History Fanfic / RiseOfTheGaleforces

5th Sep '17 5:16:03 PM Peteman
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* BalefulPolymorph: [[spoiler:Violet subverts this trope so hard, the consequences ultimately [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge prove fatal]] for the final BigBad.]]

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* BalefulPolymorph: [[spoiler:Violet subverts this trope so hard, trope, the consequences ultimately [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge prove fatal]] for the final BigBad.]]
11th Aug '17 8:35:59 AM CosmicFerret
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** As in the case of the original ''JurassicPark'' movies, any and all paleontological errors are justified by [=InGen=]'s (and later [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Aperture's]]]] meddling with the incomplete dinosaur DNA.

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** As in the case of the original ''JurassicPark'' ''Franchise/JurassicPark'' movies, any and all paleontological errors are justified by [=InGen=]'s (and later [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Aperture's]]]] meddling with the incomplete dinosaur DNA.



** At the start of Chapter 17, Violet has a nightmare in which she's in the scene in the first ''JurassicPark'' movie when the ''TyrannosaurusRex'' breaks out of its pen; she only has a moment to scream in terror when she sees the [[RedEyesTakeWarning blood-red eyes]] staring straight at her. She gets another OhCrap moment later in the same chapter [[GutPunch when a]] ''[[GutPunch real]]'' [[GutPunch T. rex shows up]].

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** At the start of Chapter 17, Violet has a nightmare in which she's in the scene in the first ''JurassicPark'' ''Film/JurassicPark'' movie when the ''TyrannosaurusRex'' breaks out of its pen; she only has a moment to scream in terror when she sees the [[RedEyesTakeWarning blood-red eyes]] staring straight at her. She gets another OhCrap moment later in the same chapter [[GutPunch when a]] ''[[GutPunch real]]'' [[GutPunch T. rex shows up]].



** Chapter 28: Sarah and Vi upon meeting the baby Dilophosaurus, in a ShoutOut to ''JurassicPark.'' Then again after Vi's fingers are [[FinGore melted to the bone]] by its acidic spit.

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** Chapter 28: Sarah and Vi upon meeting the baby Dilophosaurus, in a ShoutOut to ''JurassicPark.''Film/JurassicPark.'' Then again after Vi's fingers are [[FinGore melted to the bone]] by its acidic spit.



--> '''Frozone:''' [[JurassicPark Hold on to your butts...]]

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--> '''Frozone:''' [[JurassicPark [[Film/JurassicPark Hold on to your butts...]]
2nd Jan '17 5:30:53 PM nombretomado
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** [[spoiler:GlaDOS, of all characters, pulls this trope later in Episode 4, courtesy of Neo.]]

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** [[spoiler:GlaDOS, [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=], of all characters, pulls this trope later in Episode 4, courtesy of Neo.]]



* BigBad: GlaDOS in Episode 1, [[spoiler: Ripper in Episode 2 and the first half of Episode 3, and Ludlow from the latter half of Episode 3 onward.]]

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* BigBad: GlaDOS [=GLaDOS=] in Episode 1, [[spoiler: Ripper in Episode 2 and the first half of Episode 3, and Ludlow from the latter half of Episode 3 onward.]]



* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Stormicide, and later GlaDOS. The former's husband Dynaguy would also qualify if it weren't for the revelation that he was in fact a ReverseMole.]]

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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Stormicide, and later GlaDOS.[=GLaDOS=]. The former's husband Dynaguy would also qualify if it weren't for the revelation that he was in fact a ReverseMole.]]



** Chapter 34: Helen actually utters the trope name upon seeing [[spoiler: GlaDOS.]] Everyone else is quick to join in the MassOhCrap moment [[spoiler: until Neo reveals that he managed to [[HeelFaceTurn turn the robot around.]]]] Then [[spoiler:Sarah and Dash get this when the HMS Bubonic Plague blows up, and Adam when Ripper reveals himself to be NotQuiteDead. And Ripper himself only has enough time to let out a BigNo when he is finally KilledOffForReal.]]

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** Chapter 34: Helen actually utters the trope name upon seeing [[spoiler: GlaDOS.[=GLaDOS=].]] Everyone else is quick to join in the MassOhCrap moment [[spoiler: until Neo reveals that he managed to [[HeelFaceTurn turn the robot around.]]]] Then [[spoiler:Sarah and Dash get this when the HMS Bubonic Plague blows up, and Adam when Ripper reveals himself to be NotQuiteDead. And Ripper himself only has enough time to let out a BigNo when he is finally KilledOffForReal.]]



* TickleTorture[=/=]FriendlyTickleTorture: Glados loves to use this interrogation method on her test subjects, and there are a few playful tickle scenes as well.

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* TickleTorture[=/=]FriendlyTickleTorture: Glados [=GLaDOS=] loves to use this interrogation method on her test subjects, and there are a few playful tickle scenes as well.
12th Dec '15 3:22:46 PM desdendelle
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Unfortunately, the fanfic was plagued by massive characterization issues, mostly stemming from a GaryStu who was stated to be Sarah's brother, as well as [[MegaCrossover a ton of confusing crossover elements.]] Geosternbergia's [[SmallNameBigEgo then-inflated ego]] did not help matters as said GaryStu became increasingly prominent; this eventually came to a head near the end of the fic, when the already tenuous plot finally imploded upon itself, with disastrous and rather gruesome results. Despite promoting the strengths of the fic over the years, Geo eventually tired of it after realizing how flawed it was. He eventually took the time to spork/critique the fic himself upon joining the Fanfic/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum, during which one of his agents had a bit of an identity crisis when encountering the fic's badly written characters.

