu -- Yo-Yo]]Yo - Yo]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Suru implies this to be the reason why she becomes TheRunaway.
-->'''Suru:''' Just look at her. Do you think those dirty quirkist would ever let her just live her life? No, they have to attack her, just because she doesn't fit their standards of what a person should be.
-->'''Suru:''' Just look at her. Do you think those dirty quirkist would ever let her just live her life? No, they have to attack her, just because she doesn't fit their standards of what a person should be.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Suru implies this AllOfTheOtherReindeer:
** Implied to be the reason why she becomesTheRunaway.
-->'''Suru:'''a criminal.
--> "Damn it. I never fucking wanted this…I just wanted to live in peace for fucks sake! But those damned bastards! Those damn quirkist bastards! They wouldn't just leave me the fuck alone!"\\
''Later, while Kaza is sleeping on the couch''*\\
'''Suru:''' Just look at her. Do you think those dirty quirkist would ever let her just live her life? No, they have to attack her, just because she doesn't fit their standards of what a person shouldbe.be.
** Her sister is implied to experience the same thing
** Implied to be the reason why she becomes
-->'''Suru:'''
--> "Damn it. I never fucking wanted this…I just wanted to live in peace for fucks sake! But those damned bastards! Those damn quirkist bastards! They wouldn't just leave me the fuck alone!"\\
''Later, while Kaza is sleeping on the couch''*\\
'''Suru:''' Just look at her. Do you think those dirty quirkist would ever let her just live her life? No, they have to attack her, just because she doesn't fit their standards of what a person should
** Her sister is implied to experience the same thing
* ResignedToTheCall: She's the only one who is more reluctant to accept Izuku and Nezu's job offer, but she knows that it's the only way to directly oppose MLA without risking her sister.
-->"I'll be your damn villain. Just make sure [[PayEvilUntoEvil the bastards I'm hurting deserve it]]. Or I'm coming after you next."
-->"I'll be your damn villain. Just make sure [[PayEvilUntoEvil the bastards I'm hurting deserve it]]. Or I'm coming after you next."
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Downplayed, since The Sky Pirates are AntiHeroTeam with CodeOfHonour, but she accepts to be Izuku and Nezu's "villain".
-->"I'll be your damn villain. Just make sure [[PayEvilUntoEvil the bastards I'm hurting deserve it]]. Or I'm coming after you next."
-->"I'll be your damn villain. Just make sure [[PayEvilUntoEvil the bastards I'm hurting deserve it]]. Or I'm coming after you next."
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Downplayed, since The Sky Pirates ScaryTeeth: Her teeth are AntiHeroTeam with CodeOfHonour, but she accepts to be Izuku and Nezu's "villain".
-->"I'll be your damn villain. Just make sure [[PayEvilUntoEvil the bastards I'm hurting deserve it]]. Or I'm coming after you next."rows of sharp ones.
-->"I'll be your damn villain. Just make sure [[PayEvilUntoEvil the bastards I'm hurting deserve it]]. Or I'm coming after you next."
* DrowningMySorrows: His EstablishingCharacterMoment has him buy a bottle of sake with what's left of her money, planning to drink it and give up on life.
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* HowDoIShotWeb: He is a bit rusty in using his Quirk since he hasn't used it ever since he start working as a security guard.
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* HowDoIShotWeb: He is a bit rusty in using his Quirk since he hasn't used it ever since he start started working as a security guard.guard.
* JoblessParentDrama: He lost his job, is blacklisted from finding a new one, and has barely enough money to support his Quirkless daughter.
* JoblessParentDrama: He lost his job, is blacklisted from finding a new one, and has barely enough money to support his Quirkless daughter.
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!!!'''Hair:''' White
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!!!'''Hair:''' WhiteWhite with smatterings of other colors.
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* ArtInitiatesLife: Her Quirk allows her fingers to produce ink, and she can make the drawings made by said ink come to life for an hour.
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* ArtInitiatesLife: Her Quirk allows turns her fingers to produce ink, fingertips into a paintbrush, and she can make the drawings made by said ink she makes come to life for an hour.
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** Also, while she's into violence, she believes that it's okay to dial back if it's getting to be too much.
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** Also, while she's into violence, she believes that it's okay to dial back if it's getting to be too much.
