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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] matches the tone of the level perfectly, and on top of that it's just an impressive GenreMashup combining everything from J-pop to contemporary classical.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] matches the tone of the level perfectly, and on top of that it's just an impressive GenreMashup combining everything from J-pop to contemporary classical.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] matches the tone of the level perfectly, and on top of that it's just an impressive GenreMashup even by the soundtrack's standard.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] matches the tone of the level perfectly, and on top of that it's just an impressive GenreMashup even by the soundtrack's standard.combining everything from J-pop to contemporary classical.
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* The overworld theme [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ql0afZfbJg When The Night Falls]] finds beauty in simplicity, every single element contributing vitally to its serene atmosphere.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] is very soothing.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] is very soothing.matches the tone of the level perfectly, and on top of that it's just an impressive GenreMashup even by the soundtrack's standard.
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* A great re-recording of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]" serves as this game's ending theme, doubling as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGfgfHRFnf0 Sweet Snow]] version is more touching in that it takes a more [[SoftAndSlowerCover soft approach]] to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* A great re-recording of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]" serves as this game's ending theme, doubling as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGfgfHRFnf0 Sweet Snow]] version is more touching in that it takes a more [[SoftAndSlowerCover [[SofterAndSlowerCover soft approach]] to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* A great re-recording of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]" serves as this game's ending theme, doubling as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGfgfHRFnf0 Sweet Snow]] version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* A great re-recording of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]" serves as this game's ending theme, doubling as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGfgfHRFnf0 Sweet Snow]] version is more touching in that it takes a more [[SoftAndSlowerCover soft approach approach]] to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* A great re-recording of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]" serves as this game's ending theme, doubling as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The Sweet Snow version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* A great re-recording of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]" serves as this game's ending theme, doubling as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGfgfHRFnf0 Sweet Snow Snow]] version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* The beautiful, soul-influnced jam of an ending theme, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oUZlwmqqv0 Dreams]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8-otnxm4-o Dreams]]", which gives a cinematic feeling to the game's end credits.
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* The beautiful, soul-influnced jam of an ending theme, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oUZlwmqqv0 Dreams]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8-otnxm4-o Dreams]]", which gives a cinematic feeling to the game's end credits.
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* The ending theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]], doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The Sweet Snow version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* The ending theme, [[https://www.A great re-recording of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]], doubles Dreams]]" serves as this game's ending theme, doubling as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The Sweet Snow version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* Jackle's boss theme, [[https://youtu.be/WKGE84WPHvY The Mantle]] is an ominous and jazzy track that fits the maniacal nightmaren well.
* The ending theme, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oUZlwmqqv0 Dreams]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8-otnxm4-o Dreams]]".
* The ending theme, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oUZlwmqqv0 Dreams]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8-otnxm4-o Dreams]]".
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* Jackle's boss theme, [[https://youtu.be/WKGE84WPHvY The Mantle]] Mantle,]] is an ominous and jazzy track that fits the maniacal nightmaren well.
* %%* The ending theme, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oUZlwmqqv0 Dreams]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8-otnxm4-o Dreams]]".
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* The ending theme from ''[[VideoGame/NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The Sweet Snow version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
* Also from that game, there is the Sky Concert mission. For that mission, you essentially fly through the sky hitting musical notes on your way, and the better you do, the more beautiful the song becomes. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TwKUp4m2pA This is what a perfect score sounds like.]]
* Also from that game, there is the Sky Concert mission. For that mission, you essentially fly through the sky hitting musical notes on your way, and the better you do, the more beautiful the song becomes. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TwKUp4m2pA This is what a perfect score sounds like.]]
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* The ending theme from ''[[VideoGame/NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles Dreams]], doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The Sweet Snow version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
*Also from that game, there is For the Sky Concert mission. For that mission, you essentially fly through the sky hitting musical notes on your way, and the better you do, the more beautiful the song becomes. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TwKUp4m2pA This is what a perfect score sounds like.]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBmjTdGlNxc D'Force Master]] from ''Journey of Dreams'' takes the final boss theme of the first game and kicks it up to epic proportions, growing in intensity as the song proceeds.
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* The ending theme, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oUZlwmqqv0 Dreams]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8-otnxm4-o Dreams]]".
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* [[https://youtu.be/YI7hC8LFhv0 The opening theme]] is an epic orchestral piece that perfectly captures the fun and whimsical nature of the game.
* [[https://youtu.be/ZHiQbrzLEfM Paternal Horn]], the theme of Spring Valley, is an incredibly upbeat and cheerful theme that makes flying around the valley a pure joy.
