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!General
!Fleetfoot
* Hypocrite: Certainly comes off as one when she insults Sunset just after hearing about her being attacked then backpedaling when called out on it.
!Misty Fly
* AccompliceByInaction: Feels this way about the attack of Rainbow and Sunset because she told them the team couldn't vouch for them when they could have done something to stop it.
!Soarin
!Spitfire
!Surprise
!Fleetfoot
* Hypocrite: Certainly comes off as one when she insults Sunset just after hearing about her being attacked then backpedaling when called out on it.
!Misty Fly
* AccompliceByInaction: Feels this way about the attack of Rainbow and Sunset because she told them the team couldn't vouch for them when they could have done something to stop it.
!Soarin
!Spitfire
!Surprise
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!General
* DirtyCoward: Save Sweetie Belle, they lie to avoid responsibility for almost getting two students killed.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Play dumb when caught outside of Sweetie Belle.
!Apple Bloom
!Scootaloo
* SmugSnake: She has an appallingly low opinion of Rainbow, smugly declaring in Chapter 8 that she would have left Sunset by now. She says this after Rainbow and Sunset have been attacked and neither has showed up at school.
!Sweetie Belle
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: When called into Celestia's office she just tells the truth rather than lie.
* DirtyCoward: Save Sweetie Belle, they lie to avoid responsibility for almost getting two students killed.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Play dumb when caught outside of Sweetie Belle.
!Apple Bloom
!Scootaloo
* SmugSnake: She has an appallingly low opinion of Rainbow, smugly declaring in Chapter 8 that she would have left Sunset by now. She says this after Rainbow and Sunset have been attacked and neither has showed up at school.
!Sweetie Belle
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: When called into Celestia's office she just tells the truth rather than lie.
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* FairWeatherFriend: When Anon-A-Miss kicks off they don't stick around for very long.
!Applejack
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Forgot that her sister told Sunset her EmbarrassingNickname before Anon-A-Miss went up. [[spoiler:With Sour Sweet having the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsForgottenFriendship Memory Stone]], this may not be a coincidence.]]
!Fluttershy
* MeeknessIsWeakness: [[spoiler:She suspected that something was wrong with Anon-A-Miss when Rainbow sided with Sunset but was too afraid to speak up to the rest of her friends after seeing their anger.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: It's ''Fluttershy'', this trope is a given. [[spoiler:See MeeknessIsWeakness to see how this bites her.]]
!Pinkie Pie
!Rarity
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Forgot that Sweetie Belle was in the house during the slumber party before Anon-A-Miss posted her secret. [[spoiler:With Sour Sweet having the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsForgottenFriendship Memory Stone]], this may not be a coincidence.]]
* FairWeatherFriend: When Anon-A-Miss kicks off they don't stick around for very long.
!Applejack
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Forgot that her sister told Sunset her EmbarrassingNickname before Anon-A-Miss went up. [[spoiler:With Sour Sweet having the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsForgottenFriendship Memory Stone]], this may not be a coincidence.]]
!Fluttershy
* MeeknessIsWeakness: [[spoiler:She suspected that something was wrong with Anon-A-Miss when Rainbow sided with Sunset but was too afraid to speak up to the rest of her friends after seeing their anger.]]
* ShrinkingViolet: It's ''Fluttershy'', this trope is a given. [[spoiler:See MeeknessIsWeakness to see how this bites her.]]
!Pinkie Pie
!Rarity
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Forgot that Sweetie Belle was in the house during the slumber party before Anon-A-Miss posted her secret. [[spoiler:With Sour Sweet having the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsForgottenFriendship Memory Stone]], this may not be a coincidence.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: Anon-A-Miss fics have a bad habit of being the villain by {{Flanderization}} of her brash personality. This fic, however, opens with Rainbow and Sunset having one-one-one time with each other where Sunset gives up some personal information. Because of this, when Anon-A-Miss happens, Rainbow concludes that Sunset wouldn't give up that information if she was relapsing so she gives her a chance.
