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* GenreSavvy: Part of what makes Whitehead so dangerous as an adversary, and what catches griffin after griffin by surprise.
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* GenreSavvy: Even more than Whitehead - he recognizes Kwap's threat right from the beginning and insists that they find his body before declaring Kwap neutralized.
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* ActionBomb: Whitehead's solution to the loose end of a surviving twin in a permanent VillainousBSOD? Strap a grenade packed with C4 onto her and send her straight to Kwap's Roost to take everyone there out in one blow. It damn near works, too.
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* MyGreatestFailure: As an apprentice Ranger, he joins a small battle flock with his mentor to take down an adolescent Thunderbird that had gone AxCrazy and started [[ImAHumanitarian eating people]]. His mentor tries to talk it down. Cue MentorOccupationalHazard when the Thunderbird responds to his entreaties by launching a surprise attack. Despite Harrell's best efforts, his mentor dies in front of him. That makes him ''extremely'' uneasy when another Thunderbird comes calling for him personally...
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-->*The door promptly busts down, [[TheCavalry revealing a shielded ranger]]. Cute CurbStompBattle.*
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-->*The door promptly busts down, [[TheCavalry revealing a shielded ranger]]. Cute Cue CurbStompBattle.*
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[[caption-width-right:350:"Everything can die."[[note]]And as they quickly find out, that includes ''them.''[[/note]]]]
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* TempingFate: The page quote. "Everything can die." And after Harrell manages to get a shieldsuit on during their assassination attempt, they quite rapidly find out that includes ''them.''
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* TempingFate: TemptingFate: The page quote. "Everything can die." And after Harrell manages to get a shieldsuit on during their assassination attempt, they quite rapidly find out that includes ''them.''
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* TempingFate: The page quote. "Everything can die." And after Harrell manages to get a shieldsuit on during their assassination attempt, they quite rapidly find out that includes ''them.''
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The series has LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters, so this page is fairly extensive. It also is a work in progress.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Harrell does the one truly unforgivable thing for a griffin: '''Kill a hanz'''. Said Hanz was trying to kill Kwap because Harrell had just attacked his griffin companion, but nonetheless Harrell ''could'' have simply restrained him until he ran out of fight. Instead, he as always takes the most expedient solution: Punch holes in them until they stop living. And he pays for that decision forevermore.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Harrell does the one truly unforgivable thing for a griffin: '''Kill a hanz'''. Said Hanz hanz was trying to kill Kwap because Harrell had just attacked his griffin companion, but nonetheless Harrell ''could'' have simply restrained him until he ran out of fight. Instead, he as always takes the most expedient solution: Punch holes in them until they stop living. And he pays for that decision forevermore.
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* WhatTheHellHero: He has a very nasty tendency to shred potentially useful contacts, but the biggest one comes when he kills a Ranger whose only crime was having his mate and chicks held hostage, then kills his ''Hanz'' when he goes berzerk and tries to kill Kwap. That's a '''''huge''''' no-no for a griffin, and leads right to a HeroicBSOD.
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* WhatTheHellHero: He has a very nasty tendency to shred potentially useful contacts, but the biggest one comes when he kills is forced to defend Kwap from a Ranger whose only crime was having his mate and chicks held hostage, then kills his ''Hanz'' ''hanz'' when he goes berzerk and tries to kill Kwap. That's a '''''huge''''' no-no for a griffin, and leads right to a HeroicBSOD.
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* {{Omniglot}}: In his own world. He can speak Greenie, Griffin Common, Dancer-Griffin, and other languages. Subverted once he arrives on human!Earth: English completely defeats him. He manages to puzzle out most of the alphabet and even some simple words, but a greenie language expert eventually tells him he'd never, ever manage to learn English's weird grammar and syntax in time, and even if he could ''read'' it, his chance of speaking it is zero.
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* {{Omniglot}}: In his own world. He can speak Greenie, greenie, Griffin Common, Dancer-Griffin, dancer-griffin, Newlander and other languages. Subverted once he arrives on human!Earth: English completely defeats him. He manages to puzzle out most of the alphabet and even some simple words, but a greenie language expert eventually tells him he'd never, ever manage to learn English's weird grammar and syntax in time, and even if he could ''read'' it, his chance of speaking it is zero.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: She and the Tropica Griffins are based off Verreaux's Eagles.
* SuicidalOverconfidence: She's so used to beating up on little Prairie Griffins and Red Tailed Griffins that she thinks she can easily take Harrell. He very quickly shows her that size matters - twice. The first time gets her a broken leg. The second time gets her dead.
* SuicidalOverconfidence: She's so used to beating up on little Prairie Griffins and Red Tailed Griffins that she thinks she can easily take Harrell. He very quickly shows her that size matters - twice. The first time gets her a broken leg. The second time gets her dead.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: She and the Tropica Griffins griffins are based off Verreaux's Eagles.
