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!!Other Residents
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Ambassador Swan Song (her entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Codex-Equestria-Heroes-and-Villains-36-900966875 here]]) is a formerly racist Griffon ambassador who uncovered the AwfulTruth about her homeland and eventually repented, defecting to Cobbletown and becoming a genuine 'Sapient Rights' activist.
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* ParasiticHorror: Pit Viper has long sense become a parasitic plant capable of taking over people's bodies. He manages to take over a large portion of Cobbletown at the height of his rampage.
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* DiscardAndDraw: Her {{Reincarnation}} loses access to the Cottonmind, as it was completely obliterated down to the DNA and thus no longer exists, but gains PsychicPowers instead.
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* CheerfulChild: After being reincarnated, she became a cheerful baby Dragon whelp who adored her adoptive family, including [[HonoraryUncle Blacktip and Urtica]], and enjoyed spending time with them. She mostly retained those cheerful traits as she grew older, though she also developed a {{Tsundere}} side.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: PlayedWith: she ''does'' die, die like in canon, but unlike Freedom she [[{{Reincarnation}} comes back]] in a way, which Freedom never did.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes:
** The Cobbletowners and their monarchs are friendly and tolerant of each other regardless of race, and welcome anyone who wants to enter their kingdom. That being said, they aren't stupid and are willing to be harsh when needed. They despise all forms of discrimination and bigotry with a passion, as such things stand against everything they believe in.
** Likewise, the Firecrafters are beloved by Cobbletown (and many places in the outside world) for being kind, helpful, and adorable Draconic creatures. Nonetheless, they do not like being exploited and are quite willing to defend themselves with fire, claws, and guile.
** Talon Bàis, [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/900966875/4960097892 a kingdom known for its Dragonslayers]], attempted a genocidal war against Cobbletown and other 'Free Dragon' kingdoms like it. The resulting conflict, referred to as the 'Talon Bàis War', ended with the titular offending kingdom completely destroyed and its forces (which mainly consisted of racist, hardline fanatics) wiped out to the last Griffon.
** The Cobbletowners and their monarchs are friendly and tolerant of each other regardless of race, and welcome anyone who wants to enter their kingdom. That being said, they aren't stupid and are willing to be harsh when needed. They despise all forms of discrimination and bigotry with a passion, as such things stand against everything they believe in.
** Likewise, the Firecrafters are beloved by Cobbletown (and many places in the outside world) for being kind, helpful, and adorable Draconic creatures. Nonetheless, they do not like being exploited and are quite willing to defend themselves with fire, claws, and guile.
** Talon Bàis, [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/900966875/4960097892 a kingdom known for its Dragonslayers]], attempted a genocidal war against Cobbletown and other 'Free Dragon' kingdoms like it. The resulting conflict, referred to as the 'Talon Bàis War', ended with the titular offending kingdom completely destroyed and its forces (which mainly consisted of racist, hardline fanatics) wiped out to the last Griffon.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes:
**BewareTheNiceOnes: The Cobbletowners and their monarchs are friendly and a friendly, tolerant of each other regardless of race, and bunch who welcome anyone who wants to enter into their kingdom. That being said, kingdom, regardless of race. However, they aren't stupid stupid, and are willing to be harsh when needed. They they despise all forms of discrimination and bigotry with a passion, as such things stand against everything they believe in.
** Likewise, the Firecrafters arepassion. This also applies to Cobbletown's beloved by Cobbletown (and many places in the outside world) for being Firecrafters, who are kind, helpful, and adorable Draconic creatures. Nonetheless, they adorable, but do not like being exploited and are quite willing to defend themselves with fire, claws, and guile.
** Talon Bàis, [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/900966875/4960097892 a kingdom known for its Dragonslayers]], attempted a genocidal war against Cobbletown and other 'Free Dragon' kingdoms like it. The resulting conflict, referred to asthemselves. This is best shown in the 'Talon "Talon Bàis War', ended with War", where Cobbletown is one of many Free Dragon nations who retaliated against the titular offending Griffon kingdom completely destroyed of Talon Bàis and its forces (which mainly consisted of racist, hardline fanatics) wiped out helped nuke it (and the surrounding region) to kingdom come, down to the last Griffon.
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** Likewise, the Firecrafters are
** Talon Bàis, [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/900966875/4960097892 a kingdom known for its Dragonslayers]], attempted a genocidal war against Cobbletown and other 'Free Dragon' kingdoms like it. The resulting conflict, referred to as
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* PuppeteerParasite: Like Pit Viper, she can control those infected by the Cottonmind parasite. However, she very rarely actually ''uses'' it because she's not interested in doing so much.
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* SymbioticPossession: After Sacred Swan convinces her to rebel against Pit Viper, she sticks around in Swan's head and possesses her on several occassions to prevent Viper from realizing it as well as help the group out.
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* PastLifeMemories: Her {{Reincarnation}} begins dreaming of her past life, which causes some emotional issues until Sacred Swan finally tells her the truth about why she was reincarnated.
* PoisonousPerson: She reincarnates as a Green Dragon, and thus has poison powers. She chose a Green Dragon so she'd be like Blacktip.
* {{Reincarnation}}: While allowing herself to be killed alongside Pit Viper and the Cottonmind, she's allowed to reincarnated as an innocent whelp to have an actual life as Sacred Swan's adopted daughter.
* PoisonousPerson: She reincarnates as a Green Dragon, and thus has poison powers. She chose a Green Dragon so she'd be like Blacktip.
* {{Reincarnation}}: While allowing herself to be killed alongside Pit Viper and the Cottonmind, she's allowed to reincarnated as an innocent whelp to have an actual life as Sacred Swan's adopted daughter.
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Pit Viper (his entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Cobbletown-Bio-Pit-Viper-the-Insidious-Vine-996982791 here]]) is an ancient human king from the First Age turned mind controlling plant entity that's unleashed in the modern day.
