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angelthread1w9 The Infinitely Curious Since: Aug, 2013
The Infinitely Curious
Jun 29th 2014 at 5:35:19 PM •••

I should have said this a long time ago, but as much as I'm happy to add in a bunch of new tropes which I think were good, the Jerkass Woobie thing in the YMMV tab probably should be taken out. :( Well, I guess it's not completely unreasonable, but yeah, I'm sorry. >_<

I still did a good job though, right? :O

Also, I don't mean to be rude, but it is a trope after all...

Because of the whole Took a Level in Jerkass thing, do you guys think the negative aspects of the characters have been exaggerated on? Sometimes all of the arguing and bitching in the story is more annoying than entertaining for me. :p But there are some nice concepts throw in. I mean, like, is there Flanderization?

Also, I think Byakuren and Reisen should possibly be added in as Nice Girls. They seem like some of the only genuinely nice people in the story. :p Also, Rin seems kind of nice but... she really does seem crazier than she thinks she is, poor girl. :(

"Hell exists not to punish sinners, but to ensure that nobody sins in the first place." - Eikishiki Yamaxanadu (Touhou) Hide / Show Replies
RN452 Since: Nov, 2011
Jun 29th 2014 at 7:18:15 PM •••

"Because of the whole Took a Level in Jerkass thing..."

Nope, I don't think the jerkass aspects of Touhou characters have been exaggerated. On the contrary, some characters, thanks to Character Development, have improved considerably, like Reimu, and others have been downplayed, like Byakuren (she's a rather competent person in the fic, while in canon Byakuren is an incompetent leader).

The problem is that almost every character in Touhou canon is a jerkass, they show more flaws than qualities. Touhou is more related to Ed Edd And Eddy than Mass Effect, in a fantastic setting, but I consider that those kind of media works better with smaller casts than a 130+ cast. This is something so prevalent that I've seriously considered abandoning the fandom because of this. I guess IM explores this white elephant of the canon to its logical consequences of having a truly serious threat, thus the deconstruction.

My work is here. Current main fic: Tengen Toppa Gurren Solvernia
angelthread1w9 The Infinitely Curious Since: Aug, 2013
The Infinitely Curious
May 29th 2014 at 8:23:32 PM •••

I'm not sure what trope there is for this, it's probably much more likely to be a trivia thing, but in the form of inspiration all the way into Chapter 42, the author finally realizes what his subconcious is telling him about the inspiration used for his original interpretation of one of the major villains in the story.

Yuuka is based on Hexadecimal from ReBoot.

"Hell exists not to punish sinners, but to ensure that nobody sins in the first place." - Eikishiki Yamaxanadu (Touhou)
angelthread1w9 The Infinitely Curious Since: Aug, 2013
The Infinitely Curious
May 25th 2014 at 11:44:13 AM •••

Okay, I've read 30 chapters of this so far. It's really long. o.O

Anyways, I find it kind of surprising that this is considered a Dark Fic, yet there isn't a Nightmare Fuel page added yet. What's up with that? :p Although I have to admit, nothing in particular has been THAT creepy yet for the most part.

Still, there's one thing that kind of stands out so far with one of the major villains...

Yuuka's Kick the Dog moment with Flandre by disguising her voice as her sister Remilia and driving a stake to her heart while also mocking the weaknesses of vampires after noting their high sense of strength, among other things. She seems to get a sick kick out of irony... Also, I think she's practically the Touhou version of Nyarlathotep. o.O Seriously, we got things like [[spoiler: fallen angels such as Azrael here, she's already been described as an Eldritch Abomination, she can at least disguise her voice to anyone she wants, and while she loves Chaos a lot more than Law, she seems willing to use any of them to her advantage, firmly making her Neutral Evil. :O If there's Fan Fic folders in the Character Alignment pages, I'm adding that there. :p

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angelthread1w9 Since: Aug, 2013
May 29th 2014 at 8:21:52 PM •••

Oh yeah, there was the arc with Rumia's memories too, like Chapter 16-18. That was sort of creepy too, but most of it was somewhat expected. Still... some of that was just a little nuts... o.O

Die. Gone. Die. Gone. Die is gone.

"Hell exists not to punish sinners, but to ensure that nobody sins in the first place." - Eikishiki Yamaxanadu (Touhou)
angelthread1w9 The Infinitely Curious Since: Aug, 2013
The Infinitely Curious
May 21st 2014 at 1:10:59 PM •••

I tried to add a few more tropes to this if that's okay, such as Motor Mouth and Can'tHoldHisLiquor for Chen during some moments, and Jerkass Has a Point for Tenshi.

Oh yeah! There's another one I wanted to add for, well... Yuuka, if it isn't added already.

