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** '''Luffy:''' Well, anyways, I'm gonna go and eat all this castle's food and then get our reindeer-doctor to join us! See you! ''(zips away)''\\
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** '''Cross:''' A homicidal otter with dual shell-blades and a vulture armed with high-caliber machineguns stole my talking snail and then tried to kill me when I jumped off a building to catch up to them! ''({{Beat}})'' What the hell has my life become?\\
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** '''Vivi:''' Alright, then, everyone! Let's get going to see the man who'll help us sail to the sky! ''({{Beat}})'' I cannot ''believe'' I just said that with a straight face...
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** '''Lassoo:''' ''(in a bored tone)'' Our cheap-as-all-hell navigator refused to pay the entry toll at Heaven's Gate, and we beat all the angel officers that came to fine and arrest us, so a giant lobster carried our crew away here, and we had to fight past tons of booby traps, a talking cream puff, and a bald guy with his giant dog on our way to them. ''({{Beat}})'' And I'm not sure that's the weirdest thing that's happened to us since I joined this crew a few days ago.
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** '''[[IronicName Drake]]:''' Do not resist arrest, duck. ''({{Beat}})'' Arresting a giant duck... ''why'' did it have to be the Straw Hats?
** Also, when Drake is listing Cross's crimes and includes "Assault with a deadly snail", Cross asks if he really just said that.
** Also, when Drake is listing Cross's crimes and includes "Assault with a deadly snail", Cross asks if he really just said that.
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** '''Itomimizu:''' ''I AM NOT A MUPPET!''\\
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** '''Xomniac:''' "What would be a good expression for a giant concentrating to fake an accent?" I never thought I'd find myself asking that question, and yet I nonetheless did while writing this chapter.
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** '''Cross:''' Alright, who laughed at the giraffe!? Who the hell is responsible for making me utter the phrase 'Who laughed at the giraffe' in complete and utter seriousness ''and'' context!?
** ''So saying, the menacing pigeon strolled forward, advancing on my talking snail, my bazooka-dog, and myself as I racked my brains for a way out of the bisected thirty-story Tower of Justice.''\\
** ''So saying, the menacing pigeon strolled forward, advancing on my talking snail, my bazooka-dog, and myself as I racked my brains for a way out of the bisected thirty-story Tower of Justice.''\\
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** '''Boss:''' He [Cross] said... ''something'' about having a way to save Merry in the tower, but he got attacked by a pigeon before he could say more.\\
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** ''A world away in a fairytale land of sweets, a Long-Leg man and a lion gaped at a cackling snail in shock. Contrary to appearances, this was not the setup to a joke.''
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** '''Hornet:''' Apropos of nothing, I'm quite pleased I got to properly use the sentences "But first, we need a reaction to her telling physics to bite the pillow." and "So, first off, we need to un-orphan that punchline." while we were writing this.
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** '''Xomniac:''' Heheheh, I told ya that including the penguins was a good idea! ''({{Beat}})'' ...god bless the fact that I got to use that phrase in context.
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** ''...I stated intelligently before shrugging and turning my attention back to the bloody but ultimately unremarkable brawl between the wedding guests (did I really just say that?).''
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** '''Cross:''' ''(explaining his plan to Brook)'' Your first job upon us reaching the island will be to bamboozle the Ghost Princess of Thriller Bark, Perona. ''({{Beat}})'' I love the fact that I get the chance to use the word 'bamboozle'.
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** '''The Patient One:''' In writing this chapter, I found myself saying, "Xom, you're comparing a giant warthog to a former master swordsman."
** ''...But even as relatively unnatural as Thriller Bark was, the sight of a speedo-clad cyborg swinging around a giant pair of flaming oaks linked by a chain to bash down the walking dead as though he were playing a macabre, jumbo-sized game of Whack-A-Mole was a whole new level of 'weird' for the island's ghastly inhabitants.''