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Pit Viper (his entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Cobbletown-Bio-Pit-Viper-the-Insidious-Vine-996982791 here]]) is an ancient human king Human King from the First Age turned mind controlling plant entity that's unleashed in the modern day.
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!!!'''Alignment:''' Neutral Evil -> Chaotic Good
!!!'''Type (formerly):''' Undead, Dragon, Parasitic Plant, Abused Child, Florakinetic\\\
'''Type (currently):''' Reincarnation, Botanist, Green Dragon, Photographer, Telepath
!!!'''Faction:''' Herself -> Cobbletown
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Freiheit, formerly known as Lizard (her entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Cobbletown-Bio-Lizard-Freiheit-997725128 here]]), was a severely abused Dragon whelp who was once part of a botanical hivemind along with Pit Viper, before she was rescued and reincarnated to receive a better life.
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* DraggedOffToHell: After being killed, Pit Viper spirit is dragged off to Nekelmu's Hell-Realms due to him having violating Primeval Law.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Pit Viper is a cunning manipulator and can trick people into trusting him. This is ''very'' important to his powerset, as he can't actually read people's memories unless they give him permission, so he has to manipulate them into doing it.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Cottonmouth was a normal human prior to becoming the Othermind, Pit Viper was a skilled magic user and alchemist in life. He also puts up much more of a fight against the heroes than Cottonmouth in the finale, as once Luna convinced Lizard to rebel, the fight was pretty much over, whereas Pit Viper has a BattleAtTheCenterOfTheMind with Sacred Swan before the group kills him.
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* AgeLift: Cottonmouth was ''already'' one of the oldest beings in his setting, but was 'only' 5,000 years old. Pit Viper is tens of thousands of years old.
* AncientEvil: Pit Viper is a First Age sovereign turned BotanicalAbomination who laid dorment under what is now Cobbletown for tens of thousands of years before being [[DugTooDeep accidentally unearthed.]]
* AncientEvil: Pit Viper is a First Age sovereign turned BotanicalAbomination who laid dorment under what is now Cobbletown for tens of thousands of years before being [[DugTooDeep accidentally unearthed.]]
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* DugTooDeep: He and the Cottonmind were unearthed by a construction project in Cobbletown after tens of thousands of years of dormancy. They didn't dig ''quite'' deep enough to fully unleash him, however, so he used his brainwashed minions to finish the job of digging up the ancient root system so he could begin rapidly spreading under Cobbletown.
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* LeakingCanOfEvil: After a sample of the Cottonmind was dug up and Queen Vespidae began tampering with it, he and Lizard woke up and began to spread as she used it for her own ends. However, the bulk of the Cottonmind was still buried in the ruins of his dungeon, but this gave him enough brainwashed slaves to dig up his root system and fully set himself free.
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* SealedEvilInACan: After his first outbreak was put down, he was left buried in his own dungeon for tens of thousands of years until a construction project in Cobbletown [[DugTooDeep unearthed a piece of the Cottonmind]]. He wasn't fully set free until he used his brainwashed slaves to break into the ancient root system and let him begin spreading.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: He attempts to wear down Sacred Swan's resistance so he can take her over and stop them from killing him by explaining how his empire was destroyed by dragons. Sacred Swan has none of it and points out he brought that on himself by kidnapping their eggs and experimenting on them despite being on good terms with them.
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* VillainsWantMercy: As he realizes the Cobbletown Trio are about to actually kill him, he begins begging for them not to do so. He goes from appealing to him (supposedly) being the LastOfHisKind to pointing out that they'll [[ShootTheDog kill Lizard along with him]], to finally offering them [[PleaseIWillDoAnything anything they want]], including control of the Cottonmind. They don't listen and put the monster down.
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* ShootTheDog: The only way to kill Pit Viper and destroy the Cottonmind will also kill Lizard/Freiheit. Ultimately, there's no other option and the Cobbletown Trio have no choice but to do so, though the whelp tells them to go ahead.
* TakingYouWithMe: She tells Sacred Swan how to destroy the Cottonmind and kill Pit Viper, despite knowing it will kill her along with them. She even helps them do so when Pit Viper tries to take over Sacred Swan.
* TakingYouWithMe: She tells Sacred Swan how to destroy the Cottonmind and kill Pit Viper, despite knowing it will kill her along with them. She even helps them do so when Pit Viper tries to take over Sacred Swan.
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-> ''"I am the rightful owner of this continent. It was mine, all mine, every insect and blade of grass and grain of sand. I ruled it all. And then you came, with your outsized brains and your clumsy crushing talons and your fire.'' And you stole it from me.''"''
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Pit Viper(entry (his entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Cobbletown-Bio-Pit-Viper-the-Insidious-Vine-996982791 here]]) is an ancient human king from the First Age turned mind controlling plant entity that's unleashed in the modern day.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Literature/WingsOfFire Cottonmouth/the Othermind.]]Othermind]].
* FantasticSlurs: The name he gave the whelp in his care, "Lizard", also counts as this, as he is extremely racist towards the Dragons and refuses to see them -- even Lizard herself -- as nothing but savage beasts. He called her "Lizard" so much that it became her name.
* FantasticSlurs: The name he gave the whelp in his care, "Lizard", also counts as this, as he is extremely racist towards the Dragons and refuses to see them -- even Lizard herself -- as nothing but savage beasts. He called her "Lizard" so much that it became her name.
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* MeaningfulRename: Her initial name was "Lizard", which doubles as a [[FantasticSlurs slur]] as her abuser and guardian, Pit Viper, is a strong anti-Dragon bigot. Fortunately, after Pit Viper is killed, Lizard is renamed "Freiheit" ("freedom" in German) by Sacred Swan and her group in consideration for everything the little whelp went through.
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* AchillesHeel: After becoming a BotanicalAbomination, Pit Viper is extremely difficult to kill and exceedingly dangerous, but the taproot of the plant growing through his and Lizard's heads it his weakspot. Ripping it out and destroying it kills Pit Viper and the entire parasitic plant superorganism.
