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Spoilers ahead for this review (although it's 10 years old now)
What if Kushina hadn't died? What if proper medical help arrived in time?
This is the central question of this Fanfic. It is an interesting idea.
But that also poses an interesting question:
How does Naruto grow up? How does strife come into his life?
Because he has:
He has everything he could wish for.
How does the Author manage to make it into an interesting story?
He doesn't. It is "Naruto& Naruto Shipudden: The Wish-Fulfillment Cut"
Also this story is through this change an AU Fanfic. A LOT of things change.
It's also noticeable that is has been finished in a time-span of 6 months. Dialogue is sometimes OOC. Naturally, the whole Ōtsutsuki shebang doesn't happen.
Throughout this I couldn't help but feel for characters who either died early on or were side-lined by the author in pursuit of other paths.
A lot of the strife and pain Naruto experiences simply doesn't happen.
It is a very interesting idea but it also could be improved in certain aspects.
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