** ''What ensued was one of the more bizarre chase scenes ever: a zombie in a bat costume that somehow allowed him to fly being chased by a manatee-sea turtle hybrid jumping off the air.''
** '''Donny:''' Note to self… After I get Tidal Swim down pat, start training with Robin to deal with opponents who have more than… two… arms… And suddenly that is a threat that is valid in my life. Unbe-freaking-lievable, one day my usual opponents are other dugongs, and now it's like I'm living in a dream!
** ''...But even as relatively unnatural as Thriller Bark was, the sight of a speedo-clad cyborg swinging around a giant pair of flaming oaks linked by a chain to bash down the walking dead as though he were playing a macabre, jumbo-sized game of Whack-A-Mole was a whole new level of 'weird' for the island's ghastly inhabitants.''
** ''What ensued was one of the more bizarre chase scenes ever: a zombie in a bat costume that somehow allowed him to fly being chased by a manatee-sea turtle hybrid jumping off the air.''
** '''Donny:''' Note to self… After I get Tidal Swim down pat, start training with Robin to deal with opponents who have more than… two… arms… And suddenly that is a threat that is valid in my life. Unbe-freaking-lievable, one day my usual opponents are other dugongs, and now it's like I'm living in a dream!
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** '''[[MoneyFetish Nami]]:''' I owe you one, friend…
** ''The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color...''
** ''The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color...''
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** '''Author's Notes:''' Think you could edit in Largo strumming or tuning his guitar menacingly? ...dear god that's actually a thing in this instance.
** '''Boss:''' Since when are you this snippy?\\
** '''Boss:''' Since when are you this snippy?\\
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** '''Apis:''' In all fairness, [Lindy] ''did'' just reincarnate after plodding along in his old body for the past few centuries, so I think he's a bit high on his youth right now.\\
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** '''Author's Notes:''' "Vaguely New Englandish Sexy Bass" is something I can do passably well, and there's not something I ever saw myself saying.
** '''Billy:''' …Is anyone else just now realizing that we're ''really'' not questioning the fact that we're talking with a naturally speaking starfish right now?\\
** '''Billy:''' …Is anyone else just now realizing that we're ''really'' not questioning the fact that we're talking with a naturally speaking starfish right now?\\
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** '''Cross:''' The starfish ''does'' have a point there... ''({{Beat}})'' "The starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
** ''Now, though, the builders of Skelter Bite had used a ''Marine Battleship'' to fill that gap. A years-out-of-date, defaced to hell and back battleship, but it still made for a heavily armed, extremely sturdy barbican… and ''Roger help me'' there's another word I never thought I'd use in perfect context.''
** ''Now, though, the builders of Skelter Bite had used a ''Marine Battleship'' to fill that gap. A years-out-of-date, defaced to hell and back battleship, but it still made for a heavily armed, extremely sturdy barbican… and ''Roger help me'' there's another word I never thought I'd use in perfect context.''
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** '''Smoker:''' We would be willing to pay you quite handsomely for your services, of course. ''({{Beat}})'' I never thought I'd be saying those words to assassins...
** '''Jones:''' I'm with the ''other'' Straw Hats. You know, the crew a dimension to the left and a few months behind?\\
** '''Jones:''' I'm with the ''other'' Straw Hats. You know, the crew a dimension to the left and a few months behind?\\
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** '''Sanji:''' Other me, can you pass the garlic? ''({{Beat}})'' Never thought something like ''that'd'' be coming out of my mouth...
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** '''Billy:''' …Is anyone else just now realizing that we're ''really'' not questioning the fact that we're talking with a naturally speaking starfish right now?\\
'''Apis:''' Not even top ten on our charts. This ''week''.
'''Apis:''' Not even top ten on our charts. This ''week''.
