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* Eldest Gruff indicating the direction [[spoiler: where Redcap had taken Sarissa with]] a '''movement from one of his ears'''. He is a GOAT.
** There is also him [[spoiler: counselling Titania into abandoning her vengence against Harry and coming close to suceeding]].[
** There is also him [[spoiler: counselling Titania into abandoning her vengence against Harry and coming close to suceeding]].[
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* It should be mentioned that Merlin was TheApprentice of none other than Vadderung [[spoiler:who's really Odin, yes, THAT Odin.]]. When he tells Harry to move out of his way, there's no snarking, no second-guessing. Harry moves.
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* It should be mentioned that Merlin was TheApprentice of none other than Vadderung [[spoiler:who's really Odin, yes, THAT Odin.]]. When he tells Harry to move out of his way, there's no snarking, no second-guessing. Harry moves.moves.
* Harry's friends working out how to help Harry [[spoiler: when Demonreach's protective barrier only lets him and items of the island in. They grab mud from shores and smear it all over themselves, their clothes, [[Squick orifices]] and charge in]]. Being around Harry LoopholeAbuse Dresden means things just rub off.
** Also they once again proved their loyalty to Harry and the right cause by pulling off the move despite the sheer NauseaFuel involved.
* Harry's friends working out how to help Harry [[spoiler: when Demonreach's protective barrier only lets him and items of the island in. They grab mud from shores and smear it all over themselves, their clothes, [[Squick orifices]] and charge in]]. Being around Harry LoopholeAbuse Dresden means things just rub off.
** Also they once again proved their loyalty to Harry and the right cause by pulling off the move despite the sheer NauseaFuel involved.
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** Another moment for Sarissa, for cleverly concealing iron in her hair sticks, using it on the aforementioned ogre, ''in front of Mab.'' For an analogy, Sarissa basically flaunted kryptonite in front of Superman.
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** Another moment for Sarissa, for cleverly concealing iron in her hair sticks, using it on the aforementioned ogre, ''in front of Mab.'' For an analogy, Sarissa basically flaunted kryptonite in front of (semish) evil - Superman.
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** FridgeLogic makes it even more awesome. The short story ''Last Call'' showed that Mac is more than capable of throwing down when necessary. He obtained Nuetral Territory of the Accords for his bar so that his customers can eat, drink and relax in peace. However, when true evil is to be fought, he knows where to stand and with the above action, cemented him as one of Harry's TrueCompanions.
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*** After playing the StoneWall to Maeve, Lily, and two dozen high-level Fae, Mab thanks Demonreach for '''holding back.'''
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*** After playing the StoneWall to Maeve, Lily, and two dozen high-level Fae, Mab thanks Demonreach for '''holding back.'''
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** And it was built by Merlin (The ''original'' [[TheArchmage Merlin]]) at five different points in time simultaneously, and to describe it, Demonreach has to dumb it down for ''Bob.''
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** And it was built by Merlin (The ''original'' [[TheArchmage Merlin]]) at five different points in time simultaneously, and to describe it, Demonreach has to dumb it down for ''Bob.''''
* It should be mentioned that Merlin was TheApprentice of none other than Vadderung. When he tells Harry to move out of his way, there's no snarking, no second-guessing. Harry moves.
* It should be mentioned that Merlin was TheApprentice of none other than Vadderung. When he tells Harry to move out of his way, there's no snarking, no second-guessing. Harry moves.
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** And it was built by Merlin at five different points in time simultaneously, and to describe it, Demonreach has to dumb it down for ''Bob.''
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** And it was built by Merlin (The ''original'' [[TheArchmage Merlin]]) at five different points in time simultaneously, and to describe it, Demonreach has to dumb it down for ''Bob.''
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** Likewise, Harry and Murphy riding with TheWildHunt on Murphy's magically transformed Harley... across Lake Michigan. And they take on a small fleet full of Outsiders and their mortal minions, and still find time to fit in a BigDamnKiss or two.
