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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#1: Sep 9th 2013 at 10:47:51 PM

I'm writing a genderflipped composite version of the historical Vlad III Dracula and Bram Stoker's Count Dracula (drawing upon various incarnations of the character), modelled as an ersatz of Evangeline A.K. McDowell from Magical Teacher Negima!, with influences from Arcueid Brunestud from Tsukihime, Moka Akashiya, Akasha Bloodriver and Alucard from Rosario + Vampire, Mina Tepes from Dance in the Vampire Bund, Alucard from Hellsing, and Dracula from Castlevania; some elements of the vampire race in the story's setting also draw upon World of Darkness's vampires. I also admit that a certain Kim Possible fanfic (itself based on a series of images) that put Shego in the shoes of Dracula (as both Vlad III and the Count) has considerable influence as well.

Right now, I'm stuck on a few points. First point to discuss is her backstory, whose brief summary I submit below for critique. Do note that as far as public history is concerned, the genderflip is completely unknown (yes, just like a few certain genderflips in a certain visual novel franchise about mythological/historical figures fighting to the death).

She was born a girl, and her father, incensed at not having gotten the male heir that he wanted, deceived his subjects and the rest of his clan about the newborn child's true gender by having his most trusted advisor – who was secretly a mage – cast a glamour spell on Vlad to appear as male. On the night she reached the age of 10, however, a vampire that had a deep grudge against Lord Dracul's lineage since his mortal days infiltrated the castle, and conducted a magical ritual upon Vladia to transform her into his vampire thrall, with the intent of using her to slaughter House Draculesti and then take Vladia and a select few of her kinswomen as his personal concubine-slaves. The process is interrupted by the arrival of her parents and the wizard, which renders Vladia's vampirization incomplete, permanently locks her body's aging progress, and drives her into a temporary fit of violent insanity; in her madness, she kills her mother and nearly does the same to her father, before the wizard stops her with magic and drives away the culprit from the castle, whereupon the vampire ultimately vanishes to parts unknown. The wizard, unable to undo the curse of vampirism or halt its progression outright, could do nothing but place new spells on her to slow it down, and modify the glamour spell already in place to conceal both her unageing nature and the slow manifestation of the curse's signs on her body over the following years, during which she has to struggle with her unnatural hunger for blood; he also began instructing her in the magical arts, in an attempt to help her impose further control over the curse.

Her part in her mother's death and nearly killing her father causes a deep rift between daughter and father as he becomes paranoidly distrustful and hateful towards her, to the point of being more than willing to have her sent in 1442 to the Ottoman sultan as a slave to do with as he pleases in order to secure his own freedom, under the official cover of having sent his "son" as a hostage of his loyalty in exchange for Ottoman support against Vlad II's rivals. It took five years for her wizard mentor to be able to secretly bend the minds of the Ottoman sultan and those of his court who knew of Vladia's predicament, altering their memories so that they believed the lie about "Vlad III" being their hostage, and then ensure that the sultan would return "Vlad" to Wallachia so that "he" can secure the newly vacant throne from falling into the Hungarian sphere of influence. Meanwhile, the sexual slavery that she had suffered during those years had bred in Vladia an intense hatred of the Ottomans in general, and all of the "Saracen heathens" in general.

Though she was filled with bitterness towards God for her lot in life, she still remained a faithful Christian due to the influence of her then childhood friend, who eventually become Vladia's official wife to reinforce her lifelong masquerade as "Lord Vladislav III Dracula". However, during her last campaign against the Ottoman Turkish empire, false news of Vladia's death had delivered to her wife back home, and Vladia was driven to despair when she found upon returning that she had committed suicide out of grief; this caused Vladia to finally renounce her long-time devotion to God (and by extension all religion) – believing that He had forsaken her in spite of sacrificing so much for His cause since her very birth – and embrace the vampirehood that she had long loathed. Many years later, she managed to locate her sire, and killed him via diablerie in revenge; she then arranged for her "assassination" in December 1476, paving the way for her to vanish into obscurity for centuries, until her fateful encounter with Jonathan Harker, Professor Abraham van Helsing and their rag-tag party in the late 1880s, which ended with Mina fully embracing her transformation during the final battle with Countess Dracula, and providing the crucial assistance for the Countess' narrow victory over her would-be slayers.

