History Fanfic / CRISISEquestria

24th Jun '17 5:34:16 PM drac0blade
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Currently incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014. As chapters start getting deleted, it's starting to look more and more like the work will never be completed. As it was a chapter away from starting its GrandFinale, many fans find this quite aggravating.

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Currently incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014. As chapters start getting deleted, it's starting to look more and more like the work will never be completed. As it was a chapter away from starting about to start its GrandFinale, many fans find this quite aggravating.
24th Jun '17 5:28:10 PM drac0blade
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Currently incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014. As chapters start getting deleted, it's starting to look more and more like the work will never be completed. As it was already over 30 chapters and nearing its GrandFinale, many fans find this quite aggravating.

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Currently incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014. As chapters start getting deleted, it's starting to look more and more like the work will never be completed. As it was already over 30 chapters and nearing a chapter away from starting its GrandFinale, many fans find this quite aggravating.



An audio play was in production by [[https://www.youtube.com/user/BogyleBronies Bogyle Bronies]], with heavy involvement by the writers. Much like the fanfic, the play has not been updated since 2014 and it is doubtful it will ever be completed.

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An audio play was in production by [[https://www.youtube.com/user/BogyleBronies Bogyle Bronies]], with heavy involvement by the writers. Much like the fanfic, the play has not been updated since 2014 and 2014, where it is doubtful it will ever be completed.
stopped on the second chapter.
17th Jun '17 10:19:12 AM nombretomado
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** Pinkie opens Chapter 26 with a rendition of [[TheMuppetMovie Rainbow Connection]], which also happens to be her and Rainbow's song.

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** Pinkie opens Chapter 26 with a rendition of [[TheMuppetMovie [[Film/TheMuppetMovie Rainbow Connection]], which also happens to be her and Rainbow's song.
22nd May '17 6:42:38 AM Theriocephalus
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The story starts when Twilight Sparkle and her friends are sucked into a portal and warped to another dimension, where they quickly realize they're not in their own Equestria anymore. The new world is similar to ours at first glance, with a giant city populated by hundreds of thousands of ponies. They make new friends along the way - [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure a police officer]], Flathoof; [[NonActionGuy a civilian]], Lockwood; and a Chronomancer (an obvious reference to [[TimeLord Time Lords]]), Tick Tock - who are determined to help them get back home once they learn that the fact that they're in this new Equestria means that their own is threatened by Discord, whose seal is weakening due to their absence.

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The story starts when Twilight Sparkle and her friends are sucked into a portal and warped to another dimension, where they quickly realize they're not in their own Equestria anymore. The new world is similar to ours at first glance, with a giant city populated by hundreds of thousands of ponies. They make new friends along the way - -- [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure a police officer]], Flathoof; [[NonActionGuy a civilian]], Lockwood; and a Chronomancer (an obvious reference to [[TimeLord Time Lords]]), Tick Tock - -- who are determined to help them get back home once they learn that the fact that they're in this new Equestria means that their own is threatened by Discord, whose seal is weakening due to their absence.



There are also other ponies that don't exactly want to see them make it home and all go to great lengths to keep the Mane Six from their goal. Their primary opponents? A team of suspiciously similar [[EvilCounterpart Evil Counterparts]] - [[SmugSuper Starlight Shadow]], [[TheSpock Grayscale Force]], [[ConsummateLiar Curaçao]], [[LeeroyJenkins Havocwing]], [[AxCrazy Red Velvet]], and [[TheDitz Insipid]] - their father [[MagnificentBastard Silvertongue]], and his personal assassin [[PsychoForHire Shadowstep]].

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There are also other ponies that don't exactly want to see them make it home and all go to great lengths to keep the Mane Six from their goal. Their primary opponents? A team of suspiciously similar [[EvilCounterpart Evil Counterparts]] - -- [[SmugSuper Starlight Shadow]], [[TheSpock Grayscale Force]], [[ConsummateLiar Curaçao]], [[LeeroyJenkins Havocwing]], [[AxCrazy Red Velvet]], and [[TheDitz Insipid]] - -- their father [[MagnificentBastard Silvertongue]], and his personal assassin [[PsychoForHire Shadowstep]].