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Unfortunately, the fanfic was plagued by massive characterization issues, mostly stemming from a GaryStu who was stated to be Sarah's brother, as well as [[MegaCrossover a ton of confusing crossover elements.]] Geosternbergia's [[SmallNameBigEgo then-inflated ego]] did not help matters as said GaryStu became increasingly prominent; this eventually came to a head near the end of the fic, when the already tenuous plot finally imploded upon itself, with disastrous and rather gruesome results. Despite promoting the strengths of the fic over the years, Geo eventually tired of it after realizing how flawed it was. He eventually took the time to spork/critique the fic himself upon joining the Fanfic/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum, WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum, during which one of his agents had a bit of an identity crisis when encountering the fic's badly written characters.
5th Nov '15 8:57:32 AM nombretomado
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** Thunderhead is [[TheMightyThor Thor]], only [[DumbMuscle dumber.]] He also smacks of [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Kronk]] in that he is not very smart, is well-chested, and is voiced by Creator/PatrickWarburton.

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** Thunderhead is [[TheMightyThor [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Thor]], only [[DumbMuscle dumber.]] He also smacks of [[Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove Kronk]] in that he is not very smart, is well-chested, and is voiced by Creator/PatrickWarburton.
18th Oct '15 10:48:28 AM nombretomado
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** Sarah is PowerGirl, though without the SuperToughness.

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** Sarah is PowerGirl, ComicBook/PowerGirl, though without the SuperToughness.
24th Sep '15 3:47:53 PM nombretomado
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** Splashdown is ComicBook/{{Aquaman}} as voiced by Creator/AshtonKutcher, and Kate is [[{{Gen13}} Freefall]] as played by KatherineHeigl. Both of them also played a married couple in ''Film/{{Killers}}''.

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** Splashdown is ComicBook/{{Aquaman}} as voiced by Creator/AshtonKutcher, and Kate is [[{{Gen13}} [[ComicBook/{{Gen13}} Freefall]] as played by KatherineHeigl. Both of them also played a married couple in ''Film/{{Killers}}''.
25th Aug '15 11:40:37 AM HighCrate
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* CompetitiveBalance
** JackOfAllStats: Adam and Vi. The former is decently fast, strong enough to carry off his own weight, and able to take a few bullet rounds if need be. The latter is more of a StoneWall, but can also use the famous [=IncrediBall=] tagteam manuver alongside Dash for speed travel. Neither are as good as some of the other family members, though.
*** And both of the moms as well.
** FragileSpeedster: Dash, although he becomes a bit of a GlassCannon later on due to his lightning powers.
** GlassCannon: Sarah. She'd be a FlyingBrick if it ''weren't'' for her lack of SuperToughness.
** LightningBruiser: Velociripper. Keep in mind that according to Adam, ''actual'' deinonychosaurs were more of the JackOfAllStats variety.
*** And on the good side, we have [[ThoseTwoGuys Splashdown and Thunderhead.]]
*** [[spoiler:Violet in Episode 4.]]
** MightyGlacier: Mr. Incredible, although he borderlines on LightningBruiser at times.
** StoneWall: Vi, when she's in her force field at least, though she straddles the line between this and JackOfAllStats from time to time, [[spoiler:and [[ScaledUp becomes]] [[TyrannosaurusRex the ultimate]] LightningBruiser in Episode 4.]]



* ShownTheirWork: WordOfGod is surprisingly up to date with the paleontological evidence of the present day.

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* ShownTheirWork: ShowingTheirWork: WordOfGod is surprisingly up to date with the paleontological evidence of the present day.
13th Jul '15 8:05:14 PM Llygodenfawr
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[[WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles Violet and Dash Parr]], sibling Supers in training, recieve a call from [[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Aperture Science and Technology]] about an important project downtown. What they find is a discovery that will change their lives forever -- a cloning facility housing the late Supers from the Golden Era. Narrowly escaping from the lab with their lives, they meet one of the clones, Sarah Squall a.k.a. Stratogale, and help her reunite with the rest of her family.

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[[WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles Violet and Dash Parr]], sibling Supers in training, recieve receive a call from [[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Aperture Science and Technology]] about an important project downtown. What they find is a discovery that will change their lives forever -- a cloning facility housing the late Supers from the Golden Era. Narrowly escaping from the lab with their lives, they meet one of the clones, Sarah Squall a.k.a. Stratogale, and help her reunite with the rest of her family.
13th Jun '15 2:44:08 AM Morgenthaler
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** Splashdown is ComicBook/{{Aquaman}} as voiced by Creator/AshtonKutcher, and Kate is [[{{Gen13}} Freefall]] as played by KatherineHeigl. Both of them also played a married couple in ''{{Killers}}''.

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** Splashdown is ComicBook/{{Aquaman}} as voiced by Creator/AshtonKutcher, and Kate is [[{{Gen13}} Freefall]] as played by KatherineHeigl. Both of them also played a married couple in ''{{Killers}}''.''Film/{{Killers}}''.
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