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** Likewise, Harry and Murphy riding with TheWildHunt on Murphy's magically transformed Harley... across Lake Michigan. And they take on a small fleet full of Outsiders and their mortal minions, and still find time to fit in a BigDamnKiss TheBigDamnKiss or two.
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*** Uppity fae is snap-frozen and shattered before mid threat? Harry responds: "I'm glad you asked me that. I hope my answer clarified any misunderstandings."
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*** [[ShutUpHannibal Uppity fae is snap-frozen and shattered before midthreat? threat]]? Harry responds: "I'm glad you asked me that. I hope my answer clarified any misunderstandings."
*** [[ShutUpHannibal Uppity fae is snap-frozen and shattered before mid
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** "What else did I have? I had ''friends''."
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** This deserves emphasis. Harry Dresden, quite literally, ''punched an EldritchAbomination in the face.'' That in and of itself should equal the dinosaur.
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** Likewise, Harry and Murphy riding with TheWildHunt on Murphy's magically tranformed Harley... across Lake Michigan. And they take on a small fleet full of Outsiders and their mortal minions, and still find time to fit in a BigDamnKiss or two.
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*** As a note -- magic in the series is ''much'' harder to do over water and Molly is particularly noted as not having a lot of power to throw around. Earlier in the book, she had trouble hexing a jetski while Harry managed the same feat almost by accident. Hiding the boat ''and'' its noise ''and'' its wake while ''also'' blaring a stadium-volume rock concert is an ''enormous'' feat, far beyond what's been seen of her up to now. Harry describes her concentration as trying to conduct two separate orchestras in two completely different speed metal concerts.
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*** As a note -- magic in the series is ''much'' harder to do over water and Molly is particularly noted as not having a lot of power to throw around. Earlier in the book, she had trouble hexing a jetski while Harry managed the same feat almost by accident. Hiding the boat ''and'' its noise ''and'' its wake while ''also'' blaring a stadium-volume rock concert is an ''enormous'' feat, far beyond what's been seen of her up to now. Harry describes her concentration as trying to conduct two separate orchestras in two completely different speed metal concerts. And then she has enough concentration to pull off a pretty darn good veil for the rest of the fight.
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** Cue OhCrap from [[PhysicalGod Mab]]
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** Cue OhCrap from [[PhysicalGod Mab]]Mab]].
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically sadistic, vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and even a Lady, weakest of the Faerie Queens, is an order of magnitude more powerful than any mortal wizard. And ''Mab'', who is even more powerful than that, seemed legitimately afraid that it could easily imprison her at Harry's behest.
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically sadistic, vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and even a Lady, weakest of the Faerie Queens, is an order of magnitude more powerful than any mortal wizard. And ''Mab'', who is even more powerful than that, seemed legitimately afraid that it could easily imprison her at Harry's behest.behest.
** And it was built by Merlin at five different points in time simultaneously, and to describe it, Demonreach has to dumb it down for ''Bob.''
** And it was built by Merlin at five different points in time simultaneously, and to describe it, Demonreach has to dumb it down for ''Bob.''
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically sadistic, vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and even a Lady, weakest of the Faerie Queens, is an order of magnitude more powerful than any mortal wizard. And ''Mab'', who is even more powerful than that, seemed legitimately afraid that it could imprison her underground by itself.
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-->Thomas showed his teeth in a predatory grin. "I'm leaving bigger tips from now on."
* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically sadistic, vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and even a Lady, weakest of the Faerie Queens, is an order of magnitude more powerful than any mortal wizard. And ''Mab'', who is even more powerful than that, seemed legitimately afraid that it could easily imprison herunderground by itself.at Harry's behest.
* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically sadistic, vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and even a Lady, weakest of the Faerie Queens, is an order of magnitude more powerful than any mortal wizard. And ''Mab'', who is even more powerful than that, seemed legitimately afraid that it could easily imprison her
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Plus, Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and she had 9 of what are presumably her most powerful supporters backing her up at the time, and Demonreach was just standing there. Hell, it was just standing there when Lily and her 9 supporters were helping attack him. A Faerie Lady is hugely powerful, more so than almost any mortal wizard, and even with both working together, Demonreach just STOOD THERE, waiting calmly, while they and 18 other powerful faeries did everything in their collective power to kill it. Plus, as mentioned above, Mab seemed legitimately afraid that it could imprison her underground by itself.
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically sadistic, vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Plus, Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and she had 9 even a Lady, weakest of what are presumably her most the Faerie Queens, is an order of magnitude more powerful supporters backing her up at the time, and Demonreach was just standing there. Hell, it was just standing there when Lily and her 9 supporters were helping attack him. A Faerie Lady is hugely powerful, more so than almost any mortal wizard, and wizard. And ''Mab'', who is even with both working together, Demonreach just STOOD THERE, waiting calmly, while they and 18 other more powerful faeries did everything in their collective power to kill it. Plus, as mentioned above, Mab than that, seemed legitimately afraid that it could imprison her underground by itself.
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-->No, wait. I ''knew'' this song. It was more like stomp, stomp, ''clap''.\\
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-->No, wait. I ''knew'' [[Music/{{Queen}} this song.song]][[note]]"We Will Rock You"[[/note]]. It was more like stomp, stomp, ''clap''.\\
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** He then shuts it down by shoving a gun into its mouth and blowing it away, channeling a spell through the barrel as he pulls the trigger.
*** And he did it to the tune of Queen's ''We Will Rock You''.
----> '''Harry:''' Hey, Sharkface! Get '''rocked.'''
*** And he did it to the tune of Queen's ''We Will Rock You''.
----> '''Harry:''' Hey, Sharkface! Get '''rocked.'''
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*** As a note -- magic in the series is ''much'' harder to do over water and Molly is particularly noted as not having a lot of power to throw around. Earlier in the book, she had trouble hexing a jetski while Harry managed the same feat almost by accident. Hiding the boat ''and'' its noise ''and'' its wake while ''also'' blaring a stadium-volume rock concert is an ''enormous'' feat, far beyond what's been seen of her up to now. Harry describes her concentration as trying to conduct two separate orchestras in two completely different speed metal concerts.
**He Harry then shuts it down by shoving joins in the chorus and shoves a gun into its mouth and Sharkface's mouth, blowing it away, away by channeling a spell through the barrel as he pulls the trigger.
*** And he did it to the tune of Queen's ''We Will Rock You''.
---->---> '''Harry:''' Hey, Sharkface! Get '''rocked.'''
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*During Harry's rescue of his friends whom The Redcap kidnapped, the building they were in was blown into Lake Michigan. It's in the middle of Winter and is dark, so he won't be able to swim his friends to the surface. What does he do? Create an iceberg big enough to lift the building out of the water. This is why he is considered the most powerful Wizard of his generation, people.
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Plus, Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and she had 9 of what are presumably her most powerful supporters backing her up at the time, and Demonreach was just standing there. Hell, he was just standing there when Lily and her 9 supporters were helping attack him. A Faerie Lady is hugely powerful, more so than almost any mortal wizard, and even with both working together, Demonreach just STOOD THERE, waiting calmly, while they and 18 other powerful faeries did everything in their collective power to kill him.
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Plus, Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and she had 9 of what are presumably her most powerful supporters backing her up at the time, and Demonreach was just standing there. Hell, he it was just standing there when Lily and her 9 supporters were helping attack him. A Faerie Lady is hugely powerful, more so than almost any mortal wizard, and even with both working together, Demonreach just STOOD THERE, waiting calmly, while they and 18 other powerful faeries did everything in their collective power to kill him.it. Plus, as mentioned above, Mab seemed legitimately afraid that it could imprison her underground by itself.
