Pszczola
Since: Jan, 2001
10/22/2012 20:01:51
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FanficRecs Comment by Much Ado About Nonny
Very well written. The reconciliation between Jareth and Sarah did seem a bit fast to me, but the story's main focus is really on how the couple helps each other in times of trial. The author did an excellent job in creating backstories that were believable for both characters, and her OC's are well-developed and interesting. Plus, she adds a little bit of Flower Language to each chapter, which contributes to Jareth and Sarah's old-time courting dynamic and is really cool besides that.
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I love going back to this one. Its well written and complete, and doesnt skimp on the details. Neither does it have overly descriptive chunks of text that make it hard to focus on the plot. The Sarah in this story is a little young (still in young high school) and the plot revolves a lot around the traumas people expereince in their young lives. But it is a good multi length Laby fic worth checking out.