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* Pretty much every time [[CompleteMonster Joshua Alamacy]] shows up, he's out to do something horrible. Unfortunately (for him), it tends to end with him getting beat down in a very satisfying manner. Usually courtesy of Ash.
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* Pretty much every Every time [[CompleteMonster Joshua Alamacy]] Alamacy shows up, he's out to do something horrible. Unfortunately (for him), it tends to end with him getting beat down in a very satisfying manner. Usually courtesy of Ash.
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* Ash saves Jenny from another pair of models attacking Jenny in a bathroom at the party,
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* Ash saves Jenny from another a pair of models, twice, after the other models attacking hear Jenny might be a lesbian. Once was in the bathroom of Marco's right after Ash beat Joshua and took his car, and the second time in a bathroom at the party,office during the party.
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* Jenny Jr. unfortunately has a nasty tendency to run into her [[AlphaBitch former "friends"]] in bathrooms or stores. Fortunately, like the above, Ash and Emily also have a tendency to come to her rescue.
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* Ash saves Jenny Jr. unfortunately has a nasty tendency to run into her [[AlphaBitch former "friends"]] from another pair of models attacking Jenny in bathrooms or stores. Fortunately, like a bathroom at the above, Ash and Emily also have a tendency to come to her rescue.party,
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[[AC: ''Chapter 4 Concrete Dreamscape'']
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[[AC: ''Chapter 4 Concrete Dreamscape'']Dreamscape'']]
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[[AC: ''Chapter 1 Rumisiel's Lament'']
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* In Concrete Dreamscape, Jenny brags about how fast her boyfriend's car is. In the resulting race, Ash let's Joshua think he's going to win, before showing him that a good top speed isn't nearly enough.
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* In [[AC: ''Chapter 1 Rumisiel's Lament'']
* Even though it's AllJustADream and they barely show up afterward, Rumisiel and Vashiel get one. How? By storming the Celestial Depository in hopes of repairing the horrendous damage done by fixing the Misfile, during which Vashiel faces down ''Gabriel himself!''
[[AC: ''Chapter 4 ConcreteDreamscape, Dreamscape'']
* Jenny brags about how fast her boyfriend's car is. In the resulting race, Ash let's Joshua think he's going to win, before showing him that a good top speed isn't nearly enough.
* Even though it's AllJustADream and they barely show up afterward, Rumisiel and Vashiel get one. How? By storming the Celestial Depository in hopes of repairing the horrendous damage done by fixing the Misfile, during which Vashiel faces down ''Gabriel himself!''
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* Jenny brags about how fast her boyfriend's car is. In the resulting race, Ash let's Joshua think he's going to win, before showing him that a good top speed isn't nearly enough.
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* Even though it's AllJustADream and they barely show up afterward, Rumisiel and Vashiel get one in Rumisiel's Lament. How? By storming the Celestial Depository in hopes of repairing the horrendous damage done by fixing the Misfile, during which Vashiel faces down ''Gabriel himself!''
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* Jenny Jr. unfortunately has a nasty tendency to run into her [[TheLibby former "friends" ]]in bathrooms or stores. Fortunately, like the above, Ash and Emily also have a tendency to come to her rescue.
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* Jenny Jr. unfortunately has a nasty tendency to run into her [[TheLibby [[AlphaBitch former "friends" ]]in "friends"]] in bathrooms or stores. Fortunately, like the above, Ash and Emily also have a tendency to come to her rescue.
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* Even though it's AllADream and they barely show up afterward, Rumisiel and Vashiel get one in Rumisiel's Lament. How? By storming the Celestial Depository in hopes of repairing the horrendous damage done by fixing the Misfile, during which Vashiel faces down ''Gabriel himself!''
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* Even though it's AllADream AllJustADream and they barely show up afterward, Rumisiel and Vashiel get one in Rumisiel's Lament. How? By storming the Celestial Depository in hopes of repairing the horrendous damage done by fixing the Misfile, during which Vashiel faces down ''Gabriel himself!''
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-->Even Emily grinned. "If we're going to be bitches, let's be the best bitches we can. ''Bury'' this loser!"
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-->Even Emily grinned. "If we're going to be bitches, let's be the best bitches we can. ''Bury'' this loser!"loser!"
* Even though it's AllADream and they barely show up afterward, Rumisiel and Vashiel get one in Rumisiel's Lament. How? By storming the Celestial Depository in hopes of repairing the horrendous damage done by fixing the Misfile, during which Vashiel faces down ''Gabriel himself!''
*Pretty much every time [[CompleteMonster Joshua Alamacy]] shows up, he's out to do something horrible. Unfortunately (for him), it tends to end with him getting beat down in a very satisfying manner. Usually courtesy of Ash.
* Jenny Jr. unfortunately has a nasty tendency to run into her [[TheLibby former "friends" ]]in bathrooms or stores. Fortunately, like the above, Ash and Emily also have a tendency to come to her rescue.
* Even though it's AllADream and they barely show up afterward, Rumisiel and Vashiel get one in Rumisiel's Lament. How? By storming the Celestial Depository in hopes of repairing the horrendous damage done by fixing the Misfile, during which Vashiel faces down ''Gabriel himself!''
*Pretty much every time [[CompleteMonster Joshua Alamacy]] shows up, he's out to do something horrible. Unfortunately (for him), it tends to end with him getting beat down in a very satisfying manner. Usually courtesy of Ash.
* Jenny Jr. unfortunately has a nasty tendency to run into her [[TheLibby former "friends" ]]in bathrooms or stores. Fortunately, like the above, Ash and Emily also have a tendency to come to her rescue.
