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* Chapter 1: Senshi saves Marcille by making a single cut to the [[BlobMonster slime]] that was suffocating her. Laios is suitably impressed but Senshi just casually says it's easy when you know a slime's anatomy. Slimes are completely opaque, by the way. So he did it without any visual clues.
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* Chapter 1: Senshi saves Marcille by making a single cut to the [[BlobMonster slime]] that was suffocating her. Laios is suitably impressed but Senshi just casually says it's easy when you know a slime's anatomy. Slimes are completely opaque, transparent, by the way. So he did it without any visual clues.
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** Laios is given a brief, but nevertheless awesome [[AwesomeMomentOfCrowning christening as King]], by [[CoolCape donning the pelt of his "perfect monster" as a cape]] and walking through the crowd, who recognize him for his exploits as "[[RedBaron The Demon Eater]]", "[[FluffyTheTerrible The Vegetable Armoured]]", and finally "[[TheMagnificent Devourer of all things Horrible]]"
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** Laios is given a brief, but nevertheless awesome [[AwesomeMomentOfCrowning christening as King]], by [[CoolCape [[BadassCape donning the pelt of his "perfect monster" as a cape]] and walking through the crowd, who recognize him for his exploits as "[[RedBaron The Demon Eater]]", "[[FluffyTheTerrible The Vegetable Armoured]]", and finally "[[TheMagnificent Devourer of all things Horrible]]"
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* Chapter 96: Now taking his new position as king of the Golden Kingdom more seriously, Laios confronts the Elf delegation directly, flat out telling them that he doesn't intend to hand over Marcille to them and will keep her in his court as an advisor on ancient magic. When the Elves protest, Laios mentions he'll be willing to reconsider if the Elves tell him ''everything'' they know about ancient magic, demons, and dungeons, otherwise he can't make an informed decision. This puts the Elves in the [[MortonsFork tough position]] of letting Marcille go or giving away their most coveted secrets that give them leverage over the other races. The Elf Queen then intervenes and allows Marcille to stay, impressed with Laios' guts and guile. Laios basically faced down the most powerful race in the world and the Elves ''blinked first''.
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* Chapter 96: Now taking his new position as king of the Golden Kingdom more seriously, Laios confronts the Elf delegation directly, flat out telling them that he doesn't intend to hand over Marcille to them and will keep her in his court as an advisor on ancient magic. When the Elves protest, Laios mentions he'll be willing to reconsider if the Elves tell him ''everything'' they know about ancient magic, demons, and dungeons, otherwise he can't make an informed decision. This puts the Elves in the [[MortonsFork tough position]] of letting Marcille go or giving away their most coveted secrets that give them leverage over the other races. The Elf Queen then intervenes and allows Marcille to stay, impressed with Laios' guts and guile. Laios basically faced down the most powerful race in the world and the Elves ''blinked first''.first''.
** Laios is given a brief, but nevertheless awesome [[AwesomeMomentOfCrowning christening as King]], by [[CoolCape donning the pelt of his "perfect monster" as a cape]] and walking through the crowd, who recognize him for his exploits as "[[RedBaron The Demon Eater]]", "[[FluffyTheTerrible The Vegetable Armoured]]", and finally "[[TheMagnificent Devourer of all things Horrible]]"
** Laios is given a brief, but nevertheless awesome [[AwesomeMomentOfCrowning christening as King]], by [[CoolCape donning the pelt of his "perfect monster" as a cape]] and walking through the crowd, who recognize him for his exploits as "[[RedBaron The Demon Eater]]", "[[FluffyTheTerrible The Vegetable Armoured]]", and finally "[[TheMagnificent Devourer of all things Horrible]]"
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** Accolades must be given to Izutsumi as well, who managed to kill three of the Dungeon Rabbits with nothing but pure skill, athleticism, and kunai. She only succumbs as a result of a heart attack upon witnessing Marcille's undead army.
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** Accolades must be given to Izutsumi as well, who managed to kill three of the Dungeon Rabbits with nothing but pure skill, athleticism, and kunai. Her bestial instincts take over as she's pushed to the brink by the rabbits and is found with one dead in her mouth. She only succumbs as a result meets her end when she drops out of a heart attack upon witnessing Marcille's undead army.tree into a zombie Laios's arms, the surprise combined with the stress of the situation causes her to finally die of shock.
