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** Alice has a biting fetish
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** Alice has a biting fetishfetish.
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** Claire raises a FascinatingEyebrow when she notices that Alice has a pair of puncture marks on her neck and [[DidYouJustHaveSex a rare, uncharacteristic smile]].
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** Claire raises a FascinatingEyebrow when she notices that Alice has a [[VampireHickey pair of puncture marks on her neck neck]] and a [[DidYouJustHaveSex a rare, uncharacteristic smile]].
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** Bob bites down ''just'' enough to pierce the skin; the rest is all the lips and tongue, and Bob happens to by [[VampiresAreSexGods pretty skilled with those.]]
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** Bob bites down ''just'' enough to pierce the skin; the rest is all the lips and tongue, and Bob happens to by be [[VampiresAreSexGods pretty skilled with those.]]
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** Bob is usually seen in the company of a GroupieBrigade of females all sporting a CrushBlush. Other vampires express envy at how well-fed Bob is and wonder how he does it, but every time they ask him, Bob smiles smugly and refuses to answer.
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** More specifically, the scene plays out as ''date-rape'' than actual consent: Alice is nervous/fearful of Bob and after he bites her, [[DudeShesLikeInAComa she's quickly reduced to a slurring and half-conscious puddle of limbs.]] When the venom wears off, [[BerserkButton Alice isn't happy]] [[HeroicBSOD AT ALL.]]
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** "We need a source for more sexual tension between Alice and Bob. How about when Bob bites her, she has starts to enjoy it?"
** Bob is a SexGod, due to how the actor plays him with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's bitten.
** Bob is a SexGod, due to how the actor plays him with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's bitten.
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** "We need a source for more sexual tension between Alice and Bob. How about when Bob bites her, she has starts to enjoy it?"
** Bob is a SexGod, due to how the actor plays him with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she'sbitten.bitten by him.
** Bob is a SexGod, due to how the actor plays him with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's
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Vampires, traditionally speaking, drink the blood of others because they can't regenerate it. Basically, I deleted it because it doesn't make sense.
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* '''Reconstructed''': However, Bob eventually turns her into a vampire, so she can enjoy being bitten as much as she wants with the benefit of a rapidly regenerating blood supply.
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* '''Reconstructed''': However, Whenever Bob eventually turns bites Alice, he connects her into a vampire, so she can enjoy being bitten as much as she wants with to an IV drip of donor blood. He ''could'' drink from the benefit IV himself but including Alice is more pleasurable for both of a rapidly regenerating blood supply.them and it keeps Alice compliant.
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* '''Exploited''': Bob uses this fact to persuade some humans into willingly becoming his victims.
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* '''Exploited''': Bob uses this fact to persuade some humans into [[VoluntaryVampireVictim willingly becoming his victims.victims]].
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** Alice's face is hidden from the camera as Bob bites her, but she doesn't struggle, instead [[TheModestOrgasm she gasps and swoons]] in Bob's grip.
** Claire raises a FascinatingEyebrow when she notices that Alice has a pair of puncture marks on her neck and [[DidYouJustHaveSex a rare, uncharacteristic smile]].
** Alice's face is hidden from the camera as Bob bites her, but she doesn't struggle, instead [[TheModestOrgasm she gasps and swoons]] in Bob's grip.
** Claire raises a FascinatingEyebrow when she notices that Alice has a pair of puncture marks on her neck and [[DidYouJustHaveSex a rare, uncharacteristic smile]].
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** The experience it's portrayed like something extremely similar to a rape. Just because the vampire's bite induces a state of chemically induced euphoria, that doesn't make it any less traumatic for an unsuspecting victim.
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** The experience it's is portrayed like something extremely similar to a rape. Just because the vampire's bite induces a state of chemically induced euphoria, that doesn't make it any less traumatic for an unsuspecting victim.
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** The sensation of having blood drained tends to leave people lightheaded, which some of them get off on.
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If it's in-universe, it's Fetish.
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* '''Conversed''': "Why is she liking that so much?" "RuleOfSexy" "For a vampire bite?" "FetishFuel"
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* '''Conversed''': "Why is she liking that so much?" "RuleOfSexy" "For a vampire bite?" "FetishFuel""{{Fetish}}"
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** FreudWasRight
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** "[[DoesthisRemindYouOfAnything I want your fangs in me...]]"
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** "[[DoesthisRemindYouOfAnything "[[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything I want your fangs in me...]]"
