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* Gendo's discussion with the monoliths in Chapter 18, which is the culmination of [[GrewASpine NERV's institutional growth in the past few chapters]]. He trots out a highly credible BadassBoast while subtly but pointedly reminding them that he fully understands that SEELE left NERV to die by withholding the Lance in Chapter 16 and that further betrayals of [=NERV's=] trust could have more severe consequences.
-->"Additionally," he adds, "NERV will be making a public statement within the next hour. As the Committee does not wish vital information to be shared, we will not include the specifics of ADAM's discovery or our role in his detonation."\\
-->"Additionally," he adds, "NERV will be making a public statement within the next hour. As the Committee does not wish vital information to be shared, we will not include the specifics of ADAM's discovery or our role in his detonation."\\
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* Gendo's discussion with the monoliths in Chapter 18, 18 on behalf of Yui, which is the culmination of [[GrewASpine NERV's institutional growth in the past few chapters]]. He reminds them who the brains is behind their agenda, trots out a highly credible BadassBoast while BadassBoast, and subtly but pointedly reminding them notes that he the staff of NERV fully understands that SEELE left NERV them to die by withholding the Lance in Chapter 16 and that further betrayals betrayal of [=NERV's=] trust could have more severe consequences.
-->"Additionally," -->"What is the meaning of this," 06 demands, "Where is Doctor Ikari?"\\
"Doctor Ikari is busy," Gendo says, "As you are aware, the weapon used against ADAM also trapped Unit 01, and her son, in the Dirac Sea. She is currently planning a rescue attempt. However, I am here to both speak for her and to deliver her message."\\
Silence from the twelve monoliths.\\
"Speak it, then," 01 says.\\
"Progress has been made on finding an alternate path to Instrumentality," Gendo says, pushing his glasses up his nose, "Both based on the idea that ADAM is merely immobilized but not dead, and also on using Lilith alone. Doctor Ikari asks for your patience in these troubled times and will be with you in time. Now, any further questions?"\\
The monoliths go silent. Hands folded behind his back, the Supreme Commander of NERV waits, eyes wandering towards 06 more than the others.\\
"Additionally," he adds, "NERV will be making a public statement within the next hour. As the Committee does not wish vital information to be shared, we will not include the specifics of ADAM's discovery or our role in his detonation."\\
"Doctor Ikari is busy," Gendo says, "As you are aware, the weapon used against ADAM also trapped Unit 01, and her son, in the Dirac Sea. She is currently planning a rescue attempt. However, I am here to both speak for her and to deliver her message."\\
Silence from the twelve monoliths.\\
"Speak it, then," 01 says.\\
"Progress has been made on finding an alternate path to Instrumentality," Gendo says, pushing his glasses up his nose, "Both based on the idea that ADAM is merely immobilized but not dead, and also on using Lilith alone. Doctor Ikari asks for your patience in these troubled times and will be with you in time. Now, any further questions?"\\
The monoliths go silent. Hands folded behind his back, the Supreme Commander of NERV waits, eyes wandering towards 06 more than the others.\\
"Additionally," he adds, "NERV will be making a public statement within the next hour. As the Committee does not wish vital information to be shared, we will not include the specifics of ADAM's discovery or our role in his detonation."\\
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* Gendo's discussion with the monoliths in Chapter 18, which is the culmination of [[GrewASpine NERV's institutional growth in the past few chapters]]. He trots out a highly credible BadassBoast while subtly but pointedly reminding them that he fully understands that SEELE left NERV to die by withholding the Lance in Chapter 16.
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* Gendo's discussion with the monoliths in Chapter 18, which is the culmination of [[GrewASpine NERV's institutional growth in the past few chapters]]. He trots out a highly credible BadassBoast while subtly but pointedly reminding them that he fully understands that SEELE left NERV to die by withholding the Lance in Chapter 16.16 and that further betrayals of [=NERV's=] trust could have more severe consequences.
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* Gendo's discussion with the monoliths in Chapter 18, which is the culmination of [[GrewASpine NERV's institutional growth in the past few chapters]]. He trots out a highly credible BadassBoast while subtly but pointedly reminding them that he fully understands that SEELE left NERV to die by withholding the Lance in Chapter 16.
-->"Additionally," he adds, "NERV will be making a public statement within the next hour. As the Committee does not wish vital information to be shared, we will not include the specifics of ADAM's discovery or our role in his detonation."\\
"What public statement, Ikari?" 01 demands.\\
"That the Angel destroyed by NERV was the same Angel that caused the Second Impact," Gendo says, turning to the façade of Kihl, "While we had never anticipated that ADAM could awaken or be set loose, it is sensible to use the potential public good will."\\
A pause from the monoliths.\\
"Continue," 06 states.\\
"NERV will be untouchable," Ikari states, "All our actions, from this point, will be justified to the public due to this victory. We have avenged half the human race and have shown that even a being which most cultures would mistake as a God cannot stand against the Evangelions."\\
Pushing his glasses up his nose, his face remains unreadable. The spotlight reflects off the amber lenses to the point where his eyes cannot even be seen.\\
"Of course," he says, "ADAM's release was an accident. We have the implicit trust that the Committee had taken every precaution and that the destruction of NERV-Bethany was an unfortunate and unanticipated event."
-->"Additionally," he adds, "NERV will be making a public statement within the next hour. As the Committee does not wish vital information to be shared, we will not include the specifics of ADAM's discovery or our role in his detonation."\\
"What public statement, Ikari?" 01 demands.\\
"That the Angel destroyed by NERV was the same Angel that caused the Second Impact," Gendo says, turning to the façade of Kihl, "While we had never anticipated that ADAM could awaken or be set loose, it is sensible to use the potential public good will."\\
A pause from the monoliths.\\
"Continue," 06 states.\\
"NERV will be untouchable," Ikari states, "All our actions, from this point, will be justified to the public due to this victory. We have avenged half the human race and have shown that even a being which most cultures would mistake as a God cannot stand against the Evangelions."\\
Pushing his glasses up his nose, his face remains unreadable. The spotlight reflects off the amber lenses to the point where his eyes cannot even be seen.\\
"Of course," he says, "ADAM's release was an accident. We have the implicit trust that the Committee had taken every precaution and that the destruction of NERV-Bethany was an unfortunate and unanticipated event."
