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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: First with the gaming scenario he had been setting up which the battle for Gobwin Knob essentially duplicates, then with pretty much EVERYTHING else he encounters. He spends most of first hours in Erfworld snickering at all the little puns and shout-outs to our world that nobody there is even aware of.
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* IFightForTheStrongestSide: Twice now, Jack has passed up opportunities to abandon Gobwin Knob. The second time, he implies that Parson's monstrous strategic abilities reduces his desire to rejoin Jillian.
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* GettingSmilesPaintedOnYourSoul: One of her direct spells works like this, preventing a unit from engaging in violence for one turn.
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* GettingSmilesPaintedOnYourSoul: GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul: One of her direct spells works like this, preventing a unit from engaging in violence for one turn.
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* GettingSmilesPaintedOnYourSoul: One of her direct spells works like this, preventing a unit from engaging in violence for one turn.
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Note that Sylvia didn\'t become a named character until her decryption, so I\'m putting her in Gobwin Knob.
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[[folder: Royal Coalition]]
!Prince Ansom of Jetstone
->''"By strength and by duty and by honour does Royalty lead all, in the Titans' path. There is no other way. Erfworld needs no other way."''
The most prominent antagonist of Book 1. Ansom is a Chief Warlord who leads the forces that threaten Gobwin Knob with complete annihilation. He is a competent strategist and, at level 10, a very powerful warrior. He holds that Royalty is a mandate from the Titans to rule, until his decryption.
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* AxCrazy
* BirdsOfAFeather: Non-romantic example, with Wanda. She's stated to actually like Sylvia for always being ready to destroy something.
* BloodKnight
* ColonelKilgore
* EvilRedhead: Regardless of which side is right or wrong, there can be little doubt about Sylvia.
* PsychoticSmirk: Whenever she hears about or takes part in a plan about killing people, especially many people.
* WarriorPoet: She's based on [[SylviaPlath an actual poet]], though the entire-poem reference only happens in her head.
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[[folder: Royal Coalition]]
!Prince Ansom of Jetstone
->''"By strength and by duty and by honour does Royalty lead all, in the Titans' path. There is no other way. Erfworld needs no other way."''
The most prominent antagonist of Book 1. Ansom is a Chief Warlord who leads the forces that threaten Gobwin Knob with complete annihilation. He is a competent strategist and, at level 10, a very powerful warrior. He holds that Royalty is a mandate from the Titans to rule, until his decryption.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Non-romantic example, with Wanda. She's stated to actually like Sylvia for always being ready to destroy something.
* BloodKnight
* ColonelKilgore
* EvilRedhead: Regardless of which side is right or wrong, there can be little doubt about Sylvia.
* PsychoticSmirk: Whenever she hears about or takes part in a plan about killing people, especially many people.
* WarriorPoet: She's based on [[SylviaPlath an actual poet]], though the entire-poem reference only happens in her head.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Royal Coalition]]
!Prince Ansom of Jetstone
->''"By strength and by duty and by honour does Royalty lead all, in the Titans' path. There is no other way. Erfworld needs no other way."''
The most prominent antagonist of Book 1. Ansom is a Chief Warlord who leads the forces that threaten Gobwin Knob with complete annihilation. He is a competent strategist and, at level 10, a very powerful warrior. He holds that Royalty is a mandate from the Titans to rule, until his decryption.
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The Jetstone Prince popped after Ansom and before Ossomer. He is weaker than both in fighting ability, but his mental faculties may be the greatest of the three. His strategy appears to be on par with or greater than Ansom's, but he also has a much greater understanding of psychology and diplomacy. He was never made heir because he doesn't live up to King Stately's Royal ideals.
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The Jetstone Prince popped after Ansom and before Ossomer. He is weaker than both in fighting ability, but his mental faculties may be the greatest of the three. His strategy appears to be on par with or greater than Ansom's, but he also has a much greater understanding of psychology and diplomacy. He was never made heir because he doesn't live up to King Stately's Slately's Royal ideals.
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* {{Ambadassador}}: King Stately sent him off believing him to be weak, and was surprised when Tramennis came back with a favorable alliance plus peace offerings.
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* {{Ambadassador}}: King Stately Slately sent him off believing him to be weak, and was surprised when Tramennis came back with a favorable alliance plus peace offerings.
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* GenreSavvy:
--->'''Tramennis:''' [[TemptingFate What's the worst that could happen?]]
--->'''Slately:''' The worst? The Titans could hear you ''ask'' such a question.
--->'''Tramennis:''' [[TemptingFate What's the worst that could happen?]]
--->'''Slately:''' The worst? The Titans could hear you ''ask'' such a question.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: [[http://www.erfworld.com/book-2-archive/?px=%2F2010-09-01.jpg Charlie appears to him as rainbows.]] Enough said.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: Charlie [[AFormYouAreComfortableWith takes the form]] [[http://www.erfworld.com/book-2-archive/?px=%2F2010-09-01.jpg Charlie appears of rainbows]] [[http://www.erfworld.com/book-2-archive/?px=%2F2010-09-15.jpg to him as rainbows.talk to him.]] Enough said.
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* AmbiguouslyGayAmbiguouslyGay: [[http://www.erfworld.com/book-2-archive/?px=%2F2010-09-01.jpg Charlie appears to him as rainbows.]] Enough said.