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* PuppeteerParasite: Once his spores germinate inside a victim, they take over their nervous system and allow him to take control of them. He can either do this by making them obey his commands, or assuming direct control of them.
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* DeadAllAlong: His body died long ago. His consciousness/soul survives as part of and co-central intelligence of a mind-controlling parasitic plant superorganism.
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* MindControl: Has the ability to do so through the spores of the Cottonmind, which quickly germinates inside a victim who has inhaled, injected or ingested them and take over their nervous system.
* TheSociopath: Beneath his veneer of excuses, he is utterly incapable of caring about anyone and anything beyond himself and his goals. He is a narcissistic sociopath through and through.
* TheSociopath: Beneath his veneer of excuses, he is utterly incapable of caring about anyone and anything beyond himself and his goals. He is a narcissistic sociopath through and through.
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* BigBad: Pit Viper serves as the main antagonist of the Cottonmind Outbreak in his attempt to 'retake what's his.'
* BotanicalAbomination: He used to be a human but has long since merged with and took control of mind controlling plant.
* {{Expy}}: Of [[Literature/WingsOfFire Cottonmouth/the Othermind.]]
* WasOnceAMan: To the surprise of the heroes, who thought the plant was simply a tool of Queen Vespidae Avalon, he's actually a human who became the controlling consciousness of a mind controlling plant. All that remains of his original body is his skeleton overgrown by the plant. Even his ''soul'' has long since become twisted by his evil into something utterly inhuman.
* BotanicalAbomination: He used to be a human but has long since merged with and took control of mind controlling plant.
* {{Expy}}: Of [[Literature/WingsOfFire Cottonmouth/the Othermind.]]
* WasOnceAMan: To the surprise of the heroes, who thought the plant was simply a tool of Queen Vespidae Avalon, he's actually a human who became the controlling consciousness of a mind controlling plant. All that remains of his original body is his skeleton overgrown by the plant. Even his ''soul'' has long since become twisted by his evil into something utterly inhuman.
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!!!'''Character:''' Villainous
!!!'''Alignment:''' Neutral Evil
!!!'''Type:''' Tyrant King, Mad Scientist, Ancient Human, Transhuman Abomination, Parasitic Plant, Malignant Undead, Species Endling (Unverified)
!!!'''Faction:''' Himself
Emperor Pit Viper (entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Cobbletown-Bio-Pit-Viper-the-Insidious-Vine-996982791 here]]) is an ancient human king from the First Age turned mind controlling plant entity that's unleashed in the modern day.
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* ForWantOfANail: If the Dragons didn't find the original Cobbletown or didn't have the heart to continue staying in the area, Cobbletown would have become like Abyssinian's [[WretchedHive Kludgetown]], eventually disappearing from history altogether.
* PointOfDivergence: If the Dragons didn't find the original Cobbletown or didn't have the heart to continue staying in the area, Cobbletown would have become like Abyssinian's [[WretchedHive Kludgetown]], eventually disappearing from history altogether.
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* ForWantOfANail:
** He wouldn't have come to the realization that both his resentment and BoomerangBigot feelings towards Dragonkind are wrong if he hadn't heard of [[HumbleHero Blue Suede Heartstrings]] snapping and nearly turning into a Fallen Alicorn during his [[WalkingTheEarth globe-trotting]].
** This is later discussed with Dragon Lord Pyro II. Blacktip [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/871322352/4904787725 notes]] that if he hadn't met good people like Urtica, Moon Ray, and other benevolent Dragons like Arcaniss, he would have gone down a path of villainy that's similar to Valefor's.
---> '''Blacktip:''' [There] was a time I didn't want to be a Dragon, period. After learning of all the horrible things they did to others, including the Changelings, I was sure we were all destined to be nothing but savages.\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yikes. That sounds like something Valefor would say.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Ugh, really?\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yeah. I recall him saying something about Dragonkind being destined to be nothing more than the 'beasts' Tiamat made us to be at one point.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Well, that makes me glad Urtica, Moon Ray, and good dragons like Arcaniss snapped ME out of my funk. I don't know where I'd be without them."
** He wouldn't have come to the realization that both his resentment and BoomerangBigot feelings towards Dragonkind are wrong if he hadn't heard of [[HumbleHero Blue Suede Heartstrings]] snapping and nearly turning into a Fallen Alicorn during his [[WalkingTheEarth globe-trotting]].
** This is later discussed with Dragon Lord Pyro II. Blacktip [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/871322352/4904787725 notes]] that if he hadn't met good people like Urtica, Moon Ray, and other benevolent Dragons like Arcaniss, he would have gone down a path of villainy that's similar to Valefor's.
---> '''Blacktip:''' [There] was a time I didn't want to be a Dragon, period. After learning of all the horrible things they did to others, including the Changelings, I was sure we were all destined to be nothing but savages.\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yikes. That sounds like something Valefor would say.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Ugh, really?\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yeah. I recall him saying something about Dragonkind being destined to be nothing more than the 'beasts' Tiamat made us to be at one point.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Well, that makes me glad Urtica, Moon Ray, and good dragons like Arcaniss snapped ME out of my funk. I don't know where I'd be without them."
* PointOfDivergence:
** He wouldn't have come to the realization that both his resentment and BoomerangBigot feelings towards Dragonkind are wrong if he hadn't heard of [[HumbleHero Blue Suede Heartstrings]] snapping and nearly turning into a Fallen Alicorn during his [[WalkingTheEarth globe-trotting]].
** This is later discussed with Dragon Lord Pyro II. Blacktip [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/871322352/4904787725 notes]] that if he hadn't met good people like Urtica, Moon Ray, and other benevolent Dragons like Arcaniss, he would have gone down a path of villainy that's similar to Valefor's.
