Willbyr
(Y2K)
11/02/2010 10:57:06
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FanFicRecs Born In 1142's review
I've started and given up on a lot of those typical post-EoE fics, but this one was better than any of them. The viewpoint alternates between Asuka and Shinji between chapters. One of the best I've read, reconstructs the characters we know with excellent prose and develops them believably beyond that.
FanFicRecs Willbyr's review
The author does a fantastic job of getting inside both Shinji and Asuka's heads; bouncing back and forth between their first-person narration never falters and keeps them very much in character. The story handles their post-3I behaviors and life in a manner that is noticeably different than that presented in The Second Try but is entirely plausible, and arguably more "realistic" than in that story.