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* PersonalityPowers: In 2E, each Yozi could be described as a sentient cluster of Charms that made up their themes and personality, with each Charm's effect reflecting its Yozi's themes in some manner. Since the Infernal Exalted can create new Infernal Charms, each Infernal who does so grants the Yozi who the new Charm is related to that Charm, changing the Yozi itself (although it's not a major change, and it won't change the Yozi's core nature and themes, so there's no redeeming the Ebon Dragon by making some new Charms that are "nice".)
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* PersonalityPowers: In 2E, each Yozi could be described as a sentient cluster of Charms that made up their themes and personality, with each Charm's effect reflecting its Yozi's themes in some manner. Since the Infernal Exalted can create new Infernal Charms, each Infernal who does so grants the Yozi who whom the new Charm is related to that Charm, changing the Yozi itself (although it's not a major change, and it won't change the Yozi's core nature and themes, so there's no redeeming the Ebon Dragon by making some new Charms that are "nice".)
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* TheAntiGod: Morally inverted; He was created by the [[GodOfEvil Ebon Dragon]] as a cosmic embodiment of honor and virtue, precisely so that the Ebon Dragon could have something to corrupt, betray, and subvert.
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* TheAntiGod: Morally inverted; He he was created by the [[GodOfEvil Ebon Dragon]] as a cosmic embodiment of honor and virtue, precisely so that the Ebon Dragon could have something to corrupt, betray, and subvert.
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* EvolutionaryPressureCooker: The story of her origin. Oramus and Cytherea pitted all the potential moon-gods against each other, to see which would triumph. Luna won, seducing or destroying her rivals, and became Creation's sole moon-god(dess).
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* ThereCanBeOnlyOne: The story of her origin. Oramus and Cytherea pitted all the potential moon-gods against each other, to see which would triumph. Luna won, seducing or destroying her rivals, and became Creation's sole moon-god(dess).
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[[OurMermaidsAreDifferent Mermaid]] (and merman)-like demons with the ability to [[FlyingSeafoodSpecial swim in the air]], demjen are one of the Adorjani demon races whose music their progenitor cannot stand, but unlike their anglykae cousins, music is not their end goal as well -- rather, it's the [[MagicMusic magic]] by which they get their name: by singing at metals, a demjen can cause it to animate and assemble itself into a crustacean-shaped RobotBuddy called a chalcothete, which serve as both minion and [[EatTheDog occasional food source]] (though the demjen honestly hate it when they have to do that). While not mean by any stretch (they have a Compassion of 3 and their general GoalInLife is simply to create more chalcothetes from unworked metal), they can be a real pain in the hands of a clever master -- ''any'' metal is game for their abilities, up to and including that used in weapons. Thus, a demjen able to get within voiceshot of a heavily armed warrior can walk away with a dozen more chalcothetes, and the warrior either naked and/or dead, depending on the quickener's mood.
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[[OurMermaidsAreDifferent Mermaid]] (and merman)-like demons with the ability to [[FlyingSeafoodSpecial swim in the air]], demjen are one of the Adorjani demon races whose music their progenitor cannot stand, but unlike their anglykae cousins, music is not their end goal as well -- rather, it's the [[MagicMusic magic]] by which they get their name: by singing at metals, a demjen can cause it to animate and assemble itself into a crustacean-shaped RobotBuddy called a chalcothete, which serve as both minion and [[EatTheDog occasional food source]] source (though the demjen honestly hate it when they have to do that). While not mean by any stretch (they have a Compassion of 3 and their general GoalInLife is simply to create more chalcothetes from unworked metal), they can be a real pain in the hands of a clever master -- ''any'' metal is game for their abilities, up to and including that used in weapons. Thus, a demjen able to get within voiceshot of a heavily armed warrior can walk away with a dozen more chalcothetes, and the warrior either naked and/or dead, depending on the quickener's mood.
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* ElementalDragon: Elementals who developed sufficiently in power assume draconic form, generally resembling Chinese and Japanese dragons, and become Lesser Elemental Dragons. Further refinement transforms them into Greater Elemental Dragons, mindless engines of elemental destruction.