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* ForWantOfANail: Anon-A-Miss fics have a bad habit of Rainbow being the villain by {{Flanderization}} of her brash personality. This fic, however, opens with Rainbow and Sunset having one-one-one time with each other where Sunset gives up some personal information. Because of this, when Anon-A-Miss happens, Rainbow concludes that Sunset wouldn't give up that information if she was relapsing so she gives her a chance.
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The masterminds behind Anon-a-Miss.
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Leader of the Dazzlings and second oldest living siren.
Previous ruler of the sirens.
First siren and original queen.
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One of the Shadowbolts. She was one of the three responsible for saving Sunset and Rainbow's life.
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Father of Rainbow Dash and retired athlete.
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[[spoiler:Mother of Rainbow Dash]] and world renowned treasure hunter.
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AlphaBitch of Crystal Prep Academy [[spoiler: and Sunset's human counterpart]].
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[[folder:The Wondercolts Soccer Team]]
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* Doppelgänger: [[spoiler:Refers to Sunset as a 'bodysnatcher' in her confrontation with Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust.]]
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* Doppelgänger: AlternateSelf: [[spoiler:Refers to Sunset as a 'bodysnatcher' in her confrontation with Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust.]]
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Sour Sweet has managed to acquire [[spoiler:the same demon form as her pony counterpart]].
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* SuddenlyShouting: THis This being Sour Sweet...
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* Doppelganger: [[spoiler:Refers to Sunset as a 'bodysnatcher' in her confrontation with Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust.]]
* [[spoiler:EvilCounterpart: To her Equestrian counterpart.]]
* LargeHam: Being Sour Sweet, this is a bit of a given. [[spoiler: Her also being human Sunset? It's even more so.]]
* SuddenlyShouting: THis being Sour Sweet...
* [[spoiler:EvilCounterpart: To her Equestrian counterpart.]]
* LargeHam: Being Sour Sweet, this is a bit of a given. [[spoiler: Her also being human Sunset? It's even more so.]]
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* ClarkKenting: He's honest about his name, but Bray first appears acting as Crystal Prep's janitor. Its clear to the audience what's going on, but our heroes don't yet know of his connection.
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* ReformedButNotTamed: Sunset isn't the power hungry fallen student she once was, but the Anon-a-Miss event (and all of its fallout) has undeniably stopped her from ever being the openly kind-hearted do-gooder as seen in canon.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: While clearly lacking in some fields with her school work, Dash has shown on several occasions that she's nowhere near as stupid as others seem to think.
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* LightningBruiser: This being Rainbow Dash, speed is key. [[spoiler:However, also played literally given that her demon form conjures lightning.]]
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[[folder:[[spoiler:Tirek]]]]
Millenia ago, Tirek attempted to steal the magic of Equestria and take over the world. He was defeated when his brother, Scorpan, turned on him and saved Equestria. After escaping Tartarus 1000 years later, he was defeated once more, this time by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Now he's been released by his master for one final shot at redemption for his past failures: the extinction of the Siren race.
* BigBad: To the Sirens.
* TheDragon: To Bray, much to his annoyance.
* ThinkingOutLoud: We're introduced to him giving his third monologue in the last hour.
[[folder:[[spoiler:Tirek]]]]
Millenia ago, Tirek attempted to steal the magic of Equestria and take over the world. He was defeated when his brother, Scorpan, turned on him and saved Equestria. After escaping Tartarus 1000 years later, he was defeated once more, this time by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Now he's been released by his master for one final shot at redemption for his past failures: the extinction of the Siren race.
* BigBad: To the Sirens.
* TheDragon: To Bray, much to his annoyance.
* ThinkingOutLoud: We're introduced to him giving his third monologue in the last hour.
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[[folder:[[spoiler:Tirek]]]]
Millenia ago, Tirek attempted to steal the magic of Equestria and take over the world. He was defeated when his brother, Scorpan, turned on him and saved Equestria. After escaping Tartarus 1000 years later, he was defeated once more, this time by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Now he's been released by his master for one final shot at redemption for his past failures: the extinction of the Siren race.
