(No spoilers) I was mostly enjoying this fic as it had pretty good grammar and characterization as well as an interesting premise (since I feel not many future fics stray away from the usual "Ash becomes a Pokemon Master" plot).
However, I feel that the fic really lost its momentum in the plot twist. The twist itself could have been handled a lot better, but it ended up feeling a bit too flat and out of character. If there was perhaps more buildup to it, it might have worked out better, but I spent a few chapters hoping there was another layer to it or maybe a subversion on the way, but there really wasn't.
Dropped the ball
(No spoilers) I was mostly enjoying this fic as it had pretty good grammar and characterization as well as an interesting premise (since I feel not many future fics stray away from the usual "Ash becomes a Pokemon Master" plot). However, I feel that the fic really lost its momentum in the plot twist. The twist itself could have been handled a lot better, but it ended up feeling a bit too flat and out of character. If there was perhaps more buildup to it, it might have worked out better, but I spent a few chapters hoping there was another layer to it or maybe a subversion on the way, but there really wasn't.