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-->'''Harry:''' Demonreach, if our guest pulls that trigger, take her below and keep her there.\\ Cue OhCrap from [[PhysicalGod Mab]]
*** And then she ''smiles'' and says that just maybe she'll finally get a Knight who is WorthIt.
*** And then she ''smiles'' and says that just maybe she'll finally get a Knight who is WorthIt.
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-->'''Harry:''' Demonreach, if our guest pulls that trigger, take her below and keep her there.\\ Cue there.
**Cue OhCrap from [[PhysicalGod Mab]]
*** ** And then she ''smiles'' and says that just maybe she'll finally get a Knight who is WorthIt.
**Cue OhCrap from [[PhysicalGod Mab]]
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* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least'' of what's imprisoned there. Plus, Maeve herself outright states that she can't beat him without Lily, and she had 9 of what are presumably her most powerful supporters backing her up at the time, and Demonreach was just standing there. Hell, he was just standing there when Lily and her 9 supporters were helping attack him. A Faerie Lady is hugely powerful, more so than almost any mortal wizard, and even with both working together, Demonreach just STOOD THERE, waiting calmly, while they and 18 other powerful faeries did everything in their collective power to kill him.
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** And later on, she manages to veil the ''boat.''
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* A small, subtle one for Mac. When an Outsider demands Harry leave [=McAnally's=] and give himself up to it, he tells Mac that he'll take the fight outside if he wants him to. Mac, already holding a pistol grip shotgun, answers by pumping said shotgun and placing a heavy caliber automatic pistol on the counter within easy reach.
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* A small, subtle one for Mac. When an Outsider [[EldritchAbomination Outsider]] demands Harry leave [=McAnally's=] and give himself up to it, he tells Mac the bartender that he'll take the fight outside if he wants him to. Mac, already holding a pistol grip shotgun, answers by pumping said shotgun and placing a heavy caliber automatic pistol on the counter within easy reach.reach of Harry and Thomas.
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*** Becomes a moment of FridgeBrilliance when her relationship to Mab is revealed later, in that the only repercussion she faced is being asked to dispose of it safely. Mommy's fine with her protecting herself, just be careful!
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* A small, subtle one for Mac. When an Outsider demands Harry leave [=McAnally's=] and give himself up to it, he tells Mac that he'll take the fight outside if he wants him to. In answer Mac, already holding a pistol grip shotgun, answers by pumping said shotgun and placing a heavy caliber automatic pistol on the counter within easy reach.
* Some mention has to made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least''.
* Some mention has to made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least''.
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* A small, subtle one for Mac. When an Outsider demands Harry leave [=McAnally's=] and give himself up to it, he tells Mac that he'll take the fight outside if he wants him to. In answer Mac, already holding a pistol grip shotgun, answers by pumping said shotgun and placing a heavy caliber automatic pistol on the counter within easy reach.
* Some mention has to be made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''theleast''.least'' of what's imprisoned there.
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* A small, subtle one for Mac. When an Outsider demands Harry leave McAnally's [=McAnally's=] and give himself up to it, he tells Mac that he'll take the fight outside if he wants him to. In answer Mac, already holding a pistol grip shotgun, answers by pumping said shotgun and placing a heavy caliber automatic pistol on the counter within easy reach.
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--->The Erlking: "Sir Knight, what game amuses you this fine stormy evening?"
--->Harry: "Tonight? Tonight we hunt [[EldritchAbomination Outsiders!]]"
--->The Erlking: "Sir Knight, what game amuses you this fine stormy evening?"
--->Harry: "Tonight? Tonight we hunt [[EldritchAbomination Outsiders!]]"
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---> '''Harry:''' You have to admit, it isn't the craziest thing I've asked you to do. It isn't even the craziest thing I've asked you to do ''tonight''.
---> '''Karrin:''' You're right. Let's go.
---> '''Harry:''' You have to admit, it isn't the craziest thing I've asked you to do. It isn't even the craziest thing I've asked you to do ''tonight''.
---> '''Karrin:''' You're right. Let's go.