In hindsight, I've realized that a Christian ruler knowingly having an actual mage for his advisor would be very strange, given that the Church back then saw all magic as the Devil's work and thus deserving utmost condemnation, but I have no idea how to remedy the problem.

edited 7th Dec '13 11:44:59 PM by MarqFJA

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#2: Dec 8th 2013 at 8:16:44 AM

You dont have to, at times the edicts against the practice of magic were hardly enforced, and even some of the Popes were known to dabble in astrology and whatnot. As long as the wizard can present himself as remaining within the constraints of "white magic", it shouldn't have been too hard to get away with it. Esp. on a border march, in the face of supernatural enemies of Christendom, like vampires.

It's going to be harder to explain how so many people were fooled for so long.

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#3: Dec 8th 2013 at 8:22:03 AM

It's going to be harder to explain how so many people were fooled for so long.
A great magic spell involving a pact with a powerful spirit/demon, which carries a proportionally high price? Perhaps damning the wizard's soul to nihilistic oblivion when he eventually dies, or even be indirectly responsible for the suicide of Vladia's wife?

edited 8th Dec '13 8:23:23 AM by MarqFJA

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shiro_okami ...can still bite Since: Apr, 2010 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#4: Dec 8th 2013 at 1:17:10 PM

She was born a girl, and her father, incensed at not having gotten the male heir that he wanted, deceived his subjects and the rest of his clan about the newborn child's true gender by having his most trusted advisor – who was secretly a mage – cast a glamour spell on Vlad to appear as male.

I'm taking it that Vlad has no brothers in this version of the story? Vlad had an older brother Mircea who was murdered along with their father by the Hungarians; Vlad was not the intended heir and did not become Voivode until after their deaths. His younger brother Radu was also sent into exile with him to the Ottomans; he ended up joining them which earned his brother's eternal hatred.

How does the rival Danesti clan figure into the story?

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#5: Dec 9th 2013 at 1:55:09 AM

Dunno on all points. I'm open to suggestions.

edited 9th Dec '13 1:55:27 AM by MarqFJA

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SKJAM Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Baby don't hurt me!
#6: Dec 9th 2013 at 8:27:12 AM

Not disguised from birth then? Perhaps glamoured when she and her brother were sent as hostages to protect her from...you know...and never deglamoured. Because by that point father and older brother were dead, and brother Radu had defected to the Ottomans, and the homeland desperately needed a strong "male" leader.

edited 9th Dec '13 8:28:47 AM by SKJAM

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#7: Dec 9th 2013 at 8:33:42 AM

I assume you suggest that Dracula's pre-hostage history be addressed with a wide-scale memory-altering spell?

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SKJAM Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Baby don't hurt me!
#8: Dec 9th 2013 at 4:37:31 PM

Or bald-faced lies. "Vladia? She passed away. This is my son Vlad." And then she has to fight rumors within her country once she takes over, which is partially why Vlad(ia) is so cruel, because of having to keep up the "not a weak-kneed woman" act,

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#9: Dec 9th 2013 at 5:20:46 PM

Interesting suggestion. I like it.

On a side note, I was considering the alternative idea of giving Vladia a backstory that is more similar to Castlevania's Dracula — that is, she lived in a much earlier period, but her life in general follows a similar track to what I outlined. The only stumbling block is how to have her assume the identity of "Vlad Tepes Dracula, Voivode of Wallachia" in the 15th century; Castlevania!Dracula's history seems to imply that either the historical Vlad Tepes simply did not exist at all, or Count Dracula had assumed his name and title for his own use while they were contemporaries, and both of these "explanations" still raise unanswered questions.

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