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** ''The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' harder than it has any right to be!''\\
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** ''The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' ''miles'' harder than it has any right to be!''\\
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** '''Cross:''' The starfish ''does'' have a point there... ({{Beat}}) "The starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
** ''Now, though, the builders of Skelter Bite had used a '''Marine Battleship''' to fill that gap. A years-out-of-date, defaced to hell and back battleship, but it still made for a heavily armed, extremely sturdy barbican… and '''Roger help me''' there's another word I never thought I'd use in perfect context.''
** ''Now, though, the builders of Skelter Bite had used a '''Marine Battleship''' to fill that gap. A years-out-of-date, defaced to hell and back battleship, but it still made for a heavily armed, extremely sturdy barbican… and '''Roger help me''' there's another word I never thought I'd use in perfect context.''
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** '''Cross:''' The starfish ''does'' have a point there... ({{Beat}}) ''({{Beat}})'' "The starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
** ''Now, though, the builders of Skelter Bite had used a'''Marine Battleship''' ''Marine Battleship'' to fill that gap. A years-out-of-date, defaced to hell and back battleship, but it still made for a heavily armed, extremely sturdy barbican… and '''Roger ''Roger help me''' me'' there's another word I never thought I'd use in perfect context.''
** ''Now, though, the builders of Skelter Bite had used a
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** '''Cross:''' The starfish ''does'' have a point there... "the starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
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** '''Cross:''' The starfish ''does'' have a point there... "the ({{Beat}}) "The starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
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** ''Reaching out, [Brook] gave it a hard shove, and we all heard the rattle of wood on wood, not bone on bone (do'' not ''ask how we all knew that).''
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** ''Reaching out, [Brook] gave it ''Now, though, the builders of Skelter Bite had used a hard shove, '''Marine Battleship''' to fill that gap. A years-out-of-date, defaced to hell and we all heard the rattle of wood on wood, not bone on bone (do'' not ''ask how we all knew that).back battleship, but it still made for a heavily armed, extremely sturdy barbican… and '''Roger help me''' there's another word I never thought I'd use in perfect context.''
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** ''Reaching out, [Brook] gave it a hard shove, and we all heard the rattle of wood on wood, not bone on bone (do '''not''' ask how we all knew that).''
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** ''Reaching out, [Brook] gave it a hard shove, and we all heard the rattle of wood on wood, not bone on bone (do '''not''' ask (do'' not ''ask how we all knew that).''
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** '''Luffy''': Well, anyways, I'm gonna go and eat all this castle's food and then get our reindeer-doctor to join us! See you! ''(zips away)''\\
'''Cross''': I'm not the only one who can't believe that that sentence makes sense to me, right? Right?\\
'''Nami''': Eh... I think I became a bit desensitized after 'a seagull grabbed my head when I flew up to catch it'.
'''Cross''': I'm not the only one who can't believe that that sentence makes sense to me, right? Right?\\
'''Nami''': Eh... I think I became a bit desensitized after 'a seagull grabbed my head when I flew up to catch it'.
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** '''Luffy''': '''Luffy:''' Well, anyways, I'm gonna go and eat all this castle's food and then get our reindeer-doctor to join us! See you! ''(zips away)''\\
'''Cross''': '''Cross:''' I'm not the only one who can't believe that that sentence makes sense to me, right? Right?\\
'''Nami''': '''Nami:''' Eh... I think I became a bit desensitized after 'a seagull grabbed my head when I flew up to catch it'.
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** '''Cross''': A homicidal otter with dual shell-blades and a vulture armed with high-caliber machineguns stole my talking snail and then tried to kill me when I jumped off a building to catch up to them! ''({{Beat}})'' What the hell has my life become?\\
'''Nami''': Madness and insanity, Cross, madness and insanity.
'''Nami''': Madness and insanity, Cross, madness and insanity.
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** '''Cross''': '''Cross:''' A homicidal otter with dual shell-blades and a vulture armed with high-caliber machineguns stole my talking snail and then tried to kill me when I jumped off a building to catch up to them! ''({{Beat}})'' What the hell has my life become?\\
'''Nami''': '''Nami:''' Madness and insanity, Cross, madness and insanity.
