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The story itself is fairly sound and works well in theory. However, as noted by gonzomehum, the sentence structure and grammar needs a great deal of work to be a truly good fic.
Someone get this author a Beta-reader, stat!
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Decent idea
The story itself is fairly sound and works well in theory. However, as noted by gonzomehum, the sentence structure and grammar needs a great deal of work to be a truly good fic.
Someone get this author a Beta-reader, stat!