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* LonersAreFreaks: He's innately different from his classmates, and therefore doesn't has stopped trying to fit in with them.
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* LonersAreFreaks: He's innately different from his classmates, and therefore doesn't has hasn't stopped trying to fit in with them.
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* {{Bishonen}}
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* CampGay: Not extreme, but he has a few traits that paint him like this.
* TheCaretaker: Takes on this role naturally.
* TheCutie
* DeadpanSnarker: He can be this at times.
* {{Deuteragonist}}
* CampGay: Not extreme, but he has a few traits that paint him like this.
* TheCaretaker: Takes on this role naturally.
* TheCutie
* DeadpanSnarker: He can be this at times.
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* {{Adorkable}}: He's a total cutie during the comic's lighter moments.
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* {{Adorkable}}: There are several times where he becomes this.
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The {{Protagonist}} of the story, Herz is an seventeen-year old EldritchAbomination who fights space demons. He's also very mentally unstable, but hides it in front of his friends so they wont worry. It's incredibly hard for him to die, but that doesn't mean he doesn't get injured, and he gets maimed and abused multiple times, not only by the space demons he fights, but by other kids that don't like him. He never fights back, despite having more than enough strength to kill them several times over.
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The {{Protagonist}} protagonist of the story, Herz is an seventeen-year old EldritchAbomination who fights space demons. He's also very mentally unstable, but hides it in front of his friends so they wont worry. It's incredibly hard for him to die, but that doesn't mean he doesn't get injured, and he gets maimed and abused multiple times, not only by the space demons he fights, but by other kids that don't like him. He never fights back, despite having more than enough strength to kill them several times over.
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* TeamDad: Contrasting with Jura's TeamMom status, to the point that their arguments make them look [[LikeAnOldMarriedCouple like a pair of bickering spouses]].
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* TheMediator: He tends to be the one to make peace between Jura and Vanilla when they fight.
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* {{Deuteragonist}}
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: Seriously, ''Vanilla?'' And his last name is cream!
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: Seriously, ''Vanilla?'' And his last name is cream!Cream!
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* AgentPeacock: Overlaps with BadassAdorable.
* BadassAdorable: He's super tough and ''super'' cute.
* BadassAdorable: He's super tough and ''super'' cute.
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* CuteBruiser: He's super tough and super cute.
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* SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan: The manly man to Jura's sensitive guy.
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* ActionHero
* AdaptationalBadass: In the original comic, Boys Lessons, he was just a side character, and suddenly became incredibly sick, to the point of almost dying. He was also a very naive, clingy younger brother to his older brother Hirn. In this adaptation, he's much cooler, fighting space demons and acting more maturely.
* AdaptationalBadass: In the original comic, Boys Lessons, he was just a side character, and suddenly became incredibly sick, to the point of almost dying. He was also a very naive, clingy younger brother to his older brother Hirn. In this adaptation, he's much cooler, fighting space demons and acting more maturely.
* BewareTheQuietOnes: He can become quite terrifying if pushed too far, but he never tries to actually hurt anyone.
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* {{Bishonen}}
* CampGay: Not extreme, but he has a few traits that paint him like this.
* TheCaretaker: Takes on this role naturally.
* TheCutie
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* DeadpanSnarker: He can be this at times.
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** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: ''Very'' rarely, but he has moments of kindness towards Herz.
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* Adorkable: {{Adorkable}}: He's a total cutie during the comic's lighter moments.moments.
* BlessedWithSuck: He has amazing fighting abilities, but his call to fight monsters can come to him at anytime, and is very unsightly. His powers have also alienated him from his peers, and they also make him incredibly sick sometimes.
* BlessedWithSuck: He has amazing fighting abilities, but his call to fight monsters can come to him at anytime, and is very unsightly. His powers have also alienated him from his peers, and they also make him incredibly sick sometimes.