---> '''Blacktip:''' [There] was a time I didn't want to be a Dragon, period. After learning of all the horrible things they did to others, including the Changelings, I was sure we were all destined to be nothing but savages.\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yikes. That sounds like something Valefor would say.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Ugh, really?\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yeah. I recall him saying something about Dragonkind being destined to be nothing more than the 'beasts' Tiamat made us to be at one point.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Well, that makes me glad Urtica, Moon Ray, and good dragons like Arcaniss snapped ME out of my funk. I don't know where I'd be without them.
** He wouldn't have come to the realization that both his resentment and BoomerangBigot feelings towards Dragonkind are wrong if he hadn't heard of [[HumbleHero Blue Suede Heartstrings]] snapping and nearly turning into a Fallen Alicorn during his [[WalkingTheEarth globe-trotting]].
** This is later discussed with Dragon Lord Pyro II. Blacktip [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/871322352/4904787725 notes]] that if he hadn't met good people like Urtica, Moon Ray, and other benevolent Dragons like Arcaniss, he would have gone down a path of villainy that's similar to Valefor's.
---> '''Blacktip:''' [There] was a time I didn't want to be a Dragon, period. After learning of all the horrible things they did to others, including the Changelings, I was sure we were all destined to be nothing but savages.\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yikes. That sounds like something Valefor would say.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Ugh, really?\\
'''Dragon Lord Pyro II:''' Yeah. I recall him saying something about Dragonkind being destined to be nothing more than the 'beasts' Tiamat made us to be at one point.\\
'''Blacktip:''' Well, that makes me glad Urtica, Moon Ray, and good dragons like Arcaniss snapped ME out of my funk. I don't know where I'd be without them.
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** Had she not followed Twilight/Amicitia's suggestion to participate in the Convocation of Creatures despite her ShrinkingViolet tendencies, she would not have gained the information needed for Professor Horwitz to find an addendum document that confirms the Ponies' debt to the Griffons was paid, dooming much of Equestria to be seized by Griffonstone (especially its revanchist [[ANaziByAnyOtherName Autorist]] factions).
** If she hadn't befriended Blacktip, he likely would not have come to terms with the hardships he suffered because of his people, or forgiven Dragonkind for mistreating and scorning him for wanting to become an intellectual. He also likely would not have become a demigod like she did.
** Had she not followed Twilight/Amicitia's suggestion to participate in the Convocation of Creatures despite her ShrinkingViolet tendencies, she would not have gained the information needed for Professor Horwitz to find an addendum document that confirms the Ponies' debt to the Griffons was paid, dooming much of Equestria to be seized by Griffonstone (especially its revanchist [[ANaziByAnyOtherName Autorist]] factions).
** If she hadn't befriended Blacktip, he likely would not have come to terms with the hardships he suffered because of his people, or forgiven Dragonkind for mistreating and scorning him for wanting to become an intellectual. He also likely would not have become a demigod like she did.
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** Had she not followed Twilight/Amicitia's suggestion to participate in the Convocation of Creatures despite her ShrinkingViolet tendencies, she would not have gained the information needed for Professor Horwitz to find an addendum document that confirms the Ponies' debt to the Griffons was paid, dooming much of Equestria to be seized by Griffonstone (especially its revanchist [[ANaziByAnyOtherName Autorist]] factions).
** If she hadn't befriended Blacktip, he likely would not have come to terms with the hardships he suffered because of his people, or forgiven Dragonkind for mistreating and scorning him for wanting to become an intellectual. He also likely would not have become a demigod like she did.
** Had she not followed Twilight/Amicitia's suggestion to participate in the Convocation of Creatures despite her ShrinkingViolet tendencies, she would not have gained the information needed for Professor Horwitz to find an addendum document that confirms the Ponies' debt to the Griffons was paid, dooming much of Equestria to be seized by Griffonstone (especially its revanchist [[ANaziByAnyOtherName Autorist]] factions).
** If she hadn't befriended Blacktip, he likely would not have come to terms with the hardships he suffered because of his people, or forgiven Dragonkind for mistreating and scorning him for wanting to become an intellectual. He also likely would not have become a demigod like she did.
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* RedPillBluePill: After discovering Gaul's journel, Gamall ([[spoiler:actually High Queen Kunnusta in disguise]]), who helped her find it, offers her a choice: close the book, hide it away, and forget she ever found it so she and her kindgom can continue living in peaceful, ignorant bliss, or leave the book and read it to the world, exposing King Gaul's horrific crimes. She ultimately chooses the latter, setting in motion the events that lead to her kingdom's destruction.
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: The young crown-prince is positively ''adored'' in Cobbletown, mainly due to the kingdom's acceptance of hybrids.
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* UniversallyBelovedLeader: The young crown-prince is positively ''adored'' in Cobbletown, mainly due to the kingdom's acceptance of hybrids.
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* VirtuousVegetarianism: As a Talon Bàis Griffon, she used to eat various Dragon dishes (including those that used [[EatsBabies Dragon eggs]] and [[WouldHurtAChild juvenile Dragons]] as ingredients), and saw nothing wrong with this due to her racism. After discovering the AwfulTruth of her home and surviving the destruction of Talon Bàis, she was among many who turned to vegetarianism to atone for partaking in their former kingdom's atrocities.
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* VirtuousVegetarianism: As a Talon Bàis Griffon, she used to eat various Dragon dishes (including those that used [[EatsBabies Dragon eggs]] and [[WouldHurtAChild juvenile Dragons]] as ingredients), and saw nothing wrong with this due to her racism. After discovering the AwfulTruth of her home and surviving the destruction of Talon Bàis, she was among many who turned to vegetarianism to atone for partaking in their former kingdom's atrocities. {{Deconstructed}}, as it's pointed out she biologically ''needs'' meat to live and this was actually SelfHarm. Fortunately, she's convinced to eat meat again.