* BigBad: To the Sirens.
* TheDragon: To Bray, much to his annoyance.
* ThinkingOutLoud: We're introduced to him giving his third monologue in the last hour.
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Grogar's right hand man. Supposedly incredibly dangerous, and eternally on a mission to be taken seriously.
* BigBad: To the characters as a whole.
* TheDragon: To [[spoiler:Grogar]].
Grogar's right hand man. Supposedly incredibly dangerous, and eternally on a mission to be taken seriously.
* BigBad: To the characters as a whole.
* TheDragon: To [[spoiler:Grogar]].
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Grogar's right hand man. Supposedly incredibly dangerous, and eternally on a mission to be taken seriously.
* BigBad: To the characters as a whole.
* TheDragon: To [[spoiler:Grogar]].
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* GodOfEvil: God of darkness at the very least.
* GreaterScopeVillain: As the master of both Bray and Tirek, Grogar is easily this. Spoken of with fear and reverence by others, its shown that even Tirek desperately fears displeasing him.
* GodOfEvil: God of darkness at the very least.
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* GodOfEvil: God of darkness at the very least.
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[[folder:Captain Lightspeed Barrage]]
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!Villains
[[folder:[[spoiler:Tirek]]]]
Millenia ago, Tirek attempted to steal the magic of Equestria and take over the world. He was defeated when his brother, Scorpan, turned on him and saved Equestria. After escaping Tartarus 1000 years later, he was defeated once more, this time by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Now he's been released by his master for one final shot at redemption for his past failures: the extinction of the Siren race.
* BigBad: To the Sirens.
* TheDragon: To Bray, much to his annoyance.
* ThinkingOutLoud: We're introduced to him giving his third monologue in the last hour.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:[[spoiler:Bray]]]]
Grogar's right hand man. Supposedly incredibly dangerous, and eternally on a mission to be taken seriously.
* BigBad: To the characters as a whole.
* TheDragon: To [[spoiler:Grogar]].
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[[folder:[[spoiler:Grogar]]]]
* GodOfEvil: God of darkness at the very least.
* GreaterScopeVillain: As the master of both Bray and Tirek, Grogar is easily this. Spoken of with fear and reverence by others, its shown that even Tirek desperately fears displeasing him.
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!Villains
[[folder:[[spoiler:Tirek]]]]
Millenia ago, Tirek attempted to steal the magic of Equestria and take over the world. He was defeated when his brother, Scorpan, turned on him and saved Equestria. After escaping Tartarus 1000 years later, he was defeated once more, this time by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Now he's been released by his master for one final shot at redemption for his past failures: the extinction of the Siren race.
* BigBad: To the Sirens.
* TheDragon: To Bray, much to his annoyance.
* ThinkingOutLoud: We're introduced to him giving his third monologue in the last hour.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:[[spoiler:Bray]]]]
Grogar's right hand man. Supposedly incredibly dangerous, and eternally on a mission to be taken seriously.
* BigBad: To the characters as a whole.
* TheDragon: To [[spoiler:Grogar]].
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[[folder:[[spoiler:Grogar]]]]
* GodOfEvil: God of darkness at the very least.
* GreaterScopeVillain: As the master of both Bray and Tirek, Grogar is easily this. Spoken of with fear and reverence by others, its shown that even Tirek desperately fears displeasing him.
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[[folder:Starry Skies[[spoiler: /Sunny Flare]]]]
Leader of the group encountered by Sunset and Rainbow.
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Leader of the group encountered by Sunset and Rainbow.
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Millenia ago, Tirek attempted to steal the magic of Equestria and take over the world. He was defeated when his brother, Scorpan, turned on him and saved Equestria. After escaping Tartarus 1000 years later, he was defeated once more, this time by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Now he's been released by his master for one final shot at redemption for his past failures: the extinction of the Siren race.
* BigBad: To the Sirens.
* TheDragon: To Bray, much to his annoyance.
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