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* Creator/JeffDaniels' entire performance is movie length CMOA. It's probably the single best performance of his entire career.
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* Creator/JeffDaniels' entire performance is a movie length CMOA. It's probably the single best performance of his entire career.
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Fixing multiple grammar mistakes. Just because "who" is often misused in place of "whom" doesn't mean "whom" should always be used instead.
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* A bunch of B&W kids start hassling a technicolor Betty. David/Bud fights them off. What's impressive is that, not only does the normally geeky David successfully fight off three kids whom are twice his size, but he changes into Technicolor.
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* A bunch of B&W kids start hassling a technicolor Betty. David/Bud fights them off. What's impressive is that, that not only does the normally geeky David successfully fight off three kids whom who are twice his size, but he changes into Technicolor.
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** Also the guy David punches (Whitey) stares at the blood in shock. David teaches many wonderful things to Pleasantville, but to these very creepy bullies he introduces pain.
*** Note that the blood has color. More burgundy than red, but still - the pain, coupled with fear and anger, is making Whitey start to change, and he knows it.
*** Note that the blood has color. More burgundy than red, but still - the pain, coupled with fear and anger, is making Whitey start to change, and he knows it.
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** Also the guy David punches (Whitey) stares at the blood in shock. David teaches many wonderful things to Pleasantville, but to these very creepy bullies he introduces pain.
***pain. Note that the blood has color. More burgundy than red, but still - the pain, coupled with fear and anger, is making Whitey start to change, and he knows it.
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* Also, David during the climax of the movie, in which he tells the mayor and the rest of the opposing members of the town that sooner or later, everyone will succumb to their own human nature.
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* Also, David during the climax of the movie, in which he tells the mayor and the rest of the opposing members of the town that sooner or later, everyone will succumb to their own human nature.
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*** Note that the blood has color. More burgundy than red, but still - the pain, coupled with fear and anger, is making Whitey start to change, and he knows it
* When Mary Sue/Jennifer fights with her boyfriend at the book burning. "This is like the only book I've ever read in my whole life and you're not gonna put it on that fire!"
* When Mary Sue/Jennifer fights with her boyfriend at the book burning. "This is like the only book I've ever read in my whole life and you're not gonna put it on that fire!"
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*** Note that the blood has color. More burgundy than red, but still - the pain, coupled with fear and anger, is making Whitey start to change, and he knows it
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* When Mary Sue/Jennifer fights with her boyfriend Skip at the book burning. "This is like the only book I've ever read in my whole life and you're not gonna put it on that fire!"
* When Mary Sue/Jennifer fights with her boyfriend Skip at the book burning. "This is like the only book I've ever read in my whole life and you're not gonna put it on that fire!"
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* Jeff Daniels' entire performance is movie length CMOA. It's probably the single best performance of his entire career.
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* Jeff Daniels' Creator/JeffDaniels' entire performance is movie length CMOA. It's probably the single best performance of his entire career.
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***Note that the blood has color. More burgundy than red, but still - the pain, coupled with fear and anger, is making Whitey start to change, and he knows it
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* When Mary Sue/Jennifer fights with her boyfriend at the book burning. "This is like the only book I've read in my whole life and you're not gonna take it away from me."
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* When Mary Sue/Jennifer fights with her boyfriend at the book burning. "This is like the only book I've ever read in my whole life and you're not gonna take put it away from me."on that fire!"
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** I liked how he does it even though he knows she's not really his mother - or even fully real. He's protecting a friend. If he can do it in a show, he can do it in real life.
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** I liked how he He does it even though he knows she's not really his mother - or even fully real. He's protecting a friend. If he can do it in a show, he can do it in real life.
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** Also the guy David punches (Whitey) stares at the blood in shock. David teaches many wonderful things to Pleasantville, but to these very creepy bullies he introduces pain.
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* When Mary Sue/Jennifer fights with her boyfriend at the book burning. "This is like the only book I've read in my whole life and you're not gonna take it away from me."
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* Jeff Daniels' entire performance is movie length CMOA. It's probably the single best performance of his entire career.
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* Also, David during the climax of the movie, in which he tells the mayor and the rest of the opposing members of the town that sooner or later, everyone will succumb to their own human nature.
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** I liked how he does it even though he knows she's not really his mother - or even fully real. He's protecting a friend. If he can do it in a show, he can do it in real life.
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** I liked how he does it even though he knows she's not really his mother - or even fully real. He's protecting a friend. If he can do it in a show, he can do it in real life.life.
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* A bunch of B&W kids star hassling a technicolor Betty. David/Bud fights them off. What's impressive is that, not only does the normally geeky David successfully fight off three kids whom are twice his size, but he changes into Technicolor.
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* A bunch of B&W kids star start hassling a technicolor Betty. David/Bud fights them off. What's impressive is that, not only does the normally geeky David successfully fight off three kids whom are twice his size, but he changes into Technicolor.
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* A bunch of B&W kids star hassling a technicolor Betty. David/Bud fights them off. What's impressive is that, not only does the normally geeky David successfully fight off three kids whom are twice his size, but he changes into Technicolor.
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* A bunch of B&W kids star hassling a technicolor Betty. David/Bud fights them off. What's impressive is that, not only does the normally geeky David successfully fight off three kids whom are twice his size, but he changes into Technicolor.Technicolor.
** I liked how he does it even though he knows she's not really his mother - or even fully real. He's protecting a friend. If he can do it in a show, he can do it in real life.
** I liked how he does it even though he knows she's not really his mother - or even fully real. He's protecting a friend. If he can do it in a show, he can do it in real life.