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-->"Well, then I had him stuffed. And mounted. And I installed hydraulics in his arms so he'd sort of jump anyone who looked in my closet. And stuff."
*** In Chapter 40 canon-Shinji opens the closet...
*** In Chapter 40 canon-Shinji opens the closet...
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo, the {{Manipulative Bastard}} we all know and love gets one when he confronts Canon!Yui leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo, the {{Manipulative Bastard}} ManipulativeBastard we all know and love gets one when he confronts Canon!Yui leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
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* Pieter's {{What The Hell Hero}} to Yui when she disapproves of Shinji and Asuka having sex, pointing out there were all kinds of ways she could have stopped it, all while spilling his guts about what a lousy father he's been and contributed to Asuka's crappy life that led to this moment.
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* Pieter's {{What The Hell Hero}} WhatTheHellHero to Yui when she disapproves of Shinji and Asuka having sex, pointing out there were all kinds of ways she could have stopped it, all while spilling his guts about what a lousy father he's been and contributed to Asuka's crappy life that led to this moment.
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** Mana activating the Reetron (ie, [[{{Transformers}} Devastator]]) with Asuka's help.
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** Mana activating the Reetron (ie, [[{{Transformers}} [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Devastator]]) with Asuka's help.
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* Rei, but only after a bit of a fridge moment. Consider this: Rei, from this universe, is known as Terrifying!Rei. Okay, keep that in mind for a moment. Now, at one point, she visits the world of [[AeonNatumEngel Aeon Natum Engel,]] where she meets her counterpart there. This is known, to fandom, as Creepy!Rei. Think on this for a moment. ANE Rei is a precognitive EldritchAbomination who lives in a world where the local NERV-equivalent fights Eldritch Horrors rather than Angels, and this includes [[CthuluMythos CTHULU.]] And yet, ND Rei is known as Terrifying. That's right, the Rei from the world where the Necronomicon is coming to life and is used as science is ''less terrifying'' than the Rei from the ND universe.
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* Rei, but only after a bit of a fridge moment. Consider this: Rei, from this universe, is known as Terrifying!Rei. Okay, keep that in mind for a moment. Now, at one point, she visits the world of [[AeonNatumEngel Aeon Natum Engel,]] ''Fanfic/AeonNatumEngel'', where she meets her counterpart there. This is known, to fandom, as Creepy!Rei. Think on this for a moment. ANE Rei is a precognitive EldritchAbomination who lives in a world where the local NERV-equivalent fights Eldritch Horrors rather than Angels, and this includes [[CthuluMythos CTHULU.[[Franchise/CthulhuMythos CTHULhU.]] And yet, ND Rei is known as Terrifying. That's right, the Rei from the world where the Necronomicon is coming to life and is used as science is ''less terrifying'' than the Rei from the ND universe.
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* Misato is given the one Crowning moment the series, and most fanfics, denied her in the seventeenth chapter against the Angel [[spoiler:ADAM]].
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* Misato is given the one Crowning moment the series, and most fanfics, denied her in the seventeenth chapter against the Angel [[spoiler:ADAM]].ADAM.
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* [[spoiler:Asuka]] gets the second half of chapter 24 and all of chapter 25 as a protracted CMOA. Having been thoroughly [[BreakTheCutie broken]] by parental neglect and emotional/mental abuse before the fic began, and spending much of the fic itself as a [[ShrinkingViolet stammering, timid]] [[TheWoobie wreck]] - {{It Makes Sense In Context}} - her rampage of awesome begins in a deliciously just fashion when she '''''chairshots''''' [[spoiler:Kyoko]], the parent in question. And then she ''really'' gets started...
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* [[spoiler:Asuka]] Asuka gets the second half of chapter 24 and all of chapter 25 as a protracted CMOA. Having been thoroughly [[BreakTheCutie broken]] by parental neglect and emotional/mental abuse before the fic began, and spending much of the fic itself as a [[ShrinkingViolet stammering, timid]] [[TheWoobie wreck]] - {{It Makes Sense In Context}} ItMakesSenseInContext - her rampage of awesome begins in a deliciously just fashion when she '''''chairshots''''' [[spoiler:Kyoko]], Kyoko, the parent in question. And then she ''really'' gets started...
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** And to top it all off? At the end of the chapter, Yui explains the aforementioned rampage to Kyoko, and does what she said she was going to do from the very beginning: blatantly steamrolls all over Kyoko's authority [[spoiler: and has Asuka classified as the Second Child without her consent.]] [[VillainousBreakdown Kyoko does not take it well.]]
** She tops this one in ch. 38 when [[spoiler:her various personality splits come to life to help her fight the Angel Iruel.]]
** She tops this one in ch. 38 when [[spoiler:her various personality splits come to life to help her fight the Angel Iruel.]]
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** And to top it all off? At the end of the chapter, Yui explains the aforementioned rampage to Kyoko, and does what she said she was going to do from the very beginning: blatantly steamrolls all over Kyoko's authority [[spoiler: and has Asuka classified as the Second Child without her consent.]] consent. [[VillainousBreakdown Kyoko does not take it well.]]
** She tops this one in ch. 38 when[[spoiler:her her various personality splits come to life to help her fight the Angel Iruel.]]
** She tops this one in ch. 38 when
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*** In Chapter 40 [[spoiler:canon-Shinji opens the closet...]]
* Chapter 38... Where the hell do we even ''start?!'' [[spoiler:Iruel]] shows up and [[spoiler:merges with the Cherubim]], Asuka's [[spoiler:[[SplitPersonality split personalities]] kick butt and take names]], Gendo snipes a TRIDENT to death, Jet Alone Prime [[spoiler:gets a "soul" and becomes basically a mechanical Evangelion]], topping it all off with Go-Kun and Rei dishing out the most epic '''Giga Drill Breakah''' this side of Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann. Ya know what? Let's just call it a Crowning ''' ''CHAPTER'' ''' Of Awesome.
* Chapter 38... Where the hell do we even ''start?!'' [[spoiler:Iruel]] shows up and [[spoiler:merges with the Cherubim]], Asuka's [[spoiler:[[SplitPersonality split personalities]] kick butt and take names]], Gendo snipes a TRIDENT to death, Jet Alone Prime [[spoiler:gets a "soul" and becomes basically a mechanical Evangelion]], topping it all off with Go-Kun and Rei dishing out the most epic '''Giga Drill Breakah''' this side of Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann. Ya know what? Let's just call it a Crowning ''' ''CHAPTER'' ''' Of Awesome.
