This is an unmitigated masterpiece and as close to the perfect crossover fanfic as I've ever seen. Everyone's in character, the OCs are funny and unique without obscuring the mains, the plot is tense and tight, the humor is both genuinely amusing and in the spirit of both shows, the worldbuilding is magnificent, and the author deals with serious issues and well-justified moral condemnation without descending into Character Shilling—even the moronic Tok'ra character is portrayed as a realistic extension of a not particularly intelligent Goa'uld being raised in the Tok'ra's rigid and paranoid society..
Compared to, say, Vathara (one of the ATLA fandom's benchmarks for quality), I'd say that Kryal's work is equal or superior in every way. This story is tight, focused, epic, dramatic, gripping, and treats all the characters with the respect they deserve. It melds two canons so well that someone who's seen ATLA and SG-1 could actually believe that these two settings could be linked in this way. Although the author claims to not know SG-1, most if not all readers will never notice.
Quite possibly the perfect fanfic.
This is an unmitigated masterpiece and as close to the perfect crossover fanfic as I've ever seen. Everyone's in character, the OCs are funny and unique without obscuring the mains, the plot is tense and tight, the humor is both genuinely amusing and in the spirit of both shows, the worldbuilding is magnificent, and the author deals with serious issues and well-justified moral condemnation without descending into Character Shilling—even the moronic Tok'ra character is portrayed as a realistic extension of a not particularly intelligent Goa'uld being raised in the Tok'ra's rigid and paranoid society..
Compared to, say, Vathara (one of the ATLA fandom's benchmarks for quality), I'd say that Kryal's work is equal or superior in every way. This story is tight, focused, epic, dramatic, gripping, and treats all the characters with the respect they deserve. It melds two canons so well that someone who's seen ATLA and SG-1 could actually believe that these two settings could be linked in this way. Although the author claims to not know SG-1, most if not all readers will never notice.
11/10; a masterpiece.