* CompanionCube: Red Velvet, like Pinkie in Party of One, loses her mind temporarily in Chapter 25 after learning [[CloningBlues she is Pinkie's clone]]. In her insanity she, again like Pinkie, pulls a bad ventriloquism act with an inanimate object that she moves and speaks for - her blood. And again, like Pinkie, she even gives it a name: [[OverlyLongName Sir Visceral Clottington McKillicutty the Third, Esquire]]. She calls him "Clottles" because it's shorter.

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* CompanionCube: Red Velvet, like Pinkie in Party of One, loses her mind temporarily in Chapter 25 after learning [[CloningBlues she is Pinkie's clone]]. In her insanity she, again like Pinkie, pulls a bad ventriloquism act with an inanimate object that she moves and speaks for - -- her blood. And again, like Pinkie, she even gives it a name: [[OverlyLongName Sir Visceral Clottington McKillicutty the Third, Esquire]]. She calls him "Clottles" because it's shorter.



* FireForgedFriends: Tick Tock and Twilight start getting along significantly better together starting around Chapter 20, to the point where they actively work together to fight of a zombie horde and deal with Starlight Shadow, essentially side-by-side. Tick Tock is shown later to be the one giving the most effort to help Twilight recover from her feedback accident. In Chapter 27, the two become ''official'' friends, and Twilight agrees to teach Tick Tock the one spell she's never had a knack for - Teleport.

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* FireForgedFriends: Tick Tock and Twilight start getting along significantly better together starting around Chapter 20, to the point where they actively work together to fight of a zombie horde and deal with Starlight Shadow, essentially side-by-side. Tick Tock is shown later to be the one giving the most effort to help Twilight recover from her feedback accident. In Chapter 27, the two become ''official'' friends, and Twilight agrees to teach Tick Tock the one spell she's never had a knack for - -- Teleport.



* IDontLikeTheSoundOfThatPlace: The names of places in the north are all definitely not nice. Besides the {{Dystopia}} of New Pandemonium City, the Mane Six travel through the desert Wastelands, attempt the volcanic Redblade Mountains, into the deserted Gryphon Ruins, and most recently through the zombie-infested Blood Mire. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Rainbow and Pinkie who try to guess the next scary place they'll visit, only to have Tick Tock and Lockwood play along by telling them they're ''right'' - apparently the ocean they're heading for is the Sea of Endless Sorrow. Only two named places in the north don't have names like this - Goldridge Pass, and Hope's Point, the latter of which is rather gritty on the outside and just really hard to get into, but perfectly nice once you get in.

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* IDontLikeTheSoundOfThatPlace: The names of places in the north are all definitely not nice. Besides the {{Dystopia}} of New Pandemonium City, the Mane Six travel through the desert Wastelands, attempt the volcanic Redblade Mountains, into the deserted Gryphon Ruins, and most recently through the zombie-infested Blood Mire. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Rainbow and Pinkie who try to guess the next scary place they'll visit, only to have Tick Tock and Lockwood play along by telling them they're ''right'' - -- apparently the ocean they're heading for is the Sea of Endless Sorrow. Only two named places in the north don't have names like this - -- Goldridge Pass, and Hope's Point, the latter of which is rather gritty on the outside and just really hard to get into, but perfectly nice once you get in.



* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: Of all the various [[Film/SpaceMutiny names]] Briarthorn and Pinkie Pie come with to describe how Flathoof looks in his new outfit, the one he actually takes offense to is Buff Drinklots. The following chapter, he reveals why - he's [[TheTeetotaler a teetotaler]].

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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: Of all the various [[Film/SpaceMutiny names]] Briarthorn and Pinkie Pie come with to describe how Flathoof looks in his new outfit, the one he actually takes offense to is Buff Drinklots. The following chapter, he reveals why - -- he's [[TheTeetotaler a teetotaler]].



* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Lockwood]]'s backstory shows that his father left his mother before he was even born, and that his mother died while he was young because she neglected her own health over his (though don't let that fool you into thinking she was a [[GoodParents decent mother]] - he insists she wasn't, because she was obsessed with using him to [[SomeoneToRememberHimBy replace his father in her life]]). This followed with him put into a foster care system that's just as corrupt as the rest of Pandemonium City is. Despite all this, he didn't fall into a DarkAndTroubledPast, and actively seeks to better the city so that more ponies don't end up in the same situations as he did.

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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Lockwood]]'s backstory shows that his father left his mother before he was even born, and that his mother died while he was young because she neglected her own health over his (though don't let that fool you into thinking she was a [[GoodParents decent mother]] - -- he insists she wasn't, because she was obsessed with using him to [[SomeoneToRememberHimBy replace his father in her life]]). This followed with him put into a foster care system that's just as corrupt as the rest of Pandemonium City is. Despite all this, he didn't fall into a DarkAndTroubledPast, and actively seeks to better the city so that more ponies don't end up in the same situations as he did.



** Twilight Sparkle - Magic: Her magic is fueled by her friendship, so the more she relies on her friends and believes in them the more powerful she is.
** Applejack - Honesty: Applejack's control over earth magic is explained, verbatim, that the earth itself is the most honest thing there is.
** Rainbow Dash - Loyalty: Rainbow's control over weather is explained, verbatim, that loyalty is like wind: When you have it at your back, you move forward; when you don't, you stagnate.
** Fluttershy - Kindness: Fluttershy's kindness towards all living things makes her a beacon of light for the animal spirits of the north, and her familiar Ophanim is able to serve as a link.
** Rarity - Generosity: Doesn't get more simple than it being generous to give one's own magic to benefit others.
** Pinkie Pie - Laughter: [[RuleOfFunny If it's funny]], Pinkie can do basically anything she wants, within certain rules.

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** Twilight Sparkle - -- Magic: Her magic is fueled by her friendship, so the more she relies on her friends and believes in them the more powerful she is.
** Applejack - -- Honesty: Applejack's control over earth magic is explained, verbatim, that the earth itself is the most honest thing there is.
** Rainbow Dash - -- Loyalty: Rainbow's control over weather is explained, verbatim, that loyalty is like wind: When you have it at your back, you move forward; when you don't, you stagnate.
** Fluttershy - -- Kindness: Fluttershy's kindness towards all living things makes her a beacon of light for the animal spirits of the north, and her familiar Ophanim is able to serve as a link.
** Rarity - -- Generosity: Doesn't get more simple than it being generous to give one's own magic to benefit others.
** Pinkie Pie - -- Laughter: [[RuleOfFunny If it's funny]], Pinkie can do basically anything she wants, within certain rules.



*** Starlight Shadow - Magic: Like Twilight, Starlight Shadow has amazing magical ability. Unlike Twilight, however, Starlight's magic is draws power from the void and Starlight's power seems to increase the more she believes in ''herself''.
*** Curaçao - Deceit: Curaçao is a master of deceit and manipulation, capable of using illusions to disguise herself as anyone, from appearance to voice and behavior.
*** Grayscale Force - Apathy: Having zero interest in anything that does not directly benefit herself, Grayscale Force likes to end battles quickly and decisively by manipulating gravity against her opponents with cold efficiency.
*** Havocwing - Fury: Havocwing is always angry. ''Always.'' Not one to beat around the bush, she channels this burning anger into literal ''fire.''
*** Insipid - Avarice: Vapid, yet scarily possessive, Rarity's counterpart has the ability to take other people's powers and temporarily claim them as her own. However, she gets bored with powers easily and apparently drops them at a whim, unless convinced they are actually useful.
*** Red Velvet - Fear: Not only can Red Velvet turn her own blood into a deadly weapon, but she can also feed on the Fear of others and exacerbate it. Also, [[spoiler:''she is right behind you'']]