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-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. [[ThePigPen You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship]], you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
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-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the our alcohol. [[ThePigPen You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship]], you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: What she worries about if he declines the job offer.
--> "Well seeing as you know who I am, what I've done, and where I live, and I don't trust you not to arrest me if I say no, I'm in."
--> "Well seeing as you know who I am, what I've done, and where I live, and I don't trust you not to arrest me if I say no, I'm in."
--> "Good lord it's just too easy. Can't they give me a challenge for fucks sake? Or at least something exciting."
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Rorou is a genius in engineering who has declined many job offers due to finding them dull. He is enticed by Giza about a more exciting job opportunity if he joins The Sky Pirates.
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Rorou is a genius in engineering who has declined many job jobs offers due to finding them dull. He is enticed by Giza about a more exciting job opportunity if he joins The Sky Pirates.
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* BadassesWearBandanas: Wears one as part of his pirate enesemble.
* InstantExpert: He gets complete understanding on how to use and operates an item when he uses his Quirk on it.
* InstantExpert: He gets complete understanding on how to use and operates an item when he uses his Quirk on it.
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* BadassesWearBandanas: Wears one as part of his pirate enesemble.
ensemble.
* InstantExpert: He gets a complete understandingon of how to use and operates an item when he uses his Quirk on it.
* InstantExpert: He gets a complete understanding
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* InstantExpert: He gets complete understanding on how to use and operates an item when he uses his Quirk on it.
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* {{Expy}}: of Ridley from {{Franchise/Metroid}}.
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* {{Expy}}: of Ridley from {{Franchise/Metroid}}.''{{Franchise/Metroid}}''.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Suru implies this to be the reason why she becomes TheRunaway.
-->'''Suru:''' Just look at her. Do you think those dirty quirkist would ever let her just live her life? No, they have to attack her, just because she doesn't fit their standards of what a person should be.
-->'''Suru:''' Just look at her. Do you think those dirty quirkist would ever let her just live her life? No, they have to attack her, just because she doesn't fit their standards of what a person should be.
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* TheCaptain: Izuku elects her to be The Sky Pirates'.
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* CodeOfHonour: They only [[EvilVersusEvil target other villains]], and they [[ThouShaltNotKill shouldn't kill their foes]], merely incapacitating them for any incoming Pro Heroes.
* CoolAirship: The Cloud Splitter. the old sailing ship-looking airship can fly higher than most airplanes, [[BottomlessFuelTanks never runs out of fuel]] (as long as it is well-maintained), and is equipped with flamethrowers, turret guns, and DeflectorShields that also work as a cloaking device and atmosphere adjuster.
* CoolAirship: The Cloud Splitter. the old sailing ship-looking airship can fly higher than most airplanes, [[BottomlessFuelTanks never runs out of fuel]] (as long as it is well-maintained), and is equipped with flamethrowers, turret guns, and DeflectorShields that also work as a cloaking device and atmosphere adjuster.
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* CodeOfHonour: They only [[EvilVersusEvil target other villains]], and they [[ThouShaltNotKill shouldn't didn't kill their foes]], merely incapacitating them for any incoming Pro Heroes.
* CoolAirship: The Cloud Splitter.the The old sailing ship-looking airship can fly higher than most airplanes, [[BottomlessFuelTanks never runs out of fuel]] (as long as it is well-maintained), and is equipped with flamethrowers, turret guns, and DeflectorShields that also work as a cloaking device and atmosphere adjuster.
* CoolAirship: The Cloud Splitter.
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* TheLoad: Kaza certainly sees her as one, pointing out the reason why she had no right whining against going out shopping looking like a child.
-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. [[ThePigPen You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship]], you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. [[ThePigPen You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship]], you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
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* TheLoad: Kaza certainly sees her as one, pointing out the reason why she had no right whining against going out shopping looking like while dressing up as a child.
-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. [[ThePigPen You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship]], you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This(Grocery (grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. [[ThePigPen You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship]], you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: He punishes [[FantasticRacism Quirk supremacists]] by dismembering their bodyparts that control their Quirk.
--> "If a quirkist had wings, I'd cut them off. If they could shoot spikes from their arms, I'd cut them off. I'd never kill them, because I wanted them to live without their precious powers, regretting their choices until the end of their days, until the end of their pathetic lives.