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* FantasticRacism: Deconstructed. While he never participated in his Dragonflight's crueler activities like pillaging 'Tiny' civilizations and terrorizing 'Tiny' non-Dragon races, he still condoned them and saw his people's bigoted, xenophobic attitudes as normal. Meeting a Pony named Magic Scroll and befriending them forced him to see that his bigotry is wrong, and losing his first friends to his cruel neighbors - as well as learning his parents' role in it and seeing them do nothing to help him during his [[KangarooCourt sham trial]] - exposed him to how insidious and ''horrific'' bigotry can get. Though he was left deeply embittered and cynical for a time, he relearned the importance of friendship, altruism, and coexistence and became a champion of those values, opposing bigotry at every turn.
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* FantasticRacism: Deconstructed. While he never participated in his Dragonflight's crueler activities like pillaging 'Tiny' civilizations and terrorizing 'Tiny' non-Dragon races, he still condoned them and saw his people's bigoted, xenophobic attitudes as normal. Meeting a Pony named Magic Scroll and befriending them forced him to see that his bigotry is wrong, and losing his first friends to his cruel neighbors - -- as well as learning his parents' role in it and seeing them do nothing to help him during his [[KangarooCourt sham trial]] - -- exposed him to how insidious and ''horrific'' bigotry can get. Though he was left deeply embittered and cynical for a time, he relearned the importance of friendship, altruism, and coexistence and became a champion of those values, opposing bigotry at every turn.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: He has purple eyes, and he is a Dragon god of Magic and a powerful magical prodigy - so much that people started comparing him to Princess Twilight/Amicitia Sparkle.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: He has purple eyes, and he is a Dragon god of Magic and a powerful magical prodigy - -- so much that people started comparing him to Princess Twilight/Amicitia Sparkle.
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* {{Seers}}: One of his PsychicPowers is precognition. His Friendship domain both plays it straight and inverts it - he has a form of precognition that shows a person's potential friendships with others, and a form of retrocognition that shows a person's friendship history.
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* {{Seers}}: One of his PsychicPowers is precognition. His Friendship domain both plays it straight and inverts it - -- he has a form of precognition that shows a person's potential friendships with others, and a form of retrocognition that shows a person's friendship history.
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* SympathyForTheDevil: He pities [[JerkassGods King Aspen]] for going through the same circumstances as he did - starting out as an innocent youth who experienced horrible tragedies, then turned into a bigot by toxic people who held twisted ideals of what the 'perfect creature' should be. This leads to him imploring for Aspen to rethink his bigoted ways during their encounter in the Cosmic Convocation of Divine Sovereigns, despite being faced with FantasticRacism from the latter.
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* SympathyForTheDevil: He pities [[JerkassGods King Aspen]] for going through the same circumstances as he did - -- starting out as an innocent youth who experienced horrible tragedies, then turned into a bigot by toxic people who held twisted ideals of what the 'perfect creature' should be. This leads to him imploring for Aspen to rethink his bigoted ways during their encounter in the Cosmic Convocation of Divine Sovereigns, despite being faced with FantasticRacism from the latter.
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* TrueCompanions: His relationship with the other Draconic co-founders of the Cobbletown Pantheon is this. Initially, he kept himself at arm's length from them due to being extremely disillusioned with friendship and not wanting to go through the pain of losing more friends. However, after opening up to them about his problems, he is met with genuine sympathy and supoprt, after which he breaks down crying. This convinces him to have a second go at friendship, leading to the Dragons becoming close friends. When he Ascends to demi-godhood and shares insecurities over being crowned King of their pantheon, his friends assure him that he earned his position and they're all there to help him rule.
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* TrueCompanions: His relationship with the other Draconic co-founders of the Cobbletown Pantheon is this. Initially, he kept himself at arm's length from them due to being extremely disillusioned with friendship and not wanting to go through the pain of losing more friends. However, after opening up to them about his problems, he is met with genuine sympathy and supoprt, support, after which he breaks down crying. This convinces him to have a second go at friendship, leading to the Dragons becoming close friends. When he Ascends to demi-godhood and shares insecurities over being crowned King of their pantheon, his friends assure him that he earned his position and they're all there to help him rule.
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* FreudianExcuse: All of his preexisting issues, such as his InferioritySuperiorityComplex, his [[HiddenHeartOfGold urges to hide his true self]], his self-loathing, and his anger problems, stem from growing up in a society of Dragons full of bigotry and toxic standards of strength. Learning of the truth behind the 'Burning of Amorea' event from Prince Arcaniss just compounded these issues into outright nihilistic pessimism regarding Dragonkind's future. However, it's deconstructed, as these same issues turn out to be holding him back - his pessimism is just as closeminded and harmful since it only contributes to the problems plaguing Dragonkind, not stop it. As Twilight/Amicitia points out, his need to hide his true self only creates a SelfFulfillingProphecy where people will only assume he's like his greedy, cruel, and domineering kin since they don't know what he's truly like. And as he later notes to Dragon Lord Pyro II, if he didn't have a support network or seek out Moon Ray Vaughoof for help, he would have become as bad as Valefor.
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* FreudianExcuse: All of his preexisting issues, such as his InferioritySuperiorityComplex, his [[HiddenHeartOfGold urges to hide his true self]], his self-loathing, and his anger problems, stem from growing up in a society of Dragons full of bigotry and toxic standards of strength. Learning of the truth behind the 'Burning of Amorea' event from Prince Arcaniss just compounded these issues into outright nihilistic pessimism regarding Dragonkind's future. However, it's deconstructed, as these same issues turn out to be holding him back - -- his pessimism is just as closeminded and harmful since it only contributes to the problems plaguing Dragonkind, not stop it. As Twilight/Amicitia points out, his need to hide his true self only creates a SelfFulfillingProphecy where people will only assume he's like his greedy, cruel, and domineering kin since they don't know what he's truly like. And as he later notes to Dragon Lord Pyro II, if he didn't have a support network or seek out Moon Ray Vaughoof for help, he would have become as bad as Valefor.