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*** Starlight Shadow - -- Magic: Like Twilight, Starlight Shadow has amazing magical ability. Unlike Twilight, however, Starlight's magic is draws power from the void and Starlight's power seems to increase the more she believes in ''herself''.
*** Curaçao - -- Deceit: Curaçao is a master of deceit and manipulation, capable of using illusions to disguise herself as anyone, from appearance to voice and behavior.
*** Grayscale Force - -- Apathy: Having zero interest in anything that does not directly benefit herself, Grayscale Force likes to end battles quickly and decisively by manipulating gravity against her opponents with cold efficiency.
*** Havocwing - -- Fury: Havocwing is always angry. ''Always.'' Not one to beat around the bush, she channels this burning anger into literal ''fire.''
*** Insipid - -- Avarice: Vapid, yet scarily possessive, Rarity's counterpart has the ability to take other people's powers and temporarily claim them as her own. However, she gets bored with powers easily and apparently drops them at a whim, unless convinced they are actually useful.
*** Red Velvet - -- Fear: Not only can Red Velvet turn her own blood into a deadly weapon, but she can also feed on the Fear of others and exacerbate it. Also, [[spoiler:''she is right behind you'']]you'']].
16th Apr '17 8:52:25 AM nombretomado
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** The main Foodstuff in New Pandemonium is from the [[SoylentGreen Dolor Corporation]]. It's entirely artificial food, due to a massive food shortage, and it comes In various colours, which dictate it's quality and taste. Yes, there is a Dolor Green, and yes, there is a 'Dolor Green is ponies!' comment. It's just a rumour though. Probably...

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** The main Foodstuff in New Pandemonium is from the [[SoylentGreen [[Film/SoylentGreen Dolor Corporation]]. It's entirely artificial food, due to a massive food shortage, and it comes In various colours, which dictate it's quality and taste. Yes, there is a Dolor Green, and yes, there is a 'Dolor Green is ponies!' comment. It's just a rumour though. Probably...
26th Feb '17 9:15:36 AM darknessRising
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Thankfully a user by the name of James Delaney went through the effort of creating a copy of the entire story so far for future readers to enjoy. The links to them have been gathered up and can be found on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/group/203605/crisis-equestria/thread/299241/crisis-equestria-chapters-re-uploaded Fimfiction]].

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Thankfully a user by the name of James Delaney went through the effort of creating a copy of the entire story so far for future readers to enjoy. The links to them have been gathered up and can be found on [[https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B18Cr-JRXqIjZWFwMTZjZnlLWGs Google Drive]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/group/203605/crisis-equestria/thread/299241/crisis-equestria-chapters-re-uploaded Fimfiction]].
26th Feb '17 9:11:44 AM darknessRising
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Thankfully a user by the name of James Delaney went through the effort of creating a copy of the entire story so far for future readers to enjoy. The links to them have been gathered up and can be found on [[http://www.fimfiction.net/group/203605/crisis-equestria/thread/299241/crisis-equestria-chapters-re-uploaded Fimfiction]].
20th Feb '17 8:55:09 PM drac0blade
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Currently incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014. As chapters start getting deleted, it's starting to look more and more like the work will never be completed. As the work was already over 30 chapters in and was nearing its GrandFinale, many fans find this quite aggravating.

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Currently incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014. As chapters start getting deleted, it's starting to look more and more like the work will never be completed. As the work it was already over 30 chapters in and was nearing its GrandFinale, many fans find this quite aggravating.
20th Feb '17 8:34:48 PM drac0blade
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** Earlier Red Velvet manegesto pull this off on Pinkie Pie, but Rainbow Dashs arrival quickly undoes it.

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** Earlier Red Velvet manegesto manages to pull this off on Pinkie Pie, but Rainbow Dashs Dash's arrival quickly undoes it.
20th Feb '17 8:31:43 PM drac0blade
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Currently Incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014; revisions are ongoing.

An audio play was in production by [[https://www.youtube.com/user/BogyleBronies Bogyle Bronies]], with heavy involvement by the writers. The play has not been updated since 2014.

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Currently Incomplete incomplete and in its 37th Chapter as of October 21st, 2014; revisions are ongoing.

2014. As chapters start getting deleted, it's starting to look more and more like the work will never be completed. As the work was already over 30 chapters in and was nearing its GrandFinale, many fans find this quite aggravating.

An audio play was in production by [[https://www.youtube.com/user/BogyleBronies Bogyle Bronies]], with heavy involvement by the writers. The Much like the fanfic, the play has not been updated since 2014.
2014 and it is doubtful it will ever be completed.
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