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*** In Chapter 40 [[spoiler:canon-Shinji canon-Shinji opens the closet...]]
closet...
* Chapter 38... Where the hell do we even ''start?!''[[spoiler:Iruel]] Iruel shows up and [[spoiler:merges merges with the Cherubim]], Cherubim, Asuka's [[spoiler:[[SplitPersonality [[SplitPersonality split personalities]] kick butt and take names]], names, Gendo snipes a TRIDENT to death, Jet Alone Prime [[spoiler:gets gets a "soul" and becomes basically a mechanical Evangelion]], Evangelion, topping it all off with Go-Kun and Rei dishing out the most epic '''Giga Drill Breakah''' this side of Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann. Ya know what? Let's just call it a Crowning ''' ''CHAPTER'' ''' Of Awesome.
* Chapter 38... Where the hell do we even ''start?!''
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* Chapter 40: Kyoko's [[spoiler: confrontation/''verbal beatdown'' of Unit 02/the canon version of herself after finding out her own and Asuka's canon fates]]. Also a [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments CMOH]].
* Chapter 42: Rei [[spoiler:dragging ADAM into the End of Evangelion setting so that she can administer a proper beatdown that involves the rearranging planetary geology, while also rescuing the Shinji and Asuka of that world. Oh, and the Eiffel Tower gets used like a Javelin.]]
* Chapter 42: Rei [[spoiler:dragging ADAM into the End of Evangelion setting so that she can administer a proper beatdown that involves the rearranging planetary geology, while also rescuing the Shinji and Asuka of that world. Oh, and the Eiffel Tower gets used like a Javelin.]]
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* Chapter 40: Kyoko's [[spoiler: confrontation/''verbal beatdown'' of Unit 02/the canon version of herself after finding out her own and Asuka's canon fates]].fates. Also a [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments CMOH]].
* Chapter 42: Rei[[spoiler:dragging dragging ADAM into the End of Evangelion setting so that she can administer a proper beatdown that involves the rearranging planetary geology, while also rescuing the Shinji and Asuka of that world. Oh, and the Eiffel Tower gets used like a Javelin.]]
* Chapter 42: Rei
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo, the {{Manipulative Bastard}} we all know and love gets one when he confronts [[spoiler: Canon!Yui]] leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
* Pieter Sohryu [[spoiler:taking out a mini-Angel with a V-22's cargo bay door.]]
* Pieter Sohryu [[spoiler:taking out a mini-Angel with a V-22's cargo bay door.]]
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo, the {{Manipulative Bastard}} we all know and love gets one when he confronts [[spoiler: Canon!Yui]] Canon!Yui leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
* Pieter Sohryu[[spoiler:taking taking out a mini-Angel with a V-22's cargo bay door.]]
* Pieter Sohryu
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* Chapter 52: [[BadassNormal Misato Katsuragi]] fights [[spoiler:[[Franchise/MassEffect Jane Shepard]]]] to a ''standstill''!
* Chapter 53: [[spoiler:[[MamaBear Kyoko Sohryu]] sets [[JerkAss Claire Makinami's]] hair on fire after she insults Asuka.]]
** Also from 53: [[spoiler:'''Wuffletron 9000 online.''']]
* Chapter 54: [[spoiler:Disaster after disaster? All ExactlyAsPlanned for one M. Katsuragi. Definitely cement's Misato's position as a GuileHero too.]]
* Chapter 53: [[spoiler:[[MamaBear Kyoko Sohryu]] sets [[JerkAss Claire Makinami's]] hair on fire after she insults Asuka.]]
** Also from 53: [[spoiler:'''Wuffletron 9000 online.''']]
* Chapter 54: [[spoiler:Disaster after disaster? All ExactlyAsPlanned for one M. Katsuragi. Definitely cement's Misato's position as a GuileHero too.]]
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* Chapter 52: [[BadassNormal Misato Katsuragi]] fights [[spoiler:[[Franchise/MassEffect [[Franchise/MassEffect Jane Shepard]]]] Shepard]] to a ''standstill''!
* Chapter 53:[[spoiler:[[MamaBear [[MamaBear Kyoko Sohryu]] sets [[JerkAss Claire Makinami's]] hair on fire after she insults Asuka.]]
Asuka.
** Also from 53:[[spoiler:'''Wuffletron '''Wuffletron 9000 online.''']]
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* Chapter 54:[[spoiler:Disaster Disaster after disaster? All ExactlyAsPlanned for one M. Katsuragi. Definitely cement's Misato's position as a GuileHero too.]]
* Chapter 53:
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* Kaworu [[spoiler:CallingTheOldManOut]] in Chapter 65. Possibly counts as [[spoiler:his HeelFaceTurn]] as well.
* After chapters upon chapters of waiting and biding his time, [[spoiler: Zeruel has, at long last, had his patience tried for the final time, and after venomously slamming Kaworu for his failures in his eyes, he finally decides that enough is enough, and descends to Earth. And it is glorious. The [[OhCrap expected reactions]] from the cast will likely be the same.]]
** For his first trick, [[spoiler:Zeruel curb-stomps three Cherubim]].
** But not before [[spoiler: cleaving Mt. Everest in half.]]
* Combined seamlessly with SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}}, Gendo's epic fistfight with US President [[spoiler:Stephen Colbert]], followed by his convincing an immeasurably pissed off Yui that he'd planned the whole thing, and getting her into the sack.
* After chapters upon chapters of waiting and biding his time, [[spoiler: Zeruel has, at long last, had his patience tried for the final time, and after venomously slamming Kaworu for his failures in his eyes, he finally decides that enough is enough, and descends to Earth. And it is glorious. The [[OhCrap expected reactions]] from the cast will likely be the same.]]
** For his first trick, [[spoiler:Zeruel curb-stomps three Cherubim]].
** But not before [[spoiler: cleaving Mt. Everest in half.]]
* Combined seamlessly with SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}}, Gendo's epic fistfight with US President [[spoiler:Stephen Colbert]], followed by his convincing an immeasurably pissed off Yui that he'd planned the whole thing, and getting her into the sack.