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--->lake\\
'''Harry:''' You have to admit, it isn't the craziest thing I've asked you to do. It isn't even the craziest thing I've asked you to do''tonight''.
--->''tonight''.\\
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---> '''Harry:''' "I AM HARRY BLACKSTONE COPPERFIELD DRESDEN! Thrice, I command thee! Thrice, I bid thee! By my name I command thee! '''Tell me who you are!'''"
---> '''Sharkface:''' I AM GATEBREAKER, HARBINGER! I AM FEARGIVER, HOPESLAYER! I AM '''HE-WHO-WALKS-BEFORE!'''
---> '''Sharkface:''' I AM GATEBREAKER, HARBINGER! I AM FEARGIVER, HOPESLAYER! I AM '''HE-WHO-WALKS-BEFORE!'''
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'''Sharkface:''' I AM GATEBREAKER, HARBINGER! I AM FEARGIVER, HOPESLAYER! I AM '''HE-WHO-WALKS-BEFORE!'''
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-->No, wait. I ''knew'' this song. It was more like stomp, stomp, ''clap''.
-->'''Harry''' (to the very unsettled Sharkface): "You didn't see this coming, didja?"
--> And then the ''Water Beetle'', the ''entire'' goddamned ship, [[BigDamnHeroes exploded out from under a veil that had rendered it and the water it displaced and every noise it had made undetectable not only to me, but to a small army of otherworldly monstrosities and their big, bad Walker general too]].
** "What else did I have? I had ''friends''.
-->'''Harry''' (to the very unsettled Sharkface): "You didn't see this coming, didja?"
--> And then the ''Water Beetle'', the ''entire'' goddamned ship, [[BigDamnHeroes exploded out from under a veil that had rendered it and the water it displaced and every noise it had made undetectable not only to me, but to a small army of otherworldly monstrosities and their big, bad Walker general too]].
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-->'''Harry'''''clap''.\\
'''Harry''' (to the very unsettled Sharkface):"You You didn't see this coming, didja?"
-->didja?\\
And then the ''Water Beetle'', the ''entire'' goddamned ship, [[BigDamnHeroes exploded out from under a veil that had rendered it and the water it displaced and every noise it had made undetectable not only to me, but to a small army of otherworldly monstrosities and their big, bad Walker general too]].
** "What else did I have? I had ''friends''."
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And then the ''Water Beetle'', the ''entire'' goddamned ship, [[BigDamnHeroes exploded out from under a veil that had rendered it and the water it displaced and every noise it had made undetectable not only to me, but to a small army of otherworldly monstrosities and their big, bad Walker general too]].
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* Harry is fighting Sharkface. He almost uses the power of the [[SealedEvilInACan Well]], which he has been warned not to use, because he is hopelessly outclassed. As >e puts it "What else did I have?" And then- Crunch, crunch, ''crack''. Crunch, crunch, ''Crack''.
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* Harry is fighting Sharkface. He almost uses the power of the [[SealedEvilInACan Well]], which he has been warned not to use, because he is hopelessly outclassed. As >e he puts it "What else did I have?" And then- Crunch, crunch, ''crack''. Crunch, crunch, ''Crack''.
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* A small, subtle one for Mac. When an Outsider demands Harry leave McAnally's and give himself up to it, he tells Mac that he'll take the fight outside if he wants him to. In answer Mac, already holding a pistol grip shotgun, answers by pumping said shotgun and placing a heavy caliber automatic pistol on the counter within easy reach.
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* A small, subtle one for Mac. When an Outsider demands Harry leave McAnally's and give himself up to it, he tells Mac that he'll take the fight outside if he wants him to. In answer Mac, already holding a pistol grip shotgun, answers by pumping said shotgun and placing a heavy caliber automatic pistol on the counter within easy reach.reach.
*Some mention has to made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least''.
*Some mention has to made of Demonreach. It is the guardian of a supernatural prison where six Naagloshii (horrifically vicious and powerful Native American spirits, one of which nearly killed Harry in a previous book) are considered ''the least''.