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** And for the finisher, Maloney's goons attempt to seize Young by force... and that's when thirty of the ''California'''s Marines show up, racking the bolts of thirty rifles, and ''three .30 cal machine guns.'' Maloney is forced to flee.
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** And for the finisher, Maloney's goons attempt to seize Young by force... and that's when thirty of the ''California'''s Marines show up, racking the bolts of thirty rifles, and ''three .30 cal machine guns.'' Maloney is forced to flee.flee.
* As described in the world-building documents, the Battle of Pearl Harbor turned out ''very'' differently thanks to a poorly-timed martian EnemyMine when they attacked both Pearl and the Japanese strike force simultaneously. This prompted Admiral Nagumo to deploy his fighter craft to ''defend'' the harbor, saving Battleship Row from annihilation by martian forces. Several hours later the US Navy returned the favor when none other than the ''[[{{Irony}} USS Arizona]]'' came to the rescue of the Japanese battleships ''Hiei'' and ''Kirishima.''
* As described in the world-building documents, the Battle of Pearl Harbor turned out ''very'' differently thanks to a poorly-timed martian EnemyMine when they attacked both Pearl and the Japanese strike force simultaneously. This prompted Admiral Nagumo to deploy his fighter craft to ''defend'' the harbor, saving Battleship Row from annihilation by martian forces. Several hours later the US Navy returned the favor when none other than the ''[[{{Irony}} USS Arizona]]'' came to the rescue of the Japanese battleships ''Hiei'' and ''Kirishima.''
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* Skipping an electric shark-plane over water like a stone, completely clearing the SPRUCE GOOSE.
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* Skipping an electric shark-plane over water like a stone, completely clearing the SPRUCE GOOSE.GOOSE.
* [[{{Jerkass}} Trevor Maloney]] barges onto the deck of the ''USS California'' with armed RAF goons to haul Young away in chains. Except that the California's XO, Commander Nicholas "Mack" Mackintosh, MOH, refuses to allow it:
-->"I said NO," Mack snarls. "You want him, you go through proper channels. You certainly don't come storming onto MY deck, with armed men, without permission - after taking your sweet god-damned time with our docking paperwork and dumping an entire munitions dump of ammo and high-explosive shells so close to my dock that the FIRST Martian air-raid that visits will blow the superstructure clean off my ship's hull!" Mack's face isn't reddening with anger - in fact, it's getting pale, and his voice is only getting steadier as energy flows into his exhausted frame. "And you ESPECIALLY don't mouth off to ladies, or Witches, on my ship, especially when I'm DATING one!"
** And then Mack holds an immediate trial, speaks to Yoshika in Japanese, determines Young's guilt... and sentences him to time served. ''Then'', he extradites him into ''Minna's'' custory, again using clever legalese to thwart Maloney.
** And for the finisher, Maloney's goons attempt to seize Young by force... and that's when thirty of the ''California'''s Marines show up, racking the bolts of thirty rifles, and ''three .30 cal machine guns.'' Maloney is forced to flee.
* [[{{Jerkass}} Trevor Maloney]] barges onto the deck of the ''USS California'' with armed RAF goons to haul Young away in chains. Except that the California's XO, Commander Nicholas "Mack" Mackintosh, MOH, refuses to allow it:
-->"I said NO," Mack snarls. "You want him, you go through proper channels. You certainly don't come storming onto MY deck, with armed men, without permission - after taking your sweet god-damned time with our docking paperwork and dumping an entire munitions dump of ammo and high-explosive shells so close to my dock that the FIRST Martian air-raid that visits will blow the superstructure clean off my ship's hull!" Mack's face isn't reddening with anger - in fact, it's getting pale, and his voice is only getting steadier as energy flows into his exhausted frame. "And you ESPECIALLY don't mouth off to ladies, or Witches, on my ship, especially when I'm DATING one!"
** And then Mack holds an immediate trial, speaks to Yoshika in Japanese, determines Young's guilt... and sentences him to time served. ''Then'', he extradites him into ''Minna's'' custory, again using clever legalese to thwart Maloney.
** And for the finisher, Maloney's goons attempt to seize Young by force... and that's when thirty of the ''California'''s Marines show up, racking the bolts of thirty rifles, and ''three .30 cal machine guns.'' Maloney is forced to flee.
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* Skipping an electric shark-plane over water like a stone, completely clearing a warship.the SPRUCE GOOSE.
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** Shooting down the [[spoiler:''Edmund Fitzgerald'' and then crash-landing on it]].
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** Shooting down the [[spoiler:''Edmund Fitzgerald'' and then crash-landing on it]].it]].
* Skipping an electric shark-plane over water like a stone, completely clearing a warship.