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* Kaworu [[spoiler:CallingTheOldManOut]] CallingTheOldManOut in Chapter 65. Possibly counts as [[spoiler:his HeelFaceTurn]] his HeelFaceTurn as well.
* After chapters upon chapters of waiting and biding his time,[[spoiler: Zeruel has, at long last, had his patience tried for the final time, and after venomously slamming Kaworu for his failures in his eyes, he finally decides that enough is enough, and descends to Earth. And it is glorious. The [[OhCrap expected reactions]] from the cast will likely be the same.]]
same.
** For his first trick,[[spoiler:Zeruel Zeruel curb-stomps three Cherubim]].
Cherubim.
** But not before[[spoiler: cleaving Mt. Everest in half.]]
half.
* Combined seamlessly with SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}}, Gendo's epic fistfight with US President[[spoiler:Stephen Colbert]], Stephen Colbert, followed by his convincing an immeasurably pissed off Yui that he'd planned the whole thing, and getting her into the sack.
* After chapters upon chapters of waiting and biding his time,
** For his first trick,
** But not before
* Combined seamlessly with SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}}, Gendo's epic fistfight with US President
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* Pieter's {{What The Hell Hero}} to Yui when she disapproves of [[spoiler:Shinji and Asuka having sex]], pointing out there were all kinds of ways she could have stopped it, all while spilling his guts about what a lousy father he's been and contributed to Asuka's crappy life that led to this moment.
* Misato [[spoiler:becoming Go-Kun's pilot to take down Raziel, with assistance from Asuka.]]
* Go-kun [[spoiler:self-activating in ch. 68, [[YouShallNotPass challenging Zeruel to combat,]] delivering an awesome BadassBoast, and then ''almost'' striking Zeruel's core with his opening attack (which is the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam Burning God Finger]] no less)]].
* Greg Landsman has his own with Chapter 66. [[spoiler:After the last chapter ended with some unspecified problem with Shinji that left both his parents horrified, we spend this chapter watching him stuck in Unit 01's core, and things carry on perfectly normally from there with the reader fully able to buy this is what they were talking about...until a {{Rocks Fall Everyone Dies}} ending, after which we learn it was {{All Just A Dream}}. And the truth about what happened to Shinji is ''even worse''.]] A real storytelling tour de force, with the JustForFun/HolyShitQuotient off the scale.
* Two big ones in Chapter 69: [[spoiler:Uriel getting Zwei to accept him as a pilot, enabling him to fight Zeruel including scraping his face against the wall for the entire ride up a launching tube, and the {{Hes Back}} moment for Unit 00, powered by Mari.]]
* Misato [[spoiler:becoming Go-Kun's pilot to take down Raziel, with assistance from Asuka.]]
* Go-kun [[spoiler:self-activating in ch. 68, [[YouShallNotPass challenging Zeruel to combat,]] delivering an awesome BadassBoast, and then ''almost'' striking Zeruel's core with his opening attack (which is the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam Burning God Finger]] no less)]].
* Greg Landsman has his own with Chapter 66. [[spoiler:After the last chapter ended with some unspecified problem with Shinji that left both his parents horrified, we spend this chapter watching him stuck in Unit 01's core, and things carry on perfectly normally from there with the reader fully able to buy this is what they were talking about...until a {{Rocks Fall Everyone Dies}} ending, after which we learn it was {{All Just A Dream}}. And the truth about what happened to Shinji is ''even worse''.]] A real storytelling tour de force, with the JustForFun/HolyShitQuotient off the scale.
* Two big ones in Chapter 69: [[spoiler:Uriel getting Zwei to accept him as a pilot, enabling him to fight Zeruel including scraping his face against the wall for the entire ride up a launching tube, and the {{Hes Back}} moment for Unit 00, powered by Mari.]]
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* Pieter's {{What The Hell Hero}} to Yui when she disapproves of [[spoiler:Shinji Shinji and Asuka having sex]], sex, pointing out there were all kinds of ways she could have stopped it, all while spilling his guts about what a lousy father he's been and contributed to Asuka's crappy life that led to this moment.
* Misato[[spoiler:becoming becoming Go-Kun's pilot to take down Raziel, with assistance from Asuka.]]
Asuka.
* Go-kun[[spoiler:self-activating self-activating in ch. 68, [[YouShallNotPass challenging Zeruel to combat,]] delivering an awesome BadassBoast, and then ''almost'' striking Zeruel's core with his opening attack (which is the [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam Burning God Finger]] no less)]].
less).
* Greg Landsman has his own with Chapter 66.[[spoiler:After After the last chapter ended with some unspecified problem with Shinji that left both his parents horrified, we spend this chapter watching him stuck in Unit 01's core, and things carry on perfectly normally from there with the reader fully able to buy this is what they were talking about...until a {{Rocks Fall Everyone Dies}} RocksFallEveryoneDies ending, after which we learn it was {{All Just A Dream}}.AllJustADream. And the truth about what happened to Shinji is ''even worse''.]] A real storytelling tour de force, with the JustForFun/HolyShitQuotient off the scale.
* Two big ones in Chapter 69:[[spoiler:Uriel Uriel getting Zwei to accept him as a pilot, enabling him to fight Zeruel including scraping his face against the wall for the entire ride up a launching tube, and the {{Hes Back}} HesBack moment for Unit 00, powered by Mari.]]
* Misato
* Go-kun
* Greg Landsman has his own with Chapter 66.
* Two big ones in Chapter 69:
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** Kyoko scolding Ichi out of her {{Heroic BSOD}} and getting her to open up so they can save Zyuu.
** Shinji [[spoiler:fully tapping into his Nephilim powers and making physics his bitch while fighting three Zerulim.]]
** Adam Mondschein's {{Dynamic Entry}} in Misato's car.
** Mana [[spoiler:activating the Reetron (ie, [[{{Transformers}} Devastator]]) with Asuka's help.]]
** Kei's [[spoiler:{{Heroic Sacrifice}}. Which she survives.]]
** Asuka [[spoiler:killing two Zerulim, revealing the firepower she's built into her plugsuit.]]
* Chapter 18. [[spoiler:Shinji, through sheer force of will and determination, fights back the stamina-draining effects of the Dirac Sea, literally ''crawls his way'' to Unit 01 so he can escape. And what's his response when an enraged ADAM grabs his leg in an attempt to stop him? ''Kicking him repeatedly in the face to shake him off.'']]
