This fanfic is...well okay I'll say it. It's plated in pure metal awesome for a good long time. Like Shinji and 40k, however, it starts to tarnish under the weight of its own drive to incorporate ever more new ideas which don't necessarily follow from the others. By the time you drag ME 2 crossovers into the mix the story is seriously getting crowded out by the references. Narrative choking is never pretty, especially when it happens to something this much fun. Read it damn you!...but be prepared to pull a Heimlich at some point.
Night's review
This fanfic is...well okay I'll say it. It's plated in pure metal awesome for a good long time. Like Shinji and 40k, however, it starts to tarnish under the weight of its own drive to incorporate ever more new ideas which don't necessarily follow from the others. By the time you drag ME 2 crossovers into the mix the story is seriously getting crowded out by the references. Narrative choking is never pretty, especially when it happens to something this much fun. Read it damn you!...but be prepared to pull a Heimlich at some point.