* Jackle's boss theme, [[https://youtu.be/WKGE84WPHvY The Mantle]] is an ominous and jazzy track that fits the maniacal nightmaren well.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBmjTdGlNxc D'Force Master]] from ''Journey of Dreams'' takes the final boss theme of the first game and kicks it up to epic proportions, growing in intensity as the song proceeds.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bTkPLIZrudc NiGHTS and Reala: Theme of a Tragedic Revenge]] is an awesome-fats paced boss theme on electric guitars, and gained an even [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGeyn8wo9V4 more awesome]] version in ''Journey of Dreams'' that emphasizes the lead guitar more.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bTkPLIZrudc NiGHTS and Reala: Theme of a Tragedic Revenge]] is an awesome-fats paced awesome fast-paced boss theme on electric guitars, and gained an even [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGeyn8wo9V4 more awesome]] version in ''Journey of Dreams'' that emphasizes the lead guitar more.
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* Growing Wings, for that matter, a triumphant instrumental version of "Dreams, Dreams" used in Twin Seeds in ''Into Dreams'' and Bellbridge in ''Journey of Dreams''. Goes with a pretty awesome segment of each game, too.
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* Growing Wings, for that matter, a triumphant instrumental version of "Dreams, Dreams" used in [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TDy9sWhdr-o Twin Seeds Seeds]] in ''Into Dreams'' and Bellbridge [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oSd9EUMFjhw Bellbridge]] in ''Journey of Dreams''. Goes with a pretty awesome segment of each game, too.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bTkPLIZrudc NiGHTS and Reala: Theme of a Tragedic Revenge]] is an awesome-fats paced boss theme on electric guitars, and gained an even [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGeyn8wo9V4 more awesome]] version in ''Journey of Dreams'' that emphasizes the lead guitar more.
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* Also from that game, there is the Sky Concert mission. For that mission, you essentially fly through the sky hitting musical notes on your way, and the better you do, the more beautiful the song becomes. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UG3XZi-muno This is what a perfect score sounds like.]]
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* Also from that game, there is the Sky Concert mission. For that mission, you essentially fly through the sky hitting musical notes on your way, and the better you do, the more beautiful the song becomes. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UG3XZi-muno com/watch?v=_TwKUp4m2pA This is what a perfect score sounds like.]]
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* The ending theme from ''[[NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The Sweet Snow version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* The ending theme from ''[[NightsIntoDreams ''[[VideoGame/NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge. The Sweet Snow version is more touching in that it takes a more soft approach to the lyrics in a manner fitting of its title.
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* The ending theme from ''[[NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge.
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* The ending theme from ''[[NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge.
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%%* The main theme song "Dreams Dreams".
%%* Reala's theme.
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%%* "D' Force Master", the theme that plays while facing the BigBad, Wizeman the Wicked.
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* The ending theme from ''[[NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge.
* Also from that game, there is the Sky Concert mission. For that mission, you essentially fly through the sky hitting musical notes on your way, and the better you do, the more beautiful the song becomes. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UG3XZi-muno This is what a perfect score sounds like.]]
* Growing Wings, for that matter, a triumphant instrumental version of "Dreams, Dreams" used in Twin Seeds in ''Into Dreams'' and Bellbridge in ''Journey of Dreams''. Goes with a pretty awesome segment of each game, too.
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAShPBzs8Lo Drifting Donbalon]]. The sheer awesomeness of its haunting male choir and creepy circus music will make you wish the music didn't stop after pressing pause.
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] is very soothing.
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBmjTdGlNxc D'Force Master]] takes the final boss theme of the first game and kicks it up to epic proportions, growing in intensity as the song proceeds.
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[[folder:Journey of Dreams]]
* The ending theme from ''[[NightsIntoDreams NiGHTS: Journey of Dreams]]'', [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7knQXONMbfA Dreams Dreams]]. Doubles as [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming Music]], especially after the way its [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3Ld2gPjLsg remix]] was used in the final stage, Bell Bridge.
* Also from that game, there is the Sky Concert mission. For that mission, you essentially fly through the sky hitting musical notes on your way, and the better you do, the more beautiful the song becomes. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UG3XZi-muno This is what a perfect score sounds like.]]
* Growing Wings, for that matter, a triumphant instrumental version of "Dreams, Dreams" used in Twin Seeds in ''Into Dreams'' and Bellbridge in ''Journey of Dreams''. Goes with a pretty awesome segment of each game, too.
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAShPBzs8Lo Drifting Donbalon]]. The sheer awesomeness of its haunting male choir and creepy circus music will make you wish the music didn't stop after pressing pause.
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvlz0p4s7Uw Crystal Choir]] is very soothing.
* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBmjTdGlNxc D'Force Master]] takes the final boss theme of the first game and kicks it up to epic proportions, growing in intensity as the song proceeds.
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These are quite possibly the most zero-context of Zero Context Example entries I\'ve seen in a while. JUST the track title? That gives the reader almost literally nothing to go on. You\'re writing for everyone. Not just for yourself, not just for fans. To assume the title with NO description speaks for itself is a form of Fan Myopia.
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* The "Growing Wings" theme.
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* The "Growing Wings" theme.
* "D' Force Master", the theme that plays while facing the BigBad, Wizeman the Wicked.