--> "If a quirkist had wings, I'd cut them off. If they could shoot spikes from their arms, I'd cut them off. I'd never kill them, because I wanted them to live without their precious powers, regretting their choices until the end of their days, until the end of their pathetic lives.
* TechnicalPacifist: He never kills the villains he hunts.
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* FriendlySniper: She's the gunner of the crew, using a sniper rifle created with her Quirk.
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* FriendlySniper: She's the gunner sharpshooter of the crew, using a sniper rifle created with her Quirk.
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: She had a psychotic break as a child after finding her younger brother died from an accident. She wasn’t able to properly grieve his death until she painted an effigy of his corpse at the time of his death as she found him surrounded by his earthly possessions. She’s of the opinion that it’s the most beautiful thing she’s ever created with her Quirk. [[CreepyChild Naturally, their parents weren’t pleased.]]
* MadArtist: She finds destruction beautiful, and that weapons are as much a tool of art as brushes and pencils are.
--> "Explosions making debris fly, blood painting the streets, people showing their true colors, and trampling over each other as they run for their lives. That is beauty. Bombs, guns, blades, and cannons, to me, are not weapons, but tools of art, the same as a paintbrush. A villain attack is just art in motion."
* MadArtist: She finds destruction beautiful, and that weapons are as much a tool of art as brushes and pencils are.
--> "Explosions making debris fly, blood painting the streets, people showing their true colors, and trampling over each other as they run for their lives. That is beauty. Bombs, guns, blades, and cannons, to me, are not weapons, but tools of art, the same as a paintbrush. A villain attack is just art in motion."
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: She had a psychotic break as a child after finding witnessing her younger brother died from die in an accident. She wasn’t able to properly grieve his death until she painted an effigy of his corpse at the time of his death as she found him surrounded by his earthly possessions. She’s of the opinion that it’s the most beautiful thing she’s ever created with her Quirk. [[CreepyChild Naturally, their parents weren’t pleased.]]
* MadArtist: She finds destruction beautiful, and that weapons are as much a tool of art as brushes and pencilsare.
are. The main reason she joins The Sky Pirates is that Giza, Izuku, and Nezu promise that she has the freedom to let her monstrous drawing loose.
--> "Explosions making debris fly, blood painting the streets, people showing their true colors, and trampling over each other as they run for their lives. That is beauty. Bombs, guns, blades, and cannons, to me, are not weapons, but tools of art, the same as a paintbrush. A villain attack is just art in motion." I tried to show people this, but they couldn't understand my vision. They locked away both me and my wondrous art, to never see the light of day. But now, I am free. Free to show the world my art. Free to destroy. Free to create. Free to burn my art into the minds and souls of the people."
* TheMadHatter: Downplayed. She knows that others see her as a MadArtist, and is not letting their critiques bother her.
-->'''Yoko:''' *''after listening to the rundown of Pei's reason to join The Sky Pirates''* Okay, you're a psychopath, got it.\\
'''Pei:''' Hmph, call me what you will.
* MadArtist: She finds destruction beautiful, and that weapons are as much a tool of art as brushes and pencils
--> "Explosions making debris fly, blood painting the streets, people showing their true colors, and trampling over each other as they run for their lives. That is beauty. Bombs, guns, blades, and cannons, to me, are not weapons, but tools of art, the same as a paintbrush. A villain attack is just art in motion.
* TheMadHatter: Downplayed. She knows that others see her as a MadArtist, and is not letting their critiques bother her.
-->'''Yoko:''' *''after listening to the rundown of Pei's reason to join The Sky Pirates''* Okay, you're a psychopath, got it.\\
'''Pei:''' Hmph, call me what you will.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Since her Quirk is an ArtInitiatesLife, and her favorite drawings are giant monsters that destroy cities...
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Since Implied, since her Quirk is an ArtInitiatesLife, ArtInitiatesLife and her favorite drawings are giant monsters that destroy cities...
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** Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest disguised as a young girl]] so she and Tsubu can go buy groceries as a father and daughter.
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** Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest disguised as a young girl]] so she and Tsubu can go buy groceries as under the guise of a father and his daughter.
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-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship, you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
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-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. [[ThePigPen You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship, ship]], you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: She looks like an elementary school girl, but is actually 20 years old. Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest disguised as a young girl]] when she and Tsubu go buy groceries.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: She looks like an elementary school girl, but is actually 20 years old.
** Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest disguised as a young girl]]when so she and Tsubu can go buy groceries.groceries as a father and daughter.
-->'''Kaza:''' People will be less likely to look at a father-daughter duo and think they're villains, so for once you being a loli is actually useful.
** Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest disguised as a young girl]]
-->'''Kaza:''' People will be less likely to look at a father-daughter duo and think they're villains, so for once you being a loli is actually useful.
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* CigarChomper: A rare female example. she lit it with her BreathWeapon.
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-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship, you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are the only thing you're useful for, and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
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-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship, you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are [[DownplayedTrope the only thing you're useful for, for]], and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
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* ChargedAttack: Her Quirk doubles her attack consecutively as long as the first strike hits and she attacks every 30 seconds.
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* ChargedAttack: Her Quirk doubles her attack damages consecutively as long as the first strike hits and she attacks every 30 seconds.
* TheLoad: Kaza certainly sees her as one, pointing out the reason why she had no right whining against going out shopping looking like a child.
-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship, you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are the only thing you're useful for, and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
-->'''Kaza:''' You eat most of our food and drink most of the alcohol. You smell like shit because you almost never shower, you leave your clothes all around the damn ship, you never wash dishes, and you never clean after yourself. This (Grocery shopping), and fighting are the only thing you're useful for, and you WILL pull your fucking weight.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: She looks like an elementary school girl, but is actually 20 years old.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: She looks like an elementary school girl, but is actually 20 years old. Kaza [[ExploitedTrope exploit this]] by making her [[ForcedIntoTheirSundayBest disguised as a young girl]] when she and Tsubu go buy groceries.
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* UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy: She is forced to wear a young girl's dress and had her hair done into twin tails when she and Tsubu go out shopping.
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[[folder: [=Captain WinDrake=]]]
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[[folder: Kaza Zuko -- [=Captain WinDrake=]]]
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[[folder: Shift]]
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[[folder: Suru Sosaka -- Shift]]
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[[folder: Rough]]
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[[folder: Tsubu Ukog -- Rough]]
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[[folder: Yo-Yo]]
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[[folder: Karaki Aesu -- Yo-Yo]]
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[[folder: Lilith]]
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[[folder: Yoko Miru -- Lilith]]
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* AbsurdlySharpClaws: Long, black, and sharp ones on both hands and feet that are strong enough ro tear an armored truck.
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* AbsurdlySharpClaws: Long, black, and sharp ones on both hands and feet that are strong enough ro to tear an armored truck.
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* APirate400YearsTooLate: They dress like them.
* CodeOfHonour: They only target other villains, and they [[ThouShaltNotKill shouldn't kill their foes]], merely incapacitating them for any incoming Pro Heroes.
* CodeOfHonour: They only target other villains, and they [[ThouShaltNotKill shouldn't kill their foes]], merely incapacitating them for any incoming Pro Heroes.
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* APirate400YearsTooLate: They dress like them.
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* CodeOfHonour: They only [[EvilVersusEvil target othervillains, villains]], and they [[ThouShaltNotKill shouldn't kill their foes]], merely incapacitating them for any incoming Pro Heroes.
* CodeOfHonour: They only [[EvilVersusEvil target other
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The Sky Pirates is a group of [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Sky]] [[SkyPirate Pirates]] that are [[spoiler: secretly founded by Izuku and Nezu to tackle League of Villains, Meta Liberation Army, and The Foot without the interference of the Pro Hero's red tapes]].
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The Sky Pirates is a group of [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Sky]] [[SkyPirate Pirates]] that are [[spoiler: secretly founded by Izuku and Nezu to tackle League of Villains, Meta Liberation Army, and The Foot without the interference of Pro Heroes and the Pro Hero's government's red tapes]].
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* AbsurdlySharpClaws: Long, black and sharp ones on both hands and feet that are strong enough ro tear an armored truck.
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* AbsurdlySharpClaws: Long, black black, and sharp ones on both hands and feet that are strong enough ro tear an armored truck.
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-->'''Kaza:''' "Seriously, how do you fit so much fucking booze in such a small body?"
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-->'''Kaza:''' "Seriously, Seriously, how do you fit so much fucking booze in such a small body?"body?
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* ShapingYourAttacks: His SignatureAttack is a giant pair of hands made of sand.