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** '''Lassoo''': ''(in a bored tone)'' Our cheap-as-all-hell navigator refused to pay the entry toll at Heaven's Gate, and we beat all the angel officers that came to fine and arrest us, so a giant lobster carried our crew away here, and we had to fight past tons of booby traps, a talking cream puff, and a bald guy with his giant dog on our way to them. ''({{Beat}})'' And I'm not sure that's the weirdest thing that's happened to us since I joined this crew a few days ago.
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** '''Lassoo''': '''Lassoo:''' ''(in a bored tone)'' Our cheap-as-all-hell navigator refused to pay the entry toll at Heaven's Gate, and we beat all the angel officers that came to fine and arrest us, so a giant lobster carried our crew away here, and we had to fight past tons of booby traps, a talking cream puff, and a bald guy with his giant dog on our way to them. ''({{Beat}})'' And I'm not sure that's the weirdest thing that's happened to us since I joined this crew a few days ago.
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** '''[[IronicName Drake]]''': Do not resist arrest, duck. ''({{Beat}})'' Arresting a giant duck... ''why'' did it have to be the Straw Hats?
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** '''[[IronicName Drake]]''': Drake]]:''' Do not resist arrest, duck. ''({{Beat}})'' Arresting a giant duck... ''why'' did it have to be the Straw Hats?
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** '''Xomniac''': "What would be a good expression for a giant concentrating to fake an accent?" I never thought I'd find myself asking that question, and yet I nonetheless did while writing this chapter.
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** '''Xomniac''': '''Xomniac:''' "What would be a good expression for a giant concentrating to fake an accent?" I never thought I'd find myself asking that question, and yet I nonetheless did while writing this chapter.
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** '''Cross''': Alright, who laughed at the giraffe!? Who the hell is responsible for making me utter the phrase 'Who laughed at the giraffe' in complete and utter seriousness ''and'' context!?
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** '''Cross''': '''Cross:''' Alright, who laughed at the giraffe!? Who the hell is responsible for making me utter the phrase 'Who laughed at the giraffe' in complete and utter seriousness ''and'' context!?
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'''Cross''': ...My life is so warped.
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** '''Boss''': He [Cross] said... ''something'' about having a way to save Merry in the tower, but he got attacked by a pigeon before he could say more.\\
'''Franky''': ...It's a fine day in the Grand Line when I can hear a sentence like that and not question how much it makes sense.
'''Franky''': ...It's a fine day in the Grand Line when I can hear a sentence like that and not question how much it makes sense.
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** '''Boss''': '''Boss:''' He [Cross] said... ''something'' about having a way to save Merry in the tower, but he got attacked by a pigeon before he could say more.\\
'''Franky''': ...'''Franky:''' ...It's a fine day in the Grand Line when I can hear a sentence like that and not question how much it makes sense.
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** '''Hornet''': Apropos of nothing, I'm quite pleased I got to properly use the sentences "But first, we need a reaction to her telling physics to bite the pillow." and "So, first off, we need to un-orphan that punchline." while we were writing this.
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** '''Hornet''': '''Hornet:''' Apropos of nothing, I'm quite pleased I got to properly use the sentences "But first, we need a reaction to her telling physics to bite the pillow." and "So, first off, we need to un-orphan that punchline." while we were writing this.
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** '''Xomniac''': Heheheh, I told ya that including the penguins was a good idea! ''({{Beat}})'' ...god bless the fact that I got to use that phrase in context.
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** '''Xomniac''': '''Xomniac:''' Heheheh, I told ya that including the penguins was a good idea! ''({{Beat}})'' ...god bless the fact that I got to use that phrase in context.
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** '''Cross''': ''(explaining his plan to Brook)'' Your first job upon us reaching the island will be to bamboozle the Ghost Princess of Thriller Bark, Perona. ''({{Beat}})'' I love the fact that I get the chance to use the word 'bamboozle'.