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* NoTrueScotsman: Deconstructed. Many Dragons, up to including his own parents, mistreated and scorned him for not being a 'real' Dragon because he wanted to pursue intellectual goals instead of being domineering, greedy brutes like the majority of Dragonkind is - conveniently ignoring the fact that one of Dragonkind's creators is the intelligent Dragon King Bahamut. He later ran away from home with King Bahamut's blessing/encouragement, but then he discovered Dragonkind's role in 'The Burning of Amorea' and the near-extinction of Changelingkind, which [[HeroicBSOD emotionally broke him]]. All these factors turned him into a BoomerangBigot who believed all Dragons, himself included, are destined to be good-for-nothing savages who burned, pillaged, and destroyed because they can.
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* NoTrueScotsman: Deconstructed. Many Dragons, up to including his own parents, mistreated and scorned him for not being a 'real' Dragon because he wanted to pursue intellectual goals instead of being domineering, greedy brutes like the majority of Dragonkind is - -- conveniently ignoring the fact that one of Dragonkind's creators is the intelligent Dragon King Bahamut. He later ran away from home with King Bahamut's blessing/encouragement, but then he discovered Dragonkind's role in 'The Burning of Amorea' and the near-extinction of Changelingkind, which [[HeroicBSOD emotionally broke him]]. All these factors turned him into a BoomerangBigot who believed all Dragons, himself included, are destined to be good-for-nothing savages who burned, pillaged, and destroyed because they can.
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* WhyCouldntYouBeDifferent: While not outright abusive, his parents were disappointed in him for not following the ways of their people - that is, being domineering and greedy brutes whose strength made them 'superior' to 'Tiny' races. It's deconstructed as this contributed to his present issues regarding his desires and self-image.
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* WhyCouldntYouBeDifferent: While not outright abusive, his parents were disappointed in him for not following the ways of their people - -- that is, being domineering and greedy brutes whose strength made them 'superior' to 'Tiny' races. It's deconstructed as this contributed to his present issues regarding his desires and self-image.
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* ColorMotif: Green. Parts of her body are different shades of green (light green wings, forest green carapace, and aqua-green exoskeleton). Green represents growth, adaptability, and kindness - Urtica's a sweet and adorable Changeling who's easy to befriend because of her adorableness, and despite her ShrinkingViolet tendencies, she was able to become a Changeling demigoddess in part thanks to the encouragement she received from those around her. But Green also stands for inexperience - despite her newfound power, Urtica is very inexperienced by Royal Changeling standards and has little to no combat experience.
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* ColorMotif: Green. Parts of her body are different shades of green (light green wings, forest green carapace, and aqua-green exoskeleton). Green represents growth, adaptability, and kindness - -- Urtica's a sweet and adorable Changeling who's easy to befriend because of her adorableness, and despite her ShrinkingViolet tendencies, she was able to become a Changeling demigoddess in part thanks to the encouragement she received from those around her. But Green also stands for inexperience - -- despite her newfound power, Urtica is very inexperienced by Royal Changeling standards and has little to no combat experience.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: She started searching for truths about her kingdom's founder Gael. Gamall[[spoiler:/High Queen Kunnusta]] gives her exactly that, but the truth she discovered [[AwfulTruth isn't exactly a pleasant one.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: She started searching for truths about her kingdom's founder Gael. founder, Gael, with the intention to support her anti-Dragon rhethoric. Gamall[[spoiler:/High Queen Kunnusta]] gives her exactly that, but the truth she discovered [[AwfulTruth isn't exactly a pleasant one.]]one]].
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* InterspeciesFriendship: She ends up befriending Blacktip, an Ascendant Dragon demigod, of all people. This is because she was previously a racist ambassador who saw Dragons as "savage beasts", but discovered to her horror that her beliefs were based on lies her kingdom's founder created out of sheer hatred for Dragonkind. Blacktip, for his part, was willing to forgive her on account of her genuine remorse and how her discoveries affected her mentally and emotionally.
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* MinorCrimeRevealsMajorPlot: She got kicked out of a diplomatic conference for violating diplomatic protocols with her extremely racist behavior. This leads to her researching her kingdom's history out of desire to support her anti-Dragon racism, upon which she discovers that her kingdom was actually founded on complete lies, while her kingdom's founder was nothing but a racist mass-murderer who targeted innocent Dragons out of sheer hatred for them. Her discovery creates a fall-out so bad that her kingdom is reduced to rubble by the end of it, thanks to divine and mortal retaliation.
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* MinorCrimeRevealsMajorPlot: She got kicked out of a diplomatic conference for violating diplomatic protocols with her extremely racist behavior. This leads to her researching her kingdom's history out of desire to support her anti-Dragon racism, upon which she discovers that her kingdom was actually founded on complete lies, lies while her kingdom's founder was nothing but a racist mass-murderer who targeted innocent Dragons out of sheer hatred for them. Her discovery creates a fall-out so bad that her kingdom is reduced to rubble by the end of it, thanks to divine and mortal retaliation.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: As Blacktip noted, her situation regarding her former kingdom is similar to his - both of them learned of an AwfulTruth that was deliberately twisted by their own people to make themselves look more heroic, sending them into a HeroicBSOD. In Blacktip's case, he learned of the 'Burning of Amorea' and how Dragonkind twisted it to make themselves appear more heroic, while Swan learned her FantasticRacism was based on a complete lie created by [[FakeUltimateHero a genocidal mass-murderer]]. This actually led to them becoming friends as Blacktip knew full well what she was going through, having experienced it himself.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: As Blacktip noted, her situation regarding her former kingdom is similar to his - -- both of them learned of an AwfulTruth that was deliberately twisted by their own people to make themselves look more heroic, sending them into a HeroicBSOD. In Blacktip's case, he learned of the 'Burning of Amorea' and how Dragonkind twisted it to make themselves appear more heroic, while Swan learned her FantasticRacism was based on a complete lie created by [[FakeUltimateHero a genocidal mass-murderer]]. This actually led to them becoming friends as Blacktip knew full well what she was going through, having experienced it himself.