** Shinji [[spoiler:fully tapping into his Nephilim powers and making physics his bitch while fighting three Zerulim.]]
** Adam Mondschein's {{Dynamic Entry}} in Misato's car.
** Mana [[spoiler:activating the Reetron (ie, [[{{Transformers}} Devastator]]) with Asuka's help.]]
** Kei's [[spoiler:{{Heroic Sacrifice}}. Which she survives.]]
** Asuka [[spoiler:killing two Zerulim, revealing the firepower she's built into her plugsuit.]]
* Chapter 18. [[spoiler:Shinji, through sheer force of will and determination, fights back the stamina-draining effects of the Dirac Sea, literally ''crawls his way'' to Unit 01 so he can escape. And what's his response when an enraged ADAM grabs his leg in an attempt to stop him? ''Kicking him repeatedly in the face to shake him off.'']]
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** Kyoko scolding Ichi out of her {{Heroic BSOD}} HeroicBSOD and getting her to open up so they can save Zyuu.
** Shinji[[spoiler:fully fully tapping into his Nephilim powers and making physics his bitch while fighting three Zerulim.]]
Zerulim.
** Adam Mondschein's{{Dynamic Entry}} DynamicEntry in Misato's car.
** Mana[[spoiler:activating activating the Reetron (ie, [[{{Transformers}} Devastator]]) with Asuka's help.]]
help.
** Kei's[[spoiler:{{Heroic Sacrifice}}. HeroicSacrifice. Which she survives.]]
survives.
** Asuka[[spoiler:killing killing two Zerulim, revealing the firepower she's built into her plugsuit.]]
plugsuit.
* Chapter 18.[[spoiler:Shinji, Shinji, through sheer force of will and determination, fights back the stamina-draining effects of the Dirac Sea, literally ''crawls his way'' to Unit 01 so he can escape. And what's his response when an enraged ADAM grabs his leg in an attempt to stop him? ''Kicking him repeatedly in the face to shake him off.'']]''
** Shinji
** Adam Mondschein's
** Mana
** Kei's
** Asuka
* Chapter 18.
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* Chapter 72: The Ree [[spoiler: and Gendo]] have organized the whole event by trapping her in the school and having Asuka defeat [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim seven evil bosses,]] as well as her dark self [[spoiler: [[CurbStompBattle Which didn't last long.]]]]
* Zyuu's {{Big Damn Heroes}} on an Austrailian Powerful Owl.
* Chapter 74: Kei [[spoiler:smothering Kihl after sweet talking him for a bit, just to make his death as hard as possible.]]
** Fuyutsuki [[spoiler:killing Spencer, earning a spot on the council in the process.]]
* Chapter 75: [[spoiler:Asuka stopping Instrumentality through the {{Power Of Friendship}} and Kyoko stopping Lilith's advance by holding a lifelike gun to Shinji's head, ''to which he doesn't even flinch.'']]
** Plus [[spoiler: [[HesBack Ichi's return. "STAY AWAY FROM MY MOMMY!"]]]]
* Chapter 78: [[spoiler:Peiter, Junior and Lily working together to take down Emil Hadron, the man responsible for the destruction of NERV Alaska.]]
* Lorenz Kihl's {{Thanatos Gambit}} will, perfectly taking into account where everyone will be standing for a boot to the head and the occasional something extra.
* Chapter 82:[[spoiler: Shinji vs. Uri. Full stop.]]
* JA-Tan's {{Gosh Dang It To Heck}} laden beatdown of Mana ''and'' Go-Kun.
* Chapter 86: [[spoiler:Ichi fully snaps out of her {{Heroic BSOD}} and evolves into an adolescent personality, also gaining the ability to teleport, which she uses to completely Curb Stomp Tamiel. And when The Beast causes her to shut down, Shinji is right there prepared to fight it off.]]
* Rei, but only after a bit of a fridge moment. Consider this: Rei, from this universe, is known as Terrifying!Rei. Okay, keep that in mind for a moment. Now, at one point, she visits the world of [[AeonNatumEngel Aeon Natum Engel,]] where she meets her counterpart there. This is known, to fandom, as Creepy!Rei. Think on this for a moment. ANE Rei is a precognitive {{EldritchAbomination}} who lives in a world where the local NERV-equivalent fights Eldritch Horrors rather than Angels, and this includes [[CthuluMythos CTHULU.]] And yet, ND Rei is known as Terrifying. That's right, the Rei from the world where the Necronomicon is coming to life and is used as science is ''less terrifying'' than the Rei from the ND universe.
* Chapter 87: [[spoiler:Both of Ichi's personalities put their heads together to come up with a plan to stop the end of the world: siphon the excess energy from the Lilith/Ramiel combination across all the Evas, giving them all new abilities which they quickly use to Curb Stomp Tamiel.]]
* Zyuu's {{Big Damn Heroes}} on an Austrailian Powerful Owl.
* Chapter 74: Kei [[spoiler:smothering Kihl after sweet talking him for a bit, just to make his death as hard as possible.]]
** Fuyutsuki [[spoiler:killing Spencer, earning a spot on the council in the process.]]
* Chapter 75: [[spoiler:Asuka stopping Instrumentality through the {{Power Of Friendship}} and Kyoko stopping Lilith's advance by holding a lifelike gun to Shinji's head, ''to which he doesn't even flinch.'']]
** Plus [[spoiler: [[HesBack Ichi's return. "STAY AWAY FROM MY MOMMY!"]]]]
* Chapter 78: [[spoiler:Peiter, Junior and Lily working together to take down Emil Hadron, the man responsible for the destruction of NERV Alaska.]]
* Lorenz Kihl's {{Thanatos Gambit}} will, perfectly taking into account where everyone will be standing for a boot to the head and the occasional something extra.
* Chapter 82:[[spoiler: Shinji vs. Uri. Full stop.]]
* JA-Tan's {{Gosh Dang It To Heck}} laden beatdown of Mana ''and'' Go-Kun.