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* ZettaiRyouiki: Grade C, by way of an armored skirt and knee-high boots.
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* [[LetsGetDangerous Let's Get Dangerous]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: He hasn't seen personal combat yet, but he's stared down his (Level 9) Decrypted son with a DeathGlare good enough to make Ossomer turn away immediately.
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* CuttingTheKnot: She really prefers cutting through the political crap, through the roundabout strategies, and doing something refreshingly straightforward. Usually in an awesome and hilarious way.
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:Gets called out by Ansom for her hypocritical treatment of Decrypted and himself. She doesn't care.]]
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!King Slately of Jetstone
->''"My son is more of a man than I am. All my sons have been."''
The Ruler of Jetstone for over three thousand turns. During his reign, Jetstone has remained the strongest side in Erfworld, mostly thanks to the competence of his sons and daughters. Slately holds to Royal tenets even more than Ansom, yet privately acknowledges that he doesn't live up to them in reality. He has only seen combat once... for now.
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* {{Jerkass}}
* TheNapoleon
* RequisiteRoyalRegalia
->''"My son is more of a man than I am. All my sons have been."''
The Ruler of Jetstone for over three thousand turns. During his reign, Jetstone has remained the strongest side in Erfworld, mostly thanks to the competence of his sons and daughters. Slately holds to Royal tenets even more than Ansom, yet privately acknowledges that he doesn't live up to them in reality. He has only seen combat once... for now.
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* CharacterDevelopment: We've yet to see the results of it, but Slately has apparently changed much more in this one turn than several thousands.
* {{Jerkass}}
* TheNapoleon
* RequisiteRoyalRegalia
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* GrandmaWhatMassiveHotnessYouHave: Has the face of a sweet old lady, but looks ''great'' in a miniskirt.
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-->''"Don't worry. We try things. Sometimes Occasionally they even work."''
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* JerkassFacade: Recently he has admitted that Parson has exceptional military skill, but also thinks leaders shouldn't get to close to their minions.
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* TunnelKing: Sizemore epitomizes this trope. He can make braced, lighted, and reinforced tunnels as fast as he can walk.
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-->''"We prefer to play games that don't even contain a losing outcome."''
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* {{Stripperific}}
* SquishyWizard
* SquishyWizard
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* MissionFromGod: Stanley considers "good" and "evil" meaningless labels, and doesn't actually claim ''moral'' superiority over Ansom and the Royals. As far as he's concerned, "There is Holy and unholy," and whoever the Arkentools attune to qualify as Holy.
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* MissionFromGod: Stanley considers "good" and "evil" meaningless labels, and doesn't actually claim ''moral'' superiority over Ansom and the Royals. As far as he's concerned, "There is Holy and unholy," and whoever the Arkentools attune an Arkentool attunes to qualify qualifies as Holy.
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--> ''"When life gives you crap, make Crap Golems, right?"''
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If you\'re going to change the quote to one of his for no reason other than you like it, at least put it in quotes.
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* MundaneUtility: Sizemore's talent for construction and tilling have made him the filthy rich "Rock Star" of the Magic Kingdom specifically for performing so many mundane tasks.
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-->''He is Level Twenty. He is Level Thousand. He is Level Million. It does not matter.''
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* XanatosSpeedChess
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* ShockAndAwe
* ThePowerOfRock: "Rocking out is not dance-fighting. Rocking out is better than dance-fighting."
* ThePowerOfRock: "Rocking out is not dance-fighting. Rocking out is better than dance-fighting."
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* WildCard: She has some of the most complicated connections and motivations in the entire setting, some of which seem mutually exclusive on the surface. As several characters have learned, this has made her difficult to predict, much less direct.
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->''"By strength and by duty and by honour does Royalty lead all, in the Titans' path. There is no other way. Erfworld needs no other way."''
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* {{BFS}}{{BFS}}: "I love a problem I can solve with my sword."
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** [[spoiler: Half the ''[[AmbiguouslyGay Queen]]'', he said.]]
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The former Princess of FAQ, [[spoiler: and now, as of its restoration, its ''Queen'' ]], Jillian was never the heir her father had hoped to pop, and in many ways prefers life as a barbarian, but she still despises Stanely for ending her side. Her...interesting...relationship with his second-in-command does nothing to abate this.
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->''"Wanda, I think you're completely capable of wiping out every unit in this battlespace. Which is hot. But any time you talk about croaking ''me'', you're full of crap."''
The former Princess of FAQ, [[spoiler: and now, as of its restoration, its ''Queen'' ]], Jillian was never the heir her father had hoped to pop, and in many ways prefers life as abarbarian, but she still despises Stanely for ending barbarian. This doesn't stop her side. Her...from detesting Stanley, her...interesting...relationship with his second-in-command does nothing to abate this.
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The former Princess of FAQ, [[spoiler: and now, as of its restoration, its ''Queen'' ]], Jillian was never the heir her father had hoped to pop, and in many ways prefers life as a
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* [[spoiler: RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: This is the norm for Erfworld, but a Queen who goes directly into battle is still considered unusual. Tramennis hopes he could be half the monarch she is.]]
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* [[spoilers: [[spoiler: RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Tramennis hopes he could be half the monarch she is.]]