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* OurGryphonsAreDifferent: She's a Southern Griffon - specifically, a Swan Griffon - and thus is part Swan and part feline.
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* OurGryphonsAreDifferent: She's a Southern Griffon - -- specifically, a Swan Griffon - -- and thus is part Swan and part feline.
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* SirSwearsALot: She is rather foul-mouthed when angry, even after her HeelRealization.
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* SirSwearsALot: She is As part of her recurring [[HotBlooded anger problems]], she can become rather foul-mouthed when angry, even angry despite her best efforts to control her temper. Even after pulling a HeelFaceTurn, she still suffers from it. Blacktip and others are trying to help her HeelRealization.through this, however.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: According to her, her favorite breakfast food was a Dragon omelet, "filled with bacon, watercress, and cheese, topped with chives and accompanied by buttered bread and [[MustHaveCaffeine a cup of coffee]]". This stemmed from how she grew up eating Dragon omelets with her siblings as a young chick. Following her discovery of her kingdom's AwfulTruth and the loss of her home, however, she was confirmed to be one among many ex-Talon Bàis Griffons who turned to vegetarianism to atone for their crimes and/or condonement of their society's racism.
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* VirtuousVegetarianism: As a Talon Bàis Griffon, she used to eat various Dragon dishes (including those that used [[EatsBabies Dragon eggs]] and [[WouldHurtAChild juvenile Dragons]] as ingredients), and condoned their production due to her racism. After discovering the AwfulTruth about her home and surviving the destruction of Talon Bàis, she was among many who turned to vegetarianism to atone for partaking in their former kingdom's atrocities.
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* VirtuousVegetarianism: As a Talon Bàis Griffon, she used to eat various Dragon dishes (including those that used [[EatsBabies Dragon eggs]] and [[WouldHurtAChild juvenile Dragons]] as ingredients), and condoned their production saw nothing wrong with this due to her racism. After discovering the AwfulTruth about of her home and surviving the destruction of Talon Bàis, she was among many who turned to vegetarianism to atone for partaking in their former kingdom's atrocities.
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: After training under Prince Sermo Machina for many years, she becomes a Celestial Griffon demigoddess who embodies Truth, Diplomats, Hatred, and Coexistence.
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: After [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/904156163/4971042383 training under Prince Sermo Machina for many years, years]], she becomes a Celestial Griffon demigoddess who embodies Truth, Diplomats, Hatred, and Coexistence.
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* BrokenTears: Learning Gael's true nature and thus having a HeelRealization over her own actions utterly breaks her, leaving her a sobbing wreck. Even once Blacktip calms her down, she can't stop crying due to the amount of anguish she's going through.
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* BrokenTears: Learning Gael's [[EvilAllAlong true nature nature]] and thus having a HeelRealization over her own actions utterly breaks her, leaving her a sobbing wreck. Even once Blacktip calms her down, she can't couldn't stop crying due to the amount of sheer anguish she's going through.
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* EtTuBrute: On the receiving end from her former country-griffons. She used to be one of their star diplomats and a well-respected purveyor of their ideology and beliefs. Then she found out and published the AwfulTruth about Talon-Bais founder, which caused a massive uproar in and out of the country. She was eventually branded as a traitor and a heretic by the fanatical PoliceState which rose to power, forcing her and other likeminded Talon-Baisians to flee elsewhere for asylum.
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* EtTuBrute: On the receiving end from her former country-griffons. She used to be one of their star diplomats and a well-respected purveyor of their ideology and beliefs. Then she found out learned and published the AwfulTruth about Talon-Bais founder, Gael, the founder of Talon Bàis, which caused a massive uproar in and out of the country. She was eventually branded as a traitor and a heretic by the fanatical PoliceState which that rose to power, forcing her and other likeminded Talon-Baisians Talon Bàisians to flee elsewhere for asylum.
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* TakeOurWordForIt: Her massive, racist tirade at the conference was so foul-mouthed, bigoted, and inflammatory that ''Codex Equus'' researchers refused to reprint it.
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* TakeOurWordForIt: Her InUnivesre, her massive, racist tirade at the conference was so foul-mouthed, bigoted, and inflammatory that ''Codex Equus'' researchers refused to reprint it.
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* VillainousBSOD: To say she was NOT happy learning about the AwfulTruth about her nation’s founder would be a massive UnderStatement. She ultimately rallied though and chose to do the right thing by publishing it.
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* VillainousBSOD: To say she was NOT happy learning about the AwfulTruth about her nation’s founder would be a massive UnderStatement. understatement. She ultimately rallied though and chose to do the right thing by publishing it.it.
* VirtuousVegetarianism: As a Talon Bàis Griffon, she used to eat various Dragon dishes (including those that used [[EatsBabies Dragon eggs]] and [[WouldHurtAChild juvenile Dragons]] as ingredients), and condoned their production due to her racism. After discovering the AwfulTruth about her home and surviving the destruction of Talon Bàis, she was among many who turned to vegetarianism to atone for partaking in their former kingdom's atrocities.
* VirtuousVegetarianism: As a Talon Bàis Griffon, she used to eat various Dragon dishes (including those that used [[EatsBabies Dragon eggs]] and [[WouldHurtAChild juvenile Dragons]] as ingredients), and condoned their production due to her racism. After discovering the AwfulTruth about her home and surviving the destruction of Talon Bàis, she was among many who turned to vegetarianism to atone for partaking in their former kingdom's atrocities.
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* AdultFear: Her situation essentially consists of her discovering that her beloved homeland was founded entirely on genocide and racism, which was covered up by higher authorities. In the ensuing social/cultural divide, she and others who learned the truth are branded as heretics, forcing them to flee and seek asylum in another kingdom. Then she loses her old homeland permanently when various kingdoms and allied nations destroy it in a war, though she comes to accept her loss with help from her friend, Blacktip.