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Memetic Sex God has been cut per TRS. All wicks will be deleted.
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** Bob is a MemeticSexGod, due to how the actor plays him with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's bitten.
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** Bob is a MemeticSexGod, SexGod, due to how the actor plays him with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's bitten.
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** Bob is a MemeticSexGod, due to how the actor plays him, with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's bitten.
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** Bob is a MemeticSexGod, due to how the actor plays him, him with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's bitten.
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** Bob is a MemeticSexGod, due to how the actor plays him, with distinctly sexual undertones. So the producers have Alice react with ecstasy each time she's bitten.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Bob uses this fact to persuade some humans into willingly becoming his victims.
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** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent This universe's vampires]] inject a non-harmful venom which dulls pain and acts as an aphrodisiac.
*** Vampires find it easier to disable their prey with said aphrodisiac
*** Vampires find it easier to disable their prey with said aphrodisiac
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** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent This universe's vampires]] inject a non-harmful venom which dulls pain and acts as an aphrodisiac.
*** Vampires find it easieraphrodisiac. That way, they don't have to disable kill their prey with said aphrodisiacin order to feed, and makes the ordeal a lot easier for all the parts involved.
*** Vampires find it easier
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* '''Enforced''': "We need a source for more sexual tension between Alice and Bob. How about when Bob bites her, she has starts to enjoy it?"
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "We need a source for more sexual tension between Alice and Bob. How about when Bob bites her, she has starts to enjoy it?"
** "We need a source for more sexual tension between Alice and Bob. How about when Bob bites her, she has starts to enjoy it?"
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice develops an addiction to being bitten and ends up suffering from long periods of severe blood loss, lethargy, and anemia.
** It's portrayed like a rape
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Alice develops an addiction to being bitten and ends up suffering from long periods of severe blood loss, lethargy, and anemia.
**It's The experience it's portrayed like something extremely similar to a raperape. Just because the vampire's bite induces a state of chemically induced euphoria, that doesn't make it any less traumatic for an unsuspecting victim.
** Alice develops an addiction to being bitten and ends up suffering from long periods of severe blood loss, lethargy, and anemia.
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*** Vampires find it easier to disable their prey with said aphrodisiac
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** FreudWasRight
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** It's portrayed like a rape
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Alice is bitten by Bob and shows no discomfort.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice develops an addiction to being bitten and ends up suffering from long periods of severe blood loss, lethargy, and anemia.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Bob eventually turns her into a vampire, so she can enjoy being bitten as much as she wants with the benefit of a rapidly regenerating blood supply.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Bob eventually turns her into a vampire, so she can enjoy being bitten as much as she wants with the benefit of a rapidly regenerating blood supply.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice develops an addiction to being bitten and ends up suffering from long periods of severe blood loss, lethargy, and anemia.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Bob eventually turns her into a vampire, so she can enjoy being bitten as much as she wants with the benefit of a rapidly regenerating blood supply.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Bob eventually turns her into a vampire, so she can enjoy being bitten as much as she wants with the benefit of a rapidly regenerating blood supply.
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* '''Justified''': [[OurVampiresAreDifferent This universe's vampires]] inject a non-harmful venom which dulls pain and acts as an aphrodisiac.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent This universe's vampires]] inject a non-harmful venom which dulls pain and acts as an aphrodisiac.
** [[OurVampiresAreDifferent This universe's vampires]] inject a non-harmful venom which dulls pain and acts as an aphrodisiac.
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* '''Double Subverted''': After the initial pain, however, Alice starts to like it.
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** After the initial pain, however, Alice starts to like it.
** After the initial pain, however, Alice starts to like it.
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* '''Averted''': Alice either doesn't feel the bite at all or has the reaction you'd expect from a woman having two teeth rammed deep into her throat.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Alice either doesn't feel the bite at all or has the reaction you'd expect from a woman having two teeth rammed deep into her throat.
** Alice either doesn't feel the bite at all or has the reaction you'd expect from a woman having two teeth rammed deep into her throat.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You know, you'd think this would be a lot more painful..."
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "You know, you'd think this would be a lot more painful..."
** "You know, you'd think this would be a lot more painful..."
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** Bob bites down ''just'' enough to pierce the skin; the rest is all the lips and tongue, and Bob happens to by [[VampiresAreSexGods pretty skilled with those.]]
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** "[[DoesthisRemindYouOfAnything I want your fangs in me...]]"
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** [[TheImmodestOrgasm That wasn't pain...]]