* Skipping an electric shark-plane over water like a stone, completely clearing a warship.
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* Shooting down a dreadnought.
[[spoiler: dreadnought]].
** Shooting down the''Edmund [[spoiler:''Edmund Fitzgerald'' and then crash-landing on it.it]].
** Shooting down the
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** And then shooting down another.
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** And then shooting down another.
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** And then shooting down another.another.
** Shooting down the ''Edmund Fitzgerald'' and then crash-landing on it.
** Shooting down the ''Edmund Fitzgerald'' and then crash-landing on it.
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* Shooting down a dreadnought.
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** And then shooting down another.
** And then shooting down another.
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* Thread 24. You and the witches are about to get into a furball with a gaggle of martian bandits in a night fight over the English Channel. The witches need your radar but there's a downed witch in the water with martian watercraft on an intercept course. Whether you stay with the fight or rescue the witch, someone's going to die. [[TakeAThirdOption That is]], unless you light up the bandits with a radar blast, draw all their attention to your tail and trust in the witches to keep them off you, then dive for the deck and skim the channel's surface, scaring off the martians by flying at them ''upside down'' with all guns blazing and less than 300 feet of altitude. And then you find out later it was [[{{Moe}} Sanya]] you saved and victory tastes even sweeter.
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* Making ace in a day, during a daytime scrap, flying a night fighter.
* Thread 24. You and the witches are about to get into a furball with a gaggle of martian bandits in a night fight over the English Channel. The witches need your radar but there's a downed witch in the water with martian watercraft on an intercept course. Whether you stay with the fight or rescue the witch, someone's going to die. [[TakeAThirdOption That is]], unless you light up the bandits with a radar blast, draw all their attention to your tail and trust in the witches to keep them off you, then dive for the deck and skim the channel's surface, scaring off the martians by flying at them ''upside down'' with all guns blazing and less than 300 feet of altitude. And then you find out later it was [[{{Moe}} Sanya]] you saved and victory tastes evensweeter.sweeter.
* Shooting down a dreadnought.
* Thread 24. You and the witches are about to get into a furball with a gaggle of martian bandits in a night fight over the English Channel. The witches need your radar but there's a downed witch in the water with martian watercraft on an intercept course. Whether you stay with the fight or rescue the witch, someone's going to die. [[TakeAThirdOption That is]], unless you light up the bandits with a radar blast, draw all their attention to your tail and trust in the witches to keep them off you, then dive for the deck and skim the channel's surface, scaring off the martians by flying at them ''upside down'' with all guns blazing and less than 300 feet of altitude. And then you find out later it was [[{{Moe}} Sanya]] you saved and victory tastes even
* Shooting down a dreadnought.
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* Thread 24. You and the witches are about to get into a furball with a gaggle of martian bandits in a night fight over the English Channel. The witches need your radar but there's a downed witch in the water with martian watercraft on an intercept course. Whether you stay with the fight or rescue the witch, someone's going to die. [[TakeAThirdOption That is]], unless you light up the bandits with a radar blast, draw all their attention to your tail and trust in the witches to keep them off you, then dive for the deck and skim the channel's surface, scaring off the martians by flying at them with all guns blazing and less than 300 feet of altitude ''while flying upside down.'' And then you find out later it was [[{{Moe}} Sanya]] you saved and victory tastes even sweeter.
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* Thread 24. You and the witches are about to get into a furball with a gaggle of martian bandits in a night fight over the English Channel. The witches need your radar but there's a downed witch in the water with martian watercraft on an intercept course. Whether you stay with the fight or rescue the witch, someone's going to die. [[TakeAThirdOption That is]], unless you light up the bandits with a radar blast, draw all their attention to your tail and trust in the witches to keep them off you, then dive for the deck and skim the channel's surface, scaring off the martians by flying at them ''upside down'' with all guns blazing and less than 300 feet of altitude ''while flying upside down.'' altitude. And then you find out later it was [[{{Moe}} Sanya]] you saved and victory tastes even sweeter.
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* Thread 24. You and the witches are about to get into a furball with a gaggle of martian bandits in a night fight over the English Channel. The witches need your radar but there's a downed witch in the water with martian watercraft on an intercept course. Whether you stay with the fight or rescue the witch, someone's going to die. [[TakeAThirdOption That is]], unless you light up the bandits with a radar blast, draw all their attention to your tail and trust in the witches to keep them off you, then dive for the deck and skim the channel's surface, scaring off the martians by flying at them with all guns blazing and less than 300 feet of altitude ''while flying upside down.'' And then you find out later it was [[{{Moe}} Sanya]] you saved and victory tastes even sweeter.