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* ElementalDragon: Elementals who developed sufficiently in power assume draconic form, generally resembling Chinese and Japanese dragons, and become Lesser Elemental Dragons. Further refinement transforms them into Greater Elemental Dragons, mindless engines of elemental destruction. (3e drops the Greater Elemental Dragon stage; Lesser Elemental Dragons are called such to distinguish them from the Five Elemental Dragons.)
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* ElementalDragon: Elementals who developed sufficiently in power assume draconic form, generally resembling Chinese and Japanese dragons, and become Lesser Elemental Dragons. Further refinement transforms them into Greater Elemental Dragons, mindless engines of elemental destruction.
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* DropTheHammer: She carries a massive, permanently red-hot hammer on one shoulder at all times.
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!!'''Gumela, the Jeweled Auditor'''
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!!'''Gumela, the Jeweled Jewelled Auditor'''
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* AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: The Incarnae are about as powerful as it is possible to become without being a Primordial, and have authority over all the gods of Creation.
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* RankScalesWithAsskicking: The Incarnae are about as powerful as it is possible to become without being a Primordial, and have authority over all the gods of Creation.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The Incarnae are about as powerful as it is possible to become without being a Primordial, and have authority over all the gods of Creation.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: The Incarnae are about as powerful as it is possible to become without being a Primordial, and have authority over all the gods of Creation.
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* Expy: Of Roman deity [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sol_Invictus Deus Sol Invictus]].
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Of Roman deity [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sol_Invictus Deus Sol Invictus]].
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They're not actually playing WOW, that's just a fandom in-joke.
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The Primordials were born long ago, in the infinite [[ChaosWorld Wyld]] where chaos ruled supreme. They grew tired of battling their Unshaped cousins, so they decided to make a place where they could have some peace. And so Creation was born, which was attended to by their slave race of Gods as they played the [[VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft Games of Divinity]] in heaven. In time, the Gods grew tired of the constant abuse their creators laid on them, so the greatest of the Gods (the Incarnae) decided it was time to revolt.\\
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The Primordials were born long ago, in the infinite [[ChaosWorld Wyld]] where chaos ruled supreme. They grew tired of battling their Unshaped cousins, so they decided to make a place where they could have some peace. And so Creation was born, which was attended to by their slave race of Gods as they played the [[VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft [[FantasticDrug Games of Divinity]] in heaven. In time, the Gods grew tired of the constant abuse their creators laid on them, so the greatest of the Gods (the Incarnae) decided it was time to revolt.\\
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* LargeHam: As a man so desperate for excitement that he'd [[ContractualGenreBlindness sabotage his own plans]] and deliberately stoke a rebellion in the city he now rules, the Mask absolutely unlives for the drama. [[FatalFlaw If all goes well, he'll die for it too]].
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* LargeHam: As He's described as "haughty and flamboyant," and as an a man so desperate for excitement that he'd [[ContractualGenreBlindness sabotage his own plans]] and deliberately stoke a rebellion in the city he now rules, the Mask absolutely unlives for the drama. [[FatalFlaw If all goes well, he'll die for it too]].
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* LargeHam: As a man so desperate for excitement that he'd [[ContractualGenreBlindness sabotage his own plans]] and deliberately stoke a rebellion in the city he now rules, the Mask absolutely unlives for the drama. [[FatalFlaw If all goes well, he'll die for it too]].
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* DespairEventHorizon / IdentityBreakdown: He was the god of the biggest city in the world. Now the city is gone, along with his mind. He looks like an emaciated man with pupils like shattered planets, and spends his days speaking nonsense to his one assigned secretary.
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* DespairEventHorizon / IdentityBreakdown: DespairEventHorizon: He was the god of the biggest city in the world. Now the city is gone, [[IdentityBreakdown along with his mind.mind]]. He looks like an emaciated man with pupils like shattered planets, and spends his days speaking nonsense to his one assigned secretary.