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** '''Cross''': '''Cross:''' ''(explaining his plan to Brook)'' Your first job upon us reaching the island will be to bamboozle the Ghost Princess of Thriller Bark, Perona. ''({{Beat}})'' I love the fact that I get the chance to use the word 'bamboozle'.
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** '''[[MoneyFetish Nami]]''': I owe you one, friend…
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** '''[[MoneyFetish Nami]]''': Nami]]:''' I owe you one, friend…
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** '''Author's Notes''': Think you could edit in Largo strumming or tuning his guitar menacingly? ...dear god that's actually a thing in this instance.
** '''Boss''': Since when are you this snippy?\\
'''Cross''': Since our idiot captain batted you onto the giant bug over there, followed by said idiot captain then stretching himself up to said bug, and finally our resident Ghost Princess—who I still need to swear vengeance against, by the way— tricked said idiot captain into dragging me up to said bug, which culminated in our high-fiving a cliff with our ''bodies''. Final count? Blame the idiot captain, leave me to my pain…\\
'''Boss''': …It is a wonder that that whole series of events actually makes sense to me.
** '''Boss''': Since when are you this snippy?\\
'''Cross''': Since our idiot captain batted you onto the giant bug over there, followed by said idiot captain then stretching himself up to said bug, and finally our resident Ghost Princess—who I still need to swear vengeance against, by the way— tricked said idiot captain into dragging me up to said bug, which culminated in our high-fiving a cliff with our ''bodies''. Final count? Blame the idiot captain, leave me to my pain…\\
'''Boss''': …It is a wonder that that whole series of events actually makes sense to me.
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** '''Author's Notes''': Notes:''' Think you could edit in Largo strumming or tuning his guitar menacingly? ...dear god that's actually a thing in this instance.
**'''Boss''': '''Boss:''' Since when are you this snippy?\\
'''Cross''': '''Cross:''' Since our idiot captain batted you onto the giant bug over there, followed by said idiot captain then stretching himself up to said bug, and finally our resident Ghost Princess—who I still need to swear vengeance against, by the way— tricked said idiot captain into dragging me up to said bug, which culminated in our high-fiving a cliff with our ''bodies''. Final count? Blame the idiot captain, leave me to my pain…\\
'''Boss''': '''Boss:''' …It is a wonder that that whole series of events actually makes sense to me.
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** '''Apis''': In all fairness, [Lindy] ''did'' just reincarnate after plodding along in his old body for the past few centuries, so I think he's a bit high on his youth right now.\\
'''Leo''': It says a ''lot'' about the last few months that we don't even question that sentence, doesn't it?
'''Leo''': It says a ''lot'' about the last few months that we don't even question that sentence, doesn't it?
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** '''Apis''': '''Apis:''' In all fairness, [Lindy] ''did'' just reincarnate after plodding along in his old body for the past few centuries, so I think he's a bit high on his youth right now.\\
'''Leo''': '''Leo:''' It says a ''lot'' about the last few months that we don't even question that sentence, doesn't it?
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** '''Author's Notes''': "Vaguely New Englandish Sexy Bass" is something I can do passably well, and there's not something I ever saw myself saying.
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** '''Author's Notes''': Notes:''' "Vaguely New Englandish Sexy Bass" is something I can do passably well, and there's not something I ever saw myself saying.
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** '''Author's Notes''': Notes:''' I honestly never expected to say that, but we discovered several missing hands during proofreading. Keeping track of Hachi's choreography was a pain.
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** '''Cross''': The starfish ''does'' have a point there... "the starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
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** '''Cross''': '''Cross:''' The starfish ''does'' have a point there... "the starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
** ''Reaching out, [Brook] gave it a hard shove, and we all heard the rattle of wood on wood, not bone on bone (do '''not''' ask how we all knew that).''