* Chapter 86: [[spoiler:Ichi fully snaps out of her {{Heroic BSOD}} and evolves into an adolescent personality, also gaining the ability to teleport, which she uses to completely Curb Stomp Tamiel. And when The Beast causes her to shut down, Shinji is right there prepared to fight it off.]]
* Rei, but only after a bit of a fridge moment. Consider this: Rei, from this universe, is known as Terrifying!Rei. Okay, keep that in mind for a moment. Now, at one point, she visits the world of [[AeonNatumEngel Aeon Natum Engel,]] where she meets her counterpart there. This is known, to fandom, as Creepy!Rei. Think on this for a moment. ANE Rei is a precognitive {{EldritchAbomination}} who lives in a world where the local NERV-equivalent fights Eldritch Horrors rather than Angels, and this includes [[CthuluMythos CTHULU.]] And yet, ND Rei is known as Terrifying. That's right, the Rei from the world where the Necronomicon is coming to life and is used as science is ''less terrifying'' than the Rei from the ND universe.
* Chapter 87: [[spoiler:Both of Ichi's personalities put their heads together to come up with a plan to stop the end of the world: siphon the excess energy from the Lilith/Ramiel combination across all the Evas, giving them all new abilities which they quickly use to Curb Stomp Tamiel.]]
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* Chapter 72: The Ree [[spoiler: and Gendo]] Gendo have organized the whole event by trapping her in the school and having Asuka defeat [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim seven evil bosses,]] as well as her dark self [[spoiler: [[CurbStompBattle Which didn't last long.]]]]
* Zyuu's {{Big Damn Heroes}} on an Austrailian Powerful Owl.
* Chapter 74: Kei [[spoiler:smothering Kihl after sweet talking him for a bit, just to make his death as hard as possible.]]
* Zyuu's BigDamnHeroes on an Austrailian Powerful Owl.
* Chapter 74: Kei smothering Kihl after sweet talking him for a bit, just to make his death as hard as possible.
** Fuyutsuki[[spoiler:killing killing Spencer, earning a spot on the council in the process.]]
process.
* Chapter 75:[[spoiler:Asuka Asuka stopping Instrumentality through the {{Power Of Friendship}} PowerOfFriendship and Kyoko stopping Lilith's advance by holding a lifelike gun to Shinji's head, ''to which he doesn't even flinch.'']]
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** Plus[[spoiler: [[HesBack Ichi's return. "STAY AWAY FROM MY MOMMY!"]]]]
MOMMY!"]]
* Chapter78: [[spoiler:Peiter, 78:Peiter, Junior and Lily working together to take down Emil Hadron, the man responsible for the destruction of NERV Alaska.]]
Alaska.
* Lorenz Kihl's{{Thanatos Gambit}} ThanatosGambit will, perfectly taking into account where everyone will be standing for a boot to the head and the occasional something extra.
* Chapter82:[[spoiler: 82: Shinji vs. Uri. Full stop.]]
stop.
* JA-Tan's{{Gosh Dang It To Heck}} GoshDangItToHeck laden beatdown of Mana ''and'' Go-Kun.
* Chapter 86:[[spoiler:Ichi Ichi fully snaps out of her {{Heroic BSOD}} HeroicBSOD and evolves into an adolescent personality, also gaining the ability to teleport, which she uses to completely Curb Stomp Tamiel. And when The Beast causes her to shut down, Shinji is right there prepared to fight it off.]]
off.
* Rei, but only after a bit of a fridge moment. Consider this: Rei, from this universe, is known as Terrifying!Rei. Okay, keep that in mind for a moment. Now, at one point, she visits the world of [[AeonNatumEngel Aeon Natum Engel,]] where she meets her counterpart there. This is known, to fandom, as Creepy!Rei. Think on this for a moment. ANE Rei is a precognitive{{EldritchAbomination}} EldritchAbomination who lives in a world where the local NERV-equivalent fights Eldritch Horrors rather than Angels, and this includes [[CthuluMythos CTHULU.]] And yet, ND Rei is known as Terrifying. That's right, the Rei from the world where the Necronomicon is coming to life and is used as science is ''less terrifying'' than the Rei from the ND universe.
* Chapter 87:[[spoiler:Both Both of Ichi's personalities put their heads together to come up with a plan to stop the end of the world: siphon the excess energy from the Lilith/Ramiel combination across all the Evas, giving them all new abilities which they quickly use to Curb Stomp Tamiel.]]
* Zyuu's {{Big Damn Heroes}} on an Austrailian Powerful Owl.
* Chapter 74: Kei [[spoiler:smothering Kihl after sweet talking him for a bit, just to make his death as hard as possible.
* Zyuu's BigDamnHeroes on an Austrailian Powerful Owl.
* Chapter 74: Kei smothering Kihl after sweet talking him for a bit, just to make his death as hard as possible.
** Fuyutsuki
* Chapter 75:
** Plus
* Chapter
* Lorenz Kihl's
* Chapter
* JA-Tan's
* Chapter 86:
* Rei, but only after a bit of a fridge moment. Consider this: Rei, from this universe, is known as Terrifying!Rei. Okay, keep that in mind for a moment. Now, at one point, she visits the world of [[AeonNatumEngel Aeon Natum Engel,]] where she meets her counterpart there. This is known, to fandom, as Creepy!Rei. Think on this for a moment. ANE Rei is a precognitive
* Chapter 87:
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo, the {{Crazy Awesome}} {{Manipulative Bastard}} we all know and love gets one when he confronts [[spoiler: Canon!Yui]] leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo, the {{Crazy Awesome}} {{Manipulative Bastard}} we all know and love gets one when he confronts [[spoiler: Canon!Yui]] leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
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* Greg Landsman has his own with Chapter 66. [[spoiler:After the last chapter ended with some unspecified problem with Shinji that left both his parents horrified, we spend this chapter watching him stuck in Unit 01's core, and things carry on perfectly normally from there with the reader fully able to buy this is what they were talking about...until a {{Rocks Fall Everyone Dies}} ending, after which we learn it was {{All Just A Dream}}. And the truth about what happened to Shinji is ''even worse''.]] A real storytelling tour de force, with the {{HSQ}} off the scale.