* SuicidalOverconfidence: She's so used to beating up on littlePrairie Griffins prairie griffins and Red Tailed Griffins red-tailed griffins that she thinks she can easily take Harrell. He very quickly shows her that size matters - twice. The first time gets her a broken leg. The second time gets her dead.
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* EatingTheEnemy / [[ImAHumanitarian I Eat Greenies For Breakfast]]: Winter is quite happy to tell you how ''she'' fought the griffin-greenie wars.
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* WouldHurtAChild: And in an unthinkably awful way: She devours greenie chicks ''[[EatenAlive alive]]'' and gets the [[LaughingMad giggles]] thinking of their agonizing deaths inside of her. She even suggests doing the same to the Herder pup sent to watch them, but she never gets the chance.
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* WouldHurtAChild: And in an unthinkably awful way: She devours greenie chicks ''[[EatenAlive alive]]'' and gets the [[LaughingMad giggles]] thinking of their agonizing deaths inside of her. She even suggests doing the same to the Herder herder pup sent to watch them, but she never gets the chance.
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!Other Notable Griffins notable griffins and Hanzhanz
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* MakeMeWannaShout: He can force any mammal nearby to drop what they are carrying and even hamper griffins with a jet-engine scream, and it saves his and Harrell's lives early in the story.
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* MakeMeWannaShout: He can force paralyze any mammal nearby to drop what they are carrying (hanz, wolfen and herders all have sensitive ears) and even hamper griffins with a jet-engine scream, and it saves his and Harrell's lives early in the story.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Eventually, after it's all over, Harrell agrees with Coro-er - that Russell and the captive humans should all dealt with with ExtremePrejudice. To do otherwise, he says, is to court TheFarmerAndTheViper on a worldwide scale. Kwap disagrees...
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Eventually, after it's all over, Harrell agrees with Coro-er - that Russell and the captive humans should all be dealt with with ExtremePrejudice. To do otherwise, he says, is to court TheFarmerAndTheViper on a worldwide scale. Kwap disagrees...
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* InformedAbility: They're supposed to be Whitehead's deadliest assassins, but sent to kill Kwap and everyone with him, they only manage to kill Cheer's apprentice (and son) Ern before Harrell smashes them.
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* InformedAbility: They're supposed to be Whitehead's deadliest assassins, but sent to kill Kwap and everyone with him, they only manage to kill Cheer's apprentice (and son) Ern Nye - who blundered right into their ambush - before Harrell smashes them.
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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Kill one twin, and you force the other into a permanent VillainousBSOD - and that's exactly what Harrell does once he's shielded.
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* InformedAbility: They're supposed to be Whitehead's deadliest assassins, but sent to kill Kwap and everyone with him, they only manage to kill Cheer's apprentice (and son) Ern before Harrell smashes them.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Get all of one scene before the attack on Kwap's roost and their subsequent destruction at Harrell's talons.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: With Yaht-eet the station master. He's one of the few sentients of any species not to fly for their life away from Nightmare, but instead regards her with a great deal of affection. She returns it in full. If you need a favor from Nightmare, Yaht-eet will make sure you get it. Treat him badly or threaten him, and you are in for a '''''world''''' of hurt.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: If you're a greenie lawbreaker in her jurisdiction, you'll soon find out why she's called "nightmare". Two greenie assassins find this out the hard way.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: If you're a greenie lawbreaker in her jurisdiction, you'll soon find out why she's called "nightmare"."Nightmare". Two greenie assassins find this out the hard way.
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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: She insists on getting physical with ''everyone'' no matter who they are, much to their consternation. Especially disturbing to male griffins!
* RaisedByWolves: She was raised by a greenie and herder mixed family, so she inherited greenie social habits and herder physical affection - and knows absolutely zip about proper griffin etiquette.heir species, which is absolutely nerve-wracking for the small hanz and drives traditionalist griffins like Kwap completely batshit.
* RaisedByWolves: She was raised by a greenie and herder mixed family, so she inherited greenie social habits and herder physical affection - and knows absolutely zip about proper griffin etiquette.heir species, which is absolutely nerve-wracking for the small hanz and drives traditionalist griffins like Kwap completely batshit.
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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: She insists on getting physical with ''everyone'' no matter who they are, much to their consternation. Especially disturbing to male griffins!
species, which is nerve-wracking for the small hanz and drives traditionalist griffins like Kwap completely batshit.
* RaisedByWolves: She was raised by a greenie and herder mixed family, so she inherited greenie social habits and herder physical affection - and knows absolutely zip about proper griffin etiquette.heir species, which is absolutely nerve-wracking for the small hanz and drives traditionalist griffins like Kwap completely batshit.