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* MonsterTown: Cobbletown started out with Ponies and Dragons deciding to coinhabit and work with each other to achieve prosperity, and by the modern day it is a cosmopolitan melting pot where even Witches and Undead creatures like Vampires are welcomed so long as they respect their neighbours and the laws of the kingdom.
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!!!'''Alignment:''' Lawful Evil [=->=] Lawful Good
!!!'''Type:''' Ambassador, Racist (Former), Whistleblower, Atoner, Reforming, Sapient Rights Activist
!!!'''Faction:''' Talon Bàis (former), Cobbletown
!!!'''Alignment:''' Lawful Evil [=->=] Lawful Good
!!!'''Type:''' Ambassador, Racist (Former), Whistleblower, Atoner, Reforming, Sapient Rights Activist
!!!'''Faction:''' Talon Bàis (former), Cobbletown
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!!!'''Type:''' Ambassador, Racist (Former), Whistleblower, Atoner, Reforming, Sapient Rights Activist
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!!!'''Portfolio:''' Truth, Diplomats, Hatred, Coexistence
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Ambassador Swan Song (her entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Codex-Equestria-Heroes-and-Villains-36-900966875 here]]), is a formally racist Griffon ambassador who uncovered the AwfulTruth about her homeland and eventually repented, defecting to Cobbletown and becoming a genuine 'Sapient Rights' activist.
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Ambassador Swan Song (her entry [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Codex-Equestria-Heroes-and-Villains-36-900966875 here]]), here]]) is a formally formerly racist Griffon ambassador who uncovered the AwfulTruth about her homeland and eventually repented, defecting to Cobbletown and becoming a genuine 'Sapient Rights' activist.
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* EatsBabies: Averted. Despite knowing of Draco-Balut and how it was made from unborn Dragon babies, she never ate them herself, but nonetheless condoned the practice because of her racism. She eventually realizes how ''horrible'' it actually is following her discovery of Gael's [[EvilAllAlong true character]] and publishes her findings, causing the world (especially the Dragons) to explode with outrage.
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* EatsBabies: Averted. Despite knowing of Draco-Balut and how it was made from unborn Dragon babies, she never ate them herself, but nonetheless condoned the practice because of her racism. She eventually realizes how ''horrible'' it actually is following her discovery of Gael's [[EvilAllAlong true character]] and publishes her findings, causing the world (especially the Dragons) to explode with outrage.
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* ExcrementStatement: It's implied, to vent her resentment and anger over being branded a heretic for speaking the truth, that she did something...indecent on one of Gael's toppled statues.
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* ExcrementStatement: It's implied, to vent her resentment and anger over being branded a heretic for speaking the truth, that she did something...indecent ''indecent'' on one of Gael's toppled statues.statues. A Griffon Death god later admitting to making Gael's spirit watch her doing it.
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* FoulWaterfowl: She's a Swan Griffon, but was an incredibly racist bigot who abused her ambassador position to encourage the systemic dehumanization and persecution of Dragons, seeing them as little more than savage beasts to be curbed. But once she discovers the horrible truth about her [[FakeUltimateHero kingdom's heroic founder]], she [[FormerBigot renounces her racism and becomes a sapient rights activist]] to atone for her previous actions.
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* FoulWaterfowl: She's a Swan Griffon, but was an incredibly racist bigot who abused her ambassador position to encourage the systemic dehumanization and persecution of Dragons, seeing them as little more than savage beasts to be curbed. But once Once she discovers the horrible truth about her [[FakeUltimateHero kingdom's heroic founder]], she [[FormerBigot renounces her racism and becomes a sapient rights activist]] to atone for her previous actions.actions.
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* HeinzHybrid: Is a Southern Griffon - a Swan Griffon to be exact - and thus is part Swan and part feline.
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* OhMyGods: She screams the names of Notus and Boreas, two prominent Griffon deities, as she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone laments how she was unwittingly endorsing a racist mass-murder who lied to everyone]].
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* OhMyGods: She screams the names of Notus and Boreas, two prominent Griffon deities, as she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone laments how she was unwittingly endorsing a racist mass-murder who lied to everyone]].decieved everyone]].
* OurGryphonsAreDifferent: She's a Southern Griffon - specifically, a Swan Griffon - and thus is part Swan and part feline.
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* OurGryphonsAreDifferent: She's a Southern Griffon - specifically, a Swan Griffon - and thus is part Swan and part feline.
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* SirSwearsALot: Sacred Swan is rather foul mouthed when angry, even after her HeelRealization.
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* SirSwearsALot: Sacred Swan She is rather foul mouthed foul-mouthed when angry, even after her HeelRealization.
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* SwansASwimming: Is part Swan as a Southern Griffon, and occasionally shows signs of it like honking when she gets angry. Also, her webbed paws make for good swimming, but are less dexterous for actually holding stuff.
* TakeOurWordForIt: Her massive, racist tirade at the conference was so foul-mouthed, bigoted, and inflammatory that Codex refused to reprint it.
* TakeOurWordForIt: Her massive, racist tirade at the conference was so foul-mouthed, bigoted, and inflammatory that Codex refused to reprint it.
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* SwansASwimming: Is She's part Swan as a Southern Griffon, and occasionally shows signs of it like honking when she gets angry. Also, her webbed paws make for good swimming, but are less dexterous for actually holding stuff.
* TakeOurWordForIt: Her massive, racist tirade at the conference was so foul-mouthed, bigoted, and inflammatory thatCodex ''Codex Equus'' researchers refused to reprint it.
* TakeOurWordForIt: Her massive, racist tirade at the conference was so foul-mouthed, bigoted, and inflammatory that
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* TalkingDownTheSuicidal: He did this with Isona at some point, saving her from her attempt to kill herself by slitting her wrists and convincing her she could atone for her crimes.