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* Greg Landsman has his own with Chapter 66. [[spoiler:After the last chapter ended with some unspecified problem with Shinji that left both his parents horrified, we spend this chapter watching him stuck in Unit 01's core, and things carry on perfectly normally from there with the reader fully able to buy this is what they were talking about...until a {{Rocks Fall Everyone Dies}} ending, after which we learn it was {{All Just A Dream}}. And the truth about what happened to Shinji is ''even worse''.]] A real storytelling tour de force, with the {{HSQ}} JustForFun/HolyShitQuotient off the scale.
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* Chapter 40: Kyoko's [[spoiler: confrontation/''verbal beatdown'' of Unit 02/the canon version of herself after finding out her own and Asuka's canon fates]]. Also a [[CrowningMomentofHeartwarming CMOH]].
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* Chapter 40: Kyoko's [[spoiler: confrontation/''verbal beatdown'' of Unit 02/the canon version of herself after finding out her own and Asuka's canon fates]]. Also a [[CrowningMomentofHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments CMOH]].
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* [[DateRapeAverted Gendo saving Asuka after her date slips her a roofie, revealing that all the other customers in the restaurant are NERV security agents.]] And he pushes it to {{Crowning Moment Of Funny}} when he takes the time to sing "99 Luftballoons" and "Play That Funky Music, White Boy." And then the date is left to Rei's tender mercies...
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* [[DateRapeAverted Gendo saving Asuka after her date slips her a roofie, revealing that all the other customers in the restaurant are NERV security agents.]] And he pushes it to {{Crowning Moment Of Funny}} SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}} when he takes the time to sing "99 Luftballoons" and "Play That Funky Music, White Boy." And then the date is left to Rei's tender mercies...
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* Combined seamlessly with {{Crowning Moment Of Funny}}, Gendo's epic fistfight with US President [[spoiler:Stephen Colbert]], followed by his convincing an immeasurably pissed off Yui that he'd planned the whole thing, and getting her into the sack.
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* Combined seamlessly with {{Crowning Moment Of Funny}}, SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}}, Gendo's epic fistfight with US President [[spoiler:Stephen Colbert]], followed by his convincing an immeasurably pissed off Yui that he'd planned the whole thing, and getting her into the sack.
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* Chapter 71: Asuka [[BadDudes is a bad enough girl to rescue her boyfriend.]]
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* Chapter 71: Asuka [[BadDudes [[VideoGame/BadDudes is a bad enough girl to rescue her boyfriend.]]
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* Chapter 38... Where the hell do we even ''start?!'' [[spoiler:Iruel]] shows up and [[spoiler:merges with the Cherubim]], Asuka's [[spoiler:[[SplitPersonality split personalities]] kick butt and take names]], Gendo snipes a TRIDENT to death, Jet Alone Prime [[spoiler:gets a "soul" and becomes basically a mechanical Evangelion]], topping it all off with Go-Kun and Rei dishing out the most epic '''Giga Drill Breakah''' this side of GurrenLagann. Ya know what? Let's just call it a Crowning ''' ''CHAPTER'' ''' Of Awesome.
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* Chapter 38... Where the hell do we even ''start?!'' [[spoiler:Iruel]] shows up and [[spoiler:merges with the Cherubim]], Asuka's [[spoiler:[[SplitPersonality split personalities]] kick butt and take names]], Gendo snipes a TRIDENT to death, Jet Alone Prime [[spoiler:gets a "soul" and becomes basically a mechanical Evangelion]], topping it all off with Go-Kun and Rei dishing out the most epic '''Giga Drill Breakah''' this side of GurrenLagann.Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann. Ya know what? Let's just call it a Crowning ''' ''CHAPTER'' ''' Of Awesome.
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* Chapter 72: The Ree [[spoiler: and Gendo]] have organized the whole event by trapping her in the school and having Asuka defeat [[ScottPilgrim seven evil bosses,]] as well as her dark self [[spoiler: [[CurbStompBattle Which didn't last long.]]]]
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* Chapter 72: The Ree [[spoiler: and Gendo]] have organized the whole event by trapping her in the school and having Asuka defeat [[ScottPilgrim [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim seven evil bosses,]] as well as her dark self [[spoiler: [[CurbStompBattle Which didn't last long.]]]]
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FanFic/NobodyDies. A practical cauldron of awesome.
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* Lots of bee-like cherubim infiltrate NERV, seemingly unstoppable in their converting it to a hive...and then they meet Na00ko.
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* Go-kun [[spoiler:self-activating in ch. 68, [[YouShallNotPass challenging Zeruel to combat,]] delivering an awesome BadassBoast, and then ''almost'' striking Zeruel's core with his opening attack (which is the [[GGundam Burning God Finger]] no less)]].
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* Go-kun [[spoiler:self-activating in ch. 68, [[YouShallNotPass challenging Zeruel to combat,]] delivering an awesome BadassBoast, and then ''almost'' striking Zeruel's core with his opening attack (which is the [[GGundam [[Anime/MobileFighterGGundam Burning God Finger]] no less)]].
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* [[spoiler:Asuka]] gets the second half of chapter 24 and all of chapter 25 as a protracted CMOA. Having been thoroughly [[BreakTheCutie broken]] by parental neglect and emotional/mental abuse before the fic began, and spending much of the fic itself as a [[ShrinkingViolet stammering, timid]] [[TheWoobie wreck]] - {{It Makes Sense In Context}} - her rampage of awesome begins in a deliciously just fashion when she '''''chairshots''''' [[spoiler:Kyoko]], the parent in question. And then she ''really'' gets started....
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* [[spoiler:Asuka]] gets the second half of chapter 24 and all of chapter 25 as a protracted CMOA. Having been thoroughly [[BreakTheCutie broken]] by parental neglect and emotional/mental abuse before the fic began, and spending much of the fic itself as a [[ShrinkingViolet stammering, timid]] [[TheWoobie wreck]] - {{It Makes Sense In Context}} - her rampage of awesome begins in a deliciously just fashion when she '''''chairshots''''' [[spoiler:Kyoko]], the parent in question. And then she ''really'' gets started....started...
-->[[LetsGetDangerous I can do this.]]
-->[[LetsGetDangerous I can do this.]]
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** And to top it all off? At the end of the chapter, Yui explains the aforementioned rampage to Kyoko, and does what she said she was going to do from the very beginning: blatantly steamrolls all over Kyoko's authority [[spoiler: and has Asuka classified as the Second Child without her consent.]] [[VillainousBreakdown Kyoko does not take it well.]]