* LonersAreFreaks: He's innately different from his classmates, and therefore doesn't has stopped trying to fit in with them.
* ShrinkingViolet: He can become this when actually interacting with people, due to his inexperience with social interaction.
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* {{Adorkable}}: There are several times where he becomes this.
* {{Keet}}: He's very energetic and bouncy.
* SweetTooth: His character profile states that he has a "passion for sweets."
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[[folder: Vanilla]]Vanilla Cream]]
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A lazy junkie just out of school, Vanilla was involved with gangs before he met Herz and ended up sacrificing the trust of his fellow gang members for him. As a result, he and Herz became best friends, as well as he and Jura, although they're constantly fighting. He loves money, alcohol, and sleeping, and his morals are rather loose, a big contrast to Jura.
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A lazy junkie just out of school, Vanilla was involved with gangs before he met Herz and ended up sacrificing the trust of his fellow gang members for him. As a result, he and Herz became best friends, as well as he and Jura, although they're constantly fighting. He loves money, alcohol, and sleeping, and his morals are rather loose, a big contrast to Jura.
Jura. He has a heart for music and plays in a band with a few of his other friends.
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One of Herz's older brothers. He is a total {{Jerkass}} in general and doesn't try to hide it. However, there are some moments (although they're few and far between) where he shows kindness to Herz.
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* AloofBigBrother: Fits this trope to a T.
* {{Jerkass}}: Mostly to Herz.
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* AloofBigBrother: Fits this trope to a T.
* {{Jerkass}}: Mostly to Herz.
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* SociallyAwkwardHero: He's never exactly had any friends before Jura and Vanilla, so he's bound to be this.
* TrueCompanions: With Jura and Vanilla.
* TrueCompanions: With Jura and Vanilla.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: A ''whole'' lot with Vanilla.
* CuteBruiser: He's super tough and super cute.
* FieryRedhead: His hair's pink, but it's close enough.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: Smaller and younger than most of the other people he comes into conflict with, but he can easily take them on.
* SleepCute: Herz comments that he looks like a baby kitten when he sleeps.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: LOADS with Jura.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He acts like an uncaring asshole sometimes, but he ended up becoming good friends with Herz and Jura.
* TheSlacker: He never really does much work.
A lazy junkie just out of school, Vanilla was involved with gangs before he met Herz and ended up sacrificing the trust of his fellow gang members for him. As a result, he and Herz became best friends, as well as he and Jura, although they're constantly fighting. He loves money, alcohol, and sleeping, and his morals are rather loose, a big contrast to Jura.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: LOADS with Jura.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He acts like an uncaring asshole sometimes, but he ended up becoming good friends with Herz and Jura.
* TheSlacker: He never really does much work.
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[[folder: Herz]]
The {{Protagonist}} of the story, Herz is an seventeen-year old EldritchAbomination who fights space demons. He's also very mentally unstable, but hides it in front of his friends so they wont worry. It's incredibly hard for him to die, but that doesn't mean he doesn't get injured, and he gets maimed and abused multiple times, not only by the space demons he fights, but by other kids that don't like him. He never fights back, despite having more than enough strength to kill them several times over.
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* EldritchAbomination: One of the core themes of his character.
* TheMediator: He tends to be the one to make peace between Jura and Vanilla when they fight.
* NiceGuy: He's just a genuinely kind person.
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One of Herz's best friends (also one of his only friends), Jura is kind to everyone (except Vanilla) and simultaneously loved and feared by the school he goes to. He always worries about Herz and is just a TeamMom in general.
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* EldritchAbomination: One of the core themes of his character.
* TheMediator: He tends to be the one to make peace between Jura and Vanilla when they fight.
* NiceGuy: He's just a genuinely kind person.
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One of Herz's best friends (also one of his only friends), Jura is kind to everyone (except Vanilla) and simultaneously loved and feared by the school he goes to. He always worries about Herz and is just a TeamMom in general.
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