** ''Reaching out, [Brook] gave it a hard shove, and we all heard the rattle of wood on wood, not bone on bone (do '''not''' ask how we all knew that).''
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** '''Cross''': The starfish ''does'' have a point there... "the starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
** '''Cross''': The starfish ''does'' have a point there... "the starfish has a point"... This is not how I envisioned adulthood.
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** '''Author's Notes''': I honestly never expected to say that, but we discovered several missing hands during proofreading. Keeping track of Hachi's choreography was a pain.
** '''Author's Notes''': I honestly never expected to say that, but we discovered several missing hands during proofreading. Keeping track of Hachi's choreography was a pain.
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** '''Author's Notes''': "Vaguely New Englandish Sexy Bass" is something I can do passably well, and there's not something I ever saw myself saying.
** '''Author's Notes''': "Vaguely New Englandish Sexy Bass" is something I can do passably well, and there's not something I ever saw myself saying.
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** '''Apis''': In all fairness, [Lindy] ''did'' just reincarnate after plodding along in his old body for the past few centuries, so I think he's a bit high on his youth right now.\\
'''Leo''': It says a ''lot'' about the last few months that we don't even question that sentence, doesn't it?
** '''Apis''': In all fairness, [Lindy] ''did'' just reincarnate after plodding along in his old body for the past few centuries, so I think he's a bit high on his youth right now.\\
'''Leo''': It says a ''lot'' about the last few months that we don't even question that sentence, doesn't it?
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'''Cross''': Since our idiot captain batted you onto the giant bug over there, followed by said idiot captain then stretching himself up to said bug, and finally our resident Ghost Princess—who I still need to swear vengeance against, by the way— tricked said idiot captain into dragging me up to said bug, which culminated in our high-fiving a cliff with our bodies. Final count? Blame the idiot captain, leave me to my pain…\\
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'''Cross''': Since our idiot captain batted you onto the giant bug over there, followed by said idiot captain then stretching himself up to said bug, and finally our resident Ghost Princess—who I still need to swear vengeance against, by the way— tricked said idiot captain into dragging me up to said bug, which culminated in our high-fiving a cliff with our bodies.''bodies''. Final count? Blame the idiot captain, leave me to my pain…\\
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** '''Boss''': Since when are you this snippy?\\
'''Cross''': Since our idiot captain batted you onto the giant bug over there, followed by said idiot captain then stretching himself up to said bug, and finally our resident Ghost Princess—who I still need to swear vengeance against, by the way— tricked said idiot captain into dragging me up to said bug, which culminated in our high-fiving a cliff with our bodies. Final count? Blame the idiot captain, leave me to my pain…\\
'''Boss''': …It is a wonder that that whole series of events actually makes sense to me.
'''Cross''': Since our idiot captain batted you onto the giant bug over there, followed by said idiot captain then stretching himself up to said bug, and finally our resident Ghost Princess—who I still need to swear vengeance against, by the way— tricked said idiot captain into dragging me up to said bug, which culminated in our high-fiving a cliff with our bodies. Final count? Blame the idiot captain, leave me to my pain…\\
'''Boss''': …It is a wonder that that whole series of events actually makes sense to me.
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'''Buggy:''' ...Well, ''that's'' a phrase I never thought I'd heard again.\\
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'''Buggy:''' ...Well, ''that's'' a phrase I never thought I'd heard hear again.\\
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** '''Itomimizu:''' ''I AM NOT A MUPPET!''\\
'''Buggy:''' ...Well, ''that's'' a phrase I never thought I'd heard again.\\
'''Alvida:''' What the hell kind of ship did you serve on before going independent?
** '''Itomimizu:''' ''I AM NOT A MUPPET!''\\
'''Buggy:''' ...Well, ''that's'' a phrase I never thought I'd heard again.\\
'''Alvida:''' What the hell kind of ship did you serve on before going independent?