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* Chapter 52: [[BadassNormal Misato Katsuragi]] fights [[spoiler:[[Franchise/MassEffect Jane Shepard]] to a ''standstill''!
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* Chapter 52: [[BadassNormal Misato Katsuragi]] fights [[spoiler:[[Franchise/MassEffect Jane Shepard]] Shepard]]]] to a ''standstill''!
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* Chapter 52: [[BadassNormal Misato Katsuragi]] fights [[spoiler:[[MassEffect Jane]] [[BadassAbnormal Shepard]]]] [[spoiler:[[Franchise/MassEffect Jane Shepard]] to a ''standstill''!
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* Chapter 38... Where the **** do we even ''start?!'' [[spoiler:Iruel]] shows up and [[spoiler:merges with the Cherubim]], Asuka's [[spoiler:[[SplitPersonality split personalities]] kick butt and take names]], Gendo snipes a TRIDENT to death, Jet Alone Prime [[spoiler:gets a "soul" and becomes basically a mechanical Evangelion]], topping it all off with Go-Kun and Rei dishing out the most epic '''Giga Drill Breakah''' this side of GurrenLagann. Ya know what? Let's just call it a Crowning ''' ''CHAPTER'' ''' Of Awesome.
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* Chapter 38... Where the **** hell do we even ''start?!'' [[spoiler:Iruel]] shows up and [[spoiler:merges with the Cherubim]], Asuka's [[spoiler:[[SplitPersonality split personalities]] kick butt and take names]], Gendo snipes a TRIDENT to death, Jet Alone Prime [[spoiler:gets a "soul" and becomes basically a mechanical Evangelion]], topping it all off with Go-Kun and Rei dishing out the most epic '''Giga Drill Breakah''' this side of GurrenLagann. Ya know what? Let's just call it a Crowning ''' ''CHAPTER'' ''' Of Awesome.
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* Rei chapter 45: Getting ADAM and Cthulu to fight each other.
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* Rei chapter 45: Getting ADAM and Cthulu Cthulhu to fight each other.
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* Chapter 40: Kyoko's [[spoiler: confrontation/''verbal beatdown'' of Unit 02/[[spoiler:the canon version of herself]] after finding out her own and Asuka's canon fates]]. Also a [[CrowningMomentofHeartwarming CMOH]].
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* Chapter 40: Kyoko's [[spoiler: confrontation/''verbal beatdown'' of Unit 02/[[spoiler:the 02/the canon version of herself]] herself after finding out her own and Asuka's canon fates]]. Also a [[CrowningMomentofHeartwarming CMOH]].
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* Two right off bat in chapter one before even the title, both for Yui Ikari: The first because it makes the entire fic possible, Yui Ikari aborting the contact experiment with unit 01. with one small act a brand new world of Evangelion was born. The second is this an example of how whipped Yui had Gendo:
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* Two right off bat in chapter one before even the title, both for Yui Ikari: The first because it makes the entire fic possible, Yui Ikari aborting the contact experiment with unit 01. with With one small act a brand new world of Evangelion was born. The second is this an example of how whipped Yui had Gendo:
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->"Kozou and Gendo both nod, both sighing. The technicians hide their snickers. There is little illusion of who wears the pants in the Ikari household, and it is mainly because it is easy to stay on Doctor Yui Ikari's good side that harmony rules GEHRIN with an iron fist."
* Shinji meets Rei as she hits Sachiel in the Core with a rocket launcher. and the ensuing chase across the city.
* Rei killing a leftover part of Sachiel with her bare hands,and leaving completely covered in Angel Blood
* Shinji meets Rei as she hits Sachiel in the Core with a rocket launcher. and the ensuing chase across the city.
* Rei killing a leftover part of Sachiel with her bare hands,and leaving completely covered in Angel Blood
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* Chapter 42: Rei [[spoiler:dragging ADAM into the End of Evangelion setting so that she can administer a proper beatdown that involves the rearranging planetary geology, while also rescuing the Shinji and Asuka of that world. Oh, and Eiffel Tower gets used like a Javelin.]]
* Chapter 42: Rei [[spoiler:dragging ADAM into the End of Evangelion setting so that she can administer a proper beatdown that involves the rearranging planetary geology, while also rescuing the Shinji and Asuka of that world. Oh, and Eiffel Tower gets used like a Javelin.]]
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* Chapter 40: Kyoko's [[spoiler: confrontation/''verbal beatdown'' of Unit 02/[[supersecretspoiler:the 02/[[spoiler:the canon version of herself]] after finding out her own and Asuka's canon fates]]. Also a [[CrowningMomentofHeartwarming CMOH]]
CMOH]].
* Chapter 42: Rei [[spoiler:dragging ADAM into the End of Evangelion setting so that she can administer a proper beatdown that involves the rearranging planetary geology, while also rescuing the Shinji and Asuka of that world. Oh, and the Eiffel Tower gets used like a Javelin.]]
* Chapter 42: Rei [[spoiler:dragging ADAM into the End of Evangelion setting so that she can administer a proper beatdown that involves the rearranging planetary geology, while also rescuing the Shinji and Asuka of that world. Oh, and the Eiffel Tower gets used like a Javelin.]]
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo; the {{Crazy Awesome}} {{Manipulative Bastard}} we all know and love gets one when he confronts [[spoiler: Canon!Yui]] leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
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** Also in Chapter 42, taking the focus of Rei for a moment. Gendo; Gendo, the {{Crazy Awesome}} {{Manipulative Bastard}} we all know and love gets one when he confronts [[spoiler: Canon!Yui]] leading to the conversation ending with... well, for those who want to see, it's on the [[Quotes/NobodyDies Quotes]] page
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* Kyoko piloting Unit-07.
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** She easily trumps it by taking out a Cherubium. In her avatar body. While on ''[[IncendiaryExponent fire]]''.
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** She easily trumps it by taking out a Cherubium. In her avatar body. While on ''[[IncendiaryExponent fire]]''.fire]]''.
* Kyoko piloting Unit-07.
* Kyoko piloting Unit-07.
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* Ichi's first day of school, kicking Israfim ass with her backpack.
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** She easily trumps it by taking out a Cherubium. In her avatar body. While on ''[[IncendiaryExponent fire]]''.