* RaisedByWolves: She was raised by a greenie and herder mixed family, so she inherited greenie social habits and herder physical affection - and knows absolutely zip about proper griffin etiquette.
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[[caption-width-right:350:"Don't run! Let me preen you, just for a moment!"]]
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* EatingTheEnemy: She's not as dedicated to this as Winter White-Tail but she's not above it either. Implied to have happened to one of the two greenie assassins she caught. (The other, upon witnessing this, "sang like a spring Bobolink."
* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: If you're a greenie lawbreaker and dumb enough not to tell her what she wants to know, ''heaven help you.''
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: She's only known as "Nightmare" and she is just that, to griffin and greenie alike (though for wildly different reasons).
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: If you're a greenie lawbreaker in her jurisdiction, you'll soon find out why she's called "nightmare". Two greenie assassins find this out the hard way.
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* TheBrute: She's not especially bright, but she's ''huge'' for a Golden-Nape, pushing into male White-Shoulder territory.
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* EatingTheEnemy: She's not as dedicated to this as Winter White-Tail but she's not above it either. Implied to have happened to one of the two greenie assassins she caught. (The other, upon witnessing this, "sang like a spring Bobolink."
* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: If you're a greenie lawbreaker and dumb enough not to tell her what she wants to know, ''heaven help you.''
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: She's only known as "Nightmare" and she is just that, to griffin and greenie alike (though for wildly different reasons).
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: If you're a greenie lawbreaker in her jurisdiction, you'll soon find out why she's called "nightmare". Two greenie assassins find this out the hard way.
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: She insists on getting physical with ''everyone'' no matter t
* RaisedByWolves: She was raised by a greenie and herder mixed family, so she inherited greenie social habits and herder physical affection - and knows absolutely zip about proper griffin etiquette.heir species, which is absolutely nerve-wracking for the small hanz and drives traditionalist griffins like Kwap completely batshit.
* TheBrute: She's not especially bright, but she's ''huge'' for a Golden-Nape, pushing into male White-Shoulder territory.
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* DeathGlare: In a world full of giant birds of prey, ''nobody'' can DeathGlare like Vaniss. There's a reason it's her picture that graces the NightmareFuel page. She's good enough at it that she can even shut ''Harrell'' up with one.
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* DeathGlare: In a world full of giant birds of prey, ''nobody'' can DeathGlare like Vaniss. There's a reason it's her picture that graces used to grace the NightmareFuel page. She's good enough at it that she can even shut ''Harrell'' up with one.
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* TheBerserker: Considering she's from griffin!Earth's Iceland, "Viking Berserker" is probably the best way to describe her fighting style, along with a generous helping of {{Sadism}}.
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* TheBerserker: Considering she's from griffin!Earth's Iceland, "Viking Berserker" is probably the best way to describe her fighting style, along with a generous helping of {{Sadism}}.[[{{Sadist}} Sadism]].
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* TheBerserker: Considering she's from griffin!Earth's Iceland, "Viking Berserker" is probably the best way to describe her fighting style, along with a generous helping of {{Sadism}}.
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* InNameOnly: Like the rest of Whitehead's Tropica griffins, she's there to see new lands, make a [[PrivateMilitaryContractors passel of credits]] and kill whoever Whitehead wants her to kill. The "Ranger" title is there only because she successfully defends the territory from the Crossline Plains griffins.
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* InNameOnly: Like the rest of Whitehead's Tropica griffins, she's there to see new lands, make a [[PrivateMilitaryContractors passel of credits]] and kill whoever Whitehead wants her to kill. The "Ranger" title is there only because she successfully defends the territory from the Crossline Plains griffins.griffins, and because the Chief Ranger of the area, Rekken, is completely in thrall to Whitehead.
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* BadBoss: Not as bad as Russell and ''certainly'' not as bad as Whitehead, but he sends a constant stream of lab techs into the griffin enclosure under the assumption they're a bunch of mindless lab animals. They're ''not'', and that gets used against them again and again.
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* BadBoss: Not as bad as Russell and ''certainly'' not as bad as Whitehead, but he Apparently took a few pages from Whitehead. He sends a constant stream of lab vet techs into the griffin enclosure under the assumption they're a bunch of mindless lab animals. They're ''not'', and that gets used against them again and again. Worse, when the War Flock arrives with the police in tow, he orders his guards to start shooting and takes the civilian personnel of the lab hostage. Most of them are killed as a result.
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* LivingLieDetector: He can, with no effort at all, detect when a griffin is lying to him, and uses it specifically against Harrell:
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-->Whitehead: You griffins are terrible liars. Not social enough, I guess.