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** '''Author's Notes''': Think you could edit in Largo strumming or tuning his guitar menacingly? ...dear god that's actually a thing in this instance.
** '''Author's Notes''': Think you could edit in Largo strumming or tuning his guitar menacingly? ...dear god that's actually a thing in this instance.
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A Rare Sentence page requiring an entire page to itself? Now that is a rare sentence in of itself.
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** '''Lassoo''': ''(in a bored tone)'' Our cheap-as-all-hell navigator refused to pay the entry toll at Heaven's Gate, and we beat all the angel officers that came to fine and arrest us, so a giant lobster carried our crew away here, and we had to fight past tons of booby traps, a talking cream puff, and a bald guy with his giant dog on our way to them. ''({{Beat}})'' And I'm not sure that's the weirdest thing that's happened to us since I joined this crew a few days ago."
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** '''Cross''': Alright, who laughed at the giraffe!? Who the hell is responsible for making me utter the phrase 'Who laughed at the giraffe' in complete and utter seriousness ''and'' context!?
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** '''Cross''': Alright, who laughed at the giraffe!? Who the hell is responsible for making me utter the phrase 'Who laughed at the giraffe' in complete and utter seriousness ''and'' context!?
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** '''The Patient One:''' In writing this chapter, I found myself saying, "Xom, you're comparing a giant warthog to a master swordsman."
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** '''The Patient One:''' In writing this chapter, I found myself saying, "Xom, you're comparing a giant warthog to a former master swordsman."
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** (By [[MoneyFetish Nami]]) "I owe you one, friend…"
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** (By [[MoneyFetish Nami]]) "I '''[[MoneyFetish Nami]]''': I owe you one, friend…"friend…
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** (By [[MoneyFetish Nami]]) "I owe you one, friend…"
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** So saying, the menacing pigeon strolled forward, advancing on my talking snail, my bazooka-dog, and myself as I racked my brains for a way out of the bisected thirty-story Tower of Justice.\\
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…That would sound so wrong out of context.
…That would sound so wrong out of context.
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** The ''The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' harder than it has any right to be!\\
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!! From Chapter 51
** '''Cross:''' The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' harder than it has any right to be!\\
** '''Cross:''' The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' harder than it has any right to be!\\
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** '''Cross:''' The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color...
** '''Cross:''' The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color...
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**'''Cross:''' The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color...
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** '''Cross:''' The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color
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** '''Cross:''' The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color
** '''Cross:''' The Obelisks of the Florian, the second most powerful eldritch beings I've ever seen in my life (so help me God, I actually have to ''make'' that distinction) had all shifted in color
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…That would sound so wrong out of context.''
…That would sound so wrong out of context.''
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** ''The '''Cross:''' The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' harder than it has any right to be!\\
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** ''The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' harder than it has any right to be!\\
…That would sound so wrong out of context.''
** ''The only solution seemed to be to destroy the bodies entirely, and actually destroying a human body is '''miles''' harder than it has any right to be!\\
…That would sound so wrong out of context.''
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'''Vivi:''' ...I cannot, for the life of me, ''believe'' that I'm not questioning that sentence.
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'''Vivi:''' ...I cannot, for the life of me, ''believe'' that I'm not questioning that sentence.sentence.
** '''Sanji:''' Other me, can you pass the garlic? ''({{Beat}})'' Never thought something like ''that'd'' be coming out of my mouth...
** '''Sanji:''' Other me, can you pass the garlic? ''({{Beat}})'' Never thought something like ''that'd'' be coming out of my mouth...
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** '''Vivi:''' Alright, then, everyone! Let's get going to see the man who'll help us sail to the sky! ''({{Beat}})'' I cannot ''believe'' I just said that with a straight face...
** '''Vivi:''' Alright, then, everyone! Let's get going to see the man who'll help us sail to the sky! ''({{Beat}})'' I cannot ''believe'' I just said that with a straight face...