I hope that's okay. ^^; Well, I guess someone could remove them if it's inaccurate... :( I'm not used to editing stuff and having the possibility of removing other people's stuff (not like I would do that, just saying it's a lot of responsibility. ^^;) and so on.

I'm just here to contribute as much as possible. :)

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angelthread1w9 Since: Aug, 2013
May 21st 2014 at 1:13:40 PM •••

Oh, and yeah, I'm not sure what counts as a spoiler and what doesn't, sorry. ^^;

"Hell exists not to punish sinners, but to ensure that nobody sins in the first place." - Eikishiki Yamaxanadu (Touhou)
angelthread1w9 Since: Aug, 2013
May 21st 2014 at 8:09:02 PM •••

Wow, I didn't know this guy was like 28. o.O And back in 2010, he'd still be older than I am now by a couple of years... Wow. :O

Anyways, I've read 19 chapters so far and I've seen some typos here and there I wish I could correct. :p Their bothering me a bit... Oh well. ^^;

"Hell exists not to punish sinners, but to ensure that nobody sins in the first place." - Eikishiki Yamaxanadu (Touhou)
angelthread1w9 The Infinitely Curious Since: Aug, 2013
The Infinitely Curious
May 20th 2014 at 4:02:44 PM •••

It may be a bit minor, but how come nobody mentioned Chapter 9 with Reimu and Genji having both a Crowning Moment Of Funny and a Crowning Moment Of Heartwarming?

Before Genji starts taking Reimu's talk about having a bad day seriously, he starts making all of these jokes about some of Reimu's friends, but then he says stuff like all of the shrine maidens before Reimu had bad days but they kept on fighting anyway, and even if she's kind of "lazy", she's still tough. XD

That made Reimu happy saying something like "How do you always know how to cheer me up?" I thought it was kind of cute. ^^;

Anyways, the funny part comes from when Reimu says she can't sleep and decides to have someone to talk to like Genji, Genji is all like "Why, that oni friend (Sukia) of yours won't stop farting?" XD

LOL. I bet alcoholic farts wouldn't smell very good. ^^; Um... yeah. XD

Maybe I'll put those examples in there myself later. :p

"Hell exists not to punish sinners, but to ensure that nobody sins in the first place." - Eikishiki Yamaxanadu (Touhou)
Kisei Since: Mar, 2011
Jun 9th 2012 at 7:30:48 PM •••

Here's something that's been bugging me for a long time:

  • Gone Horribly Wrong: Rin Satsuki is full of this. You can thank Eirin.
    • Most of what Eirin has done as seen by herself. The Hourai Elixer wasn't supposed to give complete immortality, but make the user immune to disease and age. A defense program that she was involved in while still on the moon created a nearly indestructable monster that got loose and breeds too fast for it to be wiped out completely. Kaguya, upon drinking the Hourai Elixer, was supposed to bring fame and fortune to both herself and Eirin, but instead was disowned and banished to Earth because if it. Rin Satsuki is just the latest on a long list.

When and where was it ever mentioned in IM that the Hourai Elixir was not supposed to grant absolute immortality? I've read all the chapters of both IM and Ro SD, but nowhere have I found any mention of this. As far as I've seen, the Hourai Elixir was always meant to grant perfect immortality. I however did not read the Christmas spin-off, though it seems unlikely something about the elixir would be in there. I would greatly appreciate it if someone informed me when/where this little tidbit was mentioned. If it truly never appears in any of the chapters I will have to remove this part of the entry.

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TakerFoxx Since: Jan, 2001
Jun 10th 2012 at 6:14:37 PM •••

I was confused about that as well, as I never said anything down those lines. Also, it mentions that the velmick bred too fast, whereas the story makes it clear that they breed fairly slowly. So yeah, that whole part had me scratching my head.

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Kisei Since: Mar, 2011
Jun 11th 2012 at 1:45:15 PM •••

Welp, time to edit it then. Glad it's cleared up now though.

GLH Since: Oct, 2010
Apr 19th 2012 at 11:58:28 PM •••

Did someone delete the main page? There seems to be a LOT of things missing since the last time I looked through it.

Jiven Since: Jan, 2011
Mar 18th 2011 at 4:07:58 PM •••

About this trope : Superpowered Evil Side At first, it seems to be played straight, but isn't it in reality a subversion ? Ex-Rumia is Rumia's Persona who has remain her memories from before Yukari's Laser Guided Amnesia : there are the same person, just that Rumia doesn't have her hypothetic traumatic past and so have kinda 'regain' her ancient original Persona ?

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Makuta9999 Since: Jul, 2009
Aug 20th 2011 at 1:06:58 PM •••

Ex-Rumia is still Rumia's evil side, who just so happens to also be superpowered.

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