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* [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive: In the novelization his security system goes off which obviously means an intruder is near by, but instead of being alarmed he just brushed it off and thought the alarm was broken or something. This act of carelessness also lead to his demise.]]
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* [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive: In the novelization his security system goes off which obviously means an intruder is near by, but instead of being alarmed he just brushed it off and thought the alarm was broken or something.broken. This act of carelessness also lead to his demise.]]
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* [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive: In the novelization his security system goes off which obviously means an intruder is near by, but instead of being alarmed he just brushed it off and thought the alarm was broken or something....]]
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* [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive: In the novelization his security system goes off which obviously means an intruder is near by, but instead of being alarmed he just brushed it off and thought the alarm was broken or something....something. This act of carelessness also lead to his demise.]]
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** or DamselScrappy [[spoiler:[[TooDumbToLive Since she's the one who's gotten into that mess with Kujo in the first place towards the end. So basically she pretty much responsible for her own kidnapping]]]].
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** or DamselScrappy [[spoiler:[[TooDumbToLive Since she's the one who's gotten into that mess with Kujo in the first place towards the end. So basically Basically she pretty much responsible for her own kidnapping]]]].
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** or DamselScrappy [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive Since she's the one who's gotten into that mess with Kujo in the first place towards the end. So basically she pretty much responsible for her own kidnapping]].
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** or DamselScrappy [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive [[spoiler:[[TooDumbToLive Since she's the one who's gotten into that mess with Kujo in the first place towards the end. So basically she pretty much responsible for her own kidnapping]].kidnapping]]]].
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** or DamselScrappy since [[TooDumbToLive she's the one who got into that mess in the first place.]]
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** or DamselScrappy since [[TooDumbToLive [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive Since she's the one who got who's gotten into that mess with Kujo in the first place.]] place towards the end. So basically she pretty much responsible for her own kidnapping]].
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An immunologist and the father of Maki Nikaido
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An immunologist and the father of Maki Nikaido in ''L: Change The World''.
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Daughter of Dr. Nikakido. She's also One of the kids that L has to protect
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Daughter of Dr. Nikakido. She's also One one of the kids that L has to protect in ''L: Change The World''.
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[[WMG:'''Dr. Nakaido''']]
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[[WMG:'''Dr. Nakaido''']]Nikaido''']]
An immunologist and the father of Maki Nikaido
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[[WMG:'''Maki Nakaido''']]Nikaido''']]
Daughter of Dr. Nikakido. She's also One of the kids that L has to protect
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* [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive: In the novelization his security system goes off which obviously means an intruder is near by, but instead of being alarmed he just brushed it off and thought the alarm was broken or something....Yeah like any normal human being would do that..NOT!]]
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* [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive: In the novelization his security system goes off which obviously means an intruder is near by, but instead of being alarmed he just brushed it off and thought the alarm was broken or something....Yeah like any normal human being would do that..NOT!]] ]]
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* [[spoiler: PosthumousCharacter]] PosthumousCharacter]]
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* [[spoiler: TooDumbToLive: In the novelization his security system goes off which obviously means an intruder is near by, but instead of being alarmed he just brushed it off and thought the alarm was broken or something....Yeah like any normal human being would do that..NOT!]]
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* BatDeduction - ''TheDaVinciCode'' type clues he left require astounding leaps of "[[InsaneTrollLogic logic]]".
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* BatDeduction - ''TheDaVinciCode'' type clues he left require astounding leaps of "[[InsaneTrollLogic logic]]". logic]]".
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** or DamselScrappy since [[TooDumbToLive she's the one who got into that mess in the first place]]
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** or DamselScrappy since [[TooDumbToLive she's the one who got into that mess in the first place]] place.]]
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* TagAlongKid: Mostly in the novelization version
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* CheerFullChild
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* TagAlongKid: Mostly in the novelization version
* TagAlongKid: Mostly in the novelization version
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** or DamselScrappy Due to her IndyPloys.
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** or DamselScrappy Due to her IndyPloys.since [[TooDumbToLive she's the one who got into that mess in the first place]]
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** or DamselScrappy Due to her IndyPloys which makes her TooDumbToLive
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** or DamselScrappy Due to her IndyPloys which makes her TooDumbToLive IndyPloys.
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* ChildrenRaiseYou: She probably does this the most for L in terms of care taking. To the point where "Who's really raising who?" comes to play.
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* ChildrenRaiseYou: She probably does this the most for L in terms of care taking. To the point where "Who's really raising who?" comes ChildrenRaiseYou
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* MoralityPet: Maki is like this for Kujo. [[spoiler: More so in the novel where Hatsune stated Kujo's fondness for her.]]Also see KickTheMoralityPet
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* ChildrenRaiseYou: She probably does this the most for L in terms of care taking. To the point where "Who's really raising who?" comes to play.
* MoralityPet: Maki is like this for Kujo. [[spoiler: More so in the novel where Hatsune stated Kujo's fondness for her.]]Also see KickTheMoralityPet
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* ChildrenRaiseYou: [[spoiler: She probably does this the most for L. To the point where "Who's really raising who?" comes to play.]]
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* ChildrenRaiseYou: [[spoiler: She probably does this the most for L.L in terms of care taking. To the point where "Who's really raising who?" comes to play.]]
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YouKilledMyFather]]
* ChildrenRaiseYou: [[spoiler: She probably does this the most for L. To the point where "Who's really raising who?" comes to play.]]
* ChildrenRaiseYou: [[spoiler: She probably does this the most for L. To the point where "Who's really raising who?" comes to play.]]
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* CharacterAlignment: LawfulEvil. Had a carefully planned scheme that's evil was for (what he believed to be) the greater good.
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* BatDeduction - TheDaVinciCode type clues he left require astounding leaps of "[[InsaneTrollLogic logic]]".
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* GoodDocBadDoc - the good doctor...
* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]
* [[spoiler: MyGodWhatHaveIDone]] - [[spoiler: he created the virus that K intends to use to KillAllHumans]]
* {{Narm}} - Since it CrossesTheLineTwice and because of SpecialEffectsFailure his [[spoiler: tragic death scene]] is unintentionally hilarious.
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* [[spoiler: StupidSacrifice]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason
* SpannerInTheWorks
* YouKilledMyFather
* BatDeduction - TheDaVinciCode type clues he left require astounding leaps of "[[InsaneTrollLogic logic]]".
* GoodDocBadDoc - the good doctor...
* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]
* [[spoiler: MyGodWhatHaveIDone]] - [[spoiler: he created the virus that K intends to use to KillAllHumans]]
* {{Narm}} - Since it CrossesTheLineTwice and because of SpecialEffectsFailure his [[spoiler: tragic death scene]] is unintentionally hilarious.
* [[spoiler: PosthumousCharacter]]
* [[spoiler: StupidSacrifice]]
* [[spoiler: UnwittingPawn]]
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* IndyPloy
* RevengeBeforeReason
* SpannerInTheWorks
* YouKilledMyFather
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* WestCoastTeam – One of L and Watari's agents working a case in a remote jungle village when [[spoiler: the virus hits.]]
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* WestCoastTeam – One of L and Watari's agents working a case in a remote jungle village in Thailand when [[spoiler: the virus hits.]]
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** When you compare it to the main series, it feels like a condensed version of everything Light went through from the beginning to [[spoiler:the end of the Yotsuba arc]].
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** When you compare it to the main series, it feels like a condensed version of everything Light went through from the beginning first chapter all the way to [[spoiler:the end of the Yotsuba arc]].
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** There's no good way to take the line "I'm an aggressive top."
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